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[June Bug]

Lassie freak and gothkitty12, if you don't edit your post to include only one form each you'll be disqualified for this round. ;3
Also, you really need to bulk up your form, gothkitty12. One sentence doesn't cut it, you need at least two well developed (as in longer than just five sentences each) paragraphs. We need to see that you've developed a character personality.
I assume you just haven't gotten to filling anything out yet, Lassie freak. Make sure you remember to. :3

[north]

Pet's ID Tag: #30
Name You'd Choose for It: Raidan
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: So. I've always wanted a lion character. First i thought i might go for a white lion, as they're just more interesting and beautiful on my opinion. When i saw this little guy here, i just couldn't scroll past him without trying out. I don't know why - His design isn't complicated at all, he's just an ordinary lion, but something was so appealing for me...
History/Background/Other:
Note: Raidan is a half-mechanical creature. His brain and some parts of his body are fully mechanical. That allows him to save stories and memories in his head. The whole following story is written from Raidan's point of view.

Raidan's appearance changes: On his back, his skin is ripped off right above his spine so you can see that it's fully mechanical. Also, his tail is made of steel and it has no skin on it, so it is completely mechanical. Also, he has two silver bracelets on his left front leg.

Memory Disc #113996
13th July 2003, 11:23 AM
Location: Old, abandoned warehouse on Rain Street.
1st day of existence.

I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

WIP-WIP-WIP

[tennisbutt]

Pet's ID Tag: #17
Name You'd Choose for It: Patch
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: This pupp has an amazing design and I would draw lots of art for it and enter some RPs as well <3 If I do get it I'm searching for a best friend for my Husky Chocolate ^^
History/Background/Other: This poor little puppy was found tied to a lamp post after being abandoned by his previous owners. He is very scared of humans because of his previous encounter with them. He was saved after 3 days and found lying there starving and on the verge of dying. He was taken to the nearest animal shelter where he was fed and bathed for a few days before he looked very well looked after but inside Patch was still deathly afraid of humans and refused to go out on walks with them and he hid everytime a human came into his room to fill up his food bowl.
Story:
Picture:
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

WIP xD

[Lighty]

Gosh I am so tempted to try out for 26 :O Is anyone else gonna try out for it? O_O

[vee.]

Hey Kam, you forgot to put up my donation;)
I don't feel like searching through the whole thread to find it though, so I'll just submit the form again d:

Creature's Name: Gabriel
Image:

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Preferences:
-Name can be changed
-Please keep him male
-I'd like forms to be PM'ed to me please(:
-I'd also like to keep in contact with his owner if that's alright .
-No design changes
-You may add accessouries, but not too many
Line Art Link: All my own art(:
Did you originally adopt this design here, and if yes what was it's name?

[June Bug]

I knew I'd forgotten something xD I'll put it up with the next update.

[Noctyrn]

Creature's Name: None
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Preferences: -Must remain a Fluffy
-You may Change Name and Gender xD
-Designs can change but Please PM me letting em see!
-Don't Steal Species or use design or species somewhere without linking me to it and asking permission
-Add as many accessories as you like
-Please give a good back story and home!
-Feel Free to use on Chicken smoothie and get fan art all you like! Make them your own! I am trying to spread my species creation around! ^-^
Link Art Link: Lineart by me

I may go for this little beauty

[vee.]

Hahahaha, kay(: Thanks Kam !


Pet's ID Tag: 46
Name You'd Choose for It: Stofan
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: He looks just like a sculpture made of clay... he reminds me of my ceramics teacher, of whom I've named him after<3
History/Background/Other:

The sun is blinding.
The sounds of the birds pierce my ears.
I have sand in my mouth, drying out my tongue.
It smells... hot, like the sun is melting the world.
But I feel perfect.

I stand, stretching my carefully molded legs, testing my weight on them.
I have been hollowed out-- I am light, easy to carry. My tail brushes against my flanks smoothly, with the pure sound of glass against glass. It feels as if I am the only thing that can withstand the heat; I remain unchanged, I am heat-resistant, until about one thousand degrees.

So I should be safe in this desert.

Eager to test my flexibility, I leap into motion, stretching my legs out as far as they will reach, moving into a dead sprint through the maze of cactuses, headed toward the windswept sea of sand, the dunes on the horizon. I feel the clay within my body expanding as I move, I can hear my flesh crackle, though I do not shatter. The clay beneath my layers of glaze, it bends as I do, held together by who knows what supernatural force. I do not know what I am. All I know, is that I was crafted by expert hands, and given life, and I will take advantage of every opportunity to live that is presented to me.

I am alive.

But what does that mean?

I pause in my sprint, my bright blue eyes resting on a crystalline oasis. Do I drink? One of my paws is submerged in the cool water, but when I remove it, the liquid beads off my glazed exteriour as if I am waterproof. Do I have a stomach? A small desert rat scurries by, finding a place to hide from the hawks that soar overhead. Do I eat? What would I eat? Do I breathe?

Do I even feel?

So many questions, so much confusion. Yes, I am living, I am thinking, I am functioning. But I don't know anything about myself. I don't know if I have emotions, if I have nerves, or if I even have organs at all. But I must have organs, how else would I be thinking without a brain? Could it be more magic?

I need to find someone with the answers. I need to know what I am. I need to know why.


I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

[tanner]

imma try writing, i havent written to adopt in o long, i may have lost the little i had lol. im gonna try a diferent writing style. well here goes it ;3

Pet's ID Tag: 10
Name You'd Choose for It: If I were to choose a new name, it'd be Ambika, it means like good mother or something, but if the donor dosn't want her name changed, I don't mind Dakota
Gender: Female
Reason You Want It: Don't really know, just always loved her for some reason.
History/Background/Other: below
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it. yes!

It was a calm summer day, and I was headed to the local shelter to pick up a new dog. I lived alone, and I wanted a companion to keep me company and give me a sense of saftey. I moved into a cozy, roomy, little house out in the country, hoping to own some horses someday, when things at work got better. The only friends I had were the goats and sheep that roamed freely about the pastures, cleaning up the weeds that had overgrown the place over the years. As I pulled into the local shelter's dusty parking lot, the barking got louder and louder, and my anticipation climbed. Ding ding ding went the little bell on the door when I opened it. "Welcome, how may I help you today?" said the lady at the front desk in a cheerful manner. "Ummmm, I'd like a new dog, well, you see-" "Fill this out and we can get started" the rosy-cheeked woman said while shoving a clipboard at my chest from over the counter, never taking her eyes from her paperwork. I took the forms to the couches in the lobby and began filling in the blanks and boxes on the documents. There were questions like: "What size dog are you interested in?", "How much space do you have for your new animal?", and other questions relating to you and your dog. I quickly scribbled down my answered to this survey, and handed it back to the receptionist. "Alrighty", she said as she scanned over the papers quickly. "Come right this way young lady" she said to me as she walked briskly down a hall towards a pale blue door with black paw prints on it. We entered an outdoor area, covered in a plastic tarp and lined with chain linked dog kennels. "Oh, how rude of me to not introduce myself!", the woman said embarrassedly. "I'm Cathy" she announced as a hand came my way. I took it and shook it politley while introducing myself. Cathy handed me a blue piece of paper with several names and numbers on it. Confused, I opened my mouth to ask what the small slip was, but before I could utter my question, she explained that I was holding the kennel numbers of suggested dogs, as chosen by the form I filled out when I arrived. Just before leaving, Cathy quickly added: "You can pick any dog, but these are highly recomended for you". I walked up and down the rows of cages for what seemed like hours. It is so hard to decide I thought to myself, studying each dog carefully. I checked off eack dog's number in my head again and again, to make sure I hadn't looked over a dog. Every time I repeated the numbers, one number stood out. "Had I skipped a dog?" I mumbled aloud. After going up and down the isles about tenthousand times, I finally found the little cage in the corner that'd appeared vacant earlier. I dropped to a squat, looking into the concrete house in the back of the narrow kennel, hoping to find another dog. At first I saw nothing, except a pillow in the dark shelter, but as I looked harder I realized the 'pillow' was a skittish lump of fur. I started kissing at the huddled shape, and out of pure fear, not aggression, it growled at me. I patiently caressed the creature out of the dark, and just as a brown paw timidly came out, a cheerful but warning voice came out of nowhere and said "Oh, I see you've found Dakota". Surprised, I jumped, scaring the dog back into the dark. It was just Cathy. "Dakota was abused, never played with, never got any love poor thing. We've tried many trainers on her, but nothing seems to work. She's been here for quite some time, poor thing." Cathy said sympathetically. "I want her" I announced loudly, while looking over a clipboard that hung from a string on her cage. It read:

Dog Name: Dakota
Gender: Female
Age: Unknown, about 4
Weight: 90 lbs
Breed: Collie Shepard mix
History/Backstory: Dakota was found at an abandoned home where a dog breeder's son had owned Dakota. When he moved out to college, he had to leave her with his mother, a Great Pyrenees breeder that hates collies. She was never loved, just given food and left alone to suffer. from this, she no longer trusted people, and when the mother moved out of that home, the son had forgotten about Dakota, and she was left, abandoned, to rot and die alone. We found her, emaciated and neglected.

I dropped the aged, dusty clipboard back on the kennel, and I said agian "I'd like Dakota please" usure if Cathy had heard me. "Okay, but I'm warning you-" "I know" I said in an irritated way. "I was saying, that she'll take some getting used to, and you'll need to fill out some paperwork before you can have her." Cathy said. "Okay, whatever it takes to get this sweet girl." Cathy walked cautiously into Dakotas kennel, slowly pulled her out by her faded red collar, and clipped a short purple leash on her. I followed Cathy back inside, and waited for my papers. Instead, we walked into a large room. The room had red carpet, dirty white walls, and dog toys, agility equippment, and other canine things. Dakota was brought in and Cathy explained to me what I had to do with her. As instructed, I played, bonded and did activities with Dakota. Then I got to walk her hack to the lobby, where we met with a vet, who would give Dakota the OK. As I watched Dr. Rhodes give her last examination for Dakota, she found her clean, except that she needed to be current on shots and pills. Once that was done, back to the lobby we all went. I signed some papers, bought some dog food because I had none, and Dakota was finally mine! I was beaming with pride as i walked to my car. I had something to be proud of, someone to love, someone to love me. Dakota seemed like a new dog in the car. Fearless, head out the window, tongue glued to her face by the wind. She seemed so happy to 'have her own person'. As soon as I pulled into my dirt-road driveway, Ambika, as I decided to call my new friend, started whining and wagging with excitement.

[Lighty]

I give in xD
Pet's ID Tag: 26
Name You'd Choose for It: Deep Sea (Or just Sea for short)
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: He is so pretty, and every time I look at him I can hardly take my eyes away. I have a very large soft spot of birds, and I want to draw him so badly with my feathersona.
History/Background/Other:
Sea woke up and blinked his small purple eyes. Everything was dark and completely still. He was sure he was dead, this is what it was suppose to feel like right? Sea let out a deep sigh, he hadn't even noticed he was holding his breath. The sound filled the darkness and sent shivers down the young Kiwi's spine. All kinds of terrible thought began poking at his mind, but she refused to let them come in. I can breath so I must not be dead, he thought silently.
(WIP)
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.