[Clara Erassari]

I wasn't lying when I said you had plenty of time. X3

[The Lost soul]

I know...but for me 1 month is really short because I have so much to do......


so, any suggestions? critique?( I need the critique on all of my entries)

[Clara Erassari]

Category 1: I love the wings and feathers, as well as her hair and little trinkets.
The skirt (just the skirt part; not the bow and ribbons) seems a bit out of place in contrast to the rest of the design. Maybe just keep the ribbons and bow, and add in some little trinkets?

Category 2: I love the overall design of this one.
My only suggestion is to maybe add some bracers, or put some kind of design on the legs?

Category 3: Love every bit of this one. eue"
Only suggestion is to add more pretty trinkets/feathers~ <3

And another request; give one of the female entries a little familiar? Kinda like Pina from Sword Art Online?

[The Lost soul]

kk,
I fixed the skirt thingy.... I'll be thinking about adding stuff, but my ideas are low.

[Clara Erassari]

Awesome, love it~ <3

Well, I can suggest a bit of armor on the arm of her wing, and maybe strands of gems/jewels/ribbons on her wings? And go through with that stocking/lace sock idea?

[The Lost soul]

there, the lines are done, but the design for it is a wip

[Clara Erassari]

Well, I love it~! <3

And if you do decide to do the little familiar, have it on this one would be my preference~ It seems there would be more room, too. ^^"

[The Lost soul]

what is a little familiar?

[Clara Erassari]

Hrm... It's kinda like how witches normally have little cats, normally black. That little companion is called a 'familiar'.

[The Lost soul]

Oooooooooooooooooooooohhhh.......okay!