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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby iBrevity » Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:29 am

Okay, I just finished EmoKittyKat's critique and I'm working on Demon-Dragoness' right now. c:

If there are any other critic minions online, I would love it if somebody could take Jayfur's. If I don't hear from anybody in thirty minutes I'll do it myself, promise. <3
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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby Sapphirescript » Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:46 am

I'm so sorry for asking if you are to busy ignore this!!
I'm just wondering if I am doing good so far.
I'd like some critique!
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Number of character you're applying for: F19
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=8156049#p8156049
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I am adding a history to my form soon. I just want to finish the rest first ^-^.
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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby Desmond » Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:48 am

Phoenix can do Jayfur's; she was sitting right here, eating next to me, and volunteered.
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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby Phoenix's Rebirth » Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:57 am

Yeah, I can! No prob.

And I may or may not have time to do Tasha's. I will if I can. :D
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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby iBrevity » Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:04 pm

Thank you, pretty girl. x3
I think I might have time if you don't; just working my way through homework, so if you do or don't have time let me know here and I'll do it. c:
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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby Phoenix's Rebirth » Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:09 pm

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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby asdjlasfjksdf » Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:34 pm

I am looking to adopt...

Kennel number: P49

Name: Dax

Breed: Canine/Wolf

Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?: I want this animal because I had an instant connection with him. His design just drew me in and a story popped into my mind. I've never seen a wolf design like this before and I really loved it. What I will do for him is write him a story, get him lots of art, and love him to death. =)

Personality: Dax is a rough and tough guy. He tends to be very hard headed and doesn't take orders well. Every now and again, he will meet someone who he respects and will listen to, but it's very rare. Dax is always ready to leap into a battle and tends not to think about planning much. His motto is "Follow you instincts." When he goes into a battle, he has a vicious appearance. Howling, snarling, and brandishing his bows. Due to his past, he takes critisim very badly. When ever someone critisises him, he either clams up and says nothing or explodes on you. Dax can be fairly unpridictable. One moment, he will be silent and brooding, next moment he will be laughing and having fun. No one has ever been able to quite figure out Dax, but for some reason he attracts many friends. Dax isn't sure why.

Likes: Battles, people of equal intellect, sharpening his arrows, being with people that share his interests, fire, rain

Dislikes: Foolish people, people that disagree with him, things that confuse him

History/Background:

Dax launched himself through the forest. The roar of two armies on either side of him, blood pounding him his ears. He drew his bow and fired, the arrow hit it's mark dead on. The warrior crumpled to his knees and fell to the ground. His fellow warriors exploded with a roar of approval, which was followed with a volley of arrows that flew from behind Dax. Grinning maliciously, he ran into the fray. He pulled his sword from his sheath and sliced into the enemies that ran at him. His battle cry split throuh the air and his fellow warriors answered with a cry of their own. As the cries echoed above the battle, the enemies ran. Thousands of wolves ran back out of Dax's territory. He just chuckled and headed back to the camp.

When the thousands of panting and battle worn wolves walked through the camp enterance, the camp went into a hush. Dax strode forward and smiled. "We beat 'em." At those three words, the whole camp exploded into a roar of approval. As the camp rushed forward to congradulate Dax and his warriors, a black wolf hung back. He slunk out of the camp silently.

The black wolf's name was Dharsl. As he wove through the trees, he began to formulate a plan. Dax was Dharsl's biggest rival. Dharsl and Dax had been the two wolves who were to be chosen as leaders. As the votes were cast, Dax had slipped into the voting booth. Dharsl still belives that he rigged the votes, though others called him crazy. Well, Dharsl had had enough. As the last bit of his plan came towork in his mind, he grinned, showing his yellowing teeth. He slunk back into the camp and walked over to Dax. "Well, well, well. Well done Dax." Dax wrinkled his nose in discust at his rotten breath. "Thank you Dharsl." Dharsl tried to appear friendly, forcing kindness. "I heard from one of the Horde wolves that Varinx wanted to speak with you." Dax pulled his mouth back in a snarl. "What does that piece of vermin trash want?" Dharsl shrugged. "She just said that she wanted a word with you." Dax rolled his eyes. "Just tell you little friend that she better keep dreaming." Dharsl began to grow agitated. "Why don't you just see what she wants?" Dax sighed. "Fine. I'll go." Dharsl's eyes sparkled with mischief. "Lovely." He slunk back out of the camp.

Later that night, after a celebration. Dax walked out of the camp quietly and met Dharsl by the entrance. "Where to?" Dax growled, clearly not enjoying this. "Follow me..." Dharsl slipped through he trees without a sound and they soon came upon a small camp. In the center of the camp and an elaboratly designed tent. Dharsl led him over to it. "She's waiting." Dharsl hissed. Dax wrinkled his nose in discust at him forthe second time that night. "Yeah..." Dax pushed the flap of the tent aside and strode confidently in. "Hellow Dax." Varinx whispered. That was all Dharsl heard, because he was racing back to the camp to tell his little lie.

When Dax finished hearing all of Varinx's chatter he sighed. All she had wanted was to speak to him about the battle. "What a waste of time." He hissed. As he walked out, Dharsl walked up to him. "How'd it go?" Dax rolled his eyes. "She just wanted to chat." Dharsl nodded, faking his compassion. As they headed into the camp, many of the wolves eyed Dax like he had done something wrong. He recived many of these as he walked back to his father's palace in he center of camp. Dax turned to Dharsl. "What did I do?" Dbarsl looked the picture of innocence. "How would I know?" Once they walked into the place, Dax's father boomed from the center of the room. "DAX!" Dax started. "What father? What is wrong?" Dax's father snarled and motioned for the guards to shackle him. "What is the meaning of this?!" Dax roared. "You play innocent, but I know of your crime. Dharsl told me all about you informing to the Horde queen!" Dax's eyes widened in fury. "WHAT? You little roach!" He snarled. Dax tried to attack Dharsl, who was smiling and waving at Dax, who was being pulled out of the palace.

The guards took him into the throne room, where his father proceeded to banish him. The guards took him to the outskirts of their territory and unlocked his shackles. Showing no emotion, they turned tail and walked back to the camp, leaving Dax all alone. For the first time in his life, Dax wept. He cried uis heart out and wandered to a felled tree. He sat down by it and sighed. "And to think." He muttered to himself. "A few hours ago I was a hero." Dax lives as a loner in the same forest, where he became his harded self. All Dax wants is for his father to see with wrong in his actions, but only Dharsl, the new capitan of the army, could convince him of that.

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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby ponegrl12 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:39 pm

I am looking to adopt Ben

Kennel number:
P10

Name:
Right now its Ben, I may change later if im allowed. It may be changed to Jett.

Breed:
Rain Wolf (a created breed)

Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:
My fursona needs a mate and he looks perfect for the part. I saw him and I instantly became inspired. He looks like nothing I've ever seen before, He just drew my attention immediately. I'll do anything for him. I'm actually writing a story line and he would become a huge part of it. The story goes that my fursona loses her mate and three pups in a fire, she is left devastated with one pup. Her colors,(normally bright and happy),change into worn and fadeded colors. She, one day is sitting with her pup when Ben(Jett) ,the traveling wolf ,(see story below), sees her and becomes enchanted by her beauty. He falls in love and meets her everyday under the big willow tree. They later become inseperable and he is accepted by her family into a place that he feels in his heart, he belongs. I will most definiteley make art of him. I will color in, and create the pictures. He will also be put into the story. He will have a very wonderful home with me.

Personality:
Quiet: Ben is quiet and doesnt speak much to others. He is more of a seer. He looks at things and decifers them in his mind, then he later uses its advantages and its disadvantages. He is not one to rebel or speak out.
Bold: Ben shows no fear when facing opponents. He is good at keeping his feelings hidden from others. He will stand up to what he believes
Brave: Ben is brave when it comes to life. He takes on changes with an open mind. He thinks things through well when fighting and always prepares his next move before he makes it. He would laugh in the face of danger, or smile at a charging lion. He would roar at the very snake striking him in the face. He stands up for people and for himself. If you mess with him, he'll mess you up.
Fun: Ben is like a puppy. When he is not defending himself or helping others, he plays games with the pack's pups. He is smart and kind to everyone he meets but remember... he has a darker side!

Likes:
Ben likes traveling and looking for things. He likes to see the world through different peoples understandings and views. He likes the way that good balances the bad. He likes to rough house and be a pup. If anything he misses his pup-hood. He loves pups too. He loves the warmth of the sun in the middle of the forest and the sun when hitting the glossy leaves that shine after a first summer's rain. He enjoys the forest and the trees.

Dislikes:.
Ben dislikes bullies and strictness. He does not like to be cooped up. He hates the snow and he hates foxes. He finds them decietful and lowly. He dislikes people picking on other people, he cant stand that. He hates his father. He hates selfish wolves and he hates being alone.

History/Background:
"Ben its time for your battle" Ben's father called to him from inside the den. He sat outside staring and rubbing his feet into the dusty ground. Right now he pondered what would happen. His glossy fur shone and his muscles rippled in the sunsets light. His ears perked up and he sat still.
"Ben! Now! Your mother and I have been waiting for this your whole life!" His father called loud, harshly.
"Coming." Ben muttered stepping into his den.
"Stand up straight boy, your going to be the alpha soon, you better start acting like it." His father spat.
"Maybe I dont want to be the alpha? Maybe you should try it?" He said standing up to his father, which from the burning intensity that grew in his father's eyes, was a bad idea.
"Now you listen to me," he began."This is your whole life here, your the biggest, the strongest, the stupidest in my opinion. Your doing this weather you want to or not." He hissed. "No." Ben began angrily now. "This is my life, its not yours to control! Not yours for the taking! I dont want to be here, with you, with anyone! Let me do what I please! You have done nothing to me my whole life but harm me! You're selfish and cruel and I'm done cowering now. I'm leaving father." He said turning away his teeth bared and his fur bristling. "YOU WAIT ONE SECOND THERE YOU TRAIT-" before his father could finish Ben had turned around and with full force snapped so close to his fathers face he could feel the breeze and hear the loud crack as his son's jaws bit down. " Back...off" He snarled through bared teeth turning away. He stormed out of the cave and ran to the stream. He dodged through trees and across fallen wood. He made it to the stream and stepped into the cool water. He lapped at the surface and looked downstream. The water was shallow and he fallowed walked to the center. I'm finally on my way now He thought taking his first steps away from his old life. He walked the stram, day after day. Stopping only to hunt and nap. He walked for one month. Going through fields and plains, over mountains covered in snow, and through a small forest. He walked out of the small forest and into a small meadow. In the center he saw a willow tree and decided to rest under it, for the day was hot and he was growing tired. He stepped under the shade of the tree. The mint colored grass was soft and he quickly curled into it. His eyes closed and he slowly dozed off. His dreams were clouded and he suddenly opened his eyes to see a faded unhealthy wolf growling at him. Her pupils were large and her eyes were a hot pink color.
"Who are you?" She growled. He suddenly shot up and backed away. He was much larger and stronger than her but he was so bewildered he fell inarticulate.
"B-Ben." He studdered looking into her beautiful eyes. Suddenly her mouth dropped open a tiny bit and they stared into eachother's eyes and they knew.

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I will frequently make art of him. Oh look, heres some now!
some art!
and some more!

Other: nothing else :)
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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby Chelz » Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:43 pm

I am looking to adopt...
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Kennel number:
P27

Name:
Babe

Breed:
Aussie Mutt

Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:
Why I want her: I want Babe because she's got a lovely simple design that will be fun for me to draw, and she's a character that gave me ideas for her background instantly. I also think she would be a lot of fun to roleplay.

What I will do for her: I plan to draw Babe myself in a slightly 'cartoon-ish' style, as well as roleplay her. She will definitely have art ordered of her, and I may write some stories/poems about her.

She would potentially also have an anthro form. Though, this would be for the sole purpose of art and drawing her as an anthro. Her quad form would be the form she would be roleplayed in.

Personality:
Stop and go: Babe is the kind of dog that has two 'speeds': stop and go. She's either racing around on some new, crazy adventure, or completely exhausted from whatever last crazy scheme she attempted.
Friendly: Babe is friendly, and treats every new person as if they were her best friend.
Vain: Babe thinks a lot of herself, and it bothers her when a person or other creature doesn't seem to like her.
Optimistic: Babe is practically always optimistic and searching for the 'silver lining' on any cloud. However, as she hates dwelling on negative things, she can seem insensitive because she's not particularly good at sympathising with others.

Likes:
Singing: One of Babe's favourite things to do is 'sing along' (howl - very loudly) to the songs on the radio. This has always amused her owners (until it gets annoying), which is part of why Babe continues to do so.
Fetch: Fetch is one of her hobbies, and she can never understand why humans tire of the game so quickly.
Work: As she is bred for work with livestock, Babe also enjoys mustering sheep.

Dislikes:
Aggressive people: One of the easiest ways to frighten Babe is to act aggressive towards her. You can guarantee she'll get out of your way pretty quickly.
Not being active: A lack of activity is a certain way to put Babe on edge, and cause her to go into a bit of a 'jumpy' state.
Being scolded: As Babe thinks a lot of herself, being told off irritates her.

History/Background:
Oh, hello there!
My name's Babe. What's your name? Wanna be friends?
Huh? You wanna know a little about me? Well, sure thing.

I'm two years old, and I live on a farm in outback Australia. I was born there, as my mum's one of the other working dogs, Susie. She's a kelpie mutt. And my dad was a purebred Aussie shepherd.

I never really met Dad. But Mum and I get along pretty well. Though, she says I need to calm down a little. Meh.

So, anyway. Why Babe? Well, my name was originally Baby. My master's daughter always called me a "cute little baby", and it sort of stuck. But it was soon abbreviated to Babe. Now they all just call me Babe.

Though, they often say it in different tones. A cheerful yell means it's dinner time, baby talk means they want my equivalent of a hug, and a kinda mean tone means something along the lines of, "You idiot!"

I think I got a little sidetracked. Oops.

Most days on the farm I either spend my time out with the master working, or looking for something to do and zipping around back at the house. Annoying the horses is pretty funny, too.

Well, I guess that's probably me in a nutshell. So, d'you wanna be friends now?

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Re: Pound of Hope [Open!]

Postby Mario » Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:12 pm

I'd like some critique!
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Number of character you're applying for: P54
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