A Study in Time: A Wholock Fanfic

[Spiritstar3]

Youre welcome!

[sparrowspam]

O3O you must write more!!!!!!!!






(It's amazing!!!!!)

[notactiveanymore]

Thank you so much!!

[notactiveanymore]

I changed the title!! Tell me what you think!

[MalcolmOmnishambles]

I love the new chapter and name! You capture all the characters really well.

[Spiritstar3]

Mrg
Love that name!

[notactiveanymore]

Thank you guys so much! I am currently working on chapter 3

[~Gem~]

Hello! My name is Gem. I am both a writer and a critic. I really enjoyed your piece. It flowed very well and had deep description. My only suggestion to you would be to use more sensory language. Try to make the reader make a visual in their heads of all the action. I enjoyed it very much, I have no complaints! Keep on writing and make sure to check in on me sometime! I will be posting soon, I just have to keep up with people asking me to critique their work and focus on writing my story at the same time! Thank you for your time and writings!

[notactiveanymore]

Thank you so much! I will keep your suggestions in mind

[notactiveanymore]

I got a cover image!! What you you guys think? Also I am still working on Chapter 3, I will be done asap