Lenarion adoptions! (Closed permanently)

[BPeppers]

Thank you! <333

[cedaar]

Can you critique mine plz?

[BPeppers]

Sure, I'll critique yours and you critique mine. ^^

[cedaar]

Well, uh, you should say what it was like after death, maybe. And, like his feelings after his death...

[BPeppers]

Yeah, I was going to do that, I just didn't think I had enough time, which apparently I do. o.0

I like yours a lot. ^^ I think you should add more detail about what they did, and maybe even talk about what they did not on holidays, LOLz.

[Metallic Dragon]

Holy monkey snot, we've got some good stories going on this round. This is going to be a very hard judging round

[BPeppers]

Depends if there's more than 1 form for 1 Lenarion. o.0

[MochaTheLlama]

Depends if there's more than 1 form for 1 Lenarion. o.0

aaah! Raven I'm going fangirl over your form! It nearly brakes my heart...

[BPeppers]

Thanks so much Mocha! *squee* Any critique?

[Metallic Dragon]

Depends if there's more than 1 form for 1 Lenarion. o.0

aaah! Raven I'm going fangirl over your form! It nearly brakes my heart...

Raven: Yeah, I know there's at least 2 for #s 1 and 5. However, there are some that need more effort put into themtoo short(that or they aren't finished yet ^.^)

Mocha: Lolz, I know what you mean, Raven's is definately a tough one to beat if someone goes for #5 too