Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby ossa di cervo » Wed Apr 16, 2014 11:54 am

ALRIGHT. I finally updated the front page so everyone is there and I can finally post! Sorry this has taken so long, I look forward to some action though! Feel free to post with rebel characters now!(: }

T A L O N S T A R
location ; camp
tags ; all rebels

apprentice ; Stormpaw
power ; shadow

The sun was setting behind the tree tops as the massive entity known as Talonstar strode up to the fallen tree he called his den. The giant cat leaped on top and let his call ring, "My Clan!" the tom lifted his upper lip in a crooked smile that mocked StormClan, "my rag-tag team of champions!" the cat let his claws slide from their sheaths while he watched his followers collect. All of them, for one reason or another, had a reason to loath StormClan's existence.

Tonight they proved themselves worthy.

When all the cats had gathered he let himself go on, "I have an important mission for us tonight." without much thought the tom procured a shadowy reflection of himself. The eyes were simple red orbs without pupils.. every other feature ran into itself. Everything expect the tentacle like shapes that slithered in and out of the flesh. Talonstar looked at his creation proudly, "But first.. fetch me Bluepaw and Dustpaw." Instantly the shadowy demon moved forward, causing a grin to spread across the real cat's face. The shadow wasn't gone long as it weaved through the make-shift clan to find two well-grown, light grey apprentices. Bluepaw, the smaller, green-eyed female, strode forward with confidence while her larger, darker brother, Dustpaw walked with his eyes averted and his ears in constant motion.

"Cedarheart has trained you well, Bluepaw." the leader spoke as the apprentices neared him, "and tonight I honor you with the name Bluefoot." the apprentice bowed low, beaming with pride while the herd of rebels cheered and roared. Talonstar's eyes drifted to the dark grey tom and he snarled, "Dustpaw.. Your mentor, Lionear, recently vanished."

The small apprentice looked down and shrugged, "I don't know where he went.." the apprentice squeaked.

"Then it's a good thing Cedarheart caught the two of you plotting your escape.." the black tom growled savagely before leaping on top of the apprentice, easily pinning him. The leader's meow quickly became a loud, angry screech, "None leave our ranks unless by death! Did you pathetic excuse of a mother not teach you anything?!"

Bluefoot's eyes welled as she watched the interactions, knowing better then to step in Talonstar's way. The newly named warrior simply dry heaved and looked away, her emotions nearly taking the best of her.

"You will never betray us again." Talonstar's threat was a mere hiss before he quickly tore his claws through the apprentice's soft underbelly. The small grey tom twitched a few last times while Bluefoot dry heaved again, nearly throwing up all the prey she had eaten that night.

Talonstar stood with a flick of his tail, "Someone go feed his body to the foxes." the leader stepped back and licked his claws before continuing as if nothing had just happened, "Tonight we fight for our land! Tonight we steal StormClan's happiness!" the tom bristled excitedly then turned to face Bluefoot, "and this pretty lady shall lead our attack efforts."

Without waiting for a response, Talonstar leaped down, "I want Stormpaw by my side!" when the she-cat was in sight the tom called out again, "With a name like that, you know I can't trust you yet."

Talonstar dashed through the forest to StormClan's border and raised his tail to slow his following "clan-mates". He needed to give Hawkblaze orders before moving any further.


F A W N P A W
location ; camp
tags ; Crowpaw - Mintpaw - Robinpaw

mentor ; Brackenstrike
power ; fire

Fawnpaw dashed back to camp, her face a flurry of joy. She zipped between the trees as the sun began to set. She knew better then to be out this late all alone.. however.. she didn't necessarily care. Her excitement was so high that the she-cat could feel her claws growing warm which made her even happier. The small ball of orange fur zipped this way and that barely avoiding collisions with trees or hard stones.

The she-cat burst into camp, looked around at everyone and instantly headed to the apprentice's den. She poked her head in through the branched, "Crowpaw?" the she-cat huffed, "Mintpaw..? Robinpaw?" The she-cat huffed twice as loud this time and turned around, sitting on her haunches angrily. Of course, this was unusual for the happy apprentice and her claws slowly began to cool down as she got slightly irritated.

"Of course the one time I manage to actually do something amazing no one is around to hear!" The orange she-cat's pelt fluffed up just at the thought and for a moment she was her normal, happy self again. She quickly smothered that down though as she remembered that she was supposed to be angry! The young cat pinned her ears back, "This mad thing is so hard!"

After several long moments of sitting outside the apprentice's den she got up and moved toward the fresh-kill pile. She picked out a small mouse and nibbled on it at an extremely slow rate hoping that someone would show up to keep her company. Someone she could brag to! Of course, she'd tell Brackenstrike but he'd probably get so mad and protective that Fawnpaw shrugged that off before even thinking about it.
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Re:

Postby little feather » Wed Apr 16, 2014 12:48 pm

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sᴜᴘᴇʀ sᴇɴsᴇs

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River
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            Rowanstar sighed, a day of patrolling, hunting and leading the clan. He sighed, the pressure of having to leader and protect his clan from the rebels. Nothing much had happened on the patrol, just remarking the border but then again that border didn't border anything much but a few loners that had learnt their lesson a long time ago. Sitting by the river he watched the water, clear but would be red in a bit. He flicked his ears, the sounds of the forest were over ten times as strong as any normal cat, the gift of being a descendant of Mudfang, from a kit his mother had told him stories of his great ancestor. Even from here he could hear the sounds of camp, warriors returning to camp from the last patrols and .

            He put his paw out and touched the water, a ripple appeared that was soon taken over by the rushing water. He drew a bubble up, a bubble of solid water floating in midair, the leader controlling it. He watched it for a bit, studied the water, the sun light reflecting off it and turning the light into miniature rainbows. He sighed letting it drop back into the water, he should be getting back to camp but the moment he stepped back through the camp entrance the pressure of protecting his clan from rebels. His eyes lost focus as he sat there thinking.




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Stormkit
Stormpaw
Stormheart
Stormstar


Apprentice
She-cat
12 ᴍᴏᴏɴs

Calico
Fire, shadow && air

Rebels
Border
            S t o r m p a w

            At the leaders yowl she made her way towards him. Talonstar always knew how to keep his clan loyal, she was impressed by that. She watched as Bluepaw's name was changed to Bluefoot and how Talonstar killed the unloyal apprentice. Soon it would be her turn to become a warrior. He had been her mentor, leader and idol for as long as she could remember and she could never image betraying him but he still didn't trust her, she knew that and now the whole clan did thanks to his last words. Her unloyal mother named her after StormClan just days before she was killed for unloyality, that had always been a shadow behind Stormpaw and she wanted to change her name almost as much as she wanted to see StormClan fall. She sprinted after the leader, if she was to slow or lost him it might be his claws in her belly so she made sure to keep hot on his trail and when he waved his tail to slow them she did, not standing next to the leader as she was not deputy but just behind him.
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby Roseshine12 » Wed Apr 16, 2014 2:35 pm

Brightmoon
27M | She-cat | Silver Tabby Tux (Air/Water) | Stormclan | Warrior | No Apprentice | No Crush | Tagged: Fawnpaw


Brightmoon had finished hunting for the day, having come back a half a hour ago bringing in some prey. Right now, she was currently enjoying someone else's prey, not taking what she caught for herself. She was feeling a bit lonely though so she tossed the vole up by the tail and caught it fully in her jaws as she jumped in the air with a twist before landing and padding around, looking for someone who seemed as lonely as she felt. Spotting Fawnpaw, the still young warrior grew excited and raced over to the lonely looking apprentice, laying down beside her with her own meal. "Hey Fawnpaw! Thought you looked lonely so figured I'd come by to talk. You seem both lonely and excited. What do you have to brag about now?" Brightmoon asked with a catty grin before taking a bite of her vole and chewing, listening for the apprentice's answer.


Blazerunner
52M | She-cat | Orange Tabby (Fire) | Stormclan | Senior Warrior | Mintpaw(Apprentice) | No Crush | Tagged: Rowanstar


Blazerunner had been stalking around the camp, restless and full of energy despite the dipping sun in the sky. Something in her middle-aged bones was telling her that something was going to happen tonight and that something wasn't going to be good. She just had this feeling. It was an instinct she had gained overtime with dealing with the Rebels. Deciding to see Rowanstar about it, she padded off in search of him though upon not finding him in camp, took up his scent trail and followed him to a river. She padded up to him, cracking a twig so he'd hear her approach. "Got the same feeling in your gut as I do, Rowanstar?" she asked the younger leader, walking up to him and sitting down. She had known Rowanstar since he was born, had watched him grow to become a great leader. She had been a warrior when he was born, being 22 moons old at the time. She had been there for the previous Leader and Deputy before him even. To say the least, he probably often conferred in her for her wisdom with her being such a senior warrior of the clan. Her father had actually been there and known Dapplefoot and Mudfur and she had known their first descendants, Rowanstar being their second generation. Needless to say, she knew the cat well.


Smallfoot
31M | She-cat | Tuxedo (Shadow/Air) | Rebels | Warrior | No Apprentice | No Crush | Tagged: N/A


Smallfoot simply sat at the edge of the clan gathering, watching as her brother mercilessly killed a young apprentice. She shook her head gently, hiding out of view away from the gathered cats. Not that anyone would notice she was missing anyway and it's not like she wasn't there to hear they were going to raid Stormclan's camp. This was nothing new for her of course so she followed the other group of cats without hesitation, staying on the outside of the 'herd' and dodging through the trees as she followed her brother's raid but at the signal to slow, she did so and stopped, hiding off to the side as she awaited the next orders by Talonstar, always invisible. She didn't expect any to go to her, barely any ever did. She was considered too small and seemingly weak yet her brother kept her around. He probably did recognize her talents but he never gave notice to her or commented to her. He was always busy doing one thing or another. Not even as kits did they really talk to each other and their parents never really acknowledged her after she had weened off of her mother's milk. Still, she fought with her clan and while having thoughts of wondering if the grass was greener on the other side, she could never leave her brother. So even now she would fight and kill Stormclan cats in her brother's name and honor.
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby peachsmoothie. » Thu Apr 17, 2014 1:51 am

    hawkblaze | warrior | 30 moons
tags: talonstar, bluefoot, dustpaw
mood: surprised


      hawkblaze was watching bluefoot and dustpaw from the shadows. his ears flicked in surprise as dustpaw fell dead, even though he knew it was going to happen. he dashed out of camp, following talonstar. at the border, he padded up to him. "yes, talonstar?" he mewed, his paws itching for a fight. he had been practicing his shadow powers, and he had a new technique he wanted to try out... as far as he knew, letting bluefoot lead was just a joke to kill her off. she just wasn't loyal enough. soft cats like her cringed at the sight of another cat falling. a real rebel cat would be thirsty for more...

      hawkblaze turned and watched the other rebels follow behind him and talonstar. he was already at the front of the pack, looking down on the mere warriors. the rebels were a small group, but they were powerful and thirsty for clan blood. he turned back to talonstar, licking his lips. "are we almost ready to start?" he asked, his tail twitching with impatience. the night was young, the moon still rising. hawkblaze could hear the clan cats begging for mercy already.

      { oh yeah.. oops, sorry. :oops: }
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby ossa di cervo » Sat Apr 19, 2014 3:50 am

Let's try and remember the literacy rule on this thread please. }
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby Roseshine12 » Sat Apr 19, 2014 6:39 am

{I'm kind of waiting on Fawnpaw, Rowanstar, and Talonstar here XD}
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby ossa di cervo » Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:33 am

Yeeea. Trying to give everyone who hasn't posted a day or so.. :/ }
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby Just B E . » Sat Apr 19, 2014 11:08 am

((I am not going to be able to post for a couple of days because my phone{where most of my posts come from} is not working properly. I will try to post whenever I have a computer, but posts may be less frequent over the next week. Sorry!))









































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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby SydneyandStorm » Mon Apr 21, 2014 10:20 am


















































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The dark-furred tabby tom had just returned from a small hunting trip with Mintpaw and Crowpaw, two voles, a mouse, and a squirrel dangling from his jaw. It had been a fairly successful excursion, but granted, he did have the entire earth to help him out at his beck and call. Ah, well; so long as the clan was well-fed, it didn't really matter how he came across his prey. He wasn't an apprentice, after all, and had no need to show off his hunting prowess. Those days were dead and gone, along with the trips he'd formerly shared with Sparrowfeather. She had been the only one he'd ever tried to hunt without his powers for, just as a means of showing off.

The bushy fur of the squirrel's tail tickled his nose and he wrinkled it, trying not to sneeze into the prey. A sight it must have been — but no one really looked over at him anyway, save his kin and apprentice, Fawnpaw. Not that he minded, as it was self-induced reclusion, and helpful in times when one's face is not at its most handsome. Brackenstrike shook his head in an attempt to displace the feather-light strands of hair that so obnoxiously clung to his face. At last, the freshkill pile; he could put it down now.

Where was Fawnpaw, anyway? He hadn't seen his bubbly apprentice for a while, though he had been out hunting. Still, she was usually doing something, and he felt a slight twinge of relief as he finally saw her sitting next to Brightmoon. He considered going over and joining the conversation, but didn't want to intrude. The two seemed to be perfectly happy as they were. Perhaps later he'd chat with her to see if he'd missed anything while he had been gone; unlikely, but still important.
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Re: Magic in the Claws { Warrior RP } { OPEN }

Postby Roseshine12 » Fri May 02, 2014 4:54 pm

{Hello? *knocks on the thread door* Anyone home? :( }
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