[veckster]

Could you add me? I'm totally willing to redline if you want :3

Sure, you're added :"D

[merrodi]

Hmm, I could try and give you some tips? I'm still learning myself, but here you go. ; o ;

The neck should not be so long (especially for one with a small body frame) and the shoulders should be wider so they can support the head. I can't really say anything about the hands, but I know some beginning artists purposely hide them (draw them behind the back, etc.) to avoid drawing them, but to improve, you gotta practice 'em!

The legs... look rather disconnected. I would suggest looking up pictures of the human body to practice with? Even a simple google image search should be fine.

[♡John♥Dave♡]

May I red line? c:

[Running Fern]

Finished my redline! Hope it helps!

[veckster]

Finished my redline! Hope it helps!

Thank you ^^

[veckster]

Hmm, I could try and give you some tips? I'm still learning myself, but here you go. ; o ;

The neck should not be so long (especially for one with a small body frame) and the shoulders should be wider so they can support the head. I can't really say anything about the hands, but I know some beginning artists purposely hide them (draw them behind the back, etc.) to avoid drawing them, but to improve, you gotta practice 'em!

The legs... look rather disconnected. I would suggest looking up pictures of the human body to practice with? Even a simple google image search should be fine.

Thank you for the tips :'D

[veckster]

May I red line? c:

yup! Adding your name ^^

[I♫dream♪in♬harmonies]

I love it! The only thing I would say is that I typically draw the hair all going down, so the little pieces that are separate would be pointing down rather than up. That's simply a matter of style and opinion, of course Also, maybe vary the leg thickness a bit? Again, i love the drawing!

Thanks ^^ Yea, I kinda rushed on the legs, I struggled with them for about 20 minutes T-T Thanks for the tips :'D If you'd like to redline, (not to sound pushy or anything haha) I can add you :3

ah that's too bad ;n; No problem at all! I'm really sorry but i'm not very comfortable with oekaki so i think we'd all be better off if I didn't x,D

[veckster]

I love it! The only thing I would say is that I typically draw the hair all going down, so the little pieces that are separate would be pointing down rather than up. That's simply a matter of style and opinion, of course Also, maybe vary the leg thickness a bit? Again, i love the drawing!

Thanks ^^ Yea, I kinda rushed on the legs, I struggled with them for about 20 minutes T-T Thanks for the tips :'D If you'd like to redline, (not to sound pushy or anything haha) I can add you :3

ah that's too bad ;n; No problem at all! I'm really sorry but i'm not very comfortable with oekaki so i think we'd all be better off if I didn't x,D

Haha okay ^^ That's fine! Thanks for the tips ;D

[veckster]

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