Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer (ENDED)

[.kestral]

Like sickest, coolest, raddest, etc. It's a little outdated, I think, but I feel like my goal in life is to gather up outdated slang and use it like there's no tomorrow!

I like it
And if you get any desire to read it there is a link in my sig. The prologue and chapter 1 are up for now.

[Arcaii]

I'll go check it out now.

[Arcaii]

Bump.

[Arcaii]

Bumpity bumpity boo.

[.kestral]

I may have a clan for you, and this one is....interesting :p

[Arcaii]

Oh boy.

(straps on helmet)

[.kestral]

Clan Name:
Wildclan
Territory:
Wildclan reside in a thick woodland, all around them huge oaks grow, reaching to the skies. The ground is overgrown with thick brambles, bushes, grass and other plants. Shallow pools of water gather during rainfall, taking weeks to drain. The territory is useable due to a large series of rabbit warrens, that have been extended by the clan to allow them to get around. There camp is in the roots of some trees near the centre of the territory, they have dug out underneath to allow the cats to live safety. They mainly consume rabbits, birds and mice.
Notable History:
Wildclan is built of the remains of four clans. These clans lived together in almost peace. A huge group of rouges ran them out, killing most of the cats from each clan. The cats who lived banded together to find a new home.
(So, basically imagine Scourge won, but different world)
Unique Skills:
Due to the diversity of the cats, many of the ones currently there are still the founders. They have a large variety of skills, some can fish, some are good at hunting at night, some at day, some in trees, some on the ground. At six moons old apprentices are given there names before being assessed, there build, the way they are, there colour, even the length of there fur helps decide which aspects there training will be focused on.
Reputation/Personality:
They currently have no enemies, as separate clans they were peaceful, they rarely fought unless times were desperate. Only rogues get harshly treated, loners are allowed to pass through if they don't cause issues or steal prey.
Average Clan Member:
The most recent kits seem to be gaining stockier builds, with darker fur to allow them to hide better in the undergrowth. They are slightly shorter than average, allowing them to use the tunnels easier, and to get through low hanging branches.
Important Notes:
None?

[Arcaii]

Clan Name:
Wildclan
Territory:
Wildclan reside in a thick woodland, all around them huge oaks grow, reaching to the skies. The ground is overgrown with thick brambles, bushes, grass and other plants. Shallow pools of water gather during rainfall, taking weeks to drain. The territory is useable due to a large series of rabbit warrens, that have been extended by the clan to allow them to get around. There camp is in the roots of some trees near the centre of the territory, they have dug out underneath to allow the cats to live safety. They mainly consume rabbits, birds and mice.
Notable History:
Wildclan is built of the remains of four clans. These clans lived together in almost peace. A huge group of rouges ran them out, killing most of the cats from each clan. The cats who lived banded together to find a new home.
(So, basically imagine Scourge won, but different world)
Unique Skills:
Due to the diversity of the cats, many of the ones currently there are still the founders. They have a large variety of skills, some can fish, some are good at hunting at night, some at day, some in trees, some on the ground. At six moons old apprentices are given there names before being assessed, there build, the way they are, there colour, even the length of there fur helps decide which aspects there training will be focused on.
Reputation/Personality:
They currently have no enemies, as separate clans they were peaceful, they rarely fought unless times were desperate. Only rogues get harshly treated, loners are allowed to pass through if they don't cause issues or steal prey.
Average Clan Member:
The most recent kits seem to be gaining stockier builds, with darker fur to allow them to hide better in the undergrowth. They are slightly shorter than average, allowing them to use the tunnels easier, and to get through low hanging branches.
Important Notes:
None?

Sorry for the wait; I'm still typing with one hand.

Name Rating: 2/10
Name Reasoning: WildClan is about as descriptive as CatClan - the territories are always wild, as are its inhabitants. It doesn't really describe anything about the territory itself, so it doesn't work. Even if it was named for their founders, it's a no brainer, because every warrior is wild!
They have a series of tunnels and warrens that they use quite a bit, and I think that deserves naming.
Alternative Name: WarrenClan/TunnelClan, for the reason above.

Clan Rating: 8/10
Clan Reasoning: There's not a whole lot wrong, but I have one concern - the kits and their assessment.
The whole point of apprentice-hood is trying out all sorts of things and figuring out which one you're best at. A small cat can be a great fighter, a big, intimidating cat can be a kind and excellent mother, etc. You can't really assess someone when they're little, because whatever you decided is bound to change as they grow. Besides, cats who have little to no say in what they get to practice might not like not having the freedom to try everything. Even if a cat's good at hunting, they might like swimming more!
Suggestions: Allow them to work the same way that regular Clans do with apprentices. It's a very important system.

[.kestral]

Clan Name:
Stoneclan
Territory:
This is a fun one :p
This clan lives in an abandoned village, there are crumbling two leg homes and buildings, rough, overgrown paths, long grass, weeds, bushes. Rubble litters many of the main roads and empty shells of twoleg nests litter the area. Mice and birds are common, there are ponds in a few gardens leading to a small supply of fish although they are usually left until winter, and carefully monitored to keep the source there. The camp is behind what two legs would call a brewery. The dens are made up of broken barrels, large ones and smaller ones. Grass has been used alongside moss to make them warm.
Notable History:
The clan began when the village was abandoned, many pet cats and strays were left behind. Due to the lack of food they agreed to all help each other survive. The strays taught the house cats to hunt and fight, the house cats showed them the secrets of the village like herbs and ponds and other prey. After a few generations Starclan found the clan and helped them become what they are.
Unique Skills:
These cats are built for handling rough ground and for climbing. They often climb I to the attacks of houses to take down mouse colonies. They have rough paws due to the roughness of the paths and roads. They have basic fishing skills, and hunting is focused on more than fighting due to a lack of enemies. But big skills are trained, as they know they won't have peace forever.
Reputation/Personality:
They have no neighbours, but allow loners to pass through and rogues who don't want to cause trouble. They also offer to allow them to join if they seem interested.
Average Clan Member:
Average size and build. They have a large variety of pelt colours with darker ones being slightly more likely. All shades of grey occur a lot, allowing them to blend with the stone and rubble. There claws are sharp allowing them to grip well, there pawpads are extremely firm, well strengthened against the rocky floor. They usually have very thick pelts, they stop brambles gripping and keep the clan warmer.
Important Notes:
None?

[Arcaii]

Clan Name:
Stoneclan
Territory:
This is a fun one :p
This clan lives in an abandoned village, there are crumbling two leg homes and buildings, rough, overgrown paths, long grass, weeds, bushes. Rubble litters many of the main roads and empty shells of twoleg nests litter the area. Mice and birds are common, there are ponds in a few gardens leading to a small supply of fish although they are usually left until winter, and carefully monitored to keep the source there. The camp is behind what two legs would call a brewery. The dens are made up of broken barrels, large ones and smaller ones. Grass has been used alongside moss to make them warm.
Notable History:
The clan began when the village was abandoned, many pet cats and strays were left behind. Due to the lack of food they agreed to all help each other survive. The strays taught the house cats to hunt and fight, the house cats showed them the secrets of the village like herbs and ponds and other prey. After a few generations Starclan found the clan and helped them become what they are.
Unique Skills:
These cats are built for handling rough ground and for climbing. They often climb I to the attacks of houses to take down mouse colonies. They have rough paws due to the roughness of the paths and roads. They have basic fishing skills, and hunting is focused on more than fighting due to a lack of enemies. But big skills are trained, as they know they won't have peace forever.
Reputation/Personality:
They have no neighbours, but allow loners to pass through and rogues who don't want to cause trouble. They also offer to allow them to join if they seem interested.
Average Clan Member:
Average size and build. They have a large variety of pelt colours with darker ones being slightly more likely. All shades of grey occur a lot, allowing them to blend with the stone and rubble. There claws are sharp allowing them to grip well, there pawpads are extremely firm, well strengthened against the rocky floor. They usually have very thick pelts, they stop brambles gripping and keep the clan warmer.
Important Notes:
None?

OOooOOooOoOoOoOH! You were right, this is an interesting one!

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Reasoning: "Stone", I imagine, comes from the stone houses and paths, so it fits just fine. Of course, if the majority of the houses are wooden, then we'd have a problem.
Alternative Name: CobbleClan, if you want something fancier.

Clan Rating: 10/10
Clan Reasoning: This is a really interesting and unique Clan and setting! I absolutely love it. If you make an RP of this, please let me know, because I'd love to see it! The whole origin and territory is wonderful, and I like the idea of StarClan seeing this big group of cats working together peacefully and saying, "You know, they've got something going there."
Suggestions: Absolutely none.