by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:21 am
Critic posted under ratings, please don't take it the wrong way.
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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by Music_Lover » Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:29 am
Mine's up~
Last edited by
Music_Lover on Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:41 am, edited 2 times in total.
♪♫ Music | She/Her | Adult ♫♪
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I have a HUGE interest
in things that are older
than I am, and, as you
can probably guess, live
for the music of the
past decades as well
╚═════════════════╗
I'm also an artist, so
you're likely to find
me either drawing on the
Oekaki or fooling around
on the UMA boards
╔═════════════════╝
█ █ █ █ █The silly fella boogieing
on the left is my beloved
disco fiend,
Ace <33
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by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:43 am
posted critic for Music_Lover
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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by Music_Lover » Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:45 am
Thank you, time for my second entry~
♪♫ Music | She/Her | Adult ♫♪
█ █ █ █ █╔═════════════════╝
I have a HUGE interest
in things that are older
than I am, and, as you
can probably guess, live
for the music of the
past decades as well
╚═════════════════╗
I'm also an artist, so
you're likely to find
me either drawing on the
Oekaki or fooling around
on the UMA boards
╔═════════════════╝
█ █ █ █ █The silly fella boogieing
on the left is my beloved
disco fiend,
Ace <33
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by Music_Lover » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:25 pm
Second one up for me also~
♪♫ Music | She/Her | Adult ♫♪
█ █ █ █ █╔═════════════════╝
I have a HUGE interest
in things that are older
than I am, and, as you
can probably guess, live
for the music of the
past decades as well
╚═════════════════╗
I'm also an artist, so
you're likely to find
me either drawing on the
Oekaki or fooling around
on the UMA boards
╔═════════════════╝
█ █ █ █ █The silly fella boogieing
on the left is my beloved
disco fiend,
Ace <33
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by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:27 pm
Posting critic soon
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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