{ INKLINGS } LOCK! NEW THREAD

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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby OfficialFun » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:13 pm

This poem is based on the theory of the big bang.



The Theory


Worlds collide.
Science to Fiction.
Cannot ease the unstable friction.
Myth to efficient.
Proclaiming your most valid decision.
Hypothesising the scientific reason.

Is it ok?
Tips are much appreciated.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Small Child » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:13 pm

I am amazing, am I not? //self, stop being a self-involved ass.
But- // No.
But-- //No.

But, good. I made you muse. Hooray!

I love that poem. It's beautiful. I love it. Seriously.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby OfficialFun » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:16 pm

Maerorem Lestrange wrote:I am amazing, am I not? //self, stop being a self-involved ass.
But- // No.
But-- //No.

But, good. I made you muse. Hooray!

I love that poem. It's beautiful. I love it. Seriously.


Awww thankyou <3
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Artesian » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:20 pm

@ Rem: Deeeeeep. (and so prettily said as well). *nod nod nod* I usually just consider myself an empiricist because it saves mental energy. I can write silly stories about mad-scientists and cyber-mafiosos instead of wondering if anything is real. ^-^

It is interesting to consider though - especially the consequences of the idea of alternate logical systems (such as eastern philosophy). The main evidence for traditional logic to be valid is how well it fits what we perceive reality as. The world that we live in seems true because it makes logical sense, and logic seems real because it fits neatly with reality. (In other words, reality seems real because it makes logical sense, and logic makes sense because it fits with reality.) Of course that's circular logic and not valid anyway. o.O And what if our senses can't be trusted, where does that leave us?

And that's where I say to heck with it all, I'm trusting my senses till further notice. xD

@ Totoro: Lovely poem. ^-^ The last two lines seem just a tad off, and I'm not sure why (not a poetry writer), but the rest of it is fantastic. (Also, the gif. Omg the gif. xD)
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Small Child » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:23 pm

I love you guys. You're all so great.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby abbie-sama » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:26 pm

*tearful hug time*
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby OfficialFun » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:27 pm

Artesian wrote:@ Rem: Deeeeeep. (and so prettily said as well). *nod nod nod* I usually just consider myself an empiricist because it saves mental energy. I can write silly stories about mad-scientists and cyber-mafiosos instead of wondering if anything is real. ^-^

It is interesting to consider though - especially the consequences of the idea of alternate logical systems (such as eastern philosophy). The main evidence for traditional logic to be valid is how well it fits what we perceive reality as. The world that we live in seems true because it makes logical sense, and logic seems real because it fits neatly with reality. (In other words, reality seems real because it makes logical sense, and logic makes sense because it fits with reality.) Of course that's circular logic and not valid anyway. o.O And what if our senses can't be trusted, where does that leave us?

And that's where I say to heck with it all, I'm trusting my senses till further notice. xD

@ Totoro: Lovely poem. ^-^ The last two lines seem just a tad off, and I'm not sure why (not a poetry writer), but the rest of it is fantastic. (Also, the gif. Omg the gif. xD)


Thankyou,
I have to agree with you about that.
I think the last line is probably fine it's just the second last line.
Later on today I will try and improve it.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Small Child » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:32 pm

Are we making this thread too emotionally gushy? To hell with it, I'm pretty sure I called all of you insane already. *Ugly crying* You guys make my life so much better! I love you! I love you so muuuuu-wwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Ok, I'll stop.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby mr.kingrichard » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:36 pm

Ugh, I literally have no inspiration to write today. Which is bad because I've missed my quota for the past like three days. Blech.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Artesian » Fri Jul 05, 2013 2:38 pm

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Mrrrr you guys just get it. Writing, I mean. It just. *hugs all around*
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