Pound of Hope [Closed; mods please lock]

[Buecherwurm]

I'd like some critique!
Username:Buecherwurm
Number of character you're applying for:P4
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=214724&p=7109210#p7109210
Would you like critique through PM, or another way?: Pm please
critmehplz

[tennisbutt]

Kennel: 11
Section: P
Name: The male one (the brown and white one): Mutao (It's Chinese)
The female one (the white and blue one): Qinxue (it's Chinese)
Breed: Wolves
Age: Mutao is 5 years in wolf age and Qinxue is 4 and a half in wolf age
Why do you want this animal?&What will you do for this animal?:
Personailty:
Dislikes&Likes:
Histroy/Backround:
Mutao's History:

Qinxue's History:
Art: WIP
Other:

MAJOR WIP

[Lirrie]

Kennel: 11

Section: Pound of Hope

Name: Luria and Incendio

Breed: Forest Nymph Wolf and Angel of Life

Age:

Luria is 1200 years as is her tree. (read below form for more imformation)

It is unknow how old Incendio is because his postion (see below form) gives him everlasting life.



Reasons you want:

Whe I saw these two i was completly taken back, they were so cute I almost fainted. I love the fact there a couple, it gives me a great idea to use to my advantage. There markings are what gave me the ideas, It was simple just to put them to use and I hope you enjoy reading about it. Mostly I feel a bond with these two and should I get them Ill happily draw them. For my art below im doing a headshot of each one. Id love to have a chance to own these beautiful creatures and I hope that my form with gain me that privalage. Please enjoy, and know I made this form from the bottom of my heart.


Personailty:

Luria:

Luria's emotions are tied into her tree, if she is happy even if it is winter you may see flowers blooming and it. Whe she is sad the leaves with seem to wither and die. Unlike other trees in the winter, Luria's tree will not die or wither. The only time the leaves will fall is if she is sad, which she rarely is. Luria is happy go lucky, and as wih other nymphs she expressess a true freedom, and a passion for life.

Her bubbly nature make most others like her, and she enjoys having them as her friends. She doesn't have many nymh friends as here kind are rare but she does know of others. Nymphs however are very territorial so she does not make friends with the others. The reason for this being that there are few nymph tree seeds left, the only true way to get a new nymph tree is to: kill another tree, or to find a dead branch and replant it in the ground.

Luria hates death, and treasures all life as if it were her own. If one is injured they can come to her for healing and she will soothe their wounds and heal their soul as well. She is the oldest nymph currently in the forest and she is very proud of that fact but she does not allow it to go to her head.


Her Song (this is really stupid but the song fit): Colers of the wind from Pocahantus

Incendio:

Incendio is one who will alway try to help you if he can. He has a hero type personality that often covers his true feelings. As an angel of life his duty is to take care of the lives of those living in his territory. He is not the strongest, but nor is he weak at all. He is not a leader, but he's also not a follower and appears to go by his own code in life. He sees it as his goal in life to protect everyone he can, and if he fails he takes it harshly.

He has never felt the touch of love till meeting Luria and would do anything to keep her alive. He wishes the humans would leave the untouched lands as they once where, untouched. He wonders everyday if there is more he can do to help but he is easily confused, and this problem confunds him.

His Song: Citin Soldier by 3 Doors Down


Dislikes&Likes:

Luria:

Luria's biggest love besides Incedieo is her tree, without it you would have no reason for life and would die. She loves to make friends and tries to often but because of the issues tree nymph deal with to stay alone she is not friends with any of her own kind. She loves life, and if she can she will try and preserve it. Her biggest gift is the power to heal and she love using to help others when they are in need.

Luria hates to see things die and if she can prevent it she will. Her biggest fear is being alone, and she trys her best to make friends so she doesnt have to be. She hates humans, and what they are doing to the forest and wishes they would go away. She dislikes the though of never finding love.

Incendio:

Incendio love live, even the mysteries surrounding it and he likes exploring those mysteries. Incendio has a passion for protecting that rival even his love for life. He loves to run, and sometimes fly using special wings which usually come from the tattoos on his back. He loves the though of love, but unlike some wont just hop into it because you never know what tommorows going to bring you.




Histroy/Backround (Will be split into three sections):

Luria:

“For it was not into my ear you whispered,
but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed,
but my soul.”

- Judy Garland

I was born in the year of the devine, and even as my tree grew so did my knowledge. They say one can gain the knowledge they seek by listening to the trees. For me the knowledge I seek was healing for I wanted to help others. I would look to my tree seeking the knowledge and she in turn would teach me what I wanted.

By the time I was fully grown, and my vines stretched up my legs and where budding with roses, I knew all there was to know about healing. I so began helping those I could, they'd come to me injured and I would heal them. I did thiis for the largest part of my life, and I enjoyed it because I was helping others and that was all I wanted to do.

One day I heard tale that humans, once fearing these lands, had come to them. They were cutting down our trees, including a few nymph trees as well. My kind were loosing their homes to them, and none could stop them. Eventually we would die out altogether and there would be no more wood nymph left. The other animals feared that their home, too would be destroyed.

Now was not a good time to fall in love, I know this all too well. I did not expect it though, and usually thats how it is.


Incendio:

Howl to the moon
its the love i show
howl to the moon
all i will know
howl to the moon
and ill show you
im truely here
and my love is real

-Lirrie

When someone says Angel of Life, one will probably assume and angel that brings one back to life. That however is not my real job, it is my purpose to protect life. I dont really know how old I am,but I do know that when I was sent down, the moon was dark and the night cold. The crickets chirping was like a melady all my own and I took it all in stride. Guardian Mali had come with me to explain my earthly task, rules, consequences should I fail and how to work the wings that my tattoos resembled. After that he left me and I was alone.

I concentrated on my wings, making the tattoos on my sides and face glow. When I had sufficient light I looked around at my surroundings, the trees were everywhere, gigantic beast that towered above him. The bushes with black and grey in the lessened light, I didn't like it at all but it was my new home. I felt a strong urge to protect this area, and began patrolling.

Years few by and humans began cutting in my forest. I chased a few of with simple tricks, but they kept coming back wiser. I wouldn't give up, though. I didn't know that love was right around the corner and that she would be my biggest ally in my fight. Nor did I know that she would leave me weak in the knees.


Both:

I can see my heart
You cant see my soul
The mealodies unfortold
The soul of one
Gives to another
And they both Never Part

-Lirrie

Luria bent her head to take a drink of water, seeing her reflection she was mystified, but continued to drink. Once she was done, she looked around for small prey animals. She may have been a nymph but a wolf was a wolf and she couldn't survive on water alone. She spotted a rabbit and shot off after it, intent on breakfast. Before she could get near it a shadow flew it and snatched it, ripping into it as he reached the ground.

"That was my kill!" she yelled at him growling, as she took a lunge at him. He turned quickly and she stopped midlunge, he was beautiful and she was immediately entranced. Stepping towards him she lowered her eyes blushing, the red staining he cheek and muzzle a deep brown and light pink. 'My name is Luria," she said shyly lowering her eyes more. She no longer cared that she had lost her prey to him.

He grined blushing as he looked her over, she was a pretty little thing. "I'm Incindio but you mam', can call me cider." he said in a southern drawl that left her weak in the knees. She looked up and her muzzle met his coincidently, she blushed looking away then gasp when he brought his muzzle to hers again, this time of his own violation.

She smiled and licked his forehead, intertwining her tail with his, as he did the same.

Art:



Other: Ima finish this as much as i possibly can


Forest Nymph Wolves:

Forest nymph wolves are one on the least common of the wolf breeds in the untouched lands. Only 1/10 of the trees in this land will contain one and even less live to be over 1000 years old.

Angel of Life:

[! october]

I see you all found the results; congrats to the winners! xD


I'm sorry about the lack of "which character will be given out at each date" list this round, I'll be sure to have them in the future. :3
A general rule is that if the character is donated prior to the Tuesday before the code drop; it will be elligable for judging.

[Not me nope]

Kennel:
p 11
Section:
p
Names:
Costello (m)
&
Axle (f)

Breed:
Greyhound/ wolf mix

Age:
Teens'

Why do you want this animal?&What will you do for this animal?:
Diffrent and intresting. love how ones based off flowers andsuch^^ bueatiful and unique disigns. spiecal to me. was taken aback by the quaility and design work. would be kept together always.

Personailty:
Costello
Loving and caring. May sometimes be nosey as likes to know whats going on. Intrested in everything and likes gossip. Never really lies unless it can hurt a friend. loves those who he can trust.Has never had a proper family and will always dream of having one.
Axle
Swift and sly has 3 sisters but no mum/dad. sticks like glue to those she knows. sporty and couragous. loves her family that she has as its all she has.

Dislikes&Likes:
Costello

Histroy/Backround:

An Icy wind blew past as I curled up in a ball, my Friend, Costello leaning close to me and comforting me. You see, I had had an awful time as a young pup. Ending up in fights was my main fault. Yes, I am female, and as you can see, I love my sports and I am probably what you call a tom dog, vicious and proud. The fights, well it couldn’t get much worse. Time after time, I get myself into many fights. Mainly my fault I must admit. I don’t cry, Ever, Even in the worst of scrambles. Fortunately for me I have had no cases that were serious and have managed no scars. I have one scar that I am particularly ashamed of. It was not from a fight, but yet birth. I suppose you might call it a birth mark. It’s under my fur so luckily for me, no one can see it.
We felt each other shivering that night, in the icy cold weather of October. A leaf, fluttered past, blowing just next to my nose, swirling round and round. I watched it intently as Costello nuzzled a long flowing piece of fabric. He pulled it over me and himself, sneezing and coughing.

We stayed there over night, watching the stars go past gently. It was unfortunately our only choice. It was warm, and somewhere near shelter. “I… A...M Cold, Any …food…d left?” I spoke shivering.
Costello turned and looked at me vaguely; I stood up as I could see he was no help. I stumbled over the curb of the road, dawdling over to the fish and chips. I hate Fish. We take them from the far end of the chip place, since then no on can view us and it’s less likely for us too get caught. When I reached around the back there were fortunately some fresh spring rolls out. Without hesitations I jumped onto the top shelf scrambling at the spring rolls, Chips of all sizes feel down with a clattering and thud. I grabbed the spring rolls and ran. I heard shouting at me from behind, as I reached closer to the Shopping centre Park (where our ‘home’ is) I saw many men running behind me. I couldn’t lead them to our ‘home’! I quickly sprinted the other way, and taking a route round the back. I skidded on the wet Black icy snow and landed in a heap of snow, shivering and quickly scrambling at my way out. It was too deep. I couldn’t. I stayed there all day and night, until the Ice had become weaker and I had had some rest. I broke out free, welcomed to a place id never seen or heard of before, it was the land of water. There was water everywhere. I was floating on a raft of Ice at that point, But I Knew it wouldn’t last and Id had to plunge in. Then suddenly, my thoughts went back to Costello….

Oh, Costello! I thought as I remembered his soft Brown and white fur, and long green lines travelling down to his light green paws. How could I forget the sweet, soft emerald eyes? My eyes stung with hot tears, while I was remembering him deeply. What had they done with him!? They must have got him. I sat there on that Icy shaft of ice with hot tears swelling from my eyes. I had had no other family. Why now have I lost him? My only care and comfort. I whimpered and whined as a flake of ice fell in the water. It was melting. Fast. I’m sure I would drown. I can swim, very well, but unfortunately this water is the coldest I’ve seen and coldness is my weak point, I HATE the cold. I shivered at the thought of going in to the deep depths of the Ice cold water. I’m sure I would either drown or freeze. I was now on the last strand of Ice. It was slipy and the sea was rough. I plunged in to the black deep water struggling to keep my head above the water. I was drowning... I couldn’t keep my head up. I went under saying my last words; “Why Me?!”

I woke up yawning the next day. I was lying in my warm bed with Costello putting Ice on my head. I didn’t recognise this warm cosy room. The fire was lit and it was the early hours of the morning I stretched my arms out yawning. I attempted to sit up. “Rest your head, you slipped over into a lump of Ice and whacked your head on a sharp blade sticking out. You have a few bumps and bruises, and one long scratch across your forehead. But I’m sure you will live “Costello whispered in my ear laying my head back down. “Take some rest, I will tell you later what happened and why we are here” I did what Costello said and rested my head back onto the soft fluffy cushion sinking deep into thoughts. Had it all been a dream?

I woke up again about 3 hours later. I lifted my head up feeling much better looking at Costello going through his toys he used to play with. He looked up at me saying, “You better then?”
“Kind of” I replied sighing. “So, where are we?”
“At my Nans” Costello smiled haply.
“I thought your Nan passed away…” I looked confused at Costello.
“She did. But her family didn’t”
“But how did they find you??” I replied
“The pound. Those beasts that chased us caught us and chucked me and you in the pound not even looking at your cuts and bruises. Then Lucy and Jessica came in and found us, Lilly the baby was there too in a pram, being pushed by Jessica. They recognised us by the markings.” I looked stunned at Costello and shock my head, thinking it was a dream. “It is no dream Axle; you have been taken in care.” I sighed thanking god. What a day it had been.



Other:

Art:

WIP

[Skyebreeze]

Alright, I got tired of editing that old post every time I fell in love with a new character so I'm starting fresh. <3


Kennel:
p11
Section:
Common Creatures
Names:
Mizu (The female, means 'water' in Japanese) and Tsuchi (The male, means 'earth' in Japanese)
Genders:
Mizu, the blue one, is female, and Tsuchi, the green and brown one, is male.
Breeds:
Mizu is a River Wolf of the Sea River Tribe; Tsuchi is a Earth Wolf of the Barrier Forest Pack
Ages:
Mizu is about 12 seasons (3 years); Tsuchi is about 16 seasons (4 years)
Why do you want this animal?&What will you do for this animal?:
When I saw this beautiful couple, I couldn't resist them. I'm currently going through a major 4-elements obsession (Air, Water, Earth, and Fire), thus these two immediately caught my eye. If I would be so lucky as to win them, I would definitely get them lots of art, as well as later design pups for them. I think they'll fit in well with some of my other characters, and they'd get a home in my (WIP of a) character thread. I've always wanted an excused to write a story set in Asia, my favorite continent, and I think these two will give me that chance. <3
Personality:

Dislikes&Likes:

History/Background:

Art:

Other:
(MAJOR WIP)

[SSQM]

I am looking to donate...
Image:
Name: Unnamed
Gender: Female
Species: Horsiat (horse, lion bat and scorpion)
Preferences: -Please keep my signature if using this specific picture.
-Be good to him.
-PM me if you win him. I'd like to see who he goes to.
-He cannot be a fursona or your fursona's mate.
-Do not change the species. I made the horsiat for a specific reason. Don't change into a lion or horse, please.
-All information about the horsiat can be found here viewtopic.php?f=30&t=297682
By submitting this form, I, Starscreams_queen, agree that I am giving up my character to a new home, and will not ask for the character back if it has a form up for it.

[Canine]

I am looking to donate...
Image:
Name: N/A
Gender: N/A
Species: Grim reaper of the animals
Preferences: Please don't give it a name or gender
Must have a home on a charrie site/thread
Please PM me your form
Could I choose who he goes to?
By submitting this form, I, Canine, agree that I am giving up my character to a new home, and will not ask for the character back if it has a form up for it.

[poseidon17]

Kennel: F3
Section: Freaks of Nature
Name: Skela (Mr. Purple Moose Man)
Breed: Moose
Age: 7 years
Why do you want this animal?&What will you do for this animal?: I would like this animal because I find the design interesting, and it seems like a fun chance for a character. I will probably use this animal for story-writing and role-playing. He will also go in my charrie thread.
Personailty: Skela can be basically summed up by the word caring. He cares for others more than he cares for himself. He is very compassionate and will help someone in need. He has a lot of pent up anger from dealing with people while he tries to help them, but he doesn’t let that show through his façade.
Dislikes&Likes: Likes autumn, hay, the color lavender. Dislikes squash, winter, and the color chartreuse.
Histroy/Backround: Skela was born to a family of three, in a harsh winter. His family was only expecting two in the litter, and he was the only one to survive. His parents scolded him for every little thing, especially if it was unnecessary, so he left. He is trying to find a mate.
Art: None yet :3
Other: I’m still gonna call him Mr. Purple Moose Man

[sydney.amber]

Kennel: P23
Section: Common Creatures
Name: Hazard
Breed: Scene Wolf
Age: 1 Year and 6 Months (Dog Years)
Why do you want this animal?&What will you do for this animal?: WIP
Personality: WIP
Dislikes&Likes: WIP
History/Background: WIP
Art: None.
Other:

WIP

Please ignore this form, I won't be able to finish it =(