starlu; wrote:i m a g e ;;
n a m e ;; Hollycloud
g e n d e r ;; she-cat
c l a n ;; WindClan
r a n k ;; medicine cat
p e r s o n a l i t y ;; Meet Hollycloud, a happy she-cat. Hollycloud became a medicine cat after her love of herbs. She has both her parents, and a sister named Mintleaf. Hollycloud is quite smiley and happy all the time, and loves her job. She loves hearing a little kit mew for the first time, or cry when an elder says it's last words. Either way, Hollycloud moves on fast. She doesn't hold on to things, she lets them go. If her mother died, she would grieve for a day, and then go back to her work. She has a small apprentice named Littlepaw, soon to be Littleflower. Hollycloud hopes to work in her place for many moons to come.
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Hollycloud
Name Suggestion: Loonfur/pelt if she's bicolor or Rookfur/pelt if she's mostly black-furred.
Name Reasoning: Holly- can only represent a dark ginger or white-furred cat; black-furred cats do not fit Holly- (despite the canon saying otherwise, as this is traditional and holly bushes are never black). As she's not notably calm and patient and docile, she doesn't fit -cloud, and as she's got no notable skills, she earns -pelt or -fur. Loon- (or Badger-, if you want an alternative patched prefix) is for a black-and-white furred cat. Rook- is for a black-furred cat with white markings that don't quite constitute a patched/bicolor prefix like Loon-.
Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Hollycloud, as a name, could totally be traditional if you tweaked her character a bit - make her a cat that's slow to react and who doesn't ponder on death so much (as she may feel it's more constructive to care for her present Clanmates). She may also be very patient and hard to rile up, if anyone is able to rile her up at all. To make Holly- fit again, you'd need to change her fur to either completely white or dark ginger.
That said, she's got a good personality if you don't want to add these modifications to fit -cloud, but she may need more unique traits; she may have a tendency to put her paw near her muzzle (and even put it in her mouth) when she's watching something that makes her nervous, or she may have a tendency to speak up about something and withdraw with a self shoulder-lick when someone disproves her in order to save face. (This is assuming you choose not to use -cloud traits; if you do choose to follow the -cloud route, you may be best with a cat who's hard to rile up while having less imagination or creativity than others in that she doesn't make new concoctions and sticks to the usual way of making poultices and the like.)
I'd also like to note that -leaf is for medicine cats only, traditionally, so her sibling might be better with an alternate suffix!