by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:17 am
Rules
-- you can do line edits --
-- you can add items and backgrounds --
-- you can add layers --
-- you can delete layers --
-- you can not copy designs already done by me --
-- only 2 entries per person --
-- you can delete entries --
-- you can edit entries --
-- you can make your own lines but they must be based on the species --
-- if you have a question, ask me --
Please include the following information when you post
Syva name
Gender
Information on all the work, time and effort you put into it. (basically brag your hearts out) (optional)
Your username
Amount of time you are on CS every day
Experience
Link to pieces of art
Link to gallery
Why I should pick you
Ratings so far
[~Candy Pumpkin~] 1st entry - 7.8/10 - i did not like the color choices, but the smoothed lines are very imaginative, i like them
- adding some shading
BecNessMonster 1st entry - 7.9/10 - i like the color combination and the black diamond in the eye instead of the usual white, but the stars didn't make me jump for joy - i would recommend adding something interesting with the eyes or making a cool background
Music_Lover #1 entry - 9.4/10 - this is perfect for this competition, it shows your creativity and style. I really like it. the only things that get you a -.7 points is that the attachment to the foot looks awkward (perspective), and the line edit on the tail is darker than the rest of the lineart - i would recommend.. nothing!
[~Candy Pumpkin~] 2nd entry - 9.1/10 - again, i love the smooth lines and the colors on here are much better, i really like the smoothed eyes. i guess we have different color preferences
- i would recommend making the lines white or a dark pink so they stand out against the black
BecNessMonster 2nd entry - 9/10 - i really like this one, you did a great job. i just don't think it is the best you could do - i would recommend maybe adding a galaxy or space background
Music_Lover - 9.7/10 - i am really OBSESSED with this! The glow sticks go perfectly with it and the color of the fur and afro just make it perfectly perfect. Again, the addition of your background made it over the top - i would recommend ... nothing!
Permasnow 1st entry - 9.9/10 - i love this. everything about it is wonderful. the colors and designs are perfect, as well as the shiny look that your shading and highlighting gave it. the fact that you did a new line is equally as amazing. - i would recommend.. nothing!
Leafe 1st entry - 9.85/10 - seriously, i love pink so this screamed AWESOME! the stripes on the tail are great! - i would recommend.. nothing!
ParaKitty716 1st entry - 7/10 - it has a wonderful simplicity, but isn't breathtaking, sorry. i really like the background - i would recommend adding a pattern to the Syva
iEpicHusky 1st entry - 9.7/10 - your entry is so adorable and I love the name. i am really looking forward to a color in of the original line if you are up to it
- i would recommend .. nothing!
Kempo 1st entry - 9.9/10 - I love this one. It is perfect in my eyes and I really like how you cleaned up the lines and the pattern i just LOVE - i would recommend .. maybe a background, but it doesn't need one
[~Candy Pumpkin~] 1st entry - ?/10 - no critic until candy is finished - i would recommend .. ?
iEpicHusky 2nd entry - 9.9/10 - okay, seriously, this is so amazing, i can't get over it. it just looks perfect! - i would recommend .. nothing!
Kempo 2nd entry - ?/10 - i can't post critic for Kempo until the entry is finished! - i would recommend .. ?
kodi collie 1st entry - 9.8/10 - this is a perfect lineart, which shows your artistic capability. i actually like the background, so don't change it
i am seriously considering making it a tie between you, Kempo, and iEpicHusky... - i would recommend .. nothing!
Current Winner ;;
TIE! { break the tie with +1 entry that you can do. Not have to do }
Kempo 1st entry - 9.9/10 - I love this one. It is perfect in my eyes and I really like how you cleaned up the lines and the pattern i just LOVE - i would recommend .. maybe a background, but it doesn't need one
and
iEpicHusky 2nd entry - 9.9/10 - okay, seriously, this is so amazing, i can't get over it. it just looks perfect! - i would recommend .. nothing!
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darkinjinx on Wed Nov 06, 2013 11:20 pm, edited 16 times in total.
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:20 am
i know this may sound really stupid, but how do you make it so everyone can color in? I've never done an artist comp before

Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:24 am
okay thanks!
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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by Music_Lover » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:28 am
I'm entering~

♪♫ Music | She/Her | Adult ♫♪
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I have a HUGE interest
in things that are older
than I am, and, as you
can probably guess, live
for the music of the
past decades as well
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I'm also an artist, so
you're likely to find
me either drawing on the
Oekaki or fooling around
on the UMA boards
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by darkinjinx » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:28 am
Okay, you are both added!
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words,
And never stops at all,
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.

I feel wet snow on my
cold, dry skin as
the darkness starts
to settle in.The
stars shine bright
to lead my way.
Through tall, snow
covered trees which
bend and sway in
the breeze.My heart
tells me in hours this
day will be past,
when the nighttime
comes to me slowly
at last. I am back in
the snow so pristine
and clean, but
sadness shows me it
was only
a dream.
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