[Baby monster]

I. Hate. This.
This is my first Oekaki and first time using ChibiPaint.. And I don't like it. You can barley see any shading on it. I did do shading but you cant see. Naw well. Java won't install on my iPad so I suppose this is all I really have. A computer.
It's supposed to be a sun setting over a river, but it failed.
Crits and comments welcome.

[henley]

I wouldn't say it's terrible, and especially not for your first time Just keep practicing, it gets easier, I only use my computer and the more things I've drawn the more tricks I learn.

[wishbone!]

I wouldn't say it's terrible, and especially not for your first time Just keep practicing, it gets easier, I only use my computer and the more things I've drawn the more tricks I learn.

I agree completely ^^ It's not terrible at all, practice is the key to art.

[Ki05596]

YOU DARE CALL THIS TEERIBLE? THIS IS AWESOME! check my first oekaki out. its teerible compared to this lol

[Baby monster]

Thanks guys! I still don't really like it but its a start :3

YOU DARE CALL THIS TEERIBLE? THIS IS AWESOME! check my first oekaki out. its teerible compared to this lol

I looked at your first, and it's not bad at all! I like it ;D

[rabbit...]

I. Hate. This.
This is my first Oekaki and first time using ChibiPaint.. And I don't like it. You can barley see any shading on it. I did do shading but you cant see. Naw well. Java won't install on my iPad so I suppose this is all I really have. A computer.
It's supposed to be a sun setting over a river, but it failed.
Crits and comments welcome.

Don't worry, my first oekaki wasn't great either. The key to it is practice the more you practice the better you get. A couple tips is use smoothing, it makes your lines look well smoother. Use layers they help quite a bit, like leave one blank layer or make it your base background and then start your drawing on a different layer. One last tip is that the undo button is your friend! It undoes the last stroke you did.

[Baby monster]

I. Hate. This.
This is my first Oekaki and first time using ChibiPaint.. And I don't like it. You can barley see any shading on it. I did do shading but you cant see. Naw well. Java won't install on my iPad so I suppose this is all I really have. A computer.
It's supposed to be a sun setting over a river, but it failed.
Crits and comments welcome.

Don't worry, my first oekaki wasn't great either. The key to it is practice the more you practice the better you get. A couple tips is use smoothing, it makes your lines look well smoother. Use layers they help quite a bit, like leave one blank layer or make it your base background and then start your drawing on a different layer. One last tip is that the undo button is your friend! It undoes the last stroke you did.

Thanks for the tips! I already knew the bit with layers because I use them on my tablet but thank you! I'll be sure to use your tips next time!