│~CRYSTAL ♦ KEEPERS~│

[Breezeyheart]

◇ I would like to adopt a CK. ◇

We, we don't have to worry 'bout nothing
'Cause we got the fire, and we're burning one hell of a something
They, they gonna see us from outer space, outer space
Light it up, like we're the stars of the human race, human race

When the light started out they don’t know what they heard
Strike the match, play it loud, giving love to the world
We'll be raising our hands, shining up to the sky
'Cause we got the fire, fire, fire
Yeah we got the fire, fire, fire

Username:
Breezeyheart.
Crystal Keeper Number:
#009
Name:
Scorched nightfall. But he is normally called Scorch for short.
Gender:
Male.

Personality:
Mysterious.
Scorch comes off as mysterious to those who don't know him. He has an air of mystery to him, since his eyes are normally glowing as he peeks from behind a bush in the night. He loves running through the forest, weaving between the trees. Because of this you may catch a glimpse of him, looking at you from shadows of the forest at night, out of the corner of your eye.
Serious at times.
Scorch can be quite serious, but he is only serious when it is needed. When he is serious, it is most wise to listen to what he has to say, for it normally is of grave importance. He isn't serious for no reason.
Playful, carefree, kind, & caring.
Scorch is very playful and carefree. He loves to play-fighting, hunting, and exploring. Despite his looks, he is very carefree most of the time. If you are lucky, you'll catch a glimpse of him pouncing on a leaf, or bug when he thinks no one is looking. Scorch is very quite kind and caring, he cares deeply about his friends, and hates to see any of them cry. If this happens, he'll do his best to cheer his friend up, with kind words and normally a hug. He can also be very kind, to anyone who happens to be crying anywhere nearby.
A risk-taker, fearless, & brave.
Scorch, despite that he knows better, is a risk-taker. He will purposefully go straight into the dangerous unknown, to save his friends. Scorch is fearless, he doesn't admit that he fears anything, but he does. Despite that he does fear a few things, normally his fears is put aside, if his friends are in danger and need his help. Scorch is brave, he hates to sit on the sidelines, if his friends need him, he will risk everything to help his friends out.
Persistent, honest, but sarcastic at times.
Scorch is very persistent, he will get his way, no matter who or what stands in his way. Scorch is honest to to the core, he only tells the truth and nothing but the truth, if you asked for or not, is a whole other question. He can lie, but he chooses when it's the best time to that or not, normally it's not the best time to lie though. He is very sarcastic, when he dislikes doing something or he dislikes someone's attitude, otherwise he isn't sarcastic.
Short tempered, protective, & loyal.
Scorch is very short tempered and protective, when it comes to his friends. He will protect them with his life if need be. If anyone ever threatens or insults his friends, they'll be in for a fight, since he won't let them threaten or insult them without a fight. Scorch is very loyal to his friends, clanmates, and his clan. He will always stay loyal to his friends, and his clanmates for long as he lives.

And we gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn
We gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn
Gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn
We gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn

Theme song(s):
Burn by Ellie Goulding.
(link if you wish to listen.)

Poem(s):
"Fire in inside."
A fire burns deep in my soul,
It's flames and embers glow and grow,
There's a fire inside,
and sometimes I can't control it.
It has a mind of it's own,
a life of burning flame.
It lives and breaths,
just as you and I do.
It has feelings,
just like you and I do.
But when it's angry,
it burns me up inside.
And I blaze like a fire,
cause' I'm burning up inside.
The fire is all around me now,
and I am burning as one with the flames.
I can control it now as it is one with me,
As if we were always one and the same.
I have a fire inside,
it burns deep in my soul.
Me and my fire,
are one and the same.
We burn harmoniously,
eternally and forever as one.
I have a fire inside,
and I am not afraid to use it.

Story:
The sun shone brightly overhead in the sky, as Scorch awoke in the warriors den. He stretched into an arch and let out a big yawn. "Sun-high already?" he murmured. "I guess I should find out what patrol I am in today." He got up onto his feet, and left the warriors den by walked through the opening of the cave. Scorch walked into the clearing, it was bustling with activity. Two queens laid in front of the nursery cave, watching their kits joyfully play and run together. A joyful cry came from a kit as he ran up to Scorch. "Scorched nightfall, will you play with me later?" The kit asked curiously. "Of course, but I need to find out what my warrior tasks are for today." He looked around to see any cat was listening, and then whispered in Duskkit's ear "Then later I will play with you Duskkit, I promise." Scorch promised the tiny kit. "Alright! Thanks, Scorch." Duskkit thanked him. "No problem. Just don't tell any of the other warriors." He looked around again. "This is our secret. You can tell your siblings and your mom, but not any of the other warriors." He whispered in the tiny kit's ear. "Because the others might get jealous that I get to play with you. And they don't." Scorch told Duskkit. "Oh, that makes sense." The tiny kit said. "I promise that I won't tell any cat, but my siblings and my mom." Duskkit promised with his right paw up in the air. "Okay, go play with your siblings." Scorch said. "I will." Duskkit said and ran off to play with his siblings. Scorch listened as Duskkit told his siblings, about he had promised the kit that he would play with him later. "Hey, Scorched nightfall just promised me, that he would play with me later." Duskkit said proudly. "Really? That's great! I wonder if he'll let us play with him too." Tansykit said wonderingly. "I think he will!" Chervilkit said excitedly. "Yeah! I think so too!" Thornkit said excitedly in agreement. Duskkit bounded up to his mother excitedly. "Mom, Scorched nightfall said that he would play with me later." Duskkit said excitedly. "That's great. I'm proud of you." His mother whispered in his ear. "He is a warrior, so don't go easy on him, you can be as rough as you like." His mother said with glint of mischief in her eyes. Scorch realized that he was hungry. So he walked over the fresh-kill pile, searching the pile for a juicy plump blackbird to eat. He found a blackbird, juicy and plump. He walked across the clearing to find a place, to sit down and eat. He saw that other warriors laid in clusters around the clearing, some eating fresh-kill, and some sharing tongues with each other. He laid down under the shade of a large oak tree, and tucked hungrily into his blackbird. Scorch licked his jaws clean from the juicy blackbird. The deputy walked up to him. "Scorched nightfall, you'll be leading a hunting patrol. Take Ashstorm, Robinflight, and Foxleap." Hawkfeather said. "Okay, Hawkfeather." Scorch said and stretched as he got up to his feet. Scorch walked over to a group of warriors, and saw that Ashstorm, Robinflight, and Foxleap were all talking among each other with rest of the group. "Ashstorm, that's a great story." Blossomfall said. "Ashstorm, you can tell stories later." Scorch looked him in the eye. "The deputy said that you have go on a hunting patrol with me." Scorch said seriously. "Okay, Scorched nightfall." Ashstorm looked at the other warriors. "I'll have some stories to tell later." Ashstorm said. "Robinflight, Foxleap. You both have to come too." Scorch looked at them. "Okay, Scorch." Robinflight said. "Let's go!" Foxleap said. "Okay, this way." Scorch said and led them through the thorn tunnel. As he walked he heard the soft footfalls of the rest of the patrol behind him. As soon they came upon a clearing, Scorch though that he should tell the others to hunt here. "This should be a good hunting spot. Let's hunt here" Scorch said. "Okay." Ashstorm said, and prowled off to the left of the clearing in a hunter's crouch. "Okay, I'll hunt over here." Robinflight said, and prowled off to the right of the clearing, in a hunter's crouch. "I'll hunt behind that large oak tree." Foxleap said, and prowled off to the back of the clearing, in a hunter's crouch. He disappeared behind the large oak tree in the back of the clearing. I'll hunt here then, alone. Scorch though to himself. Am I always alone? He felt a pang of loneliness, but he shook it away. Seeing a squirrel, Scorch got down into a hunter's crouch. Scorch twitched his tail, and a leaf crackled as it touched his tail. Hearing the sound of the leaf crackling, the squirrel turned to look. It saw Scorch and started to run in the direction of a tree. The squirrel looked as if was going to get away, but Scorch pounced on it as it got two tail-lengths away from the trunk of the tree. He delivered a swift kill bite to the neck of the squirrel, killing it. Then he buried it with leaves and dirt to hide it. He looked around the clearing for more prey to hunt. He saw a blackbird near by. Going back into a hunter's crouch, he stalked the blackbird. Sneaking closer, he pounced. Scorch went flying into the air, he landed on the blackbird just as it tried to fly away. He delivered a swift kill bite to the neck of the blackbird, killing it. He picked up the blackbird in his jaws, and went uncovered the squirrel. He picked it up in his jaws as well. His ears pricked up as he heard the footfalls of Ashstorm, Robinflight, and Foxleap returning to the clearing with prey in their jaws. "Let's go back to camp." He mumbled around the prey in his jaws. "Okay" All of the rest the patrol said in agreement, around the prey in their jaws. All of the patrol was silent as they walked back to camp. Scorch walked though the thorn tunnel, the rest of the patrol following in silence. Scorch walked up to the fresh-kill pile, he placed the squirrel and blackbird on the pile. "Scorch! Remember you promised me that you would play with me" Duskkit yowled with excitement. "Okay, let's play!" Scorch yowled excitedly in reply, and bounded up to play with the tiny kit. "Yay!" Duskkit cried with joy. "Okay, you will be the badger." Duskkit said and looked at his siblings. "And me and my siblings will be the warriors trying to defeat the badger." Duskkit said excitedly. "Okay, attack me." Scorch said, and started making growls that sounded like a badger. "Attack!" Duskkit yowled playfully. Duskkit ran to up to Scorch and pounced on him. His siblings did the same. Scorch growled playfully, and swiped at Duskkit and his siblings. "Dodge!" Duskkit yowled and dodged the attack. His siblings did the same, copying his very move. Scorch realized that he did not not longer feel lonely, he felt joyful and complete. Maybe I just needed to play with Duskkit and his siblings He though to himself. Duskkit pounced onto Scorch, knocking him to the ground and interrupting his thoughts. "We defeated the badger!" Duskkit yowled, beaming with pride. Scorch sighed, full of pride for Duskkit. This is where he belonged, in a clan with other crystal keepers. He couldn't wait until Duskkit was old enough to be an apprentice. He wished with all of his soul that he would be Duskkit's mentor.

When the light started out they don’t know what they heard
Strike the match, play it loud, giving love to the world
We'll be raising our hands, shining up to the sky
'Cause we got the fire, fire, fire
Yeah we got the fire, fire, fire

And we gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn
We gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn
Gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn
We gonna let it burn, burn, burn, burn

When the light started out they don’t know what they heard
Strike the match, play it loud, giving love to the world
We'll be raising our hands, shining up to the sky
'Cause we got the fire, fire, fire
Yeah we got the fire, fire, fire

And we gonna let it burn

Why do you want a CK?:
I want a Crystal Keeper because: First off, I will list my reasons that I wish to have one, to make it simple.
Reason #1:
I currently do not own one, and I love the species, so I would love to be the proud owner of Scorched nightfall. And I promise to love and cherish to him, if I am lucky enough to win him, he would be put in my signature with the link back to the Crystal Keepers thread.
Reason #2:
I completely love his beautiful design, and I hope that he'll be the start of my collection of Crystal Keepers. Since they are very beautiful and stunning. I think that Crystal Keepers are awesome, and I really hope to win him as my first one.
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[eleutheromaniac.]

Wow, that form was AMAZING!

Are we still aloud to edit our forms?

And I just wanna say;

Gah I hate my story... Toxic nightfall, ur probs gonna win it again. You r such an amazing writer, I wish I could be as good as u.

[Toxic Nightshade]

Thanks! But I think you're going to win. Your story was longer and more creative. I wish you luck!!

[eleutheromaniac.]

I wish you luck too!

I am so torn! I want everyone to win!

[LostPeace]

Are we still aloud to edit our forms?

You may edit the forms as much as you need too, Just edit that post please, no need to re-post the form either. c:

I wish you luck too!

I am so torn! I want everyone to win!

Imagine trying to judge the darn forms. X)

[eleutheromaniac.]

I could help you with #009, (since I'm a mod... ) I'm not participating in it.

[LostPeace]

I was thinking about asking you for help, Oh that reminds me I gotta change the staff thing. c:

[eleutheromaniac.]

Yay! So happy!

[Toxic Nightshade]

I would like to adopt a CK.
Username: Toxic Nightshade
Crystal Keeper Number: #008
Name:
Gender:male
Personality: Despite his rough nature and tough ways, inside he is a shy and very sweet Crystal Keeper. He has a huge fear of spiders and rats. He will not go near them. He had a secret HUGE crush on Marina, and is too afraid to ask her to be his mate because he is scared she'll say no. His favourite food is rabbit, and his least favourite is, well, rat.
Other: This is a poem about him.

Brave, strong, and seemingly fearless,
Tough, rough, and quite reserved.
He is actually not tearless,
You female CK's probably do not deserve,
This special, sweet CK.

Story: He has always had parents, but they weren't his REAL parents. He had been an orphan and was adopted by seemingly good CK parents, but, turns out, when they got home they were really mean to him. They made him stay awake every night studying what they wanted to teach him, when he already knew everything. They were jerks to him. He ran away and was caught by a different pair of CK parents. They were nice, but the were TOO nice. They smothered him all the time and embarrassed him in front of his friends. They didn't mean to embarrass him, they loved him more that food or water, but they were too nice. He didn't want to hurt their feelings by leaving, but it wasn't the place for him. He left a note, saying that they had been really kind and he thanked them for taking care of him, but told them it wasn't the right place. He ran into the woods and avoided all adult CK's. He is grown up now, and is good friends with Marina. He acts tough to everyone, but is soft centred and sweet inside, and he doesn't notice this, but Marina has a big crush in him too, and wonders if he likes her. Hopefully someday they can be mates, but for now, it lookes like they're stuck as being friends.
(This is when he hadn't met Marina))
One day, he was walking in the woods, when he spotted a rabbit. He swept into the hunter's crouch and crept forward, as quiet as a mouse. He was well aware that a female was watching him, and he wanted to impress her. When he was close to the rabbit, he jumped, but his foot caught on a twig and he did a face plant. He heard a giggle from the bushes. 'Mouse dung' he thought. He got up, hot from embarrassment and watched as the female Crystal Keeper emerged from the bushes.
Wow, he thought, She's so beautiful! Amazing! Woah... He was in such a dreamy daze thinking about her that he hasn't realised she had asked him a question.
"Well?" She inquired.
"Umm.. Sorry what did you ask me?" He said, wanting to melt into a puddle and disappear.
She rolled her eyes,"I said,'Where do you come from?'"
"Oh, I heard, I was testing your patience with me. The mountains," he said. It was true. He had lived in The mountains until that fateful night.
"Neat," she said,"Would you like to go hunting with me?"
"Ya, sure," he said, flexing his muscles.
The two padded off into the bushes, scenting the air for prey.
Shadow whispered,"Stop, I smell a mouse."
Shadow stalked it into the bushes, Marina close on his heels. He jumped after the mouse, sending it scurrying right into Marina's paws.
"Nice!" They both said at the same time.
They shared the mouse and Shadow said,"What do you want to do now?"
"We should climb trees!" she said.
"Thats sounds fun," he said.
Shadow climbed the tree quickly, flexing his muscles a lot and not panting when he got to the top to act like it wasn't a big deal. Marina went up the tree trunk after him. He jumped off the tre and caught a rabbit.
"Good job!" she said impressed.
"Well. Goodbye! I have to leave now. See you tomorrow at the creek?" He asked.
"Sure," she replied cheerfully. They walked their separate ways, thinking about each other.
Wow, thought Shadow, She's beautiful, kind, and a good hunter! I hope I'll see her again. And he dreamt his dreamy thoughts.
Wow, thought Marina, I like him. He's a good hunter. He acts all rough and tough, but I can tell he's as sweet as honey. And she dreamt her dreamy thoughts, each of them wondering if they were going to actually see each other, or if one or the other was going to ditch.

The next day, Shadow met Marina on a rock.
"Hi," said Shadow,"How are you?"
"I'm good," she replied,"Do you want to hunt?"
"Sure."
Marina scented a rabbit on the very top of the rock. She padded forward lightly, not noticing the me necking hawk in the clear blue sky. Shadow watched with a feirce fascination as Marina jumped at the rabbit and killed it with a swift bite.
"Nice!" Shadow complemented her,"Why don't-" "SCREEECH!!!!"" The hawk had sighted his prey. It swooped gracefully down at Shadow, who was glaring defiantly at the huge hunger-stricken animal.
Marina dropped her prey, and just as the hawk outstretched its cruel talons to sink into Shadow's bristling fur, she jumped fearlessly in the path of the proud hawk, ready to defend her friends as always, and shouted,"NO!!!" The hawk grabbed Marina right in front of Shadow, who was an inch away from Marina's frightened face, but he was frozen and rigid. He felt as if his world was tumbling away into nothingness as the triumphant creature flew away with his love. He stood up straight and tall. He would not show fear. He would stand up to the abomination that was the hawk that stole Marina. He ran in pursuits of the speedy hawk out into the clearing near the riverbed. He chased the hawk for more than twelve hours, he knew that. He was tired and hungry and wanted to curl up and fall asleep, but he couldn't leave his friend. Shadow followed the creature to a gigantic oak tree, it's roots deep into the rugged, firm soil and its branches stretching all the way into the sky. He wanted to stop forever and gaze at its wonder, but he couldn't leave to one he loved to the hawk. Tired, hungry, thirsty, desperate Shadow scrambled up the tree trunk. He wasn't goin to get to the top very quickly this way. He leaped onto a branch, and decided he was better off getting to Marina, who was at the top shouting for him to go back, this way. He jumped from branch to branch, avoiding the swooping hawks as he ascended into the massive tree. He jumped with all his might, never stopping to catch a breath or take a rest, he needed Marina. He loved her, and everything about her. The way she hunts, the way she talks, even the way she looks at him when he's showing off a little. He loved literally every thing about her. On the last leap, the branch was even farther up. He gathered up his strength, bunched his muscles and leaped so high, a bird would be impressed. He barely got to the top branch. He dangled for two seconds, but that was enough. It felt like a million years. He scrambled up and caught sight of Marina, crouched and fur bristling while she fought off her hungry persuers.
"Marina!" Shadow yelled in relief.
"Shadow!" She replied, obviously just as relieved.
"I'm glad you're okay, but right now, we need to get out of here." He said, worried. To his relief she nodded.
"Let's go," she said, without a trace of fear.
Together again, they leaped onto the back of the biggest hawk, who spiralled down with the extra weight. It's wings were just enough to break the two Crystal Keepers falls. If we had been going any faster, Shadow shuddered at the horrid thought. As they were going down, the other hawks were grabbing at them, trying to take them to feed their starving bellies. At last, the wretched hawk who had accidentally given them a rife fell to the ground, not dead, but quite stunned. After they shook themselves, Shadow and Marina ran away from the ravenous creatures. The hawks circled, but looked wary of them and decided to go for it another day. The two Keepers looked each other in the eye, and at that point, they knew whom they would always love, and who would die to protect them.
"Th-thank you," said Marina, looking away.
"It was nothing," Shadow said, smiling.
"I mean it," she said, more firmly,"Without you I would have..." She trailed off,"I'll see you tomorrow then?" She asked, a mischievous glint in her eye.
"Yeah, at the four oaks," he said, wondering what she wanted to do.
"See ya!" She said happily as she dove into the thick bushes.
"Wow," he breathed. On that day, the predator, had become, the preyed on.
Why do you want a CK?: This little guy is ADORABLE!!! I think I might breed him with Marina. Those two would be quite a pair together!!XD I think the antler lineart is really neat, and I hope more come out in the future so other people can get this amazing type of CK! That is, if I win. If I don't I'll have to try out for another!!:) Thank you for this WONDERFUL opportunity!! Thanks!:D
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[eleutheromaniac.]

Toxic, we just had a comvo about not reporting your forms.