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[Rosalind]

Nevermind, ;3

[Astraela]

Creature's Name: Ransome

Image:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=200046

Code:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=200046

Preferences: name and gender can change, please keep her in canine form and do NOT change her design no hrmfull items, but accessories can be added, pm me (laredo) the form please , but no approval is needed, i wpuld like to read it. take good care of her..

Link Art Link:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=90593

Did you originally adopt this design here, and if yes what was it's name?

she good use a good revamp. if anyone is interested.

[Kitsyn]

Orthidel! Glad to see you're back. :3

Just a heads up for everyone, since Apple is still busy, Tripp is currently AWOL, and my laptop has managed to have a little 'imcompatability' meltdown f*cking vista >> the code drop and updates will have to be put on hold until I can get it fixed. :C This computer is just too slow and I don't have a whole lot of time to spend on it since it's not mine.
Sorry guys, I'll try to get my laptop working asap for you all. :3

I don't know how it all works, but it sounds like you guys need more staff members ^^
(means this in a friendly way, not a *gosh guys, get it together already* way) lol

[Tammanae]

Orthidel! Glad to see you're back. :3

Just a heads up for everyone, since Apple is still busy, Tripp is currently AWOL, and my laptop has managed to have a little 'imcompatability' meltdown f*cking vista >> the code drop and updates will have to be put on hold until I can get it fixed. :C This computer is just too slow and I don't have a whole lot of time to spend on it since it's not mine.
Sorry guys, I'll try to get my laptop working asap for you all. :3

I don't know how it all works, but it sounds like you guys need more staff members ^^
(means this in a friendly way, not a *gosh guys, get it together already* way) lol

I believe that the problem is that without the approval of all of the members, they cannot get more members. I could be wrong of course, but it makes sense if you think about it. They are technically sharing an account to process all of the information from The Agency. It has to be someone they all trust or consider worthy of the job. ^^

[Acaica]

Yeah. Trust is kinda key. I mean, way back when, the agency account's password got changed. They proably dont want that happening again.

[crazy cranky critter]

Pet's ID Tag:
#23 (twenty three)

Name You'd Choose for It:
Nolem Retaw

Back to front but still striding forwards

Gender:
Male - please see mutations and deformaties

Species:
A form of fox hybrid

Reason You Want It:
I would love to adopt Nolem Retaw because he has been sitting in The Agency for a while now. He most certainly did nothing to earn such a punishment. This design is so simple - only two colours, yet so complex. This design is also mouth-watering (truly). I feel that he needs a loving home and I want to provide that for him!

Mutations and deformaties:
Is sterile - The reason for this is most likely he is believed to have been neutered at a young age.
Extra tails - They are data storage devices
Water melon scent - while animals commonly let out scents for a variety of reasons Retaw Nolem, for one reason or another, sucretes a sweet, water melon flavoured substance!

Beliefs:
Nolem Retaw thinks making up "foolish stories" is a waste of time and only believes that life is about moving forwards as fast as you can.

Voice:
Very growly and fierce. Not very deep. Sounds male.

Kin:
Father: Unknown
Mother: Unknown
Siblings: one brother, name and other details unknown.

Nolem Retaw has a some-what Mysterious past. He is from somewhere other then earth and no further data on his kin could be recovered.

Theme Song:
I can walk on water by Bass Hunter

Personality:
Nolem Retaw is a creature of heard ships. Tough and equipped with an un-dieing spirit. He shields all thoughts and emotions from outsiders. He is very perserverant and hard working, yet he also longs for freedom. Living his life only to move forwards in the world, never back. He has a un-dieing will to explore and fight to the top.

The Story of Nolem Retaw:

Prologue:
"Its been fifteen years now" a voice said calmly. "Tell me, what have you done?" The room fell silent. Where there had previously been excited chatter there was now nothing. A small figure stepped forwards. "Sir, experiment #233.16 has, well..." the first being, the questioning one stepped out of the shadows. He had pale purple skin stretched tightly over bulging muscles. His eyes were a blinding bright green and were now narrowed to slits. All five of them. He tilted his head to the side. "Tell me, Ragnor, what is it that is well, is the project well?" he asked menicingly. "Please Anthor, one more year!" the smaller and weaker looking being begged, dropping to his knees. In their quest for food on their now insustainable planet the Noroth race had been trying to make a hybrid animal that could explore other dimensions. If the mission was a sucess it would grow another tail that held all the statistics from the visited planets, ready for the professors to study. To sustain it on missions this animal would need to be able to produce food for itself. Thus creating Retaw Nolem.

~One year later~
"Well Anthor, I have news." the small alien said, stepping quietly towards the larger beings side. "Good. Youve had a year. Now spit it out!" Anthor snapped, the veins on his head bulging. "Its impossible for an animal to sustain itself for more then a month." Ragnor said, trembling so hard he could barely stand. Anthor stood still for a moment while his under developed brain processed this fact. Suddenly he swung his arm out and hit the smaller alien to the ground. "YOU HAVE FAILED US ALL!" he yelled, spit flying. "SEND IT AWAY TO OTHER DIMENSIONS!" he quietened to a hiss. "And I don't care if it dies, just FIND ME A PLANET!" Ragnor, who had leaned in to listen leapt back. "I will, generous sir." he cried, hopping off.

Dimension #1
I opened my eyes. Behind me a purple void was closing. I shook my head. I couldn't remember anything. All I knew was to explore. So thats what I did. The scenery was bright, the air was humid, hard to breathe. Vines grabbed at my legs. Strange bugs flew around me, licking my skin as if it was sweet. I shook them off. I was going to try find out where I was and nothing would stop me.

~Later~
My energy slowly depleted. My speed slowed down so much I could barely move. My heart throbbed and my head burned. This was like some twisted tropical hell. I soon found a place to rest and when I laid down my eyes slammed shut in an instant.

~Later~
I woke to find I was covered in butterflys. I angrily yelped, sending an echo around. Strange, I though, I must be in a cave or valley. I couldn't remember which way to head so I started aimlessly running through the tangled jungle. I came to a vertical stone wall. Obviously I couldn't climb it. I howled angrily then sat down, a menacing growl rising in me. I tore at the plants sticking out at me. I felt rage taking hold of me as I sat, wasting my time. Suddenly there was a loud "EWAAAAK, EWAAAK!" I turned to see a huge blue bird flying out of the trees. I got up excitedly. My blood froze. Charging towards me was something massive, the trees were falling like dominoes. Out came the looming figure. I was large and looked like a tank. It was amazingly fast. Its little bug eyes spotted me and it headed straigh towards me. I ran, my heart thumping. I had no tail to bat away the swarming bugs.

~Later~
The chase continued and I ran, knowing my life depended on it. My eyes widened, I had found the middle of the blasted place. Suddenly I gaped like a fish out of water. I intended on letting out a yelp but nothing came out. I felt like there was no air. Maybe there wasn't. The creature followed me and as I fell over, silently gagging it flung me in the air using one of its horns. I felt something pink and sticky tricle down my fore head. Blood. There was a sucking noise and a purple flash. It was over. Or was it?

Return to the Lab:
My eyes creaked open. The light was burning and bright. I could barely see a thing. Suddenly I snapped into focus. I was in a lab of sorts. It looks so incredibly familiar. I could picture me floating in pink goo. Yes. I had been here before. It came to me. Some of it. I was made to go on missions to find habitable planets. And that one wasn't one. I looked around weakly at the lab. There he was. Ragnor was like an oasis in a desert to me. He patted me then observed me for injuries. I looked down to see that where there had once been nothing there was now a tail. I grinned then flicked it around. "Ouch!" Ragnor snapped, jumping back out of the way. The next few days went in a blur. Then there was that purple light...

Dimension #2
I seemed to leap into this new world. My memory seemed slightly vague. A lab, a purple figure. I looked around at the dry landscape. A huge spikey plant stood out, alone. I began panting at once, sticky foam coming out of my mouth. Soon feeling drained I began drinking my own saliva. It tasted good and so I went on a back track, licking up the trail I had left. A snake leapt at me, hissing.

~Two days later~
I didn't seem to have anything left in me so I set out looking for food. A bird swooped in the sky. It was massive. At least 5m across. It swooped down and picked up a carcass. I stared. It seemed as if this flying theif had just torn out my life. I lay down sadly. There was nothing here for me. I could feel an itching on my rump. A stub was growing out next to my tail. I got up and sniffed the air. By some impulse I began to run, look, sniff, taste. It was all a blurr to me and soon I felt the familiar sucking on my pelt.

Return to the lab:
Ragnor scanned my tail. His usual frown grew larger. "No use eh boy? I'm afraid your going to have to go to another dimension." he said grimly. I whined. I loved exploring but I was worn out.

Dimension #3
I fell with a splash into a massive fluro blue ocean. I squinted and quickly paddled towards a bright yellow beach. This world was too insanely fluro for me. I squinted as I dragged myself up the beach. I sniffed in the fruity fresh air. Atleast I could breathe easily. I looked up to see a bright green palm tree. "Ugh!" I growled outloud. I ploughed my way through a lot of eye burning scenery.

~Later~
I woke up. I was on the ground. I had gone unconscious, probably from the eye blinding bonanza. I staggered over to a neon blue pool and took a few laps of the liquid. My tongue started burning. "Gah!" I yelped in pain. It was like a fizzing acid. I shook my head furiously. Suddenly there was a warping sound and I sighed in relief.

Return to the lab:
As usual Ragnor scanned my new tail. I was starting to get used to the process. Yet again much too soon I was ported off to a new dimension.

Dimension #4
I fell into it, the empty space. Almost as soon as I appeared I dissapeared.

Return to the lab:
Ragnor did not bother testing my tail. I figured out that when I had done all I could I must come back. Obviously there was nothing to do in dimension 4...

Dimension #5
I floated out. I felt lazy which annoyed me. I was rearing to go exploring. I began to paddle through the soft jelly-like goo I was in. A grin spread on my face.

~Later~
Sevral hours of swimming and I was getting bored. This was wasting my time and efforts. I frowned. I felt like I was being watched. I tunred around as if in slow motion, the jelly keeping me suspended. I opened my mouth in horor and let a slient howl escape. Floating around were many animals, big and small, all dead. I growled. I wasn't going to join them. This made me think about my state. My lungs felt heavy. I felt full but heavy. I headed up, up or was it down? I was confused.

~Later~
I was hurt, not a sharp burning pain as you may be thinking but I felt like I was falling apart. I drifted like a dead bug through the water. I felt like only a small smudge on the universe and all paralell ones. I was so enraged. How could things have gone so wrong? In the distance came the lovable and life saving purple glow. As I propelled towards it I got highly determined. I zoomed forwards in a final burst, leaping through the portal with sheer joy.

Return to the lab:
Ragnor seemed to take am extreme interest in this jelly like planet. I didn't find it that good but he seemed very happy when he scanned my tail. Five tails. I grinned.

Dimension #6
I shook my head, sending shards of ice every where. A shiver ran down my spine but I ignored it. I began to walk but my feet got stung by ice. I howled out in pain. I felt the sucking and leapt at the portal, eager to get my feet off the ground.

Return to the lab:
I was unconscious for most of the time but when I woke up I had long warm fur around my feet. I wanted to go back, and as I guessed I did.

Return to Dimension 6:
I leapt out into the frozen world. My feet were fine this time. I bounded along the ice, tongue flying. There was so much to eat. I leapt on a rabbit that just sat there. I felt lazy but I lapped up the break.

~Three weeks later~
I realised after quite a while that I was growing fat. I had adapted to the cold somewhat by eating the oversized rabbits and there fore getting a layer of blubber I guess you could say. I longed to get out of this world and back into my usual solar system skipping habits, but by the looks of it I only came back when there was nothing else to explore. I slowly crept out onto the ice, for there was no way I felt like moving fast. I looked at the cold sky. As I stared there was a strange cracking sound. The ice gave way under me and I went plumetting into the cold water. I shivered as howled, my heart beating frantically. I leapt up through the water but couldn't scrable back onto the ice. The portal came just in time to suck me back.

Return to the lab:
This stay at the lab was much longer than usual. It wasn't one week, it was seven weeks. I was made to run all day and do various other exercising activities. At first it was hard. I went from being fat to being average, like I had always been and then I got even better. My traning had made me thin. Not unhealthy I don't think but I didn't have a scrap of fat on me. I was muscle and bone. As huge being who Ragnor called 'Anthor' came to observe me. He looked overjoyed and then angry, as if he had been out smarted. "We will see." he snapped after patting me down.

Dimension #7
Dry open land and miles of pine. There were mountains in this dimension aswell. There were some large things that had wings, hooves and long curled horns on their heads. They were tasty. I chased them down. This dimension was fun. I growled. I had won, this dimension was surely the one Ragnor was looking for.

~Three days later~
Another rumble shook the land. Most tall structures fell over. I was sick of these rumbles that threw me off my feet. I howled, this seemed to open the portal. I climbed a hill and waited, in the open, so as things could hit me. A large fruit hit me on the head and the portal appeared, just like that! I leapt in.

Return to the lab:
Ragnor looked at the results of the scan and let out a sigh. "Anthor is going to kill me, isn't he?" Since I first remembered being there I swore the air has gotten thicker and the sky has faded day by day. Everything appeared so... shameful. I lifted my head. I swore on my life it would only take three more dimensions maximum.

Dimension #8
I tumbled down the rocky slope. There was a strange air to this place. I realised it was not many mountains as I had thought but instead large clumps of rock floating around. I leapt from rock to rock, easily making the stretch.

~Later~
I saw something on a far off rock. I sprang forwards, moving ever closer to it. Suddenly there was a cruching sound. My leg was jammed between two rocks which had drifted too close. I howled and got sucked back.

Return to the lab:
Ragnor cursed and threw things around his lab. I knew he had forgotten something and when he realised he had forgotten that he swore more and rammed his head into the wall. My leg was mended in a day using his machine.
I got myself high over night thinking about the next dimension. I was amped and ready to go.

Dimension #9
I sprang into the new dimension, my feet propelling me as fast as a rocket would go. There were firgures dressed in spotted fur that hung from their shoulder. Some had long fur on top of their heads, or hair as Ragnor called it. Others had short hair. They looked stupid. The dimension looked good though. I raced along. There were all sorts of animals. I knew in my heart and soul, the thought pulsed in my veins, this is it.

Return to Noroth:
The streets lit up and loud music played. Anthor sat Ragnor up on his shoulder and bellowed out happy remarks as he and his swarm of minions, the 'greys' trooped through town. People flew pink and green balloons and I was brought along on lead. Many people flew our planets flag, black with a crystal skull on it.

After the celebrations Anthor was serious. For several years we planned quietly. I was to be taken to 'earth,' 'the earth,' 'the earth of bountifulness' as it had come to be called. And with me I would take seven crystal skulls.

Dominating Earth:
The greys flew down and influenced earth's culture. They told them about the belt of stars the Norothian race lived in. They taugh music. What they really were doing was teaching the stupid beasts how to call us. As they taught that Anthor and his council taught the beings of earth how to build. And so they made us temples and towers. I became a god of the egyptian people. But they did not have pink or green paint and so I became black in their beliefs. Many generations of 'humans' passed. We apparently had much longer life spans. Anthor eventually fell in love with a human. She did not have eyes for him and so left him. But they had a child. Many strange things happened in our glorious rein. This time was free as there were no famillies here yet to care for. I hid the skulls slowly.

~Millenias Later~
The greys and everyone except for Ragnor and I went back to Noroth to bring the others. One ship of greys was careless and as I hear they crashed into a place called 'Roswell' humans had come to forget us and they tried hard to cover up this incident. Many more of our ships were seen. The people didn't want us any more, said we were not real. They denied their ancestors who brought them everything. Like selfish children they had grown up and left. They would not accept us but we came. Anthor was the first to return.

Return to Noroth:
Anthor got news many years later that his mother, who had stayed on Noroth, was ill. He brought the whole race back to witness their late queens death. He cried. But only I could hear it over his howls of griefs. There was a rumble. I tugged Ragnor's arm. Another rumble. I ripped savagly, breaking off the arm of his coat. He followed and together we left to the lab. He looked confused but suddenly from the inside of Noroth came a huge explosion. He turned on the portal and I pulled him in.

The final stand:
And so Ragnor and I came to live umoungst you. I am here right now. We know how your race is fairing. And who knows, we could be watching you.
We are amoungst you, we are with you, we are you.

And that is the story of Nolem Retaw.

And as a final note I would like to give credit to:
Ancient Aliens - This show displays real evidence of aliens visiting earth in the past. I have based the last dimension on earth and tied the story to real events which I have only heard about because of this TV show.

Ben10 - this may sound wierd but dimension #9 is inspired by a setting off the cartoon called Ben10.

And finally my maths teacher - if it weren't for the last few lessons of the school term being free time/easy work I wouldn't have had time to think up this story and still have time to write it.

Proof:
And here is my proof that Gingertail98 approves of my wish to adopt Nolem.


I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

[Static.]

Both donors asked me to PM the form, and both allowed me to use the characters. I now own the pets in kennels 24 and 29. Again, 24 and 29 have been adopted by me.

[Static.]

Pet's ID Tag: Kennel #89
Name You'd Choose for It: I know it's set as 'Snow', but could I change it to "Neve" (NAY•VAY)? It's Italian for snow.
Gender: Female
Reason You Want It: I've been trying to get a Kayrah for some time, and the design is just gorgeous. I'll write her a Background Story sometime.
History/Background/Other: ↑
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it. Yes!

[Tammanae]

Both donors asked me to PM the form, and both allowed me to use the characters. I now own the pets in kennels 24 and 29. Again, 24 and 29 have been adopted by me.

Just because I am genuinely curious, as I also am going for a girl whose form I had to send to the donor to get approved... if they approve, it immediately belongs to you? That means I do not have to wait until the code drop?

[Starkit12]

Both donors asked me to PM the form, and both allowed me to use the characters. I now own the pets in kennels 24 and 29. Again, 24 and 29 have been adopted by me.

Just because I am genuinely curious, as I also am going for a girl whose form I had to send to the donor to get approved... if they approve, it immediately belongs to you? That means I do not have to wait until the code drop?

No, I'm pretty sure, you just have to get the donor's permission and then you have to wait for code-drop. Unless otherwise stated on the donor's info. But I'm not completely sure, but that's what I think it goes by.