[prismatic]

third entry. ;w;
the first one i've done with any line edits.
based loosely on a banana cream pie. <3

[Puffee]

I love the line edits and the colours used for this one, but it's just too simple. Unlike the other two entries, it doesn't feel right to be this simple. It just needs a bit more of a design on the body. The koi and fan are fine, I quite like their simplicity, especially the koi (just the eye white thing again). I really like the theme of this one, and as said before, I love the edits. But, yeah, it's just too simple for my liking.

[prismatic]

right, right. gotcha. well, i added a bit, so i'd love to know if you think it's made any improvement. c:

[Puffee]

Wow, it's a lot better now! The design looks amazing, I reeeaaaaally like this one now! 8D

[prismatic]

Wow, it's a lot better now! The design looks amazing, I reeeaaaaally like this one now! 8D

thank youuuuuu. ;w; glad you like it!