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[Lily Benet]

I maybe be confusing the people on The Agency Account, but I have gotten home early so I'm posting this form. I'm typing the other half now. If it's not done, don't read the second half. Count the first half and second half as finished, please.

Pet's ID Tag: 27
Name You'd Choose for It:
Kinya (kin-ya)
Gender:
Female
Special Abilities:
Shape Shifting; Kemonomimi, Quad, and Human
Reason You Want It:
When I set eyes upon her, my mouth dropped open. It was one of my incredible moments when I'm so in love with something/someone, I'm paralyzed just staring at it/them. This design is so beautiful I've already started my form before the character was even put up. (Miracle for me, I'm a procrastinator!) I'm determined to finish my form this time.
History/Background/Other:

My Story

First Half

I was a damsel in distress...
But maybe that doesn't apply to me. Maybe it's because I'm only a horse. But you know, horses aren't that stupid. I mean, in Nisha, you have elves and werewolves running around like little idiots playing iBattle. Sure, you're wondering how me, a weird talking horse, knows about all your gadgets and knickknacks. Let me clarify some facts; yes, I don't live on Earth. Earth is dried up magic. Think of dead dirt. (Isn't dirt dead anyway?) Yes, I'm a talking, walking, and living horse. I'm not one of you imaginary talking ghosts. In Nisha we have real ghosts. I don't fly. I mean, if you could see me when I'm writing this, you'd know... or do you know.... stalker! I knew it! That's why your being so inquisitive!

Right, so I said I was a damsel in distress. Well... maybe I wasn't... (You say: "Aren't you going to go into a king-sized conversation about another reason your not exactly a damsel in distress? This is getting boring. Now get on with it!") Humph! Be that way. So, I was saying that I was some degree or extent of a damsel in- (You say: "Your doing it again!") Whoops, sorry! (Hehehe...) Now, don't interrupt me even if it sounds like I'm going into a lengthy debate.

This saddens me to even speak of what I have gone through, but it is needed for your generation. I was a young thing then, only in my early teens when I fell in love. I know what you're thinking; that I'm stupid to fall in love so young! But in my species, we must fall in love early-or else. I wasn't forced to, I just did. I mean, if this guy has been staring at you for four years, what are you supposed to do? It's like a trick. So what I liked him? Deal with it! You've had your childhood crushes! (You retort:"You're getting off topic again!") Look buddy, if you're going to spam this epic story up with comments, why don't you leave! Look what you've done now! Not I'm going to have a contagious mean mood! Argh!

So he and I got together and dated till we were eighteen. He was asked to join the war. I pleaded with him to stay... but he wanted to earn a name for us. He loved me, and wanted to make me happy. He believed I would be happy when he came back with enough money to support a whole family. He didn't come back.

It was devastating...

We never had that family or money, but I didn't care. All I wanted was him and me to stay together. (You say: "... That brings tears to my eyes..." Sincerely.) -I'm going to ignore that- I didn't get that. I didn't get him. The war had involved to much magic. In the battle that my friend died was the last. Too much magic had been released and it was devastating. Everyone except the wielder of that magic was killed. They found the wielder hunched over one of the warriors, crying. They had called her Sliver, and she had put the end to that war. Her hair became colorless from the amount of magic she had used. He eyes had turned purple by the time she released it. The scouts pulled her away from that warrior. They have given several different accounts when I interviewed them. (You say: "So now you're a detective?” You chuckle at your incredible wit.) Yes, I tried to figure out what really happened. The men seemed confused. The only person that could be relied on was Sliver herself. But because she was now the head of the Council, no one was able to interview her. But I was. I used my Kemonomimi form when I finally achieved my goal to interview her. These are the quiz questions:

Kinya (Me): What really happened at the battle?

Sliver: Do I have to talk about it. It saddens me to even think of it. Many innocent lives were taken that day.

Kinya (Me): *Grumbles* Like my boyfriend. Sliver, do you remember why we’re here? You must answer all and any of my questions.

Sliver: Of course I do. *Raises eyebrows* What do you take me for?

Kinya (Me): Let me ask that question again. What really happened at the battle?

Sliver: Well, Lets see what I can do for you. *sigh* The day was bright and sunny. -It seems like the best days are often the worst, correct?- When I came across the battle it had been raging for several days. I watched the tide turn during those days-

Kinya (Me): What did you eat?

Sliver: Ever heard of magic? May I continue?

Kinya (Me): Yes. *cough*

Sliver: Finally I intervened. I mean... it's hard to say in words. I didn't want to intervene. I want to help, but not end the battle. A Divine Spirit must have entered me. I had used little power, and much was stored up. With the Divine's power and mine put together, it was overpowering. It was suggested in a gentle manor to pull out my sword and go to the center of the battle. The Dive didn't force me too, merely suggested it. But suggesting it was enough, plus, I already wanted to. So I fought my way to the center. I released the power into a element of immediate death, so no one would feel anything. The Divine had suggested that too. Then the Divine left me, consoling me of what I had done. It said that it had to happen, or more lives would be lost. Then I bent over a warrior laying infront of me.

Kinya (Me): ...The witness (that are alive) have very different options of how this warrior looked. Do you know why? And what did he look like?

Sliver: They probably forgot because of the leftover magic floating around. The warrior was in Kemonomimi form, a horse. He was dapple grey and wore a blue crystal on his neck...

Kinya (Me): Do you remember if the crystal had any engravings on it?!?

Sliver: Yes, something like this:


Kinya (Me): *Eyes get teary* Do you-do you... know what happened next?

Sliver: Yes. When my tears fell on him, his chest heaved, and then he opened his eyes and looked into mine. It sent healing magic into to him, and he nodded to me. He whispered,"Find her, and tell he that I live." His voice was whispery, faint. I nodded and sobbed my heart out. Then they took me away. I visited the site the next day. I went and stood where I had released the magic. There was a slight indention at my feet. The Kemonomimi had lived and left. I've been searching for her... but no one has known of the crystal...

Kinya (Me): *sobs and throws arms around Sliver* He was mine! I'm "her"! He's alive!

Sliver: *pats* Kinya's back* It's okay you've found him. One minute. Stay here. *Sliver tears herself away from Kinya* Stay. *She exits room for a little bit and brings back a Kemonomimi*

Kinya (Me): Jezah! Your okay!

Sliver: *Turns away. After a couple of seconds, coughs*

Kinya (Me): Sorry.... *Stares into Jezah's eyes*

Jezah: Sorry... I'm so happy...


Ahem... are you okay? (You say:"Go look in a mirror!" You rub the tears out of your eyes.) But that's not the end. I have more. Much more....

Second Half

Now, I guess you can say I'm a detective. I mean, now I'm employed to find people who are lost in the war. I've also have had a couple to the frantic mothers run to me to find there kids. And their kids are sitting on their doorstep. But back to the subject –you see? I am getting better at this!-. It’s pretty gruesome, as sometimes I’ll find myself grave digging. But recently, I got tangled up into an even bigger mess.

I was sitting in my office, flipping through some pages that belong to someone other than me, when a blue haired youth walked in. I had bad feelings just looking at him. You could tell he was a dark elf by the shadows under his eyes, and the shifting shadow the followed him. His eyes were read rimmed and shifty. I would have normally stood up and commanded the person to walk back out, pointing to the CLOSED sign on the window. But this one gave me the jeevies. I merely stood and pointed to the CLOSED sign on the door. But he walked over and sat down onto the chair next to me and beckoned for me to sit down. I stood, and opened my mouth to shout at him to get out. Before I could, he stuck his hand into him bag and moved it around. The bitter aroma of spell packets from the mountains rose from the bag, and I adbuply realized I really should listen to what this kid has to say, and do it as fast as I can. So I sat down.

“What do you want?” I asked him sharply.
His voice came out in a miss-used rasp, “I want you to find some one.”
“Who?” My temper was rising, and a dangerous edge some how wormed it’s way into my voice.
“Take the edge out of your voice.” His voice came out in a hiss, “I may look young, but I am old as your dear Sliver…” I shifted in my seat. If what he was saying true…then he was the…no, he couldn’t be.
“Your thoughts are true” he leaned in closer and I could smell the rank of his very skin,”I only tell you this so I do not need to used my packets. His hand reached back into the bag he carried, and he grinned unconsciously. I felt like I would barf. (But of course I can’t, I’m a horse!)
“I need a favor. Find this person, and I will never bother you or your family again. I looked down, staring at the picture, my eyes widened as I realized who it was. I looked up to protest, but he was gone.

I was in total chaos after that. Should I find Sliver? How could I? I knew the answer to the second question; I couldn’t. She had been locked into one of the tall oaks by another Dark Elf, Scarlet. Scarlet had escaped, and no one knew where the tree was. So, I thought, should I go around knocking on oaks and wait for a knock back? So I tried it to no avail. But I used other resources. I didn’t find the tree, but the forest. And then he visited me again.

“Have you found her?” The voice hissed out of no where, as he had shadow traveled. I jumped a couple feet in the air. Then I gave in and told him where she was.

“Ezra Forest, the North Side. I do not know the tree. It was a blue oak, with gnarled branches."
"That's it?" His voice took on a soothing, but unseating tone.
"Yes."
"Really..." He abruptly pulled out a large blue stone.
"What is tha-" I started a question, but the line dropped off as I gazed at the stone.
"Anything else?" He asked. My mind worked franticly, trying to hold off the spell.
"No." I said it. It was the truth. But I still didn't want to give in. But I had. Then he fled back into the shadows.

I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

The pm from Limith. Just in case. ^-^

[keydemon]

Pet's ID Tag: 74
Name You'd Choose for It: Sardonyx (Sarron)
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: He's got an amazing and unique design. I know Akami-Chan says she wants us to draw him often, but my scanner is not working right, so I'd only be able to put uncolored sketches up for now. :/ Either way, I'd definitely get art of him from art shops and stuff and I'd write about him a lot. He'd fit perfectly in with Fever and the team. Although, I don't want to alter his design, so I might not make him wear a ninja headband. ^^;; I've never heard of anyone who had a ribbon eel/wolf hybrid character, and he's just awesome. I want him because of his design and story potential. :3
History/Background/Other:

Ninja Status and Abilities:
Loyalty: The Village Hidden in the Coral (For Now!)
Taijutsu: Good in Water, Weak on Land
Genjutsu: Weak/Moderate
Ninjutsu: Good
Jutsus:
Summoning Jutsu (Summons his ancient, bewitched scimitar called Mizukiar.)
Water Twin Jutsu (Creates an exact copy of himself from the water, though, the clone has four legs and no tail. Copy of Mizukiar comes with it.)
Water Binding Jutsu (Allows Sardonyx to melt his molecules into the water.)
Eel Mimicry Jutsu (Turns Sardonyx into a giant, fanged electric eel, though, it's usually used as a last resort because it pushes Sardonyx to his limits.)
Washdown Jutsu (Summons a huge amount of rain to flood the area and wash Sardonyx and his allies of any nasty conditions such as poison.)
Level of Ninja: Jounin (Highest ranking besides Shikage.)

Sardonyx's Personality:

Sardonyx is confident and cocky, always looking for a challenge. He's an extremely good liar and can look you right in the eye and lie; no indication of lying present. He likes to make bets with his friends and has been known to have a habit of gambling. Though, he refers to it as "A friendly wager." He's often seen with a smirk plastered on his face. Sarron is ruthless and extremely coldhearted towards enemies. If he doesn't know them, or they aren't a member of his village, he won't make a move to help them. However, Sarron is known to have a soft side.

Sardonyx's History:

Sardonyx was born a wolf with a beautiful, deep red coat. This is where he got his name. He lived in a strange pack who were known to inhabit the jungles of Southeast Asia. They were tribal wolfs, who usually wore feathers in their fur and used berries and other vegetation to mark their fur for their pack. These packs were ancient and undiscovered by humans. Sardonyx's pack was the Solargem Pack. They lived in a part of the jungle where the trees twisted and twined perfectly to send the sun illuminating the jewels that encrusted the rocks of the jungle. No human dared venture here because of the density, dangerous plants and animals and the fact that it was too far to travel without unimaginable amounts of supplies. What was unknown, humans feared. That's how it worked back then. Yes, back then. As technology advanced, human curiosity did also. The humans discovered that mysterious red wolves inhabited the Solargem Pack's territory. Also, there were precious stones there. They burned the foliage and tore away the earth for its gems. And what of the wolves? Many were poached for their red pelts, others fled, only to die of starvation or be attacked by other animals. Some joined the humans willingly, becoming fighters for profit or put in zoos. Sardonyx was the most unlucky. What could be worse than death? The lab. Upon trying to flee with his family, Sardonyx was captured. None of his family survived except him. In the lab, he was studied, the humans interested in the strange behaviors that the Solargem Pack had. The feathers twined in his tail, the berry juices that decorated his fur, the gemstone studs that he wore in his ear. Everything was taken from him. The feathers yanked from his tail, leaving bald patches. The berry juices smeared and washed away. The gemstone studs ripped out and sold. All that was left of Sardonyx was a quivering red wolf, he was no longer a member of the Solargem pack. Improperly fed, never exercised, Sardonyx suffered. His rippling muscles faded away in to skin and bones. His once proud figure was now bony, coat dull and doubled over because of the cramped cage. The only sounds that escaped him now were whines. One ear was ripped away into almost nothingness because of all of the sparkling gemstone studs it once held. Sardonyx was eventually studied to the fullest extent the humans could come to. They didn't get much from him. Now, he was truly useless, he had no place in the world. Unfortunately, the humans didn't kill him then and there, they had other cruel plans for him. One day, Sardonyx was pulled from his cage and put into a strange enclosure made of glass. Above him, a strange ray hung, next to him was another glass enclosure, identical to the one he sat in. In the middle of the two enclosures was another one, but it was empty. In the second one swam a strange creature. A ribbon eel. Sardonyx's heart rate increased tenfold, he whimpered and clawed at the glass in vain. Suddenly, everything felt small. He felt small, this cage felt small, cold sweat poured through his fur. The cold hard floor pressed against his paw pads. The world spun and with a howl, the ray flashed. Everything was black. When he blinked his eyes open again, everything was blurry. Soon, his senses woke and he found, he couldn't feel his back legs! Looking down, he noticed he was swimming in water and his red fur was now... blue?! Waggling his tail experimentally, he found that that manuver moved far more than just a tail. His heart practically leaped into his mouth as he realized what had happened. They had fused him with that ribbon eel. He was no longer a wolf, he wasn't even an eel, he was... a freak of nature. Outraged at what the humans had done to him, he thrashed his whole body, breaking the enclosure he was in. Any human who tried to grab him was viciously bitten or whacked with his huge tail. Soon, he escaped, but his skin was drying. He could breathe, but he found that he needed to stay wet in order to live. Without another thought, he escaped into the nearby Pacific Ocean. Sardonyx was utterly lost and hopeless, he had no idea what to do. His old pack was dead, and even if some still lived in the jungles, there was no way that they would accept him like this. Tears overtook him and he allowed himself to sink to the bottom of the ocean, crying and sobbing. His body was racked with pain as well as his heart. He wanted to just lie there and die. Little did he know, he was surrounded by glowing coral. A figure swam up to him and tapped him on the shoulder. His head flew up in astonishment as he noticed it was another wolf! It was holding its breath and pointing towards the coral. Sardonyx figured it wanted him to follow it. They swam through a tunnel of coral and up to the surface. Again, a wave of surprise and awe washed over him. There was a whole village down here in this cavern of coral. The wolf smiled at him. "Welcome, to the Village Hidden in the Coral."
From then on, he became a ninja of the Village Hidden in the Coral. They discovered many hidden jutsu talents that he possesed, including the potential to wield their ancient, sacred blade, Mizukiar.

Why Sardonyx Joined the Village Hidden in the Herbs:

The wind whipped through Fever's fur and made her eyes stream with tears as she and Scout soared through the air on Virus's back. The two ninjas had been sent to find an enemy ninja named Sardonyx. Sardonyx was said to have private information regarding the Village Hidden in the Herbs. This ninja was from the enemy village, the Village Hidden in the Coral. Fever knew it wouldn't be easy trying to find this place, it was at the bottom of the ocean!
"Hey!" Scout's meow snapped Fever out of her thoughts.
"What?" Fever called over the howling wind. Virus was flying so fast, it made hearing difficult.
"I see the ocean, stop daydreaming and tell Virus to land!" Scout yelled as loud as his little lungs would allow him. Scout recently became a ninja, though his skills were great, he still had a lot to learn. Plus, his body and muscles, as well as jutsus were still developing. The salty tang hit Fever's tongue as she opened her mouth to instruct Virus, they were definitely where they needed to be.
"Virus, let's go down!"
"Gruu!" Virus called back, unable to speak in words. Fever flattened herself down on the dragon's head as they spiraled down to the ground. They landed with a thump on the beach, sand spraying everywhere from the impact.
"Bleh!" Scout exclaimed, spitting, "Virus, you got sand in my mouth!" the little lion growled.
"Come on, Scout, let's move it." Fever said, jumping down from her dragon's back. The two ninja walked catiously up to the edge of the beach where the waves crashed, soaking their paws.
"I don't want to go in the water." Scout whined, obviously he knew that the village was in the middle of the ocean too.
"I don't either..." Fever admitted, she'd never been a very good swimmer. Thinking fast, Fever leaped onto one of the great stones that overlooked the ocean, careful not to slip on its damp surface. "Sardonyx! Show yourself you coward!" She yelled.
"Ha. That kind of thing only works in movies." Scout grimaced, plopping down in the drier sand. Fever winced, she knew he was probably right.
"Virus, can you roar?" Fever tried, knowing his huge roar could be heard almost anywhere. The huge dragon nodded and took a deep breath. Both Scout and Fever pressed their paws to their ears and squeezed their eyes shut.
"GRROOOOHH!" Virus roared, the huge sound shaking the leaves on the nearby trees. Fever opened her eyes and looked into the water hopefully. Her heart leaped when she saw the water rippling.
"Scout, get ready!" the fox called as she jumped off of the rock to stand beside her friend. They stood, side by side, crouched in battle position. Though, what broke the surface confused them both. "Wh-What are you?" Fever stuttered.
"What am I? I'm Sardonyx, Jounin of The Village Hidden in the Coral." the eel-like wolf replied with a smirk.
"Jounin." Scout hissed, I understood his worry, this wouldn't be easy. Fever cleared her throat to prevent her voice from shaking as she spoke,
"Sardonyx..." she began, though the strange wolf just floated there and smirked at her like this was no big deal, "I recieved information that you know a secret of the Village Hidden in the Herbs. Is that true?" Fever knew that they would have to take him prisoner, they couldn't defeat him... They were only two genin.
"So what if it is, my dear?" he growled, swimming closer to the shore, "What's it to you?"
"I'm Fever, a ninja from the Village Hidden in the Herbs, I've come to take you prisoner." Fever growled back, her fur beginning to fluff up.
"Heh, yeah right, little fox. You know just as well as I do that you can't take me." Fever's ears lowered a bit, he spoke the truth.
"Fever, don't listen! He's just trying to psyche us out!" Scout yowled, beginning to make hand signs. Fever knew those, it was his arc summoning, he must've bit his paw when she wasn't looking. When her attention flicked back to Sardonyx, she noticed he was making hand signs too. Oh great. Fever bit her toe, causing blood to trickle out. Quickly, she made the hand signs for her summoning jutsu. All at once, the three animals shouted,
"Summoning Jutsu!" As soon as the smoke cleared, the result was evident. Sardonyx held a huge scimitar in his mouth, Scout had his giant ancient bow and in front of Fever sat her other dragon, Ren. Immediately, Ren disappeared.
"Aww!" Fever groaned, obviously Ren didn't want to be involved in this, that was a sign that this guy had water jutsu.
"You and your useless reptiles." Scout grumbled, setting an arrow into his bow. Fever threw Scout a glare, then noticed that their foe was laughing.
"Cute, cute." he mumbled through his blade, clapping his paws together. "Look, little genin, I'll strike you a deal. If you impress me, then I'll come with you."
"We'll do more than impress you!" Scout roared, releasing his arrow. Fever held her breath, Sardonyx made no move to dodge the arrow.
"Ninja art, water binding jutsu!" Sardonyx barked. Both Scout and Fever gasped as the wolf melted into the water. Literally, melted. The arrow whisked by harmlessly.
"What the heck?" Scout hissed, making more hand signs. "Ninja art, eagle eye jutsu!" Scout's eyes shined, then took on a golden glow. His eyes suddenly grew wide with shock.
"What is it, Scout?" Fever yelled.
"He's... He's dissolved into the water!" Scout gasped.
"What?!" Fever leaped forward, throwing a kunai knife into the water.
"It's no use, I- OW!" Scout yelped, he flew by Fever, running into the stone behind her. His bow fell and he lay there, motionless. Fever's breathing became rushed and shallow as she looked over her shoulder. An exact copy of Sardonyx was making its way towards Fever, scimitar and all. What now...?
(I ran out of time! D; To be continued...)


Fun Facts:
-His name/jutsu was inspired by Kingdom Hearts. I was trying to think of a name for him and was making his form, but I couldn't think of a name. Instead of sitting at the computer and staring at the screen, I went downstairs and started playing Kingdom Hearts II. There's this one accessory called a sardonyx ring, (sardonyx, I soon found out after looking it up, is a type of gemstone) and I was equipping it to Sora. Originally, I thought it was a "Sarondyx" ring, not a "Sardonyx" ring, so I wanted to name him Sarondyx and make his nickname Sarron. Well, I looked it up to be sure I was spelling it right and I found out it was actually called Sardonyx. Well, I wanted to change the name to Sardonyx, so I wouldn't sound like an idiot, but I still liked the nickname Sarron. So, I decided to change the name and keep the nickname. Also, I was trying to think of an awesome jutsu for him in my story. I was on the Agrabah Level (Aladdin) in Kingdom Hearts and Aladdin has a scimitar that he fights with, so I thought I'd let Sarron wield a bewitched scimitar for his best power. Hehe.
-"Mizu" is Japanese for water, which is where part of the name for his scimitar came from. Mizukiar. -kiar just sounded cool, so I threw it in there.
-Sarondyx is a higher level ninja than Fever. (My fursona.) x3
-I just wrote Sarondyx instead of Sardonyx. This is going to get confusing. xD

I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it. Yes. <3

((Wow, if only I could work this hard in school. -_-;;))
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Am I too late for the code drop? D; I hope not. -Just got back from vacation.-

[Lirrie]

Creature's Name: None
Image:



Code:

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Preferences:

Name her
love her

thats all I ask
oh and let me know if you got her


Link Art Link:
http://horseangel.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2n14mc
Did you originally adopt this design here, and if yes what did you name it?

[Jaded'Eclipse]

Pet's ID Tag: Kennel #103
Name You'd Choose for It: Lucias
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: I would want this creature as he would make an absolutely perfect mate for my fursona, I've been looking for ages for an animal like him.
History/Background/Other: He was the son of the God of Limbo. He was bannashed to the human world for killing a servant and because of this he cannot die.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

[Veggievampire]

Pet's ID Tag: Kennel #103
Name You'd Choose for It: Lucias
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: I would want this creature as he would make an absolutely perfect mate for my fursona, I've been looking for ages for an animal like him.
History/Background/Other: He was the son of the God of Limbo. He was bannashed to the human world for killing a servant and because of this he cannot die.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

You really need to work on that history. Look at what you're up against, with what you put there, you have no chance. ^^;
Oh and it's banished, not bannashed :3 (Just trying to help ^^)
This story sounds intriguing so I hope you do bulk it up and finish it :3

[Acaica]

Gah! finally done! Hope I made it in time! :3

[Nawee]

I'll try to do the code-drop today, but I can't promise anything. It may be the last time I can do it on the weekend too as I start working next week.

[~Rachy~]

I've finally completed my form to the best of my ability.

Don't worry Nawee, I don't mind waiting, and I'm sure everyone else doesn't either.

Good luck with work

[Lirrie]

I'll try to do the code-drop today, but I can't promise anything. It may be the last time I can do it on the weekend too as I start working next week.

Well worth the wait so dont worry nawee.

Pet's ID Tag: Kennel #103
Name You'd Choose for It: Lucias
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: I would want this creature as he would make an absolutely perfect mate for my fursona, I've been looking for ages for an animal like him.
History/Background/Other: He was the son of the God of Limbo. He was bannashed to the human world for killing a servant and because of this he cannot die.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

You really need to work on that history. Look at what you're up against, with what you put there, you have no chance. ^^;
Oh and it's banished, not bannashed :3 (Just trying to help ^^)
This story sounds intriguing so I hope you do bulk it up and finish it :3

Veggie Im sorry but I found you comment a little harsh wether its true or not, XD Its the part were you said With what you up against and what you put you stand no chance I found harsh XD. Lol I would have just said you may wanna bulk your form up because you do have competition. But thats just my opinon.

[June Bug]

aw, fudge, I forgot to add the not your fursona/fursona's mate thing. >__< Is there any way I could get that added? It's kind of a big one for me, though Being so close to code drop, I don't think it'll matter much.