Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[toadstool]

//@arcaii sorry to bother you, but is the prefix 'clover' traditional? I know you said to check in the above, but I did and you need a password in which I do. it know. xc I always use the links you provided to guide me before I could ask you for anything, and it seems it's not working for me. thank you for your time! c:

[Wolvine]

//@arcaii sorry to bother you, but is the prefix 'clover' traditional? I know you said to check in the above, but I did and you need a password in which I do. it know. xc I always use the links you provided to guide me before I could ask you for anything, and it seems it's not working for me. thank you for your time! c:

clover- is indeed a traditional prefix, though I'm afraid I can't recall what the colouration is. I'm assuming white/pale cream as the flower is white, but I could be wrong.

The owner of the tumblr seems to have changed the settings to allow only people with the password to view the blog, unfortunately.

[winter wolf.]

Image/Description:
Name: Fawndapple
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: CrystalClan
Rank: Medicne Cat Apprentice
Personality/Skills:
*Observant - Fawndapple is very observant and likes what she does. She studies very hard. If Fawndapple narrows her eyes at something, that means she's observing it.

*Kind - Fawndapple would hurt a fly, could you believe it? She is so very kind to patients and to other animals. She doesn't eat fresh-kill, because she wants to pray for their lives. She loves working with kits and her Clan.

*Trustworthy - If you had a mate in another Clan, Fawndapple would never tell anyone. If you were a medicine cat and had kits, she would keep it secret. Fawndapple trusts everyone, and that's what makes her special.

*Popular - Now, Fawndapple is "popular". She is known by everyone. From kits, to elders, to everyone. All the toms in all different Clans, even though she's a medicine cat, want her as a mate.

*Beautiful - Fawndapple is pretty if you see her looking for herbs, or resting in her den. When she walks out to the clearing to go to the nursery or leaders den, the toms stop and give her dreamy eyes. She doesn't know why, though.

Important Notes: Sagemist is her mentor, and he's getting pretty old, so Fawndapple will be medicine cat pretty soon.

[Altias]

Bumpage!

[Arcaii]

NOTICE: Until further news, my good friend Altias will be doing reviews for me, so y'all don't have to wait around. Apologies for the inconvenience.

[Altias]

Hi all! Hope you're doing well - I'll be stepping in for Arcaii until she's ready to go again. I'm willing to answer questions as well if you've got 'em!

i was thinking i coud make a fanfic about her, but first i wanna see if she's capable for it. c:

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name: lostfoot/hazelnose
gender: she-cat
clan: gladeclan
rank: apprentice/warrior
personality/skills: hazelnose was first named by her light brown pelt. she was always energetic and perky during the eleven moons before her accident. the she-cat was a stubborn, but determine cat at her training, having the potential of being a good runner as she has long legs, as well as having a good nose of a tracker. a moon before her warrior ceremony, she set off in a dawn patrol with her mentor and clanmate to the border of her clan. a long and nose-wrinkling thunderpath. as the patrol resented the markers, hazelnose spotted a squirrel. obeying the command of her rumbling stomach, she chased the prey. unknowingly in her pursuit, she had wandered too close to the thunderpath and got struck by a monster on her shoulder and leg. the medicine cat did as much as they could, but she lost the ability to use her leg. it dangled beside her uselessly. hazelnose's warrior ceremony got delayed because of her accident, and many debated that she wouldn't live. the leader of gladeclan, duckstar, grew angry of her stupidity and pressure his clanmates gave him to change hazelnose's name, and finally granted her her name, lostfoot. lostfoot, dismayed of her name and accident, attempted to run away, knowing she was a burden to the clan. the light colored she-cat struggled, but managed to venture a good distance from the territory. she took shelter beneath a bush in the twoleg place. the next morning, she woke up with a huge scare, a twoleg face looking at her and speaking with meaningless mumbles. they captured her and took her to the vet, where they amputated her useless paw. after two moons of recovering in the twoleg den, she escaped, the agony of her home too strong to ignore. she returned to gladeclan, and was given a name change to hazelnose, her story being an inspiring to return to her clan.

Good afternoon!


Name Suggestion: Hazelfoot/Hazelnose, Lostfoot/Deadfoot.
Name Reasoning: Hazel- works just fine for her, but she seems to have a notable skill in running as well as tracking. You may want to think about lessening that skill so that -nose takes precedence over -foot. I may also suggest that you use Dead- instead of Lost-, as she didn't truly lose her foot until after she was taken to the vet!

Character Rating: 8.5/10
Character Reasoning: I'm kind of shaky on the idea that her leader would pressure her to change her name, as it's really up to the choice of the warrior and there's no reason why she wouldn't be able to decline a name-change. I'd also think about why the Clan let her back in - she left, after all, and supposedly for good, so why would they expect her to stick around again? I could see them still agreeing to taking her back, but with a bit of hesitancy to the decision because of this.

[Altias]

Name: "Mottlepaw [Mottlenose]"

Gender: "Tom"

Clan: "Fanclans and multiples of them. He was in a clan called Cascadeclan, and he's now in a roleplay with Tawnyclan."

Rank: "Medicine Cat Apprentice"

Personality/Skills: "Little Mottle is naturally very timid and skittish. He's always alert, looking for possible threats or dangers that could harm him or his clan. His trust levels in others is extremely low, so it takes a long time for him to fully trust anyone. Many things can startle him, including sudden noises, sudden light flashes, or someone touching him from behind. He is also very introverted and closed-off, being independent of others so he can have the alone time he usually craves. As well, he can be pessimistic, always thinking of the worst thing that could possibly happen."
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"Just because he seems very negative doesn't mean he isn't a nice cat. If you can befriend this little one, he actually has a heart of gold. He's very hard-working and focused on his role in the clan, with an excellent memory, an intelligent mind, and a whole lot of cleverness. Even though he tends to be very quiet and soft-spoken, and tends to stutter a lot when he speaks, he is extremely honest and doesn't tell lies. That does actually mean that even though he doesn't trust you, you can usually trust him back. His loyalty knows no bounds, and he'll do anything to protect those he loves and trusts."
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"His skillset is unique, for a constantly nervous cat would not want to fight some huge black rogue who likes to kill for a living. Instead, he's one of the best trackers in his clan because he's so alert for danger. In fact, if he scented a fox, he'd probably be able to tell you how long it's been since it was there, which direction it went, whether it was a fox or a vixen, whether it was a kit or full-grown, and the most likely reason it would be in this part of the territory. He's also very good at being silent. Normally, that's good for stalking but he hates causing others pain....even the prey, yes. And, he's also great with herbs and medicine. Not only has he had quite a few moons of training, but his excellent memory and sharp wits make him very quick in choosing the right treatment for his patient. Though he's almost always too shy to actually speak to the patient, his empathetic and compassionate nature seems to be calming. Finally, he has an unusually strong connection to Starclan [kind of like Spottedleaf]."

Important Notes: "He tends to be very sickly, getting sick very often. In fact, he always tends to have a slight wheeze if he's tired, because he had a nasty case of black-cough as a young kit. He became a medicine cat apprentice because he developed a genuine interest in herbs in his many, many trips to the medicine cat's den and it was very noticed by Meadowsong [they haven't been in this thread, so don't blame the RPer for that name], his clan's medicine cat."

[[ "You actually reviewed his name before, but I thought I'd clear up any confusion on personality and see how his review would end up. Though kind, I wouldn't say he's too 'Hello Nurse-ish', right? Also, I do have a very valid way that he can be a tom. Since they're usually very sickly, he tends to be quite sickly as well." ]]

Greetings to you!


Name Suggestion: Mottlenose.
Name Reasoning: His name is fit for him! Mottle- works well for a tortoiseshell with a mottled pelt like his.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: It's good that you acknowledge the fact that tortie toms aren't all that genetically sound. However, there are alternatives to just making him sick; he may be transgender (designated female at birth), which would waive his sickliness and allow him to be healthy, or you may just change his pelt to something else, like black or ginger fur. That's your call, though. If you keep him as a tortie tom (dmab), he may die young because of health complications - high fantasy is one thing, but in a realistic setting there'd be very little chance of him growing to elderhood.

[winter wolf.]

((Altias, are you gonna do mine?))

[Altias]

Image/Description:

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Name: Stormshade
Gender: Male
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Young Warrior
Personality/Skills: Stormshade is very bold and a strong fighter. He is quiet and calm usually, but once and a while he can get a little rambunctious. He is very loyal to his clan, and soft tempered. He has a issue with vanity and is quite a flirt with all the she-cats within his clan. Despite this he is well liked in the clan and is regarded somewhat highly. Stormshade is very proud ignorant and ambitious in certain areas, but in contrast he can also be very gentle sweet and selfless. He is very skilled hunter, and he is quite skilled at sneeking around also. He likes to plan ahead and is very tactical and intelligent, but he does not let his thinking hinder is action.
Important Notes: His halfbrother is Stonestrike.

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Name: Stonestrike
Gender:Male
Clan:RiverClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: StoneStrike is a very mysterious cat. He is a couple moons older than Stormshade and is a halfclan cat unlike Stormshade. Stonestrike is a friendly cat but can be dangerous at times. He has a temper that is easily provoked. He is very humble and sometimes brutally honest. He prefers solitude and quite rather than noise, which is very unusual because he is the clan most proficient and skilled warrior even thoug he looks odd and out of place among the sleek riverclan cats. He is quick and full of wit and determination. He hardly thinks before he acts and this can sometimes cause any problems. He is a dreamer and a do-er he hates sitting and waiting patiently.
Important Notes: Nope

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Name: Russetflame
Gender: Male
Clan: TC
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: Russetflame is a noble and courageous cat. He is selfless and put his clan before his own needs sometimes to a uneeded extent, such as starving himself or not resting. He is very loyal and dettermined to do his best. Russetflame is a sharp hunter with a keen sense of smell, and exceptional hearing. He does his best to avoid unneeded conflicts between TC and the other Clans. He is obedient and gentle, but sometimes he can be a it of a control freak. He is patient and careful, sometimes painstakingly so. He fears the day when he must be leader but in a sense looks forward to it. He loves adventure and exploring and sometimes gets sidetracked by his need for adventure. He is young, strong, ambitious, slightly nieve, and very very inteligent. He is a good fighter but has a exstensive teemper that some cats call rage, but not to worry it is not easily triggered.
Important Notes:

Ooh, three in one! Let's get started.


Name Suggestion: Smokewhisker.
Name Reasoning: Storm- doesnt cover a tabby cat, as far as I know. It does, however, cover a cat that's dark gray; if you want to keep the prefix, you might have to change the pelt to a pure dark gray (preferably with little to no white on him). -shade does nothing to describe his skills in a positive light, nor does it imply any particular skill. What does -shade mean to a cat? This cat has a dark-furred pelt (which should be implied in prefix)? This cat is very sneaky (and possibly dangerous)? He does, however, have a notable hunting ablity - which -whisker denotes. Smoke- implies a gray cat, often a darker or lighter tabby.


Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: His personality contrasts a bit too much to make a solid character - in one instance he's bold and ambitious, and in another he's gentle and sweet. He may be better off as a cat of quiet pride, one who makes snide remarks from time to time. He might have a fragile ego, often getting angry when someone points out a flaw in his plans or his thoughts, but he may pride himself on the times he does get it right - even going so far as to brag about it.



Name Suggestion: Cedarpelt/fur if he's not skilled at anything or Cedarclaw if he's skilled at fighting.
Name Reasoning: -strike is a bit of an oddity; if it implies skill in fighting, -claw already does this while using a cat's body part instead of an action. And as he's a tabby, Stone- doesn't fit him all that well. I'm not sure if "most proficient and skilled warrior" would denote a skill in fighting; a good warrior is one that can fight well, or track well, or sprint well, or what-have you as long as they take care of their kin. To say he's the most skilled would make me ask what he's particularly skilled at! Cedar- implies a dark brown tabby, while -claw implies a skilled fighter; -pelt and -fur are only for if he's got no notable trait or skills.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: He's a little inconsistent, as his half-brother is. He can't really be humble and friendly one moment while being dangerous and aggressive the nest - in fact, an aggressive cat in a Clan is a big no-no and being violent towards Clanmates would earn him the ultimatum of "leave or be chill". I think he works just fine as a cat who's humble, modest, honest, and selfless, but I suggest you remove the aggressive trait and invoke in him a sense of being a thorn in the side, a cat who needs to prove himself in order to actually be worth the Clan's trust. He may go to lengths to keep his Clan safe and be as humble as he is because he desires the approval of others.



Name Suggestion: Russetwhisker.
Name Reasoning: Russet- works fine for a dark ginger tabby, but -flame doesn't work. -flame can imply a cat has a rash attitude, a destructive nature, or that he's simply a ""trailblazer"" - but this makes the suffix unclear and unhelpful in traditionalism. As a sharp hunter, and one that's more than likely skilled at such a task, he earns -whisker.


Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: You may be better off removing the nigh-unnotable anger he may feel, as it's not a common occurrence and it's not worth noting if it's not something that he tends to have. He may be selfless to the Clan and obedient to a point of not questioning his leader's actions, but he may also be very serious about his duties and may be a bit petty when it comes to who he protects; he may not want to help cats that he views as cowardly, or cats that he thinks are untrustable, and may give them a harder time than most.

[Altias]

((Altias, are you gonna do mine?))

I was just getting to yours! I'm getting to all of them as I write them, so please don't worry.

Hi there! Could you list some suffixes that could be cool for this cat.I think one of these would fit:

Mist-, Silver-, Dusk-, Whisper-, Birch-, Whisker-, Starling-, Cloud-, Creek-, Frost-. (btw those are prefixes)

Thanks for your time!

Whisper-, Whisker-, and Creek- are nontraditional, as a cat cant very well look like a whisper or a whisker, and creeks can be different colors depending on the time of year, pollution, and other variables.

As this cat lacks a full-body image, it's hard to say. If it's bicolor, it may warrant Patch-, Badger-, Avocet, or Swift-. If it's not, it may warrant a dark brown-implying prefix like Mink- or Weasel-.