Tough As Nails Adoption Fan Club (Happy Holidays!)

[keydemon]

Thank you Nin <3

Im slowly adding things in, and yes, she was taken the the pound after her mother died. :3

I was just suggesting you add that into the story to prevent confusion. ^^

-Is critiquing forms to procrastinate homework.-
Bring it on! xD

[MerryEaster]

Haha yeah..im adding it in :3

Darn homework Dx

[Jayfur101]

Anyone like my pics that I drew for Lumi? I just love drawing her. <3 I hope I get her so I can draw her more!


AND http://jayfursdesigns.weebly.com/upload ... 4_orig.png AND http://jayfursdesigns.weebly.com/upload ... 2_orig.jpg (Pictures are too big to post on the post!)

[keydemon]

I totally would, but my art sucks, so I have no say in it... xD;;

[Solanum]

Awww. Very cute Jayfur.
She/He looks like a nice character to draw. Simple but adorable. <3

[Jayfur101]

Thanks. <3 I just hope Atwood and Wendigo like it. X3

[Ebonpyre]

Hey, Ninjustu, while I agree with most of your critique, just saying that "I sighed" isn't a fragment . It has a subject and a predicate, so it's a full idea.

There are some very pretty donations this round, though I'm not going to try for any. If anyone needs any critique, though, shoot me a PM. I'd be happy to help.

[MerryEaster]

I added more to personality, likes, dislikes and edited a bit in History(although i feel it isnt right)

Any help is welcome....well, im going to try to draw on Paint Dx

[keydemon]

Ffft, my bad. xD I was bound to mess up somewhere. My first time critiquing anyway. ^^;; Thanks for letting me know. ^^

Yeah, I love a lot of them, but I didn't exactly connect with any. ^^;;

[TheCalicoTabby]

Would anyone adopt this if I were to donate it next round? It just started out as a strange-looking sketch and eventually turned into a character design. I'm not sure whether or not I should donate it, though.