[prismatic]

fourth entry.
sorry that it's a bit simplistic, i've had the worst day imaginable.
this entry is based off of a fighter. not necessarily anyone from the army, just anyone who's struggled with a battle in life.
i lost someone today. someone i really can't imagine life without. he was a fighter, and now i realize, i must be too. for him.

comments and criticism are welcome, and appreciated.

[Puffee]

I actually quite like the simplicity in this one. Perhaps you could add a few more of those dapple markings somewhere else, but I think it looks fine like this. I really like the way you just used the three colours for everything, and they go together well. The fan is something I quite like too. The design is very beautiful, and it looks great. c:
Something, however, seems to make me dislike the koi, but I'm not quite so sure what that is. It's probably just me though... xD

[prismatic]

i've taken that all into consideration. i tried improving the koi, as well as adding some dapple in another place. c:

[Puffee]

I love the koi now. c:
I also think the rest of it looks a whole lot better too! <3
It all just 'works' now. ouo