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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby crazy cranky critter » Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:09 pm

Pet's ID Tag:
83 - eighty three

Name:
Dawn of Destiny

Nick name:
Dawn

Gender:
Female - mare

Species:
Thoroughbred

Speciality:
Racing

Heritage:
Sire - Aspen Grove (2339) [retired racer]
Dam - Silver Sunshine [retired racer]

Height:
14hh

Age:
6 years


Appearance:
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Reason You Want It:
I want Dawn of Destiny because I love horses. I'm also rather loaded with complex designs and I would enjoy having a nice simple character who I can easily produce art of on a regular basis. I also think she looks beautiful how she is only two colours. Infact I'm certain she will be one of my most well used characters. I can also see her being a good little horse to be galloping around CS in my signature.

Destiny of Dawn:

Birth:
In the earliest days of spring Dawn of Destiny was born. At the time of her birth there was silence and the earth seemed to be frozen still. The soft breeze telling of the warmth to come brushed on her coat lightly. She opened her eyes and was alive. It was a huge relief for all who were involved. Not only had it taken many months to locate the desierable stud but her mother had suffered some blows from a club when theifs broke in one night. Dawn was ok and the clenched white fists of on lookers released. The little foal danced around then ripped a tuft of grass from the ground. The green blades were sweet but her interests were not in eating them, but in finding out what this strange wonder was.

Life as a Yearling:
Twelve months had passed since Dawn was born. The foal that had once seemed so perfect had grown to have an incorrect comformation. A man sat on the phone five miles away, clenching his fist. Aspen Grove was the best stud and this foal was like a fly dirt on a shining clan window. He vowed to get her turned into dog meat. Meanwhile an eager trainer who had finished his course of natural horsemanship worked her. Racing was a hard life and the horses had to train fast, live fast and die fast. For a lucky few they got to retire instead of die. He toiled for many hours attempting to break a perfect horse out of an out of proportion beast. Swear poured down his face. To an on looker it could be described as his hope dripping form his skin. But this was not so. For the young man had a mind as tough as steel and as weathered as an old leather boot. His training was of the highest standard. His fist remained clenched tightly on the lunge rope. This horse was going to be his prize.

Two year old:
The trainer who had worked himself half to death over Dawn kept her great temprement and gait a scecret. Sure her conformation was not the best but sure should she be sold for a mint. He sat sipping steaming coffee out of a cup one cold morning. There was a whisper inside. Dawn was to be sold. The auction was not publiscised. The dainty little mare, being a thoroughbred, had dropped plenty of weight in the winter and she looked a good stride out of condition. She trotted over to her trainer and gently laid her head on his lap. She was really quite naughty in that she would not settle for being rejected. She sought attention. She was not selfish but enjoyed the love of others.

The Auction:
Twenty people sat in the barn. This auction was nothing of great proportion. What the trainer hid was a rare gem worthy of a full house. The twenty people included Aspen Grove's owner, the trainer, a little girl and her father, an elderly couple, a farmer and sevral others looking for a cheap buy. The auction started at just one thousand. There were a few bids but once she exceeded 5k all but the trainer and Aspen's owner continued bidding. The trainer knew she was worth something and the competitor, a portly man in a white suit, knew she would cost him more to have this scar against Aspen's name.The auction raged on for many hours. The fat man started jumping up in five hundreds istead of one hundred like Dawn's trainer did. There was no doubting the fat man was rich, but a man whose soul has been stolen by a hooved beauty will stop at nothing. And so the trainer puffed out his chest and with a faital blow bid 20k, which was about a 10k leap from the last bid. This wasn't the most expensive horses could get in the area in which he lived. The fat man growled. He muttered something about useless scum and threw his hat on the ground, squishing it into the mud. The trainer leapt in the air then raced of to Dawn. He hugged his new mare, who at this time was called Dawn Pearl. He took her back out to the stable. She would stay there, waiting for the day he would reveal her great talent.

In the third year of life:
Silver Sunshine fell. It was a horro scene in the making. Her leg snapped like a twig. With her gone there were only a few shetlands and Dawn left. The breeder was falling to his knees. He told the trainer that it was over. They were broke and needed to sell the farm. The trainer sighed, almost as if he was going to break into tears. He pleaded and said that if he didn't have an idea in three day then the farm could be sold. And so it was shook upon. Dawn had grown an unbreakable loyalty to her trainer in this time. She followed him like a dog, happy as ever. He sat down on the deck and put his head on his knees. Blocking out the world with his arms he began to moan, a sad, heart broken cry. Dawn pricked her ears. She wanted him to be happy so she came over and nudged his head. He peeked at her. She shoved him again the leapt back. He got up and she stared, willing him to get on her back. And so he did. She seemed so bright and cheery considering her inevitable fait of having to be sold with the farm (as he could afford no other boarding). She still had her tack on and as she began moving he loosley fondeled her reigns as if he was not meant to be there. He shut his eyes. There was a rush of air and Dawn propelled forwards in a graceful gallop, carrying herself like a gentle summer breeze. Her trainer lifeted up his head. Seeing the scenery race past his heart paused for a second and then he let out a loud yell for sheer joy. They sped down the dusty driveway and when they got to the end Dawn whirled around and hurled back. When he hopped of her he whispered into her ear, in a rapid excitement that was incontainable. She almost made a smile as if to say 'told you so.' He kissed her nose then whispered 'I feel it now, you are at the dawn of discovering your true destiny.'

Fourth Year:
A short man got lifted onto her back. Dawn of Destiny as she was now named leapt forwards. Other horses whinnied and crashed against the walls of their starting block but Dawn stood, her heart beating clearly. It was her first race. In seconds she was off, like a silver bullet into the sunlit race track. She dropped behind and her trainer sighed at the side lines. There was spit flying everywhere, loud cheers and people placing bets. Just when it seemed like it was too late Dawn surged forwards like a missile. The crowd grew silent and all her trainer could hear was a steady heart beat, his own, as if it was beating out of his chest. Dawn pulled forwards and in what felt like slow motion pulled over the finish line, her whole body ahead of the next horse.Her trainer had to hear the people cheer her name before he could believe it. He raced straight for her, tears pouring down his face. He almost blacked out in the heat of the excitement. A few hours later they were back at the farm. Their hearts were both beating so loud they could barely hear his whispers. The farmer wated no time and had already found five more races she could enter soon. And so Dawn of Destiny rose to the challenge and her career kicked off. She could have suffered a horrible fait but luckily her trainer got her fresh food much more then needed and stayed with her for most of his life. Her food was poisonned a year into her career. She seemed thankful and seemed aware that she had a great trainer.

Five to six years:
Dawn of Destiny stood quietly by her trainer. After the next season of racing she was going to retire. She was turning six soon and she had accumulated what must have been close to a world record number of placings. She had made a man proud. Proud that no matter what it looks like a horse can always be great. After she retired her trainer planned on breeding her. Not many times to make lots of money, but once or twice, so as they could both share the joy of another generation of horses.

I, crazy cranky critter, understand that by adopting Dawn of Destiny I take full responsibility for her and will care for her as she deserves.
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Re: The Agency

Postby •Bliss• » Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:29 am

The Agency wrote:
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Pet's ID Tag: 33
Name You'd Choose for It: Fae
Meaning of Name: Fae is an English name meaning Fairy
Gender: Female
Species: Some sort of dog mix.
Reason You Want It: This dog is simply beautiful. When I was scrolling down the kennels, she caught my eye. If I do somehow get her, she is promised a good home with tons of art and stories.
History/Background/Other:
I was born in a cave. The first memory I had was the smell of my mother. As I grew up, my mother came to the cave less and less. One horrid day, my mother left. I wept the whole day. What could have happened to my mother? That following night was a full moon. What was odd was the fact that the moon had a blueish tint to it. However, I didn't pay much attention to it. After a while in the lonely company of my cave, bright flickering lights surrounded me. As I looked closer, I saw that they were fairies! "Why are you here?" I exclaimed in confusion. I wasn't anybody special. Suddenly, I remembered what my mother always told me when I was scared. "Don't worry, when you are afraid, sad, or alone, the fairies will guide you." Suddenly it made sense. My mother knew about the fairies! "Do... Do you know where my mother is?" I tentatively asked a light grey fairy. 'We are not quite sure, but we will help you find Queen Kemari.' I was puzzled. Why would I need a queen? I wanted to find my mother! The fairy noticed the look on my face and said 'Queen Kemari is your mother; she is the queen of the spirit fairies. So, are you willing to go on a quest to find your mother?' The fairy looked at me expectedly. "Of course I am!" I announced. And this was the beginning of my terribly long quest, which the fairies call 'The Quest for the Queen'.

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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby cedaar » Mon Oct 11, 2010 3:15 am

No!! Someone else is going for my sweet little rainbow tailed canine! :(
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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby Veggievampire » Mon Oct 11, 2010 3:21 am

Snowballz is Epic wrote:No!! Someone else is going for my sweet little rainbow tailed canine! :(

It means you'll have to work twice as hard on your form. <3
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Re: The Agency

Postby BlissfulFarrago » Mon Oct 11, 2010 5:29 am

The Agency wrote:
BlissfulFarrago wrote:
Pet's ID Tag: 34
Name You'd Choose for It:
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: When I first saw this donation a few months ago, I was immediately drawn to it. I wasn't sure why, but I really liked it. At first I decided not to go for it, since I already have many canine characters. But then I realized I had been looking for a meerkat character, since I love them, and realized the markings of the donation I liked would actually sort of fit for a meerkat: Tan coloring, dark around eyes, dark ears, lighter front paws...I thought it fit rather nicely, and decided to go for him.
History/Background/Other:
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

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(Note: This will not be finished in time for the code drop, as there is a character at TaN I'm going to go for. Since I'm the only one going for 34, I'll finish this form next round. c:)

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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby iPawki » Mon Oct 11, 2010 5:40 am

I'm really new to this..... (I've adopted from Tan but not from here)
Hope I've done everything right. ^^

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Pet's ID Tag:
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Name You'd Choose for It:
Ulric
Gender:
Male
Breed: Canine.
Reason You Want It:
The colors are just beautiful, and the designs are lovely. The mix of chocolate like colors made me immediately fall in love with the dog. ^^
History/Background/Other:
I was born in a chocolate factory. When I was first created, I felt so proud of myself.
It was around Easter time. I was to be the most special. A mix of intricate designs, dark cocoa, milk chocolate, and white marshmallow. The other easter bunnies stared at me in awe. They were pure brown, simply ugly little bunnies, and I was, in my eyes, the greatest- the canine, the different.

I disliked the crowded space of the factory. The stamping, all the men and women, the loud noises of the machine- naturally, I wanted to run away. I found a window's entrance and felt myself run, just run. I heard shouts, yowls, as they realized I was gone. But I was just chocolate to them, and they didn't bother me. I just ran, at the speed of the wind, and I felt so free, so uncorrupted.

She found me. A little girl of about four years of age. But she was not my savior. She was... like a small demon trapped inside of an angelic figure. She picked me up, as I felt myself speed through the streets of a small city, and she punctured a hole in heart. She was, to my horror, slowly eating me, and I thought it was the end of the world... until-
"Leila, stop it." The boy, around eleven years old, took me in his hand, and ushered his sister into the house. He stared down at me, "Don't worry, she only took a little bit."

He brought me to his study. I couldn't tell whether he was short or tall for his age, because I had lived my life in a stuffy factory, but he looked kind, his face gentle in contrast to his sister's and the poker faces of the factory people. His study's walls were adorned with treasures- old airplane figurines, beautiful sketches and art, custom one of the kind objects, everything. His hand seemed slightly worn and rough as though he worked a lot on drawing and building. He put me under his lamp-light, which didn't bring me too much warmth like the light they had at the factory, that melted bad chocolate. I sighed contently, though I didn't think he heard me. He puts his finger to my chest, where Leila had taken the bit of chocolate away. He smiled, and from a mahogany desk drawer he pulls out a cheap piece of red fabric rolled over heart-shaped cotton.

Through the hole in my chest, he gives me a heart.

Then, he take two bits of marshmallows (the two circles next to the dog's arm), and completes me.
And for once, I could love. I was, to him, and to myself, a real being.
It felt great.

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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby Dogs Can Bark » Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:00 am

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Pet's ID Tag: Stall #72
Name You'd Choose for It: Calista; pronounced ka-LIS-ta.
Gender: Female; Mare 5 years of age
Reason You Want It: I've been looking for natural horse characters, and rather than just designing a horse with no meaning or past, I decided that I should look to adopt one. I knew the Agency had all sorts of characters looking for a good home, and I saw her. I dont' usually favor brownish horses, but she is a really beauty even with a few different colors on her. They go together so well. <3 Some of my favorite characters I've adopted from here, and I really hope she will be mine, as I believe she'd be one of my favorites.
History/Background/Other: I will use Calista in whatever literate horse roleplays I can find. I am already in one that I am planning to use her in if I'd get her, of course. I do often draw my characters, and she'd definately have a space in my character thread. I'm planning on ordering art of all of my horse characters together, or maybe even separate. But even if I don't end up getting the art, I'm definately going to put her to good use. In each roleplay I will most likely have a different history to fit the plot, but I am still trying to figure out her personality. Or rather, horsenality. x3
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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby Canine » Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:16 am

Pet's ID Tag: kennel 7
Name You'd Choose for It:Lucille (Luce for short)
Gender:female
Reason You Want It: I've always wanted a nice, realistic tiger character. and lucille is beutifull (spelling?)
History/Background/Other: Captured by the City Zoo and taken from her homeland in India and put on the breeding program much to her distaste. She has had many escape attempts. But her plans usually fail because the keepers have learnt to be one step ahead of this tiger. Hates "her partner" in the next door encolsure. Has a "cell" buddy who is far younger than her and so annoying
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ugh.. I fail at adoption forms.T.T hope it's ok anyway :D
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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby Araviir » Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:37 am

-canceled form-
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Re: The Agency-donations closed

Postby Tripp » Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:47 am

BlissfulFarrago-you got the character
i dont get on as often, bear with me
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