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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Tue Nov 11, 2014 2:55 pm

    @Fiorre Holy crap you actually published a book?! I've been wondering about that! It looks so flippin awesome!
    I'm thinking of it as a side career but focus on film or something
    As much as I love reading fantasy I have trouble writing it. Odd, in't it. So I moved on to my next passion which is history. And mixed in a little fantasy but hey, what's a pirate story without sirens and mermaids and such? Pfft lame thats what.
    [thats a lie I play too much Black Flag to believe that]
    [but still]
    I flippin LOVE pirates.
    I've also been tossing around the idea of writing about all the unsolved mysteries and gods and biblical happenings through human history from the point of view of aliens that caused it all to happen xD like a historical/sci-fi/comedy
    But for now... PIRATES
    The main characters being two of my favorite to play:
    Flat out cruel and infuriatingly cocky :DD

    And a legit chatroom is what I was thinking too lol

    @winchesterr Bro I feel it
    -slowly points to signature one more time-

    EDIT: But can there be some kind of Timebounce x Jinxshade rivalry
    Like like like
    Firestar and Longtail in the beginning.
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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby LaBebesota » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:01 pm

@Fiorre@dragonfly Hmmm, I'm currently in the process of starting a novel, my first ever.
Do you two book veterans have any pointers on writing a novel that
I should know about? I was thinking about editing by chapters...
The future lies before you;
like a field of fallen snow.
Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

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Postby Kitty-lover93 » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:10 pm

    @ Fiorre; Ohh. Shows how smart I am xP lol... That could be cool!
    If you feel up to it, a reaction from the elders would be almost expected if this were a book. XD I know the feeling of wanting to post but not being able to.

    @ MB20; It's perfectly fine! (:

    @ Book convo; Fiorre, you published a book?! That's freaking awesome! I'm going to have to read it. xD
    And yours as well, Dragon... I love pirates! You both probably just collected a fan.
    I've finished a book and made through half of another one (making a series,) but I haven't tried to add more for a long time. Maybe I should go back and revisit it; who knows, maybe it would publish.
    @ Laikyn/stillbookcovo; Try to grow a support group. It's always easier to write a book (at least for me) and make it all the way through it if you have people demanding more; if you ever visit the acknowledgements of any famous book, you will almost always see a list of people who helped the author through it.
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Postby fairyheart » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:15 pm

    @dragonfly oo that sounds like quite the interesting plan. I like! Definitely would be down for that!















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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:16 pm

    @Kitty I love fans! SCORE
    I like to tell people the only thing I like to hear more than myself talking about my book is other people talking about it xD
    Mostly I just dont want to be alone with my fangirling lol

    @Laikyn Ok one thing no one seems to get. ONE TENSE. ONE PERSON. The most common mistake I see is people switching up tenses from past to present to past again to future to present and omg it needs to stop lol I suggest past tense. It's what most published novels are written in and sounds professional.
    And person. Believe it or not people switch between third and first person. A lot. Why. Why do they do this. It drives me nuts.
    The other problem I see most of the time is improper paragraph spacing. Please do space paragraphs people. The points paragraphs are meant to break at are these:
    - A new character speaks
    - A thought is changed
    - An action is changed
    - The "camera" is changed
    Anyway, those are just technical. Personally, I would say it is very important when the readers cannot see the physical behaviors of the characters, to describe those as well as develop specific speech patterns for the characters. The way they talk, the words they use, and don't be afraid to write in dialect.
    In my book, I deal with a range of different cultures, from Irish to British to Italian to Jamaican and more. Emphasize the accents. If you can't imagine their voice [like I can't] this is what I do: Think of a movie or tv character who talks the way you want that character to talk, and imagine how that character would say the speech of your character. For example, with my characters I use Captain Barbosa for Scarlet, Tia Dalma for Tajo, Jack Sparrow for Sam, Ezio Auditore for Vin, Tom Hiddleston for Thorton, and cough the squirrels from Open Season for Alistair. Sometimes even genders dont match up, but speech patterns do. And for a few characters, English is not their first language, so I refrain from using don't and can't and wasn't and won't because they wouldn't have learned that. Try to feel and describe what they feel physically too. Like what goes with emotions. Chest tightening for anxiety, warm tingling for happiness. This helps the reader feel what they do.

    Anyway sorry for the rant.
    I'll just leave this here since we're all writers lol
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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby chisami chai » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:23 pm

    Okay, I am going to need to say this once, I wont be active for awhile, progress reports are coming out and I definitely wouldn't want to jeopardize my grade anymore than I have already. I am sorry but my part of the roleplay will have to fall short, I can't post anything at this moment, I am having extreme writers block also. I might be able to post once every few days, other than that I am sorry.
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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby Fiorre » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:42 pm

@teeni; I wish you luck with your grades!

@kitty; yay! I love fans! They make me so happy <3 And, since you approved, I will see if I start setting up a chatroom for all non-topic convo :3

@Laikyn; I won't give you a huge wall of text, but I will offer a few simple suggestions...

Honestly, something that helps, at least in my case, is reading. Try reading different books with different styles and different perspectives. See what you like, and when you read enough, it makes writing a lot easier. It helps increase your vocabulary and it helps you find ways to word your thoughts properly.

Other than reading, I have to agree with the support group thing. It doesn't have to necessarily be a group, but it helps to have at least one person urging you to finish your book. I would occasionally get stuck and not know what to write, but my mom eventually gave me a deadline to finish and that kind of helped me finish the book.

As for editing and things, I recommend writing the book out first. That is the hardest part. Getting it all written out is the hardest part. That is why some people pay editors. It is easier to go over something and correct it, than to write it all out. Personally, my book still has a few grammar errors and occasionally typos, but to be fair, I didn't get an editor.

It is a continuous work in progress if you self-publish. The benefits might be worth it though, but I am not there yet. There is a lot of investing in your own novel, and to some people, it might just be better to find a publishing company who will solve all the marketing things and editing for you.

@dragon; I look forward to reading your work! I have yet to read a pirate book, so I will have high expectations. However, I will say that if the style is somewhat similar to your roleplaying style, I will not be disappointed! I am constantly looking over the replies and thinking "Hmm... That's extremely well written... I need to practice more... I can do better too." <--This is what got me into writing. Roleplaying is almost like career training at this point. It helps me stay on my feet, and generally, it's practice :3

@anyone/everyone who reads this; so, I will go ahead and make an elders post... Just because I feel that should be helpful and needed... however, after my shower. I need to shower. I just cleaned 3 bathrooms. My hands are full of chemicals and stuff.
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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby rockett. » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:43 pm

making replies now c:
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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby elfish » Tue Nov 11, 2014 3:46 pm

    Just returned home from class. I'll be reading and making necessary replies now c:

    edit; I'll post once Echo has replied with Cottonpaw, actually.
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Re: StoneClan | Discussion Thread

Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Tue Nov 11, 2014 4:29 pm

    @elfish I need to tell you I am confused by your username and my brain keeps switching it from selfish to elvish to el fish
    That is all

    GUYS I AM ADDICTED TO TIMEBOUNCE'S THEME SONG
    ITS BEEN STUCK IN MY HEAD FOR DAYS
    I JUST PLAYED IT LIKE FOUR TIMES
    I THINK ILL PLAY IT AGAIN
    Send help
    EDIT: Saved by Pompeii
    #somainstream
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