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1st Entry by Faded Denim

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1st Entry

Postby Faded Denim » Thu May 02, 2013 8:38 am

Here is my first entry, hope you like it! Tell me anything you would like added or changed, and I plan on making another entry, so tell me any ideas you come up with for it as well.



Maybe we're like bottles
Drained or brimming full
Cracked or stained with alcohol
Dumped into a pool

Maybe we're like bottles
Hollow at our core
But filled with dreams and memories
Always spilling more

People seek to fill themselves
By means of blood and gore
They search within the see through depths
Steal what's at your core

And maybe that's why you don't see glass bottles anymore




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we are the collest crew. 8|
















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Re: 1st Entry

Postby Alkene » Thu May 02, 2013 9:43 am

I love it ^.^, but don't you have to keep the signature there? The lines don't belong to you.
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Re: 1st Entry

Postby Faded Denim » Thu May 02, 2013 10:00 am

KuroshitsujiLover<3 wrote:I love it ^.^, but don't you have to keep the signature there? The lines don't belong to you.

Thanks for telling me! I must have removed it by accident :o I will go add it now



Maybe we're like bottles
Drained or brimming full
Cracked or stained with alcohol
Dumped into a pool

Maybe we're like bottles
Hollow at our core
But filled with dreams and memories
Always spilling more

People seek to fill themselves
By means of blood and gore
They search within the see through depths
Steal what's at your core

And maybe that's why you don't see glass bottles anymore




--- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- ---
we are the collest crew. 8|
















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Re: 1st Entry

Postby battymidas » Thu May 02, 2013 1:21 pm

❤;; Very Nice!!
I love the colorssss :3
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