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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby bangarain » Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:43 pm

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I would like to adopt!
Number: 8.
Picture: Image
Name: Siku; means 'ice' in Inuit. However, another young wolf has affectionately dubbed him 'Jay'; due to reasons below.
Species: Leopard Wolf.
Personality: Fierce. Loyal. Protective. All the qualities that one should expect from a warrior.
This is Siku; this is him. But there is much more to this silvery leopard wolf than that. Oh, no. Just four words can't describe him; he is almost undescribable in a way. But I shall try my best; for this leopard wolf is sure to be remembered all through history, for his story is written out in the stars. Though, we'll get to that later.

Siku is a true warrior; fierce and loyal. He's brave, willing to protect his pack for anything. He is extremely protective of his friends and family, some may say even 'overprotective'. As you can probably see; I wouldn't recommend messing with his family, or his friends. It wouldn't be the wisest move on your part; though this male isn't unnecessarily violent. He prefers to keep peace, and handle conflicts with words and glares rather than tooth and claw. But, he is a true warrior; he would, and will, protect his pack with all of his strength if he had to. Though some may see his oevrprotectiveness as a bad trait, others agree that it is admirable. There are many opinions in the world; and many topics which people may disagree upon. Of these many subjects, this debate is one of them. Which is really right? This you can decide for yourself.

But this rime-gray leopard wolf; adorned with storm-grey spots, isn't just a thickheaded guard wolf; no. He's extremely caring, and actually has a great sense of humor...he was known as a pup to get into as much mischief as the next young leopard wolf. Though he spends much of his time making sure his pack is safe, he also loves to hang around his two best friends; Jackal and Anya. They know what his true nature is like, they know the warmth and laughter that radiates from this young male behind what some see as a wall of thick ice hidden in his azure eyes; unable to be penetrated. His cobalt blue eyes shine with mischeif; and he nearly always has a smile on his face when he's around them. They're his true friends; along with his family, they know him the absolute best. They have seen past what seems like an endless cold; like a winter storm, a blizzard, that seems neverending. No, they know the true Siku; the relief of spring after a hard winter; the warmth of the sun. Happiness blazes in his eyes, and excitement brushes at his pelt. This is the true Siku, behind what may seem like an icy shell to strangers. Cold, but protective. But yet blazing with warmth; a great friend.

Likes: Despite what strangers might think; Siku loves alot of things in life. After all, he loves life, though he may look icy on the outside. Like what, you may ask? Well, probably due to his thick, glossy fur and the environment he has lived in and experienced his entire life; he loves colder weather. He very much dislikes warmer weather, the stuffy, muggy feeling that hangs in the air when it's hot; his fur seeming to burn against his skin...well, it's not really his thing. The gentle patter of snowflakes on his fur, the hushed sound of new snowfall...that is the weather he truly loves. He loves waking up early after a night of snowfall, and racing out into the open from sheltered stone dens, or the warmth of his packmate's fur, tail tucked under nose; and leaping through the crystally white drifts, and sliding across frozen-through rivers and streams; clawmarks leaving streaks in the silvery ground, carpeted by feathery white flakes. He loves looking out over the tundra which is his home, seeing the sparse evergreen firs capped in snow, as if they were dipped in a lake of cool snowflakes. He loves watching the winter sunset, the blazing sun sending multicolored streaks through the evening sky, until it slowly drifts beneath the rim of the mountainside in the east; waiting for the crystally moon to rise and take its place, until the pale sky turns cobalt and vibrant white stars are splashed across the horizon, twinkling icy and white in the dusk. He truly loves the winter; but he enjoys more than just weather, of course. What else? Well, much more, truly.
Siku loves more than anything his friends and family; they mean the world to them. Whether it's Jackal, his black-furred, silver-socked friend, yellow eyes shining with mischeif, or Anya, with her sleek silver, almost white coat and grey paws and tail tip, as if they were dipped in water, her emerald eyes bright; or any of his family members, he cherishes them all. His father, Kavik, a large black male with his same sapphire eyes, with a flash of silvery white on his chest and paws, and slightly lighter spots scattered across his pelt, he respects deeply, and cares for greatly. Siku honors his father, and though the regal male had been somewhat strict when his son was younger, it was purely from the fact that he loved him; and they both have love for eachother, despite whatever strict training or arguments they may have.
His mother, Dove, is who he is the closest two of his two parents. Dove is a pale silver, nearly white female with white spots, fading into her shimmering fur; and with darker ears and a dainty stripe of grey on her muzzle. She has been somewhat of an opposite of her mate in the way she treats her son; though he is is no way spoiled. Gentle and kind; she has always been there whenever Siku has needed help, his shelter in a whipping storm. They both have been very close; and her son nearly always wears a feather in her honor; and also, because he simply loves feathers. Flight. What an extraordinary thing; to soar above the clouds and through the violet sky of twilight. Though he much prefers the thought of keeping his paws planted firmly on the ground, he still thinks some birds are pretty amazing creatures. And...when possible; a jay's feather is his first choice. Why? Well; though he hides his feelings well, he has somewhat of a liking of the female mentioned earlier; Anya. When they first met, Siku was wearing a jay's feather behind his left ear, and due to this the young female affectionately nicknamed him 'Jay'; before she found out his true name, Siku.
These wolves are some of the few to melt his icy wall; his gaze warm to them instead of brisk and hidden behind a suspicious frost.
Dislikes: Like any leopard wolf or animal living on this earth; Siku has dislikes. Maybe more, due to his status and his seemingly icy, fierce personality, but perhaps less. On top of all of his dislikes; he hates anybody messing with his family or friends. His worst fear is that one of them would get hurt or injured; he loves them more than anything.
However, he dislikes other things, as well. Hot weather, for one thing; though the reasons are mentioned above. Siku also very much dislikes snobby, rude, or otherwise stuck up animals. He doesn't see the point of boasting or putting others down for no reason. After all; he is good at what he does, but doesn't brag about it, though he secretly glows with pride when Anya compliments him. However, as I mentioned earlier, Siku is very good at hiding his feelings; able to make his ice blue eyes seem expressionless and cold even if he's bursting with joy or pride, or blazing with anger. However, sometimes you can tell if he's annoyed; he tends to snap at others when he feels that way.
This young male dislikes when others treat him like he can't handle himself or that he doesn't know anything; because that is far from the truth. As one of the most intelligent and skilled young leopard wolves in the pack, he is respected by most. Though, some see his frosty shell as a male who is impossible to communicate with in a friendly way, and they avoid him; daunted by that frozen gaze. But his friends and family know the warmth inside to melt that frosty glare; who he truly is.

Background: The milky white moon shone high above the tundra; the velvety cobalt sky splattered with stars, glittering coldly with an icy hue. A slight wind blew briskly, winding downwards from the moon and rustling the last clinging leaves of the sparse, spinly trees that dotted the tundra. Though it looked deserted; lifeless, it was quite the opposite. Seemingly desolate; but not abandoned, no. For here lived some of the most fierce, noble creatures of the arctic. This frozen desert; this solitary land...was where the leopard wolves called home; where they thrived in a land of ice.

A lonely shape stood on a rise, surrounded by smooth boulders and scattered with rocks. The earth below the creature's paws was frozen; thick with permafrost and ice. A single sillouhete against the horizon, it seemed still, except for a single twitch of its feathery fail, or an occasional flick of its ears. Alert and unnmoving, it scanned the tundra, watching; it's gaze icy as it observed its surroundings.

"Siku." A harsh, somewhat raspy voice called out, though the owner was hidden in shadow. Whipping around, teeth bared, the leopard wolf that had been on watch glared into the scraggly brush from where the voice had come from. A low growl rumbled from his throat; his hackles rising. "Siku, it's just me." A large, regal leopard wolf emerged; his pelt shimmering black in the chill of twilight. Siku's fur flattened as he recognized his father, Kavik, and his azure eyes calmed, somewhat warmer, but still alert. He pricked his ears, curious. What could his father possibly want at this time of night. "You've been doing well, Siku." Kavik murmured, his usually-cold sapphire eyes warm. He nodded to his son, and spoke once more. "You have had the watch all night; why don't you go back and rest?"

Frosty eyes glinting with surprise, he dipped his head, and shook his fur, which had turned frosty and stiff on the outer layer; though his underfur was still warm and dry. He stood; his movement shaking the snow from his pelt, and padded down the rise, leaping over a large boulder, slik with frost, and pushed his way through the snarled bushes that marked the pack's current sleeping place. The twigs scraped at his fur, and he had to duck as he neared the dip where the rest of his packmates would be curled up; asleep, nose tucked under tail. Emerging from the barrier of growth, he twitched his ears to rid a dried leaf that had caught in his fur, and looked around the clearing; his frosty gaze traveling from one wolf to the next; searching. His eyes glinted with warmth for a moment as he spied who he was looking for; and leapt into the dip, making his way through his packmates, careful not to trod on a stray tail or stretched out paw. His eyes shone as he made out his two best friends; Anya and Jackal, and chose a free spot in the snow nearby.

Fluffing out his fur to combat the cold, he felt comforted by the warm scents and feel of his friends nearby. Curling up, he gazed up once more at the moon, then closed his eyes, tucking his nose deep into the snug, thick fur of his tail, feeling exhaustion overwhelm him. The next day was sure to be long and tiring; and he would need as much energy as he could get.

~*~

Pale sunlight drifted down through patchy clouds, chasing away the darkness of the night. It brought some warmth; though not enough to permeate the frost that almost always clung to the tough, yet feathery blades of grass that flourished in the tundra. Siku, still deep in sleep, shifted his paws, causing the light snow that had accumulated on his fur overnight to slide off, his fur sticking up in messy, stiff spikes. He felt Anya shift beside him; the movement stirring him from sleep. Gaping his mouth in a yawn, the young male stretched, warming his muscles, stiff from lying even for such a short time, since his watch the night before.

Blinking open his azure eyes, he scanned his pack with a chill in his eyes; a brisk frost that was very much like the stubborn ice that clung to the grasses...only warmth, extreme warmth could melt them; though for Siku that heat was not the sun. No, his piercing blue eyes only lost their guarded glare for a few special leopard wolves in the pack; Anya, Jackal, and his mother, Dove. To the others, his gaze was enough to intimidate even the strongest fighter in the pack, to send a chill through them that had nothing to do with the cold.

"Siku?" A voice spoke from behind him, sounding bleary with sleep. He whipped around, hackles slightly raised and claws tense, until he realized the source of the voice. Anya! He smoothed his fur with a shake, and Anya's warm, emerald eyes shone with amusement. "Hey! Why are you getting your fur so ruffled up?" She rose to her paws, fighting pack a yawn, and gave him a friendly nudge on the shoulder, affection clear in her voice, despite her teasing words. Siku smiled, his azure eyes losing their icy chill, and nuzzled her ear, then flicked his ears. "Why wouldn't I?" He teased, eyes bright with rare laughter.

"Hey!" Anya shot back, feigning anger. "I'm going to get you..." she growled, though her eyes were still friendly. She cuffed him over the ear with a paw, then bounded away, kicking up a flurry of gentle snowflakes. Siku bared his teeth, joining the game, and raced after her, leaping through the thin layer of newly fallen snow, knowing that later in the day, it was sure to freeze into a harsh coating of ice. Anya whipped around, a challenging glint in her jade eyes. "What are you waiting for, Jay?" Siku grinned, amused, then lifted his paw to take a step forward.

A low growl rumbled behind him, and Siku turned, hackles raised and teeth bared in a snarl defensively. "What do you think you're doing?" His father, Kavik, rumbled, his cobalt eyes sharp with anger. Siku forced himself to flatten his fur, and faced his father with a glare in his eyes. They were no longer warm; just cold and sharp, as if his irises were hidden behind a thick, unpenetrable layer of ice. "What's it to you?" He spat back, knowing all too well that it was the exact opposite of what he should have said. "What is it to me?" Kavik murmured, his hackles raised; scruff spiked up from anger. "If you have forgotten, I am the leader of this pack. I have a right to know why you're off early, disturbing the entire pack with your idiotic games." He growled his last words, and Anya flattened her ears, lowering her head in a respectful manner. But Siku stayed frozen, eyes blazing into his father's, tension seeming to crackle in the air.

"Back to the rest of the pack. Now." Kavik snapped, and turned, stalking back to the others before his son had a chance to answer. Siku glared after him, and Anya padded up beside him, tail low and ears flattened. "I'm sorry, Siku...it's my fault, really. Don't take it personally, he's probably just..." Anya shrugged, though Siku stayed silent for a moment. "It's not your fault." Siku murmured, his eyes still cold with frustration. He knew his father had to be strict for the wellbeing for the pack, but he couldn't help but think he had gone a bit too far this time. Spending the morning with one of his best friends would cause no harm to any of the pack. He shook himself, forcing himself to calm, then padded after Kavik, with Anya not far behind.

~*~


The wind blew harsh and cold, bringing with it a whirl of snow. The sky was thick with heavy grey clouds, sending a promise echoing through each leopard wolf's ears...the blizzard had come.

Siku flattened his ears, leaning forward to combat the wind. No longer gentle and light; it had turned into a roaring howl, screeching through his ears, blinding him with stinging snow, and frozen rain. All of his pack were faced into the wind, fur fluffed up in an attemp to shield themselves from the battering wind. Head down, muscles aching from just trying to keep themselves upright; they fought on, through the blizzard. Flanked by his two best friends, Siku felt stronger, knowing that together they could face the storm. Siku clenched his teeth, bracing himself against the next blast of air and ice. He saw a small female, Kay, stumble, and fastened his teeth in her scruff so she could get her footing once more. She shot a grateful glance at him, then the pack continued, fighting the storm.

~*~

By that nightfall, the wind had slowed to a light breeze, ruffling the scruffs and fur of the pack. Weary and exhausted, they plodded on, until Kavik's call halted them in their tracks. They had reached their next sleeping site; a shallow ravine, that seemed all the more exposed since the storm; the drifts piled up until the once-deep ravine had become nothing more that a dip in the earth.

Siku padded forward, knowing that he would take responsibility of watching over the pack as they slept. Kavik, no longer seething as he had been a few days before, gave him a nod, Siku acknowledging the action with only an icy glance. Turning away, he clawed his way up a boulder that stood on the edge of the ravine; covered with snow, and settled down to keep watch; knowing that he must stay alert at all costs. They hadn't been in this part of their territory for a few moonphases, and that might have tempted some unknown creatures to settle nearby. Some, such as arctic hares, would cause the pack no harm, but others...they were a threat; and nothing would stop them from trying to claim this territory as their own. Fluffing his fur up against the wind, he gazed up at the moon, and the twinkling stars in the indigo sky, and prepared for the long night ahead.

Dawn light streaked the sky with pale pink and purple hues; the sun glittering as it began to rise over the rim of mountaintops that surrounded Siku's home. It was a welcome sight; the previous day's snow had packed hard, turning to ice that stung harshly underpaw; and though he hated to admit it, he was exhausted. The past night's watch had left him weary and stiff; his fur spiky and frozen from the frigid temperatures. Shortly after the watch had begun; a freezing rain had begun to fall, drenching his silvery pelt, until it was impossible to differenciate his main fur color from the dark grey spots that flecked his pelt. He perked his ears as he heard the familiar ruffling of fur behind him; his packmates were stirring. Shaking himself to hopefully rid some of the ice that grasped stubbornly to his pelt, he padded down into the dip, weary-pawed and exhausted. Kavik was already awake, and briefly nodded to him; giving him permission to try to get a bit of sleep in before the pack's day began.

Nearly collapsing from exhaustion, Siku curled up, tucking his nose under his tail for warmth, and closed his eyes; drifting off to sleep.

~*~

"Come on, Siku!" Jackal called, an excited note to his voice. Siku grinned, azure eyes warm and bounded after him through the drifts of snow and ice, his large pawpads helping to keep him from sinking about chest-deep. That morning he had managed to get a few hours of sleep, and he felt re-energized, his paw pads tingling with excitement as he caught up with his friends, pushing his nose into Anya's fur; and she did the same.

The recent blizzards had caused small prey to go underground; but the towering snowdrifts would help slow down their favorite and main prey; the elk. That morning his father had called everyone together with an howl; filled with an excited melody that sang of his news, before dropping back down to silence once more...they were to go on an elk hunt!

With a spring in his step and his eyes shining with excitement, Siku realized with a jolt that things were looking up. And even if they weren't...he had his friends. No matter what happened, whether times were easy when prey flourished, or challenging and hard, with ice and snow battering at their pelts, they would face it together. No matter what.

Possible WIP, just stuck an ending on in case I can't finish it. XP

A picture you drew: Flat colored~. c:

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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Rainbow Dash » Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:44 pm

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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Coy » Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:10 am

I'm going for two this time. See how it works ;) Plus I need the art practice :)

I would like to adopt!
Number: 3
Picture: Image
Name: Republic
Species: Domestic Dog (Yellow Lab X German Shepherd; Banana Based)
Personality: Republic is a very happy and energetic dog. His outlet for his energy is doing his favorite sport, Dog Agility. His German Shepherd background makes it very easy for him to get over jumps which makes it very easy for him to win. He is also very sweet. He was a rescue and it was very shocking that he put it all behind him and the fact he is so sweet and cheerful. He is a good companion and friend.
Likes: His owner, his home, his scarf, his life, his food, his toys, Dog Agility, swimming, BACON, running.
Dislikes: Bugs, summer, being kept captive, being hungry, being in a cage, rain
Background: "Republic! Come on! Wake up! We have to go!!!" Alice shouted from downstairs. Republic's ears perked up and sniff around. She's cooking bacon! Republic thought. He scrambled down the wood stairs of their house and almost collided into the wall, but continued to run. Bacon. Bacon! BACON! Gotta get the bacon! He thought as he reached the kitchen. He jumped up on his owner Alice and tried to give her a hug, but his big size just made her fall to the floor. Good Morning! Good Morning! Good Morning! Republic thought as he licked Alice's face. "Republic! Get off you funny dog!" Alice pushed Republic off and got off the floor. "Want some bacon boy?" Alice asked her dog. Yes! Yes! Yes! Republic thought as he chased his tail in circles. Alice laughed and slipped Republic a piece of bacon.
After breakfast, Alice put Republic's favorite lime green collar on and took him for a run. When they got back, Alice took Republic to the barn to take care of the horses. She fed the horses and Republic roamed the aisles. He visited all the horses and they all loved him. After all the feeding and cleaning was done, Alice took Republic down to the arena. There was something she wanted to try today. Yesterday, Alice set up all the show jumps she had at the lowest notch. She was going to introduce Republic to the jumps in hopes he would like jumping and then she would put him in a dog agility class.
Alice let Republic off his leash and he ran around in circles just for fun. "Republic! Focus." Alice shouted at him. Okay, sorry. He thought. He stopped chasing his tail and looked at Alice. Alice walked over to the jump closest to them and stood by it. She commanded Republic to come and he did. Then she said "Over," and Republic hesitated at first and then stepped over the jump. Alice clapped and told him he was a good boy and then gave him a small piece of bacon. Republic took the treat happily and pranced around happily. I did it! I did it! Republic thought as he pranced.
Next, Alice ran next to Republic to get speed. Then, at the last minute, she dodged the jump and went around it while Republic went over it. He got massive air and landed with a thump and kept going, running right past Alice who was no cheering. Republic came back to Alice and she gave him another treat. Alice kept raising the bar until Republic was too tired to continue. Alice walked Republic back up to the house and gave him his lunch. Alice sat down at the computer and got on the website of their local Dog Agility Club and printed out a registration. She filled it out and put it in an envelope and addressed it. Republic followed Alice to the mail box and when they went back into the kitchen, Republic went to his pillow and fell into a deep sleep.
The next morning Republic woke up in the kitchen where he had fell asleep. Alice had already left and she would be gone all day. Republic ate his kibble and drank some water and then went through the doggy dog to go run around in the back yard. He walked back inside and went back to his pillow to chew on his toys. He noticed a new one in the basket. Huh, she must have gotten me a new toy. Wow! There, sitting in his basket, was a stuffed bacon plushie. Republic loved it! He called it Mr.Bacon and took it everywhere.
"Okay Republic. This is our first practice. Try your hardest, okay?" Alice told Republic as he looked around excitedly at the fake turf, the brightly colored jumps, the long tunnels, and the sea-saw. This place is insane! Republic thought. Alice walked him around just to get a feel for the place and then started their routine. Republic took the jumps easy, but had some trouble with the tunnel. He got kind of scared by the crunching noise it made when he ran trough it. He enjoyed the sea-saw though!"I think we are ready for competition!" Alice exclaimed to Republic. She rewarded Republic with Bacon Bits and pats and hugs. After Republic was tired out, they went home. She gave him a bunch of water and then he went for a nap.

Alice and Republic now compete in Agility Competitions. Republic's energy and unique coloring makes him a fan favorite. He comes in the top 3 normally and loves every minute of it. Alice continued to give Republic teats and toys and he is still her best friend.
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I plan to give him a scarf if I win him. He will still have the collar too, but the scarf is another accessory.


I would like to adopt!
Number: 4
Picture: Image
Name: Zimba
Species: Smili (Jungle Sub-Species, Wasp Based Smili)
Personality: Zimba is very unique and unusual. He is very fierce and a good fighter. He loves fighting and being nice is something that happens very rarely. He may not be very nice, but he has great respect for his elders and anyone higher in position than he is. Zimba is very intellegent and can out smart almost any animal, creature, or human.
Likes: His habitat, being free, his family, hunting, his uniqueness, his best friend
Dislikes: Being hurt, dis-respect, going hungry, most humans, bigger predators, losing his friend, rough transportations
Background:
"Massey!" Zimba shouted as a huge cage started to come over him. Massey started to run towards Zimba trying to claw, bite, and scratch at the people who were taking her best friend away. Zimba cried and tried to get to her, but he was weak from a previous attempt to catch dinner. Zimba couldn't go on. He was giving up.
Hi, I'm Zimba and I am a Smili. I am part of a sub-species called Jungle Smilis and I live in the jungle too. I have been labeled as unusual due to my coloring. It's extremely hard to catch food due to this. I live with a small group in the jungle and I normally just stay and hunt with my best friend Massey. She is a jungle smili too. We are together always.
"Zimba! Come on! We're going to be late!" Massey called for Zimba as she followed the others back to the jungle Smili hunting area. They were meeting some others to talk about some potential dangers. Zimba and Massey will not be attending due to their young age. Instead, they planned to go hunting and catch and early dinner.
Zimba and Massey left the others and went back to the main part of the jungle where they hunt. They walked through the forest for a while until they saw a small mammal moving very weirdly. Zimba went after it. "Zimba! No! Don't! Something is wrong with that animal!" Massey shouted after him, but he couldn't hear her. She started to run after him instead. "Zimba!" She kept shouting until she saw a flash of yellow.
Zimba stood very still and Massey came running in behind him. She skid to a stop and bumped into him. They both looked up at a very tall and large shadow. "Run." Zimba whispered to Massey. Massey shook her head, looking as though she was about to cry. Zimba made a sharp movement and the shadow started to chase after Zimba. "Zimba!" Massey shouted.
"Massey!" Zimba shouted as a huge cage started to come over him. Massey started to run towards Zimba trying to claw, bite, and scratch at the people who were taking her best friend away. Zimba cried and tried to get to her, but he was weak from a previous attempt to catch dinner. Zimba couldn't go on. He was giving up.

The next day, Zimba woke up to the sounds of barking, chirping, meowing, and some various other sounds of animals he didn't know. He couldn't remember much of what happened last night, but he knew two things: He wasn't in the jungle and Massey was no where to be found. Zimba looked around and noticed he was in a rather small cage in a room with white walls, black and white squared floors, and there were some very strange animals all around him.
"Massey!" He called out. "Your not going to find her." said a scruffy voice that came from behind one of the cage's walls. "Who's there?" Zimba asked. He looked around. "Over here." Zimba got on his hind legs to look at another animal in the cage next to him. "Who are you?" Zimba asked the strange animal. "I'm Gana. I'm an African Wild Dog. I was captured and taken from my home and my family." Gana looked at the bottom of his cage. "I'm so sorry," Zimba said. "I'm Zimba. I'm a Jungle Smili. I was taken from my Jungle and my best friend and family." Zimba told Gana. "Is that who you were calling for? 'Massey' is it?" Gana asked. "Yeah, she's my best friend." Zimba told Gana. "I'm sorry." Gana said.
"Well from the looks of it, we are in a poacher's holding area," Gana explained to Zimba. "What are poachers?" Zimba asked. "Poachers are humans who take wild animals for their rarity, hide, or to sell them." Gana explained. "That's awful!" Zimba said. "Yeah, well that's how it is here," Gana's ears pricked up, "Sounds like someone's here... multiple people." Just as Gana finished, a bunch of people came through the door way.
Zimba backed into the corner of his cage. "What's going on?" Zimba said to himself. "How long have you been operating this?" A big man in a black suite said. The men continued to talk and Zimba knew the new men were angry. After a long while, the men in black left and took the shadow man with him. Zimba fell asleep.
When Zimba woke up, some men in black came back with some people in brown. The people in brown had writing boards and were looking into all the cages and talking to the animals. The people came to Zimba's cage and Zimba crouched, ready to attack if necessary. The person slipped him a piece of meat and Zimba ate it with caution. The person wrote some stuff down on her writing board and walked to Gana and did the same thing.

The next day, the people in brown came back and loaded all the cages onto a big thing. When the big thing started to move, all the animal noises started up again. Zimba just sat down in his cage for the whole moving period. He stood up in his cage when the moving stopped. The people in brown started unloading all the cages and Zimba looked out of his and saw a huge open space.
The person in brown took Zimba to a big box like place filled with smaller boxes. The person put Zimba's cage in one of those boxes and they opened the door and ran out. Zimba cautiously stepped out of his box. Zimba's mouth almost hit the ground. He was standing in a box filled with leaves and trees and other things from the jungle. It looked like he was home!
The front of his box was a glass wall with a little door for his food to come through. On the other side of the glass wall he could see Gana across from him. Gana looked like he was having fun running around in his box. "Huh, I guess that's what Africa looks like." Zimba said to himself. Zimba continued to walk around and exploring his new box.
Zimba still live in his "box" and people feed him and take care of him everyday. He gets let outside everyday, by himself. He will eventually have a person come and adopt him to keep him to take care of him because they still do not know where he came from. He never saw Massey again. A lot is unknown about Zimba and we fear that will not change.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Meadow » Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:49 am

I would like to adopt!

Number:
Five [5]

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Name:
Tyson

Species:
Boxer/Great Dane mix

Personality:
Hyper. He's full of energy, all the time. It's always shooting out of him like a loose cannon. He's also very carefree, and laid back. Not a lot can get him down, except of course no freedom. Tyson is not known to be aggressive, though his temper is a touch short. He's very gentle and protective when dealing with living things smaller than himself. He loves people most of all, and is defiantly not a guard dog. Tyson is very friendly and loyal, like most dogs. He 's confident, yet sensitive. He's very messy, as well. He won't hesitate to destroy something. Not necessarily on purpose, of course. He's got a strong will-power and is very stubborn. Tyson is very immature. He still acts like a puppy, though he is not one. He strives for freedom and fun, and he is very fun-loving. He can be very determined, though he is easily frustrated. He's strong, and not afraid. Fears are nonsense if you're his size.

Likes:
Free, open spaces. He loves those best of all; they caress his needs as a big, hyper mutt.
Running. Nothing compares with the lovely feeling as the wind swishing through his ears, his every muscle working and stretching, and his love for freedom.
Food. Food! Who couldn't love the stuff?
Causing trouble. Not big trouble, but just small, silly, mischievous things. c-:
Other dogs.
Belly rubs.

Dislikes:
Hot, humid days. Their moisture sticks to him like quills from a startled porcupine.
Tuna. The smell has always bothered him.
Small spaces.
Flowers.
Loud noises.
Tail-pulling.


Background:
Poking his nose out the door, prodded by his master behind him, he looked out into the white earth around him. It didn't seem right that in a heartbeat the soft white blanket could be skewered by the plus sized mutt gazing at it in wonder. But still, the black, bare trees covered in sharp shards of wicked looking ice beckoned him, and even the fence, that usually cowered at the great beast’s existence invited him in. The birds sang to him, and the snow, he knew, was just dying to shed it’s flawless envelop and unveil the soft underbelly of imperfectness.

And with that, he was off.

Destroying the velvetiness of the snow with every step, he watched as the faded grey sky dumped upon him all it’s misery, crazing the mutt, as he snapped his powerful jaws at the sky, successfully catching multiple drops of precipitation that melted effortlessly on his warm pink tongue. The wind wrapped around him like a blanket, shaping his fur oddly, making the short hairs twist around each other in a terribly lovely way, or at least to Tyson it was lovely. But the mutt did not care about that right now. He was running. He was flying. He was free.

And it was the best feeling in the world.

As he flew the wind hit him everywhere, willing him to slow. But Tyson was both strong and carefree. He tore through the spaced out yard, skidding to a stop at the wooden fence and twisting back toward the trees and the deck. Flying around several trees like a horse in a barrel race, he galloped to the bird bath, where he usually took swigs of water from. Sadly shaking his head, he realized that the bath was filled with an unknown and terrible un-watery substance. He snarled at it in disgust as he clawed at the ice, clinging fearfully inside the bowl, ultimately tipping over the bath. Turning away from it, he brushed his back paws along the snow, covering the bird bath with a fresh white mantle.

Glancing back at the house, he realized he was not ready to come in. But as he glanced back at the appealing trees, he jumped. The intertwined twigs of the tree seemed to come alive, the black limbs stampeding toward Tyson, literally. He looked every which way for escape from the trees that had once been familiar and welcoming to him but were now twisted and raging, insulting the mutt. Ducking under the limbs that now planted their newfound roots into the earth and were crescendo-ing in size, Tyson found himself panicking. How had his perfect world turned into a nightmare so fast? He desperately wanted to be back inside the house, safe from the horrific yard. He flew to the door that seemed miles away, as the fence around him started to expand and engulf the yard. Everything was moving in slow motion. Each step seemed an hour long. He had no time to think as a new, massive limb collapsed on top of him, suffocating him.

He woke with a start.
It had been a dream.
A dream, just a dream, nothing more.

Tyson was already breathing quite heavily, and being in the small enclosed kennel did not help. His surroundings were very different from both his wonderful dream and his nightmare. The place was intoxicated with the smell of dog. It was stuffy, and there was no natural lighting. The floor was cemented yet dusty, the long corridor of kennels was a brownish gray colour in every nook and cranny, and nothing was out of place. The bowls for food and water were practically cemented into the floor, which was unfortunate because Tyson loved to drag his dish and spill all the water out.

As he pondered his dreams, painful yelps of many others rang in his ears; their scratching made his head ache. No animal could possibly be happy here, unless there was something mentally wrong with it. But Tyson was both somewhat happy and sane, or at least as sane as a mutt that acted like a puppy at all times could be. His family was in the cages surrounding him, and that’s really all that mattered to him. Though it was hard to be an oversized mutt and have no exercise for days at a time.
And somewhere deep inside, he was yearning for his dream to finally become reality.

At one point, his mind left him, and traveled far, far away. This was not a place you could get to by plane, train, or automobile. He thought of the past, the fresh memories bombarding his head as they snapped back to him.
It was now two years earlier. Tyson was caught somewhere between a pup and an adult. It was the day they sent him away.

Tearing through the house, Tyson became worried. He had been at this spot after circling the house many times. And something was out of place. Where was his master? Tyson began to pace, feeling more terrified at the second. He clung to the door, waiting for it to open. And finally, he decided he must find something to entertain himself with. He was bored.

“Tyson!” his master shouted, looking ready to explode. Tyson glanced at the mess around him, feeling guilty already. Several atrocious cream plates surrounded him, each fractured into numerous shards of threatening glass. A few meters to his left, the pepper shaker had relieved it’s contents out on to the starch white table cloth, as had the butter holder, although the butter looked like it had been enjoyed as a tasty treat. A few of the chairs laid on their sides as well, as though taking a cozy nap on the plush, patterned rug. He turned as the sound of dripping water made his way to him from the kitchen. A glass of some sort of red drink that was left on the counter had been tipped over, the filling mostly on the floor. The great pile of dishes that had been neatly stacked in the sink hours earlier was tipped over.

Everywhere he looked, disaster.

“I leave you alone for five hours, and I come home to find this?” said his master, “I cannot believe you. I thought you were ready. And didn’t I lock you in your kennel?!” This was bad. This was very bad.

Tyson's vision went blurry. Within a second, he was back in his kennel at the pound. Peaking into his cage were a teenage-looking girl, and another mutt. This mutt was crazy furry, though he was slim. His eyes, bi-coloured, shimmered as he looked up as Tyson with a smile pasted on his face. He was attached to the girl by leash, the girl taking a death grip on it like it was a grenade. He examined the girl, from her soft ginger hair, to her fuzzy looking boots. She smiled at him, freckles flexing, and Tyson looked back at the mutt, who was barking excitedly; a chorus of notes strung together rose into the air around them. The girl turned as a woman who closely resembled the girl looked meaningfully at her. The girl nodded, eyes dancing. Slowly, she opened his kennel door and reached in to stroke him. Her hands, gentle, grazed over his body, and he felt free.

He was thrown into a truck, with the woman, girl, and mutt, all of whom were watching him excitedly. He gazed at the friendly faces that surrounded him. He felt so very content, and the ride home was a long one in which he could stick his head out the window like a maniac. By the time the caravan arrived, the car was caked with slobber. The girl let out a soft giggle as he was unloaded along with the other mutt, and together they were escorted behind the large, pleasant-looking house. The lawn was manicured, and the house, which was an odd shape for a house, was made of brick. Each brick was a different shade of brown. It was pretty. There was a few light posts here and there, and to the right was the gate they were headed to, right new to the path that lead to the porch and ultimately the door.

The gate opened in front of him, and he and the mutt stumbled in. Tyson did a double take as he glanced at the yard.
It was the same yard that was his dream. Minus the snow. To his right laid the cedar deck, to his left, the fencing. Several trees dotted the grass, clinging together. The lawn was equally green and lush as the front, as though it was an artist's brush, ready to paint like never before. The flowers near the deck were highlighted hues of pink, orange, and white. He even spotted the birdbath, next to the tree closest to him.

He was home.
And with that, he was off.

Inspiration :
Several years ago, I owned a boxer mix puppy. He was about two years old and ninety pounds. We weren't sure what he was mixed with, but we guessed anything from Rhodesian ridgeback to rottweiler. He had the most beautiful, brindled coat and an adorable docked tail, and those luffly flopped ears. When things got too cold, he'd wear the most adorable sweaters to keep warm. He was afraid of puppies, too. And they were smaller than them.Anyway, this mutt had a LOT of energy, much like Tyson. He nearly destroyed our house, even. He chew on our deck, claw all the bark off our tree, and scratch the hardwood flooring. He would sit on children as little as two years old, and had some kind of dominance issue with me and my parents. Anyway, as much as we loved him, we had to give him up. We just couldn't handle him anymore. He lives with a good friend now, and even has a new buddy. <3 And Tyson would be a perfect companion for me, because I'll have a boxer again, almost. XD

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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Jayfur101 » Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:51 am

Can you try for 2 at a time?

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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby neonfrozen » Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:54 am

Jayfur101 wrote:Can you try for 2 at a time?

Yes, Though please ask this at the Fan Club Next time. This thread is for FORMS ONLY

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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Hanoverian » Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:58 am

I would like to adopt!

Number: 17

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Name: Skysong (Goes by Song)

Species: Caeli Fox

Species description: The Caeli fox (Sky fox) are minute foxes, the average height being only 3 inches tall. They are vegetarians, primarily eating leaves, fruits, and small vegetables. They have the power to fly, and use it often, sailing expertly through the clouds, riding the air currents skillfully. Being rather shy, the stick to the air and trees, were none of the other Elementum dare to venture. They only go to the ground to get food and water.

Personality: Song can often be found day dreaming, with her head in the clouds. She doesn't know how to act around other foxes, because she has never had the chance to talk to them. She can be rather shy, which is to be expected from her elusive species. Song can be a bit bull-headed at times, and she will stand up for what she believes in. When angered, she often seems to lose control of her body, and she becomes a terror on four paws.

Song Speaking:

Likes: Solitude: Easy to find for a Caeli Fox like me. All you have to do is fly up into the clouds and no one will bother you-because they can’t find you.
Blackberry juice: Rather tasty on a hot day, but removing purple berry stains from pale colored fur can be a chore.
Writing: Fun-until I get writers block. Painting: With the right inspiration, the results are magical. Without the right inspiration-the results are less than desirable.
Peaches: Nomnomnom. Talking: I like to talk. Depending on who I’m talking too.
Petey: My pet dragonfly, of course!
Flying: Flying is like swimming through the air. I don’t have wings, of course. You don’t need wings to fly!

Dislikes: Carrots: Who would want to eat an orange stick?
Confinement: Staying in one place is bor-ing!
Illness and Pain: This is pretty self explanatory.
Storms: Sometimes I think that our Bramblehouse is going to snap right off of its branch and get swept away in a gale.
Smothering Parents: Why can’t they leave me alone? I’m not a kit anymore!
Rain: Rain doesn’t make good flying weather. It makes it very hard to see while trying to get above the clouds. Plus, wet fur adds weight.
Maritime tropical air masses: When these blow through, rain comes-and stays. This ties in with smothering parents-they won’t let me fly in rainy weather.
Getting lost: Although great hiding spots, clouds can also be confusing to find your way out of.

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Background:
Background: Skysong was born on a cool spring night, in the beautiful land of Chee. She was no longer than a cashew nut, a white and blue bundle wrapped in a soft, woven grass and moss blanket. Her home was nestled high up in the branches of a tree, nothing but a ball of grasses and twigs that swayed gently in the breeze. On the outside, it looked nothing like a cozy home, but on the inside-well, that was a different story. Her parents had lined the humble structure with soft mosses, the walls, the floor, everything. Song slept in a tiny crib, carved from pale beech wood by her father, and lined with-once again-moss. Her parents shared a dainty bed, made with twigs tied artfully with strong grass-fiber twine, with mattress of dried leaves and fluffy mosses and grasses and a twin, woven blanket of grass. A large cupboard held the family’s food-mostly dried fruits and vegetables, with a few seeds and grains. All the furniture was tacked into the floor with strong thorns, so that it wouldn’t shift when the breeze rocked the small Bramblehouse. The small home attached to a branch by an extremely strong rope woven from reeds and willow withes. It rocked gently in the wind; which is very soothing for a sky-loving Caeli Fox. When the weather was too windy, or a storm was brewing, Song’s parents, Cloudbreeze (her mother) and Windpelt (her father) would take two additional ropes that were fastened to the house and tie them securely on neighboring branches.

And so Song grew up in this small home, arising to become two and a half inches tall. She graduated to a sturdy twig bed like her parents, and was soon helping with the chores that needed to be done to keep the family functioning. After doing her daily work, like collecting 3 blueberries for dinner, or sweeping out the Bramblehouse, she would go out flying. She loved to fly, and explored many places. She would soar up into the clouds, letting their chilly mist surround her. The sparkling fog swirled around Song’s small body, seeming to take on different shapes: A fox, a dragonfly, or even a big, juicy apple. When she tired of that, she might fly down into a tree, easily hiding behind a leaf, to spy on the other Elementum Foxes: The Unda and the Terra. The Unda were slightly larger than her, built with webbed paws and slightly planked tails. Their colors were that of the water, and Song often watched them splash happily in it. She wished for a friend; like all the Unda her age. She also watched the Terra, which were much larger than her, up to a foot tall! They were the colors of the earth and plants, their thick fur a mixture of rich browns and fresh greens. Song often longed to be that big.

Loneliness was a feeling that she experienced much too often for a kit her age. But there were no other Caeli foxes around for miles, for they were extremely rare, and most of the species preferred to live high up in the mountains. Song and her family lived in a deciduous forest, where the land was fairly flat. So the only other option for company was either the Unda or Terra, who her parents forbid her to interact with. But she didn't mind, due to a fear of the other foxes.

Then she found Petey.
Song had been exploring the reeds around a docile stream, far from the Unda. Parting the reddish pole like plants, Song found him- a large dragonfly, metallic green in color, with a ripped wing. With a shrill shriek, she zipped away, landing on the opposite bank. Eventually, however, curiosity overcame her fear, and she flew slowly to the reeds, carefully pushing her way through them. She could tell that the creature was in pain-and a small voice inside her said that he could be a friend. Dragonflies were looked down upon by her mother, who despised any insect. She called stupid, mean, unsanitary creatures, but Song thought that he looked rather clean and friendly, so she mustered up all her courage and gently stroked his head, surprised that he didn’t start or try to get away. Song flew off, and returned with a large piece of sticky, wispy spider web-she had managed to dodge a very angry-and ugly-garden spider to get it. She carefully bound the rip with the iridescent material, and then leaned back to examine her handiwork. Good as new! She thought, a smile spreading across her face. She watched as the handsome insect stretched his wing experimentally; he seemed pleased. Then, without warning, he took off into the sky. Song sighed sadly, and her heart felt heavy. Her only company was gone-or so she thought. The dragonfly dived down from the sky, and landed gently on Songs head, balancing expertly. Although he was slightly longer than her, he didn’t weigh much. Song laughed happily as she took flight. He followed her in a buzzing of color-capturing wings.
Song brought her new friend-which she called Petey-to her home and introduced him to her mother, who was weaving a grass blanket. When her mother saw the dragonfly, she gasped and stumbled backwards, dropping her weaving. “Wha… what on EARTH is that thing?” She stammered, pointy at Petey with a white paw.
“A dragonfly! His name is Petey. Can I keep him? Please?” She said sweetly in answer to her mother.
Are you crazy? Of course not!” Song’s mother yelled, her voice shrill with upset. The argument continued for about 10 minutes when Song’s father arrived in a flash of navy blue. He held a muffled conversation with his wife, which Song caught snippets of-
“She is lonely, Cloud-she needs a friend” and
“But it’s an insect!” and “
Honey, it can live outside” and
“I don’t want my baby interacting with that thin-“
“She is lonely! Let her have a friend.”
This went on for what felt like hours to Song. Finally, her parents parted and she could tell by the broad smile on her dad’s face and the frown on her mother’s that Petey could stay. “But he stays OUTSIDE!” Her mother said with a huff.

They would often go out flying, although Song would have to leave Petey behind when she wanted to fly up into the clouds. So mostly they explored at low altitudes. Song’s mother grew to love the insect, surprisingly, and even let him sleep inside during storms. His sweet and affectionate personality made him hard not to like!
Oh, but the pair got into trouble much more often than they should! Once, they tracked a honey bee to its hive. Song’s parents had often warned her about the striped insects: One sting for a Caeli fox is immediate death. But she watched the Terra foxes sticking their paws into the hive, ignoring the furious bees as they sucked their honey-covered paws. Song was amazed that they were unaffected by the bee stings! She wanted to try some of the honey too-the Terra weren’t the only ones who could have it! So when the bees were busy attacking the Terra, she zipped into the hive, dipping her paw in the delicious, golden substance. Song brought it to her mouth, surprised at how amazing it was. Even better than Blackberry juice! She said to herself. But as she was about to go back for more, a bee spotted her. With an angry buzz, it sped towards her, a blur of yellow and black, stinger at the ready. Squealing, Song pelted out of the hive, flying faster than she ever had. She finally stopped and collapsed on a wide tree branch, teeth chattering from her close encounter. I’ll never do that again! She thought, shivering.
There was the time they ran into the beaver, the time Petey got stuck in a thorn bush, and the time Song nearly drowned in the river. But none of these events were as terrifying and life changing as the one she was about to experience.

Song woke up later than usual, due to the absence of birdsong. …Maybe they are on vacation? She thought half-heartedly, trying to convince herself that everything was OK. She pulled herself out of bed and looked around for Petey. She didn’t see him, so she figured that he was hunting for mosquitoes and gnats. No matter how much she tried to convince him that blueberries were delicious, he stuck to the tiny bugs. She stepped out of the Bramblehouse and spotted her parents huddled together on a branch, mumbling in hushed tones, and casting worried glances to the gray sky. When they saw their daughter step onto the branch, they stopped mumbling and put on false smiles.
“Good morning, Song!” Her father said, flying over to embrace her. Her mother followed suit. Song accepted the hugs, although suspicion nagged at her, like a buzzing mosquito that she couldn’t get rid of.
“What’s wrong?” She asked her parents, trying to disguise the suspicion that hung heavy in her voice that fog over the sea. The artificial smiles on their faces faded slowly, morphing into tight, worried, frowns.
“Oh, it’s just that there is a storm brewing. But if we tie up the Bramblehouse, we’ll be just fine! Right,honey?” Cloud said to her husband with false hope.
“Of course! Now, Song, will be you please go get something for breakfast?” Her father answered.
“But dad…-“Song started, before her dad cut her sentence short:
“Go get something for breakfast, like I told you.”
Sighing, Song flew off. She noticed the lack of noise- no birds chirping, no cicadas screeching, not even a quiet breeze. Feeling slightly disturbed by this silence, she sped up. She stopped at a blackberry bush, collecting 3 of the ripe berries. They were difficult to carry, but song was an expert. The sweet, violet juices turned to ashes in her mouth from the fear. She paused briefly at the stream to drink, setting down her delicious burdens. She couldn’t hear or see the Unda splashing happily through the water; even the little fishes seemed to be missing. Song finished her drink, picked up the berries, and flew back to the Bramblehouse. She saw that her parents had finished tying it to the branches. Gazing up at the sky, she was worried to see that it was taken an unusual greenish tinge; a huge, black cloud was moving in much too quickly from the south. It was nothing like the friendly wisps of white she had grown to love. She sped back into the Bramblehouse, and was pleased to see that Petey had returned. She dropped the blackberries in front of her parents, and walked over to stroke her dragonfly. They ate in worried silence.
Then the storm came. First it was the sky. It became blanketed with heavy, dark clouds, patches of eerie, glowing green peeking through.
Then it was the wind. It came in great gusts, making the Bramblehouse quiver and shake like a living thing. It whirled through all the gaps of the small structure, making an unusual whistling noise.
Then came the rain. Icy cold, coming down in sheets, soaking and destroying everything in its path. It wasn’t the peaceful kind of rain that Song had once watched, snug and dry in her little home.
The rest was a blur. A rip, smash, a crack, a flash of fire-shrill screaming. Hurtling through the air, getting battered cruelly by sharp rain and debris, confusion, fear.
Floating in and out of conscious, getting banged and stabbed by ripped and destroyed pieces from the Bramblehouse. Then, a gust of hot wind grabbed Song in its viselike grip, yanking her out of the pathetic remains of the Bramblehouse and tossing her into the gale. The wind tossed and buffeted her feeble body. Song screamed for her family, but the cyclone stole the words out of her mouth. Slipping into the world of unconsciousness, Song feared that she would never see her family again.

Song slowly regained consciousness. The sun was baking her fur, gnats were buzzing around her head, and her whole body ached with sharp and dull pains. She winced and she tried to open her eyes, but searing pain over her right eye prevented her from doing so. Her stomach churned with agonizing hurt, and her dizziness soon overcame her senses. Blackness filled her head once again, temporarily blotting out pain.

Eventually, she became somewhat alert. She could no longer feel the sun scorching her back; the light from the fiery orb no longer glowing beneath her eyelids. The obnoxious insects were still droning around her head, but her aches and pains had dulled to an almost-bearable throbbing.
Song had no memory. All she knew was that she had to drink, had to eat-she had to survive!
After lying on the ground in a puddle of rainwater and blood, she gathered the courage to pry open her eyes, ignoring the searing sting of cuts reopening. Her vision was blurry and clouded, and it was dark out, but she could make out her surroundings. Tall, jagged looking purple-blue mountains shrouded by thick fog loomed tall in the distance, seeming like something from a fairy tale. Song was lying in a grove of tall, fragrant pines, their needles cushioning her pathetic form. A stream gurgled cheerfully in the distance, and the delicate, floral scent of wild berries laced the air. The beauty was lost on Song. Inhaling deeply, she attempted to rise to her paws. Her body quivered and her legs started to buckle with the effort, but she did it. Examining her injuries, she found that they were worse than she originally thought. Her left front paw was mangled and smashed, and she had a deep, long cut across her left flank. Not to mention the deep gash over her right eye. That was the worst, although she was covered in scrapes and scratches, all oozing sticky blood. Song felt slightly sick to her stomach. Shutting her eyes for a moment, she waited for the dizzy, nauseous feeling pass. When it did, she managed to half walk half drag herself to the stream. Washing her injuries in the river, she felt its coolness numbing the hurts. Drinking deeply, strength flowed back into her body. Her sick feeling faded, but then it was replaced by something much worse-her memories. She wept bitterly, realizing what had happened, remembering that she was alone, that she had no one left. Her parents were most likely dead. She would most likely die.
Life was looking pretty grim to the young fox. But she didn’t know of the new world that had been opened up for her.

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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Rainbow Dash » Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:07 am

koowie wrote:
Jayfur101 wrote:Can you try for 2 at a time?

Yes, Though please ask this at the Fan Club Next time. This thread is for FORMS ONLY

Questions are fine.

Yes, you can try for two at a time (that's the max number you can try for per round) if you have two free slots open.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby corgie » Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:22 am

I would like to adopt!
Number: 15
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Name: FireWorks [Sparklers or AquaMarine]
Species: Dog [CorgixHusky]
Personality: Sweet,Cheerful,Gay[Happy],
Likes: Seaglass,the ocean,FireWorks,Sparklers,Colorful things,flowers,butterflies
Dislikes: Death, Dark Colors, Vampires, Small Spaces
Background: Fireworks was still a puppy when her mom left her, her mom was jealous of her beauty, and kindness. So she left Fireworks.....forever... before she left Fireworks mom said
" GoodBye Forever"
She grinned than walked off with her two sons, Fireworks brothers. Fireworks looked around she was scared, she didn't know how to take care of herself, or where she was. Out of the bushes came a large female bear. Fireworks crawled back, her tail tucked between her legs and her ears back. The bear sniffed her than picked her up. She smiled
"I am Thunder"
she said and carried Fireworks back to her den. Fireworks smiled and cuddled up onto Thunder's chest. The next morning she was hungry and suckled from Thunder. "Her milk tasted different than mums" Fireworks though, and sighed. Thunder said to her
" Time to teach you how to fish"
Fireworks tilted her head but followed Thunder out of the Den. Fireworks ran through the water and nipped a fish. Thunder smiled
"Great! You already know how to fish"
Fireworks replied
" Yup, my mum taught me, but she never came back that night,when she left me...."
Fireworks sighed than walked into her "den". She curled up and fell into a deep sleep dreaming about that night, she felt like it was real, a nightmare come real.

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Re: Tough As Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby azalea » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:00 am

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I would like to adopt!
Number:
4 (four)
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Name: Libera
Species: Jungle Smili
Personality: She's very depressed, because of the recent loss of her entire family to an earthquake. Libera isn't sure if she has the will to live anymore. She loves her family, but can be very self-centered. She thinks that no one else in the world suffers as much as her. Libera might be right, but she doesn't know for sure and acts like she does. Because of the loss of her family (her most loved ones), she believes she can never love again. Her markings are stunning so she is quite wanted by many males, but she never accepts any of their love. Libera dislikes their pity for her and assumption that she is lucky to be alive.

She gets the yellow markings from her mother and also her fireyness and beautiful singing. Libera inherited her father's black-and-white markings, care and loving towards his family, and athletic skills (hunting and swimming).

She is quite unusual, as she does know how to swim and is quite proficient at it. She has abnormally short fur, inherited from her father, that does not mold as easy as usual smili fur. Also, the villagers use a secret oil secreted from the bark of the ginko on their bodies to protect against water. This oil is mainly used against rain, but Libera and her father used it to swim.

Likes: Not much anything anymore. She used to love rain; she enjoyed sitting on branches with her family waiting for the rain to stop...when she was little. The sound of rain was soothing back then.

She used to be fond of her markings, the stunning yellow and black, but now it doesn't matter as much to her. Vanity lost its value after the earthquake. It disappeared into nothingness, just like everything else did.

Dislikes: Now, she hates rain, especially the sound of it. It reminds her of those raining days. Her family happily sitting in the trees, playing and laughing. The memories are bittersweet. They hurt her heart with aches and pains of longing to be with her family.

She hates getting pity, and hates when people think she's lucky. Because she's not.

The Prince and his village betrayed her, for this she vows her separation from them.

Background: (Optional, but it gives you a better shot. 2500 words maximum, 100 words minimum. We value quality over quantity, you can have five pages and still say absolutely nothing.)

Author's Note: I thought I'd try a different style of writing of the background this time around. Personally, I think it's the best I've written in a long, long time...but I'm hoping it's enough to win Libera since the competetition is intense >.<

Anyway, thank you for including this application as a part of TaN. Please enjoy this story, I put 200% of my heart and soul in it. Thank you for working so hard. :3
WORD COUNT: 2,413 words ;0


Foreword

She is the princess of her village, and was sent over to a separate village to ally the two villages through becoming mates with their prince against her will. They only met once. When she heard her village was hit by the earthquake and a landslide, she abandoned him during the ceremony of bondage to go help her people. The Prince never held this accountable towards her, but his people did. They dislike her for abandoning her mate-to-be, as seen as an act of shaming their prince. The Princess was too late, most of the villagers suffocated under the sand and dirt immediately, others died from severe wounds moments later. She developed a hate for the people of The Prince's village. They did not help her try to save her people. She included the Prince in this hate as he did not help either. Truthfully, he was not allowed to go help by the elders. Although he snuck out, he was too late and found Libera's village empty and void of life. She does not know he snuck out to help her. She left the Prince's village and began a life of a loner.

She disconnected her ties with the world, and personally said to the Prince, "From this moment on, we are strangers. I don't know you. You don't know me."




Prologue

Rain. I hate the sound of rain. The rain never stops. If only to find cover, if only to forget myself and leave.

But the rain never stops.

The rain doesn't stop in my eyes. The rain doesn't stop in my heart.




The Story Begins...

My village in ruins. Ground cracked in deep-running gouges. Dead bodies beneath the rubble. My family suffocated immediately under the sliding mud, they said.
I ran. Away from the rain.


~ one month later ~


Dear Little Sis, Father, Mother, how are you up there? Are you doing well? I miss you both. I hope the hunting in heaven is plentiful. Please reply soon...


Why did you leave me here alone?




My thoughts.

It's raining in my eyes again.

"Hey YOU, MOVE!"

His voice drowned in my thoughts. I sat still. A faint crackle from the sky, the smell of mist.

It's going to rain soon.

I opened my eyes and began to run...

...away from the rain.

A fat rabbit hit my tail as I left, bludgeoned into a dazed shock. I glanced back momentarily, then turned to leave.

"Who do you think you are? You nearly killed this little fellow over here, and now he is suffering. You should kill your prey immediately. Even a little cub knows that."

I glanced back at the smili scolding me. He had a handsome face, sparkling green eyes, gorgeous face-mask and markings.

No doubt. It was him.

I turned to leave. He followed me.

"Look, I don't know who you think you are, but you have no right to kill this poor rabbit in a completely dishonorable way and then leave like nothing happened," he said confidently.

He remembered his promise at the very least.

"No right!? You know nothing about me! About my life! About my pain!" I yelled. "What right have you to scold me?! I didn't hurt it on purpose! it ran into me !"

He stared back at me with calm eyes.

"Everyone dies eventually," I said in a more quiet voice.

I left. He did not follow me.

~

Libera. My name. It's a stupid name. It's a stupidly perfect name, Mother replied when I told her that. It made sense to me. It still makes sense to me.

I can hear her singing. Her soft whispering, so sweet. Father used to say that she sang so sweetly, birds fainted at her feet. She's singing a lullaby, the one that she used to sing while she rocked us to sleep...when we were little.

It's raining again.



I ran again. Away from the rain.

Dear Mother, are you still singing that lullaby to Kamaria? I miss your voice. I miss your gentle paws and your sweet smile. I'm doing okay, how about you? Please reply soon. Your eldest daughter wishes she was with you.


~

Akiyama. That's his name. The smili that scolded me. He used to be a loner from the mountains, but he recently settled in the village near here. He's a prince now. He's a spoiled brat the same age as me. What would he know about my pain, my life? He thinks he knows everything...

He's following again, I can tell. He's not used to the short grasses of the coast yet. He's like a cub, stumbling around in the dirt not knowing where to hide.

He's not like Father.

Father was an expert hunter and swimmer. He was a soldier for the elders, a pawn for war. But he hated fighting. I remember when he tried teaching me how to swim. Smilis hate water. I was no exception. I hated him for making me go into the small pools near the coast and swim.

Our village uses oil from ginko trees as a waterproofer. We used it mainly for proteciton against rain, as water cause our fur to grow mold and get sick. Father used it to swim. He loved swimming, and he was superb at it. Females were lining up to just gawk at him when he was young.

I refused to swim. I hated the smell of the ginko oil and I hated water. He said I was too stubborn. One day, knowing how to swim would save my life. My resolve stayed firm.

It took me a year and a half to learn.


Then, when I was finally used to water and ginko oil, he taught me how to swim like the otters do. It was exhilarating. Spinning around in loop-de-loops, going faster and faster.

A whole different world was underwater. When it rained, we dived into the ocean and watched the rain create ripples above us.

Rain changes everything...


A ginko tree was split in half nearby. Lightning must have hit it recently. I smothered its oil over my body to remember the smell and my hatred of it when I was young.

I dived into the ocean as it began to rain, and watched the ripples above in the clear water.

Dear Father, can you hear me? I'm watching the rain from underwater, like we used to do. I counted the ripples. I counted seventy-eight ripples before I had to come back up. Are there pools up there where you are now? Does it still rain? I hope it does, and I hope you are having as much fun as me. Please reply soon. I miss you.

~

These past few days have been sunny. Perhaps even cruel fate has mercy.

I happened upon a smili cub. It was small, grey with vivid blue eyes. It looked just like my little sister. Rustling around the bushes, I found some blackberries and nudged them over to it. It ate quickly, scarfing the berries down, purple juice dripping down it's teeth.

It reminded me of the day me and Kamaria went berry-picking for the winter food stores. I was five, she was two. On our way back, we ate the berries. A purple berry juice trail was dripped onto the ground as we walked.

A death parade passed us on the road. A young smili's parents died the night before. The look on the cub's face was so empty, so listless.

Kamaria looked at me and said, "Did his parents leave him behind because they didn't love him?"

I stooped down to face her and replied, "No, they love him so he must live a good life for them." We smiled.


The young smili killed himself the week after, I didn't tell Kamaria.


When I looked back again, the grey cub was gone. Just like Kamaria.

"Kamaria is, I mean, would be seven today," I whispered to myself.

Rain drizzled down, masking my tears.

Dear Kamaria, happy birthday from your big sister. I hope Father finally made that feather necklace you wanted. You are seven today. Congrats. I'm not sure if you can hear me, but still. Today I saw a smili that looked exactly like you, I gave it berries as your birthday present. Symbolically. I remember they're your favorite. I'm sad because I can't celebrate your birthday with you. Please reply soon, I miss you.

~

I must have dozed off somehow.


"Kamaria? Is that you?" I said at faint, shimmering smili.

"Why didn't you help me, Libera? You promised to be there for me..." whispered Kamaria's ghostly voice.

"I-I tried, I tried to reach you in time..." I struggled through tears.

"You didn't. You could have saved us, daughter. If only you ran fast enough," Father said, appearing by her side.

"You weren't there to save us. We knew our princess could save us, but you failed," Mother whispered, appearing on Kamaria's other side.

The voices increased in size, and sound as the people of my village appeared before me.

"You weren't there."
"You failed."
"Why didn't you save us?"
"We believed in you."

"Stop! Please, please stop!" I pleaded, collapsing on the ground.

"You didn't try hard enough."
"You hate us, don't you?"

"No, no, I don't! STOP!" I cried through my tears.


My eyes opened. The villagers disappeared.

It was just a nightmare, but they sounded so real; refusing to stop tormenting me. Like the rain.

I dragged myself out of the rain and slowly cried myself to sleep.

Dear...Everyone, please don't hate me. I'm sorry for not reaching you in time. Please believe me, I tried my best. I love every single one of you. You are all a part of my family. Please reply soon. I miss you all.


~

Rain came down hard. A storm. I was forced to retreat to the trees and wait for it to pass.

I hesitated. In front of me was a great oak tree. It's gnarly roots were twisted up and formed a heart.

This was the tree that my family hid out in one night; Mother, Father, Kamaria, Grandma, Grandpa, and me. We were hunting together, and were about to leave for the village. Father and I picked up the scent of rain. We hurried on, thinking it would be light. But it was a great storm; we had to find cover, but we were to far from the village. The rain made it hard to see anything beyond our noses. I thought we were doomed. Then, Kamaria stumbled on one of the tree's roots. She had found the one and only tree in the entire stretch of prairie.

We camped out in this tree. Me and Kamaria chased each other through the branches. We sang songs with Mother as the lead. Father managed to find us blackberries and a sparrow. Grandma and Grandpa told us ancient stories and legends.

Our family laughed and danced, sang and ate. It was the best night of my life...


I climbed up the tree and sat on the thickest branch, where me and Kamaria sat once before. This oak tree was once a magnificent, beautiful tree. Now it was gnarly, old, and withering. The leaves crackled.

But still, it provided cover for me and protected against the wind and rain. Like my family did.


An incredible sadness swept over me, as I imagined my family, happy and laughing. The delicious berry juice dripping off our teeth, me and Kamaria bounding through the leaves. Grandpa and Grandma telling the amazing legend of Glatoran the Hero, Mother singing her sweetest lullaby as we fell asleep. All of our smiles twice as wide, as we waited for the rain to end.

The rain just wouldn't stop. It kept pounding down my happiness, my hopes, my dreams...

I ran. I ran towards my village. Towards my home. Just like that day.

~

A beach. I stopped. Waves crashing on the shore, relentless. I started walking into the ocean, further and further from the shore.

Dear Father, how are you? Kamaria is probably taking her nap. I went to visit our old tree yesterday. I sat on the branch where I sat that night, while I waited out the storm. You still haven't replied. I miss you. I wish I could see you. I wish I could hear your voice again. I wish I could be with you.

Waves crashed against my yellow and black fur. I let my tail drag on the water.

Dear Mother, how are you? I haven't talked to you in awhile. I hope you are happy in heaven. There must be lots of birds for you to sing to. Please reply. Also, talk to Dad for me, he still hasn't replied. I wish I could be with you and Dad and Little Sis and Grandma and Grandpa...

I didn't notice Akiyama hunting in the forest. He saw me walking into the waves and ran towards me.

Dear Everyone, how are you? No one has replied to me. Do you still hate me, for not reaching you in time? For not being the brave princess I was supposed to be? Have I failed in your eyes?



Do I...not deserve to live anymore?




"STOP!" he yelled and crashed into me.

We plummeted into the waves. I dragged myself out of the waves. Catching my breath, I bit into his tail hard and hoisted him out.

"Are you trying to kill me!? Crazy idiot!!" I yelled, and stomped off. My fur damp and dripping.

I hate the sound of dripping water. It drives me insane.

He started after me. "No, you're the crazy idiot. If you miss your family so much, then you should honor them and go on living well!"

Hate. Anger.

"How do you know about me?! No one from your village came to even look at them! No one bothered to pay their respects! It doesn't even matter that you know, because you know actually nothing about me! Stay out of my business," I shouted and walked away.

Away from the rain. Away from his words.

The arrogant prince followed me again.

"Wait..." he said.

I continued walking.

"One wish. Tell me one wish, one desire of yours and I'll fulfill it," he stuttered, desperate for my forgiveness.

I stopped and faced him.

"You want to know my sole desire?" I challenged him.

He nodded slowly.




"Free me from my hell."




**Footnote: Everytime in the story you see "~", it's a time skip about a day or so ;o

A picture you drew: OPTIONAL! This will only get you extra credit. You still have to write the rest of the form. COLORED IN LINEART IS NOT ACCEPTABLE. IT HAS TO BE ART YOU DREW FROM SCRATCH.


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A single tear flows over the eyelid as thoughts echo in my mind...


Why did you leave me here alone?
Rain changes everything...
Free me from my hell.

Do I...Not Deserve to Live Anymore?


Disclaimer: If I don't win Libera, this art will go to the new owner if wanted (via PM). I will remove the words in the background and the tear in this situation ^^
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