by dogshrimp » Tue Oct 15, 2013 9:58 am
I noticed you wanted more than five words for the personality, but I was curious to if you are still keeping the limit for the story? For this specific contest, of coarse. Just wanted to check, because if the limit remains I might end up using an extra to expand, I'm getting a lot of muse for the idea I have.
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by finoodle » Tue Oct 15, 2013 10:10 am
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WoI Name:
Sunset
WoI Gender:
Female
Personality:(short 5 words)
Brave, Smart, Fast, Energetic, Daring
short Story:
Sunset Looked around the dark cave, The light just begging to touch the cave floor. She yawned, and streched her paws out. She padded to the back of the cave and grabbed her light gold armor. She slipped it on hearing everything click and slide into place and She bounded out of the cave. She smelled the air, the smells if the forest crisp and wet from morning dew. She sniffed the ground smelling for food. Wip!!
Armour Design:
Wip
Artwork:
Wip
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finoodle on Sun Oct 20, 2013 6:39 am, edited 2 times in total.
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by Hyeme » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:24 am
WIP
The mistake, being the gender sign, is a pink male sign but in the post you say the WoI is female.▌
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█ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █My name is Hyeme, I have been an avid user of C.S for two and a half years. No I may not be one of the best but C.S has helped me grow with my art. I don't really have any friends on here, but I have never been one to be of much conversation and am too shy to try. I know, your more interested in the form.
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█ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █TempestMeaning storm. I figured this would fit her because her markings are a controlled chaos, along with her personality. Her black and grey markings remind me of storm clouds, her white markings rain or lightning, and her orange and yellow markings the sunlight breaking through the clouds.
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█ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █Female
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█ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █•Enigmatic
She keeps silent more often than not. Usually leaving some things left unsaid and holding back on sharing her thoughts all of the time, only speaking when she knows it's essential. When asked a question, she ponders it, leaving gaps in the conversation. Not being much of a sharer she doesn't openly share information about her self, expressing dreams, desires or intentions. Shes not your typical conversation goer change typical statements and responses into poetry, lyrics or philosophy. With a wide vocabulary and cunning mind, you have to keep a dictionary on you to fully grasp whats going on as she speaks. Don't bother asking where shes headed, you will get a very vague answer and still know not of her destination. She keeps a calm cool and collected front, never getting over emotional or over reacting.
•Patient
Being able to accept and tolerate delays and problems, she is not easily perturbed. She can even handle being hurt without becoming stressed or anxiety riddled. It is very difficult to annoy or bother her, she is one of the most composed and understanding WoI you could come across. She doesn't hurry anyone up, nor does she wish to be hurried.
•Intuitive
Being an instinctual being she uses her feelings and intuition do decide on anothers character. In most instances that 'gut feeling' has never let her down but sometimes deeper feelings will cloud her judgement. Although a good judge of character she is not always right.
•Conscientious
Being diligent and willing to always do whats right she trys to always keep a level head when getting things done. She likes to do things with great care and honesty, making her even seem OCD. Everything has to be done in a precise and to the T mannor.
•Sarcastic
She tends to reply to some 'uninteligent' statements with irony and a monotone and occasionally mocking tone. She can be quite the smart-aleck when provoked, with snide and rude remarks she has a quick, and brutally honest, sharp tongue. She can sometimes get a little to sarcatic and hurt the fealings of other withought fully realising it, although a negative personality trate it's part of who she is.
•Unobtrusive
Not wanting to be the center of attention she remains in the background, out of the way. Being such a calm, keep to herself WoI there can be times where you wont even notice shes there until you walk right into her. She is not an overly blatant being, which goes along with being obscure.
•Ambitious
Although she may not visually show it, she can be very motivated and strong willed to do what she must to succeed. Not being a fan of failure she does her best to only do things she knows shes good at. Being like this she is nervous of trying new things afraid sit would blow up in her face. She is a big go getter and very self-motivated the only down fall is she can become a little over zealous and competitive sometimes hurting the feelings of the ones she loves on accident.
•Empathetic/Sympathetic
Able to comprehend others emotional state she can be very sensitive to others feelings and understand what they're going through. Though she may not have gone what the other is going through she will try to express her understanding and comfort to the other person.
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█ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █~To be a scout~
In an emerald green forest full of undergrowth a streak of black and grey shoots by barely visible through the thick brush. A clank of metal is paired with the flash of orange, the wind picks up bringing with it the sweet smells of spring. Bird calls fill the air as leaves flutter and float gracefully to the ground. Pin holes litter the ground following the foot falls ahead, almost invisible in the scenery an armored canine physique with blazing colored eyes crouches down looking through the plant life. The slender wolven being stalks forward on soft paws, gaze intent and determined the metallic ash and ivory armor shifting ever so slightly over the onyx and smoky black lithe being stained with orange hues and white streaks. With a toothy grin beneath a dragons skull helm the fae nods her head. 'Alright,' she thinks to herself taking a deep breath in through her pitch black snout. Staring out from her shaded hideout, what she was so intently following is spotted, a large dark hued blueish green lizard looking creature, with a pale shaded mane draped over its back and horns protruding from its head the fierce looking beast is joined by a smaller lighter colored version of itself this one without horns. "Kronadors," she whispers softly to herself, the young WoI smiles, "now to let boss know," she whispered to herself before turning around and slinking a few yards away before sprinting off back into the forest leaving claw marks in the ground from her cleat like paw armor. As the Rank Candidate was headed back to 'base' she sensed something following behind her. She made a hard right not wanting to lead what ever it was to the others. She remained calm not wanting it to know she detected it. She took a deep breath to try and figure out who is was by smell. "Dang," she huffed to herself frustrated, just before she could get a good smell of who it was the wind shifted sending her smell to them. Her brain began to think rapidly, when 'Bang' a large amount of weight pounced on her causing her to collapse. She felt claws dig into her shoulder, crying out in pain she attempted to squirm away. As she turned her head, looking out the corner of her eye she saw no other than...
400 words, To be continued
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█ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █ █Based off of dragons.
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by Tundra » Fri Oct 18, 2013 12:27 pm
Hyeme wrote:By what I have seen there is two 'Mistakes', the first one being the gender sign. It's a pink male sign but in the post you say the WoI is female. Secondly, Tundra's Extra info wrote:With personality, I want more then 5 words.
but Form wrote:Personality:(short 5 words)
. I am not sure if the second one is just a lack of punctuation/understanding. Like you wish it to be five words plus an explanation of those five words but I figured I would point it out. Seeing as I am not sure which you want five, or more than five.Oh and question, can we pretty up our forms, and/or will that count as an extra? And by 300-400 does that mean minimum of 300 words and max of 400?
The rules TWG90 have to remain on the forms, despite if a user or judge dose not judge by that rule. So no this is not a mistake at all. As for the 5 words, what I mean is I don't want just 5 short words. I hate that with a passion, it never gives me the feel for the WOI or character itself. The forms can have as much art as you want, as long as it keeps to the rules. As for the story, it is a max of 400 words without an add on. I'd have to say there really is no min, since some players can submit poems that tell a story of their WOI.




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by Hyeme » Fri Oct 18, 2013 1:16 pm
Thank you for the explanation, and the quick response. I truly appreciate it. I praise your amazing detail and coloration you put into this WoI. This is actually my first go at a WoI,
Alright, I am going to stop.

Before I gush everywhere. I do not wish to implode. I am going to go calm down in a corner for a bit...

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