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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Altias » Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:42 pm

starlu; wrote:i m a g e ;; Image
n a m e ;; Hollycloud
g e n d e r ;; she-cat
c l a n ;; WindClan
r a n k ;; medicine cat
p e r s o n a l i t y ;; Meet Hollycloud, a happy she-cat. Hollycloud became a medicine cat after her love of herbs. She has both her parents, and a sister named Mintleaf. Hollycloud is quite smiley and happy all the time, and loves her job. She loves hearing a little kit mew for the first time, or cry when an elder says it's last words. Either way, Hollycloud moves on fast. She doesn't hold on to things, she lets them go. If her mother died, she would grieve for a day, and then go back to her work. She has a small apprentice named Littlepaw, soon to be Littleflower. Hollycloud hopes to work in her place for many moons to come.
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Hiya! Thanks for posting.

Hollycloud

Name Suggestion: Loonfur/pelt if she's bicolor or Rookfur/pelt if she's mostly black-furred.
Name Reasoning: Holly- can only represent a dark ginger or white-furred cat; black-furred cats do not fit Holly- (despite the canon saying otherwise, as this is traditional and holly bushes are never black). As she's not notably calm and patient and docile, she doesn't fit -cloud, and as she's got no notable skills, she earns -pelt or -fur. Loon- (or Badger-, if you want an alternative patched prefix) is for a black-and-white furred cat. Rook- is for a black-furred cat with white markings that don't quite constitute a patched/bicolor prefix like Loon-.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Hollycloud, as a name, could totally be traditional if you tweaked her character a bit - make her a cat that's slow to react and who doesn't ponder on death so much (as she may feel it's more constructive to care for her present Clanmates). She may also be very patient and hard to rile up, if anyone is able to rile her up at all. To make Holly- fit again, you'd need to change her fur to either completely white or dark ginger.

That said, she's got a good personality if you don't want to add these modifications to fit -cloud, but she may need more unique traits; she may have a tendency to put her paw near her muzzle (and even put it in her mouth) when she's watching something that makes her nervous, or she may have a tendency to speak up about something and withdraw with a self shoulder-lick when someone disproves her in order to save face. (This is assuming you choose not to use -cloud traits; if you do choose to follow the -cloud route, you may be best with a cat who's hard to rile up while having less imagination or creativity than others in that she doesn't make new concoctions and sticks to the usual way of making poultices and the like.)

I'd also like to note that -leaf is for medicine cats only, traditionally, so her sibling might be better with an alternate suffix!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby winter wolf. » Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:45 pm

Thanks! I will take note.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Altias » Sat Dec 06, 2014 4:56 pm

starlu; wrote:Thanks! I will take note.


No problem! If you need anything else, let me know.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Glitchieowo » Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:03 am

Image/Description: small lithe tawny she cat with darker tawny tabby stripes and pale yellow eyes.
Name: Rebelheart
Gender: female
Clan: ashclan (clan of the ruins of thunder, river, shadow, and windclan)
Rank: deputy
Personality/Skills: Rebelheart was origanily known as orangekit but as a apprentice her father and mother changed it to rebelheart. She was a rebel... But so so loyal. She rebeled against anything she thought was bad. When fallenfang ( the fangless deputy) was killed by a badger deerstar made rebelheart deputy.
Important Notes: she is REBELIOUS
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Glitchieowo » Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:06 am

( um actually holly can be a black she cat as in "hollyleaf."
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:09 am

emolove13 wrote:( um actually holly can be a black she cat as in "hollyleaf."


Not in traditional rating it can't which is what they use. Your thinking about canonical names :)
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Altias » Sun Dec 07, 2014 6:38 am

emolove13 wrote:Image/Description: small lithe tawny she cat with darker tawny tabby stripes and pale yellow eyes.
Name: Rebelheart
Gender: female
Clan: ashclan (clan of the ruins of thunder, river, shadow, and windclan)
Rank: deputy
Personality/Skills: Rebelheart was origanily known as orangekit but as a apprentice her father and mother changed it to rebelheart. She was a rebel... But so so loyal. She rebeled against anything she thought was bad. When fallenfang ( the fangless deputy) was killed by a badger deerstar made rebelheart deputy.
Important Notes: she is REBELIOUS


Hello!

Rebelheart

Name Suggestion: Tawnyheart.
Name reasoning: Rebel- isn't an appropriate prefix - warriors do not rename themselves just because they want to be special, and the only renames technically allowed are for cats who are notably scarred (like a lost eye, a damaged leg, etc). Her mother and father have no say in her name save for the prefix, and the prefix, traditionally, must align with her pelt-color. Her original prefix, Orange-, does not work either, as oranges don't grow outside of domestic places in England. As you describe her as tawny-furred, I suggest Tawny-, and as a cat who is very open-minded and talkative about her beliefs, -heart stays.

Character Rating: 4/10
Character reasoning: I'm rather confused about her whole story, here, as it's not very sensible at all. Her parents should be giving her a fitting prefix and her leader should be the one to step in if they try to rename her like "no, dude, that's not cool, that's not how we do things in the Clan". As a cat who 'rebels' while also being 'loyal', she contradicts herself directly - she may be best without being a rebel at all, and rather, she may just have a very active nature that allows her to be motivated to the point of yelling her opinions at the sky at points. She may have a hard time acknowledging the opinions of others and may also have a hard time seeing the flaws in her arguments because she sees them as infallible.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Altias » Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:21 am

emolove13 wrote:( um actually holly can be a black she cat as in "hollyleaf."



As stated in my reply, Holly- only represents white or dark ginger cats because this is traditional, not canonical naming. Holly bushes cannot be black in any way. Their berries are red (hence dark ginger) and their flowers are white (hence white-furred). Traditionalism doesn't give a rat's tail whether some cat in canon has the prefix and doesn't fit it because the books don't follow this naming scheme and Hollyleaf is an outlier that should not be counted.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby elfish » Sun Dec 07, 2014 11:37 am

      Hello c:

      I'm having trouble finding possible prefixes for this pretty kitty - I found her picture and just had to name her. Ailuronymy is password protected now (under renovation, I believe), and so I'm having an even more difficult time cx Right now, I can only think of Robin- and Linnet-. Thanks c:
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Altias » Sun Dec 07, 2014 12:12 pm

elfish wrote:
      Hello c:

      I'm having trouble finding possible prefixes for this pretty kitty - I found her picture and just had to name her. Ailuronymy is password protected now (under renovation, I believe), and so I'm having an even more difficult time cx Right now, I can only think of Robin- and Linnet-. Thanks c:


Heya! Lemme see here...

As it stands, she seems to be a fawn torbie, so she would be a good fit for Robin- with utmost certainty. I might suggest a clearer picture, though, so people can get a full-body look of her!
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