Daeets| Conquest's finale pg193

[Ashenjay]

Username;; ashenjay
Name of the daeet;;treasure.
Desired new name?;; I will just go with the original name :3
Meaning of name;; originally I thought about renaming her Qali-Inuit for snow on tree, but as I thought more about it the original name Treasure somehow seemed much suiting and meaningful. It was interesting to see how a commonly used noun could make such a wonderful name for her.
Gender;; female.


p e r s o n a l i t y.}
polite.
Treasure is unusually soft-spoken; not only she doesn't swear obviously but she never complains, whines, or speaks badly of another behind their backs. Perhaps this part of her personality comes from her background, but also she had a naturally gentle spirit.
quiet.
Unless someone asks her first Treasure rarely speaks, or laughs out loud. Yes she does smile and chuckle, it's just that she rarely makes loud noises. She doesn't want to hurt anyone accidently by making a mistake, and is also shy and unsure of herself. However, though, Treasure actually has a talented voice and is a wonderful singer. Oftentimes when she's alone she tends to hum to herself, but stops when others pass by. However she never strikes others as unapproachable or uncomfortable, or icy; it's just that she prefers not to speak. Treasure actually does open up to a few daeets whom she completely trusts in, and speaks her personal thoughts with them. okay come on i can have a tsundere
unsure.
Having had no real adults to lead her or take care of her properly when she was younger, Treasure lacks some part of her identity that can only be formed by their help. Luxkily,
understanding.

thankful.

h i s t o r y.}
-there will be a picture ><-

[*Blackberry*]

The pound is now OPEN;

BUT heres the catch, Nomally we ask for a personality and history, BUT THIS TIME YOU HAVE A CHOICE!
you can either do the standard, one or more paragrahs each for personality and history
OR
do one or more paragraphs for personality and DRAW a picture depicting an event in the daeets history <3
you will be judged on the unique ness of the drawing's event NOT the quality <3
but i will expect nothing but the best for personality <3

can we order art? I am having exams the next two weeks, and is ultra busy.

edit: I ordered art from someone X3

[00000000]

The pound is now OPEN;

BUT heres the catch, Nomally we ask for a personality and history, BUT THIS TIME YOU HAVE A CHOICE!
you can either do the standard, one or more paragrahs each for personality and history
OR
do one or more paragraphs for personality and DRAW a picture depicting an event in the daeets history <3
you will be judged on the unique ness of the drawing's event NOT the quality <3
but i will expect nothing but the best for personality <3

can we order art? I am having exams the next two weeks, and is ultra busy.

edit: I ordered art from someone X3

[ I would say you can't.
Ordering art from someone does NOT show that YOU put time and energy into it: No, you merely told someone else to make half of the form for you.

The forms are supposed to show how much you want the Daeet in question and how much you would work to get it. By ordering art, you are just showing that you are a bit //careface about the Daeet and would rather have someone else do the hard work for something you want.

You catch my drift?

So. Ordering art from other people is lazy and frowned upon(by me); even if you are super busy. I would advise you not to. ]

[*Blackberry*]

okay, but they already started..
so, can I just add theirs, and draw my own too? if possible?

[00000000]

[ Personally, I'd advise you not to use theirs at all.
Either draw your own or write the story. ]

[*Blackberry*]

just wanted to confirm, can we do personality drawings instead of history?

[Horneddragon]

sadly you'll have to include the paragraph for the personality, BUT you can do a drawing to go along with it if you want <3

[planetesimal]

Username: Woken
Name of the daeet: Noss
Personality:(WIP)
History: (WIP)

[broken*]

Username:
Kale_dragon_keeper
Name of the daeet:
Sula
Desired new name?
Aloomse
Nickname:
Ali
Name Meaning:
Independant
Age:
Six Years
Gender:
Female
Personality:
Wip
Stubborn. Rebelious.
It doesn't seem possible for any creature to become more stubborn and hardheaded than Aloomse is. You could work for days, weeks, months on trying to get her to change her opinion on something. At times, she will listen to you go on and on and rant to her, acting as though she really were listening as considering changing what she thought. But the second you finished, she's back at it again, your words not having even the slightest affect on her. If what she believes doesn't match up with what those above her in rank try to tell her to do, she will put up a fight, throw a fit, whatever you'd like to call it. She will make you see her side of the story and in the end if you don't change your mind, well, she'll stomp her feet and screech loudly, cursing you out under her breath as she stampeded away angrily.

History:
"No, I don't want to. You can't make me." The tiny little girl said stubbornly to the large male who was towering over her, not that she seemed to care. She was hardly bigger than his front paw, and yet she had the guts to stand up to him and refuse to go gathering berries and herbs. Some of the females, the medicine woman who were like doctors to the tribe, were taking out several hand-picked females to begin their training to take their places one day when they were old enough. But she did not want to just be like other females, having one of the few jobs, the few responsibilities, that they were allowed to have. Sure, she would probably rather be a medicine woman than a child watcher, or a gatherer, but at the same time, she didn't.
Let me give you a bit of back ground so you understand what is precisely going on here. There is a valley, tucked away in what the humans call the Grand Canyon. They think its all desert, all rocks and dirt, but there is a valley, tucked away, hidden at the far edges, near the ocean, known to the Daeets as Abendabun Valley. That is the home of a tribe of Daeets, very American/Native Indian-like, where the females are the child-bearers, the care-takers, the medicine women, and at times, the gatherers. The males are the ones who do all of the real work, hunting, fighting, protecting the tribe from other dangers, building up the 'camp', things like that.
That's the problem though, at least, in the eyes of small Aloomse. She hates the fact that the women are seen as less than the men, and are treated as such. They don't get as much respect, they don't get hardly any say in things, there are so many limits and rules and restrictions placed upon them. She hates it, and is not afraid to make her thoughts, her feelings, her opinions, known to others. That, though, is the root of quite a good number of her problems.

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