by wolfpuppies » Mon Sep 30, 2013 5:20 pm
So I caved and decided to enter the artist competition for Wolves of Creation - a species created by Wind Song and later bought by Blueh~
This particular creator made the species White Tailed Deer, from the fawns to the bucks.
It's a fairly simple design, but I like it... If it's permitted, I may add to this later (pretty late where I am now ^^')
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by blueh » Sun Oct 06, 2013 12:00 pm
Okay, so I'm going to try and do this but I'm awful at critiquing things.
Butttt. I'd say to try a more complicated design unless the item that they created is simple and doesn't have much to add on. Also, line edits and things like that are highly encouraged especially if the item doesn't exactly fit with a wolf {ex . . .Shadows around a Shadow creator's feet:: Antlers on a deer.]
Errm. That's all I have to say right now. If I find anything else I'll tell you ^^
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