[username by me]

I will enter if I have time.

[DragonLoverHere]

Hey everypony! One final day to post entries. Remember, if not posted by tomorrow night, I will count it as invalid. Even if it's still WIP, post it! You will have until the 21st to finish and get final pointers

[username by me]

Username:
username by me
Cutiemark and Talent:
cutie mark is a yin-yang, talent is peacemaking.
she uses her talent mainly for stoping arguments, but also because she has this talent, animals such as birds and rabbits are not afraid to get close to her. No one is afraid to discuss thing with her, because they know that she will not get mad. It also is found that wen you are around her, you are always in a good mood, and if you aren't, she will always cheer you up.
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
mane and tail:
her mane and tail are light brown, her mane is always braided, and she has bangs that come down between her ears, with 2 dark brown horns poking out of the bangs, that are about the hight of the ears, and curl in at the tips. The tail is about the length of the hind legs, but it always flows in a low U shape behind the horse, often, the tail also has curly wisps that poke out when she is running. The mane and tail are also always on fire, the fire is bluer, and bigger when she is angry, she will never be burned by her own fire.
wings and feet:
She has 2 wings about al tall as her head, they are a darker mossy green. each wing has three "fingers" the "finger" closest to the back is the biggest, they get smaller closer to the top. the claw at the end of each finger is the same dark brown as the horns. on the top claw there is a feather on a string (see accessories). The feet are dragon claws with three toes per foot, they have the same claws as the the wings. The feet are also the same color as the wings.
Body and head:
Her body is mostly auburn and yellow. At he the feet however, there are 5 green tendrils on each leg that start on the foot. the legs are a yellow auburn that deepen into a dark auburn at the cutie mark, the front legs don't darken at the body. The body stays a dark auburn until the wing attaches to the body. There, there is a thin triangle of yellow with the base at the green wing, the yellow is blended into the green when the wing meets the body. The chest and neck area is the same color as the legs. The head is the same color as the legs across the eyes, the brim of the nose, and the forehead. The mussel ranges from white to black depending on the mood, white is super happy, black is furious. The right ear is dark auburn the left ear is yellow, there is blending between the ears and
the forehead.
Accessories:
1. She wears an eagles feather on a brown leather string on the top claw of the right wing. it will never fall off.
2. She wears a green, brown, and dark pink knitted shaggy scarf, she doesn't always wear this.
3. She has 3 earrings on the left ear, a wide red loop, a skinny, green loop, and a ball-shaped abalone shell earring.
4. the has a ted link charm bracelet with 5 charms, an eagles feather for swiftness, an emerald for beauty, a wolfs claw for courage, a shark tooth for strength, and a doves downy feather for love.

Suggested name (if any):
Jade, or possibly some other gem or shell.
Idealized History and Occupation:
not sure what to put here
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
sure
Other:
nope

[erin2019194]

Are we allowed to add different versions of our ponies after today?

[borahae.]

Did you count mine as an enrty????? i am woried that you didn't....

[DragonLoverHere]

Are we allowed to add different versions of our ponies after today?

Yes; that will be counted as entry touchups sorry that wasn't clear

Did you count mine as an enrty????? i am woried that you didn't....

... I KNEW I FORGOT TO DO SOMETHING! AGH!xc All entries will have a critique post from me soon and acknowledgement of validity; I promise.

[borahae.]

Ok! Thank you so much!

[borahae.]

When will this contest end today?? Or will it end today

[DragonLoverHere]

I'm sorry about how I poofed, everypony! A really chaotic week hit me when I was planning to get the critiques done and give you the chance to touch up those entries a bit. As such, I see it's called for that there is an extension in which you may get these adjustments done and finish WIPs. I am thinking to the end of the month minimum.

Today I will attempt to get to everybody who has not gotten a critique and give them one. In addition, I will give additional critiques to anyone who has changed their pony to match my comments upon request. Now please read the following reminders as the end date approaches.

- No new ponies will be permitted at this point. You may work on any you have posted here already as WIPs or adjust your ponies, but no entirely new entries

- You MUST have the form from the first post in your entry or it will not be valid! Minimum I require you to fill out the first three parts to the form, not that hard and it tells me about the pony enough. All who have not filled out a form will be PMed a notification.

- SINCE THE START, THE RULE HAS BEEN IF YOU DON'T NOTIFY ME THAT YOU WANT TO KEEP YOUR PONY IF IT DOESN'T PLACE, IT'S MINE. So in this period of touching up ponies, make sure you state in their posts whether or not you have this policy in mind for an entry. If this is not clearly stated by the date of judging, then the pony belongs to me no matter the ranking.

- If you have the above policy on your pony, and it makes honorable mention or below, then I may be interested in purchasing your entry! Just pm me or post if you want to sell, and I'd gladly make an offer! REMEMBER! This applies only if you stated before judging you want to keep if it doesn't place!

Now let's look at the offsite entries!

Username: Bast

Cutiemark and Talent:
A tribal design of a serpent with an angel and demon wing. Talent? I'm not so sure. Maybe the screech from a bird of prey that's enhanced to where if high enough it could built to much pressure in one's body and bust their eardrums and internal organs.... Or you could change it. XD

In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
It is a mixture of Dragon, bird of prey, and horse. (When converting to MLP, remove the hoof coloration and just continue the leg color.)
Mane and tail pieces are vivid purple with a tinge of pink, head is of a dragon (black w/electric green), body markings are also electric green. Neck "mane" is a golden with stray red strands like a bird of prey, the chest/shoulder area is also feathered but white with black mottling. The body coloration is that of a black tobiano and has a tail of a dragon. Eyes are slitted with inner color of green which blends out to gold. Has a "shooting star" scar on leg, another large, forked scar on the withers, and claw scars on tail.

Suggested name (if any):
I have no idea so you could play with this one.

Idealized History and Occupation:
Well heck if I know. You have a very big sketch for imagination here, especially when you have the scar history to play with. It's all up to you really. I'm not really into the MLP so for the occupation I'm really clueless. That's all left to you.

Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
Sure if I have the time at that moment. Just remind me that I was in your contest.

Other:

Link to full image.

Uploaded to my DA account. Please read the description. A reply to it would be appreciated (either on DA, here, or PM; whichever is fine). Also any feedback would be great.

Quote I'll repeat from DA description: "If this entry does not win I will keep it! Offers may be made for it after the competition."

A gorgeous entry; simply unique and outside of the box!I love the way you used colors to accent in tribal-like markings the figure or your creation. Simply phenominal, as it ties in so many special ideas and things I love. I can't find a single thing I would change, and for sure I want to buy if it doesn't end up winning

Entry.jpg

Entry.jpg

Username: karinaisab
Cutiemark and Talent: a blossom (not sure how to decribe it, you can do that yourself ^^) her talent is talking to the earth
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!): She is a dark green, with a brown and green flat mane. She is he size of an alicorn, but wit hno horns, and she has dragon wings instead of feathered ones.
Suggested name (if any): Terra.... -.-
Idealized History and Occupation: When Trra was little, she left to a forest. She had gotten lost, and she asked the earth to help her find a town. It did, and then she asked it to build her a house. It did. That was when she found out she could talk to the earth. (I'm really bad at these so forgive me for lack of intrest)
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference): Love to
Other: Nope...

You worked the colors of earth to your advantage with a simple yet interesting design. I especially like how you colored her mane and created a flower of your own. I also adore your idea of her being something of an Earth-speaker; it makes me think of tribal healers and the creations of the Earth, both of which intrigue me greatly. I could see a ton of story for her in my head, and I see a truly unique girl I'd love to have. Only recommendation is maybe try accessories of earthy-origins? Like feathers, leaves, etc. Give her a more fantastic feel. A dream catcher and bead necklaces might do this design well!

ok,I gave up drawing my entry on the computer. -_- Fortunaly,I have a camera,paper,and a pencil!<3
(Sorry for the odd coloring,I'm not that good at coloring things XD)





Username: Eeveeprincess01

Cutiemark and Talent: Though she has no cutie mark,ponies mistake her marking sometimes for her mark. She doesn't really have a talent,but she can speak to the dead.

In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!): Her scaly fur is Royal Purple,with golden Stripe patterns on her back legs and some on the tail,golden eyeliner. The symbol on her cheek,(witch sould be smaller X3) is the chinese symbol for for eternity. She is Tall and skinny,much like a Greyhound,and some of her ribs are showing. Her wings are Royal Purple and Gold,and can change form into feathered wings,but more like phoenix's wings than a normal pegasi's. Her tail,wich is like a dragon's,goes down to around her heel,and instead of a point like a normal dragon's tail,it is a puffy scruff of fur. Her mane is scruffy and medium lengh,dark-ish purple with gold fading in,as well as the tail fur. Her eyes are green,but she is blind. Her curvy-ish horns are gold. The light green orbs help her see and use magic. She has a ghost snake companion,(not shown though.) That's about it!<3

Suggested name (if any): Dragon's Shadow?

Idealized History and Occupation: Ok,need to think about this......so Wip?

Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference): Mabie!

Other:

Your color use is excellent and well planned for the best accents. I love your spin of using a special Japanese marking instead of a true cutiemark, and haven't seen anything like it before. Her mutations in general are adored, and she is a very intriguing character to be loved by anyone who has huge potential. I am so happy you scanned in your entry when Java wasn't working, because she is beautiful! I've totally got her on my tops list!

this is my entry
https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-9OX6 ... myPony.png

Well, I'm not one for pink, but you used it in a sort of cool way with the green. It makes her pop out like a rebel, and your accessory additions balance her out just right. You have some small mutations like those horns I see, and that only adds to her unique style in the contest. Sadly, I cannot count this valid until there is an accompanying form attached... Just fill that out, and in terms of design adjustment if it's not too much trouble or it affects her design, adjust the pink to a more purple-ish or magenta shade? If it would prove too difficult, then include in your form that her color is different than that But other than those two points, fantastic work! She's a stunner and caught my eye!

so.... finally my deviant Art account let me uplaod my finished entry =)
please let me know if there is anything I shall change/ edit to make it more to your taste =)

and here she goes:

Good mood:

Username:
die Lille
Cutiemark and Talent:
Lava Ball, Mentalist: she can read minds and control the feelings (fire in heart) of others
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
[color=#BF0000]her good mood skin is quiet simple (though I could add som acc. if you wish ^^): she has a natural base colour called Palomino with orange strand and highlights in her blond mane. I added some real horse marks such as a blaze and white socks and she has some bright eyeshadow ^^
she wears a dark red bandana which is holding back her wild mane.
Suggested name (if any):
Lhavinia
Idealized History and Occupation:
well, she was born to a very rich famliy, who'd have gladly seen her little princess grown up into a real lady.... but Lhavinia thought difference. She allways felt that she was different, beeing able not only to read somebodies mind but sometime even more hapaned: her wil seemed to influence the situation!
At the first moment she was scared about herself, grew shy and finally an outsider. But then she realized how much she could reach with this power!
Although she felt bad about influencing other ponies like that, she decided to work with dragons instead. These mighty magigal creatures are some natural menace to the population of ponies but they also intrested and fascinated Lhavinia ever since she learned to know about them. Using her mind power she is able to communicate with those dragons so that she could help alot by making her home more save.
One day she met an uncommonly strong dragon who told her an earthquaking story about her own family:
Lhavinias Mother was a member of a very old and mighty nobility, once feared not only for their powers and opulence but for their cruel nature: They used to fly and speak with the dragons (in these times a black treachery) and even more: become dragons themselfs when they got furious!
Lhavinia was shocked.... but after some time of thinking through the matter she thought ist not only possible but likely!
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
Other:
I'm very very busy so that there may be not enough time to become an artist. But it would be nice if there were the choice of becoming a quest artist =)

Bad mood

Username:
see above
Cutiemark and Talent:
floating and glowing lava ball
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
when she gets very furious or scared to death, Lhavinia changes into a kind of a dragon:
her coat colour turns into a greyish purple as does her mane and tail changing the strands into a wine (blood) red.
big dark dragon like wings grow out of her back, her teeth lenghten, a horn spears on her muzzle and a scale shell sprouts on her forehead.
beneath that her eyes change, too, into a deep red dragons eye!!
Suggested name (if any):
see above
Idealized History and Occupation:
see above
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
Other:
see above

Moment she was posted, Bam! I knew there was something special about her! She is such a simple pony, but you just touched in red and orange in all the right places to set her off with a rebel-peace flare. Her story in general captivates me, and it speaks out for a side of me that loves her change in character and skin when upset. Now don't get me started on her fury skin! The parts she grows take my breath away and are purely terrifying; I feel it really shows what happens when I get really upset.xD

Good luck, everypony! I am terribly sorry about the inconveniences.
DLH

[stxrdog]

I'm sorry about how I poofed, everypony! A really chaotic week hit me when I was planning to get the critiques done and give you the chance to touch up those entries a bit. As such, I see it's called for that there is an extension in which you may get these adjustments done and finish WIPs. I am thinking to the end of the month minimum.

Today I will attempt to get to everybody who has not gotten a critique and give them one. In addition, I will give additional critiques to anyone who has changed their pony to match my comments upon request. Now please read the following reminders as the end date approaches.

- No new ponies will be permitted at this point. You may work on any you have posted here already as WIPs or adjust your ponies, but no entirely new entries

- You MUST have the form from the first post in your entry or it will not be valid! Minimum I require you to fill out the first three parts to the form, not that hard and it tells me about the pony enough. All who have not filled out a form will be PMed a notification.

- SINCE THE START, THE RULE HAS BEEN IF YOU DON'T NOTIFY ME THAT YOU WANT TO KEEP YOUR PONY IF IT DOESN'T PLACE, IT'S MINE. So in this period of touching up ponies, make sure you state in their posts whether or not you have this policy in mind for an entry. If this is not clearly stated by the date of judging, then the pony belongs to me no matter the ranking.

- If you have the above policy on your pony, and it makes honorable mention or below, then I may be interested in purchasing your entry! Just pm me or post if you want to sell, and I'd gladly make an offer! REMEMBER! This applies only if you stated before judging you want to keep if it doesn't place!

Now let's look at the offsite entries!

Username: Bast

Cutiemark and Talent:
A tribal design of a serpent with an angel and demon wing. Talent? I'm not so sure. Maybe the screech from a bird of prey that's enhanced to where if high enough it could built to much pressure in one's body and bust their eardrums and internal organs.... Or you could change it. XD

In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
It is a mixture of Dragon, bird of prey, and horse. (When converting to MLP, remove the hoof coloration and just continue the leg color.)
Mane and tail pieces are vivid purple with a tinge of pink, head is of a dragon (black w/electric green), body markings are also electric green. Neck "mane" is a golden with stray red strands like a bird of prey, the chest/shoulder area is also feathered but white with black mottling. The body coloration is that of a black tobiano and has a tail of a dragon. Eyes are slitted with inner color of green which blends out to gold. Has a "shooting star" scar on leg, another large, forked scar on the withers, and claw scars on tail.

Suggested name (if any):
I have no idea so you could play with this one.

Idealized History and Occupation:
Well heck if I know. You have a very big sketch for imagination here, especially when you have the scar history to play with. It's all up to you really. I'm not really into the MLP so for the occupation I'm really clueless. That's all left to you.

Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
Sure if I have the time at that moment. Just remind me that I was in your contest.

Other:

Link to full image.

Uploaded to my DA account. Please read the description. A reply to it would be appreciated (either on DA, here, or PM; whichever is fine). Also any feedback would be great.

Quote I'll repeat from DA description: "If this entry does not win I will keep it! Offers may be made for it after the competition."

A gorgeous entry; simply unique and outside of the box!I love the way you used colors to accent in tribal-like markings the figure or your creation. Simply phenominal, as it ties in so many special ideas and things I love. I can't find a single thing I would change, and for sure I want to buy if it doesn't end up winning

Entry.jpg

Entry.jpg

Username: karinaisab
Cutiemark and Talent: a blossom (not sure how to decribe it, you can do that yourself ^^) her talent is talking to the earth
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!): She is a dark green, with a brown and green flat mane. She is he size of an alicorn, but wit hno horns, and she has dragon wings instead of feathered ones.
Suggested name (if any): Terra.... -.-
Idealized History and Occupation: When Trra was little, she left to a forest. She had gotten lost, and she asked the earth to help her find a town. It did, and then she asked it to build her a house. It did. That was when she found out she could talk to the earth. (I'm really bad at these so forgive me for lack of intrest)
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference): Love to
Other: Nope...

You worked the colors of earth to your advantage with a simple yet interesting design. I especially like how you colored her mane and created a flower of your own. I also adore your idea of her being something of an Earth-speaker; it makes me think of tribal healers and the creations of the Earth, both of which intrigue me greatly. I could see a ton of story for her in my head, and I see a truly unique girl I'd love to have. Only recommendation is maybe try accessories of earthy-origins? Like feathers, leaves, etc. Give her a more fantastic feel. A dream catcher and bead necklaces might do this design well!

ok,I gave up drawing my entry on the computer. -_- Fortunaly,I have a camera,paper,and a pencil!<3
(Sorry for the odd coloring,I'm not that good at coloring things XD)





Username: Eeveeprincess01

Cutiemark and Talent: Though she has no cutie mark,ponies mistake her marking sometimes for her mark. She doesn't really have a talent,but she can speak to the dead.

In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!): Her scaly fur is Royal Purple,with golden Stripe patterns on her back legs and some on the tail,golden eyeliner. The symbol on her cheek,(witch sould be smaller X3) is the chinese symbol for for eternity. She is Tall and skinny,much like a Greyhound,and some of her ribs are showing. Her wings are Royal Purple and Gold,and can change form into feathered wings,but more like phoenix's wings than a normal pegasi's. Her tail,wich is like a dragon's,goes down to around her heel,and instead of a point like a normal dragon's tail,it is a puffy scruff of fur. Her mane is scruffy and medium lengh,dark-ish purple with gold fading in,as well as the tail fur. Her eyes are green,but she is blind. Her curvy-ish horns are gold. The light green orbs help her see and use magic. She has a ghost snake companion,(not shown though.) That's about it!<3

Suggested name (if any): Dragon's Shadow?

Idealized History and Occupation: Ok,need to think about this......so Wip?

Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference): Mabie!

Other:

Your color use is excellent and well planned for the best accents. I love your spin of using a special Japanese marking instead of a true cutiemark, and haven't seen anything like it before. Her mutations in general are adored, and she is a very intriguing character to be loved by anyone who has huge potential. I am so happy you scanned in your entry when Java wasn't working, because she is beautiful! I've totally got her on my tops list!

this is my entry
https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-9OX6 ... myPony.png

Well, I'm not one for pink, but you used it in a sort of cool way with the green. It makes her pop out like a rebel, and your accessory additions balance her out just right. You have some small mutations like those horns I see, and that only adds to her unique style in the contest. Sadly, I cannot count this valid until there is an accompanying form attached... Just fill that out, and in terms of design adjustment if it's not too much trouble or it affects her design, adjust the pink to a more purple-ish or magenta shade? If it would prove too difficult, then include in your form that her color is different than that But other than those two points, fantastic work! She's a stunner and caught my eye!

so.... finally my deviant Art account let me uplaod my finished entry =)
please let me know if there is anything I shall change/ edit to make it more to your taste =)

and here she goes:

Good mood:

Username:
die Lille
Cutiemark and Talent:
Lava Ball, Mentalist: she can read minds and control the feelings (fire in heart) of others
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
[color=#BF0000]her good mood skin is quiet simple (though I could add som acc. if you wish ^^): she has a natural base colour called Palomino with orange strand and highlights in her blond mane. I added some real horse marks such as a blaze and white socks and she has some bright eyeshadow ^^
she wears a dark red bandana which is holding back her wild mane.
Suggested name (if any):
Lhavinia
Idealized History and Occupation:
well, she was born to a very rich famliy, who'd have gladly seen her little princess grown up into a real lady.... but Lhavinia thought difference. She allways felt that she was different, beeing able not only to read somebodies mind but sometime even more hapaned: her wil seemed to influence the situation!
At the first moment she was scared about herself, grew shy and finally an outsider. But then she realized how much she could reach with this power!
Although she felt bad about influencing other ponies like that, she decided to work with dragons instead. These mighty magigal creatures are some natural menace to the population of ponies but they also intrested and fascinated Lhavinia ever since she learned to know about them. Using her mind power she is able to communicate with those dragons so that she could help alot by making her home more save.
One day she met an uncommonly strong dragon who told her an earthquaking story about her own family:
Lhavinias Mother was a member of a very old and mighty nobility, once feared not only for their powers and opulence but for their cruel nature: They used to fly and speak with the dragons (in these times a black treachery) and even more: become dragons themselfs when they got furious!
Lhavinia was shocked.... but after some time of thinking through the matter she thought ist not only possible but likely!
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
Other:
I'm very very busy so that there may be not enough time to become an artist. But it would be nice if there were the choice of becoming a quest artist =)

Bad mood

Username:
see above
Cutiemark and Talent:
floating and glowing lava ball
In Depth Design Description (down to the last accessory!):
when she gets very furious or scared to death, Lhavinia changes into a kind of a dragon:
her coat colour turns into a greyish purple as does her mane and tail changing the strands into a wine (blood) red.
big dark dragon like wings grow out of her back, her teeth lenghten, a horn spears on her muzzle and a scale shell sprouts on her forehead.
beneath that her eyes change, too, into a deep red dragons eye!!
Suggested name (if any):
see above
Idealized History and Occupation:
see above
Do you hold any interest in becoming a QUOTE Character artist? (just to know for future reference):
Other:
see above

Moment she was posted, Bam! I knew there was something special about her! She is such a simple pony, but you just touched in red and orange in all the right places to set her off with a rebel-peace flare. Her story in general captivates me, and it speaks out for a side of me that loves her change in character and skin when upset. Now don't get me started on her fury skin! The parts she grows take my breath away and are purely terrifying; I feel it really shows what happens when I get really upset.xD

Good luck, everypony! I am terribly sorry about the inconveniences.
DLH

so all i need to do is fill out the entry form?
and also i was wondering if i could make a second entry i finally got java to work