Pound of Love - JUDGING!! 155 kennels to adopt!

[booklover789]

Username: » Asterous «
Link to form: X
How harsh should we be? : As harsh as you feel necessary
Who do you want to look at your form? : Anybody ! Preferably Sabje or Booklover :3
helpmenotu

Just sent over your critique. SabjeBammie may be able to do so later this week, but I can't vouch for her, so she may not be able to send you one. It's up to her, really. I'll notify our other judge about this though, and have her send you a critique as well.

[SabrinaB]

Username: » Asterous «
Link to form: X
How harsh should we be? : As harsh as you feel necessary
Who do you want to look at your form? : Anybody ! Preferably Sabje or Booklover :3
helpmenotu

Just sent over your critique. SabjeBammie may be able to do so later this week, but I can't vouch for her, so she may not be able to send you one. It's up to her, really. I'll notify our other judge about this though, and have her send you a critique as well.

I am a little busy in the room for the baby today, but I'll send one over later today
Feel free to PM me tomorrow to remind me in case I forget ^^

[koushi.]

Alright ! Thank You Both :3

[Queen Vivane]

Username: Queen Chrysalis
Link to form: [Here it is!]
How harsh should we be? Please be as harsh as necessary
Who do you want to look at your form? Anyone at all. I really don't mind <3
helpmenotu

[Elix]

Username: SabjeBammie
Name: Undecided
Gender: Undecided
Species: German Shepherd (may change)
Rules to adopt: Love and use, feel free to add accessories
Credit for the lines and design: Made by SabjeBammie, ref
Second picture: Lines by kiwilady, coloring by SabjeBammie
Third picture: Lines, colored by booklover789
Fourth picture: Lines by soulsplosion., coloring by Karma.
Here since round 1

*image here*
Basic information
Username: lizzylotte
Its also my nickname becuase alots of people (like my friends) cal me lizzy and the dog hwo i love Cals Lotte
So my friend Alex started calling me lizzylotte so iused it as my username
Kennel number: 1
Why do you want this character? Becuase in real life i really want a dog and a german sheperd comes close to want becuase theye are so loyal .Iam also searching for a friend for my character angel
angel is looking for a brave friend hwo wants to go on adventure with her.

Where will you use it, and what will you use it for?
In story's like her history and it will call "The magical adventure of angel and rosie"
And to use her as insperation for art

Character information
Name:rosie
Gender:female
Personality:She is very loyal.she is also a bit shy.Rosie also does a weird things with her toys : She takes all her plushies (She loves them) and puts them in a line when She puts the last plushie down She sits in front of them and pretend to read a story to them becuase She knows how story can inspire you (see story for explanaision about it )
History:

ROSIES STORIE:

[center]The beginning

"Tommorow is the day" Tought rosie.tommorow i wil be adopted.she sits on a cold hard floor her cage is small,to smal.on her left there are two metal bowls one with water and one with food.in the back of her cage is also a blanket with a plushie.Rosie is still a puppy so She doesn't really know what "outside"and freedom" is She was born in the pound and She never left it since that day but She don't know anithing Else so She is quite happy....
Until She met The Mean Man he is the owner of the pound he is very mean when She tryes to escap he hits her and takes her food away .wel She doesn't likes it anyways .rosie drinks some water and Goes to sleep with one last vieuw on the moon.there is a small window on top of the wall.she takes her plushie and fals asleep.
She wakes up with her plushie on her head.she smiles (yes dogs can do that)

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Dreams come true

She jumps up and shakes her hwole body."okey" "i can do This""some people out there will love me "Rosie gos to the front of her cage and waits until
Someone brings her food.she isnt hungry but She doesn't want to look to skinny for the visiteurs so She eats some and drinks a bit then She sits and thinks about good strategies to look cute.but the doorbel rings.she jumps up takes her plushie and starts playing with it. 2 humans walk into the room.all dogs start to bark but rosie stays quite,She almost never barks,She is to shy for that.but She keeps on playing with her plushie.there is 1 big humans and one small child.the child smiles and waves at the dogs. At the 3th cage She stops and says look daddy that's a cute puppy.the "daddy" says no huney that one is to hairy.the child walks furter until She slows down at Rosies cage.she smiles and screams "look daddy This one is cute can i pleaaaaaaaaaaas have it "
Rosie walks to the front of the cage and puts her paws on the glass.the girl does the same.Rosie feels that This girl will eb her new owner.The dad finally arieves at her cage he looks at how rosies paw is on the glass and the hand of his duagter is to.he smiles and sais common lizzy let go home.Lizzy looks up and sais "but das i really want her......pleaaaasse you said i could pick one myself.the dad smiles again and sais "i dint say we dint take her with us".the girl smiles and runs away the das walks after her. Rosie thinks there leaving bit infact theye where just gonna fill out the adoption papers.rosie gets her plushie and looks at it.her only friend....
Then the girl runs back at her cage rosie jumps up and walks to the glas.she takes her plushie with her.Rosie sits in front of the window and drips her plushie and looks dow as sign of respect.the girl smiles and her dad stand behind her and sais "go a little to the left honey.so i can open the door".the girl jumps to the left.The dad opens the door and puts a leash on her.he puls slightly on the leash. Rosie takes her plushie and walks out of the door.Rosie never Bin out of her cage it feels good to be outside of her cage.she cant wait to walk out of the door.she walks in between the girl an her dad.theye feel as a real family.the one She never hed.She feels kinda bad for the other dogs in the pound.But She is so happy its hard to feel bad. She looks up at the girl.Lizzy looks back and smiles.Rosie makes a promise with her self"i will never leave This girl.i will always protect her ven if it might cost her her life".Lizzy asks her dad if She can hold the leash. The dad thinks and sais yes but be carefull.Rosie is a puppy but She doesn't want to let her new family down so She stays calm and walks next to the girl.she liks her hand.theye arrive at the door.Rosie stand stil. For a moment the girl tryes to open the door but She cant reach the doorknot.her dad is talking to The Mean Man.rosie sits down.the girl does the same but rosie tryes to pull her back up.its to cold for her on the floor. The girl stands up.rosie removed the dirt from her little dress.her dad watcht the hwole thing and smiles and sais "that's the right dog for her.he opens the door for lizzy and rosie.The sun shynes in rosies eyes.She wants to run,jump.but She stays right next to the girl.lizzy runs to the car and rosie followes her and waits for her dad to open the cardoor.the dad runs to the girl and takes over the leash.lizzy gets into the car and lizzy's try to follow her but She is to small.the dad smiles and picks her up,puts her on the lap of lizzy and shuts the door.

My new life

theye drive to a Nice villa with a pool.lizzy takes rosie inside right to the kitchen and sais:"look,here is your food and water bowl" She pointe at two pink bowl with cristal clear water and food that smels yummy.lizzy continues "and here" She pointes at a wonderfull and comfy looking pink dog bed.Rosie walks to the bad and drops her plushie.Rosie giggles and asks whats your name?. Rosie sits down and shows her penny.Its a rusty old thing with her name on."oooooowwww,that's a wonderfull name."Common rosie Lets give you a Nice warm bath.rosie jumps up and wags her tail.lizzy walks to a stait and sais"yo go first ".Rosie don't know what to do for a minute but runs up the stairs.lizzy runs behind her. Lizzy waits upstairs for a minute a runs to a white door next to a pink door with blue letters on it.lizzy walks into the room and rosie fallows her."wait here "sais lizzy.Rosie sits down and wait.lizzy Lets the dreaming water run into the bath.the girl starts adding different kinds of shampoo in the bath to make it ver bubbely but then She glides out.she screams if rosie dint jump up and made lizzy fall on her back She could have Bin hurt.rosie catches her. Her das runs in and sees lizzy lading ln rosie and understands what happend She pets rosie on her head and helps lizzy back on her feet.lizzy Hugs rosie and whispers:"Thank you rosie."lizzy washes rosie with alot of soap.theye play soap monster togheter.the evining came androsie went downstairs to eat somthing.the food was very yummy.she was tired She walks to the dogbed but She couldnt sleep lizzy walks to her and sais:"i cant sleep either.wanna sleep in my bed?" Rosie takes her plushie and walks to the stairs."i guessse that is a yes"sais lizzy smiling.theye walk as quite as theye can becuase they don want to wake up daddy.theye sneak into the room with the pink door ant the blue letters.The room is big and filled with toys and plushies.and the back of the room is a big bed with engough place for lizzy and rosie to sleep in.Lizzy walks to the bed and sits on it.rosie stays at the door."common its okey"sais lizzy.Rosie walks slowly to the bed but She is to small to jump on the bed.lizzy takes rosie and puts her carefully on the bed.togheter they fall asleep........

The happily ever after

Days past by and theye had amazing times.....poolparty's,teaparty's and the best of all story time.
Story time is an houre befor bedtime where daddy reads a story to rosie and lizzy.The story's are an houre full of magic and it reminds rosie everythime how amazing her life has become thanks to these wonderfull peoples.

THANK you for Reading it i hope i win Her and if i don't i hope She Goes to a good home


Likes, dislikes:

likes:
Plushies
angel
The sun
Freedom
Love
Her owner
Friend(ships)
Story's
.....etc

Dislikes
Mean people
Petpounds
The Mean Man
Cold

Extras: (optional)musicistotallycoollikebowties

[Dreamlord]

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Username: Dreamlord
Kennel number: 123
Why do you want this character?
I loved her when i saw the character, i spent some time debating if i wanted
to tryout for her or not.
But i couldn't help but thinking about her design and how beautiful she was.
And I had a personality in mind
that would fit along with her design so I didn't know why i hadn't posted a form yet
Where will you use it, and what will you use it for?
I'd probably use her for stories, and role-play her with other ponies
and i'd make a page for her
in my character page w/ my other oc's and characters

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Name: Cocoa Swirl, prefers Swirl though
Gender: Female
Personality:
Swirl has more of a soft touch, which helps her with baking and taking care
of animals. She can be quite rude, as
Swirl says things that come out mean, but it ends up sounding mean. Which
Swirl hates cause it kind of drives customers
away. She also has a good eye for details, making it easier for her to
spot bad things in her
photography and bakery. You can probably notice why. [ will continue working on her bakery page ]
History:
Likes, dislikes:

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click here to read about Swirl's Bakery!!

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[BloodyIsAGlowstick]

Basic information

Username
crap<3PEWDIECRY
Kennel number
47
Why do you want this character?
I fell in love with this cute little boy the first moment I laid eyes on him in his little red suit. I like natural designs and dogs and so, when I saw him, I just thought 'I have to have him. I've also never really had a dog to human shapeshifter so I thought that would be fun.
Where will you use it, and what will you use it for?
I will use him every day and never let him collect dust. Since my tablet broke, I will probably be unable to draw him here unless I feel up to using my laptop's mousepad, but I'll draw him traditionally every chance I get; in class, at home, etc. I'm a big writer and I'll make sure to include him in stories, poems, and in my roleplaying, which I do every day before and after school.

Character information

Name
Benji. I decided to keep the name his previous owner had given him because I felt it suited him the best.
The name Benji is English and means: Right-hand son
Gender
Male
Personality
Benji is a huge gentleman. He feels he has to treat everyone the same even if he doesn't like someone. It never takes long for him to open up to strangers and, even if he doesn't know you, he'll sand up for you on a whim; as if you'd been friends forever. You'll know he's comfortable around you when he isn't afraid of talking to you about the geekiest things; like new books, movies, or shows coming out he's excited for and, when he gets talking, it's hard to get him to stop.
Benji's also one for adventure and traveling. There isn't one place in the world he doesn't want to see and he often takes pleasure in dragging friends and others along with him on his little escapades.He always thought the best adventures were those his friends accompanied him on, because when he got to share the excitement of finding something with someone else, it made everything a whole lot better.
And though he's normally nice to everyone, he has a short temper to those who lie. He has no time for people who deceive and aren't truthful. He certainly values truth above all else; save friendship.
Benji also has a hard time saying no to something he's been asked to do, as if he did say no he'd feel guilty for turning someone down. People normally take advantage of this fact and his kind disposition. But that's just how he is, too nice for his own good a lot of the time.
History
Benji was born into a normal litter, in a normal home in Oxford, England, and sold to a normal family much like his first. They took care of him while he was a puppy and, eventually, when the children of the house grew up one of them took responsibility of him. Life became hard after that. His new owner was always jumping from job to job because he could never seem to keep one and they had to move various times. Finally, they settled down when his owner began working for a photography company. The sweet life of being still was short lived as they began to travel all sorts of places; Paris, The Netherlands, they even went to Japan one year! It had always been Benji's dream to see what was beyond the same old boring streets he walked every day in England and finally he got the chance to do just that. So, of course he didn't object to all the traveling, especially since he'd made so many new friends around the world than he ever thought possible.
Species
Benji is a dog to human shapeshifter but, in dog form, he's an Australian shepherd xx Basenji.
Likes
Books
The smell of old books
Poetry
Music
Art
Games
Rain
Science
Dislikes

Extras

Hobbies
Reading
Painting/Sketching/Drawing
Writing
Stargazing
Cooking
Playing musical instruments
Listening to music
Video gaming
Favorite color
Blue.
Why?: Well, why not? It is the color we see in the sky, the color we see in large bodies of water, it's practically everywhere so, how could you not like it? Benji has just come to appreciate the color more than others because of how different it can appear; a calming light blue, an angry stormy blue, and even a depressing dark blue.
Favorite food
Benji's favorite food would have to be Jam Roly-Polys.
Why?: He loves anything fruity, but suet pudding smeared with jam and then rolled up, sometimes even served in pudding or drizzled with white chocolate, is something he grew up eating and reminds him of where he used to live with his family.
Favorite TV show[s]
The Big Bang Theory
Why?: He loves things with comedy, as he just loves a good laugh, and what a better way to have a good laugh than to laugh at some geeky friends? The Big Bang Theory has simply just always been one of his favorite shows.
Doctor Who
Why?: Benji grew up watching Doctor Who. How could he not like it? All the action, the adventure, and the history in it makes it so amazing and interesting. It's also a show that definitely makes you think and Benji loves to think and solve things.
Fears
Acrophobia
Arachnophobia
Astraphobia
Athazagoraphobia
Bathophobia
Claustrophobia
Trypanophobia
Family
Mother: Lily
Current location: Oxford, England
Father: Jack
Current location: Oxford, England
Sister: Lucy
Current location: Unknown
Sister: Molly
Current location: Unknown
Sister: Chloe
Current location: Unknown
Brother: Maxwell
Current location: Unknown
Best friend
Aaron Causer: Aaron has been with him since he was born and has taken care of him extremely well, making Benji think Aaron was always his best friend. They always played together and connected so well with each other. He was his master and Benji was his loyal companion. Man's best friend, as some would say.
Art

Made by Berries from WarriorCatsRPG

Made by me

Made by me
andalana

[koushi.]

Bump :3

[booklover789]

Keep these awesome forms coming, guys! They're all looking great!

There are 2 more days to vote on the poll! For anyone who's not voted, makes sure to vote before the poll ends. Whatever gets highest on the poll will be the official code drop date, so make sure to vote appropriately!

[booklover789]

The poll has officially ended now! Thanks for voting, everyone.

The code drop date is November 29th!