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[Lirrie]

ok guys round is over ima have someone judge it please be aware if you didnt finish or put little effort that what will be judged

[Lirrie]

any other judges aalive?

[SukarettoYanagi]

Round closed?! ;n;
I couldn't finish my form for #1!
Noooo!! I ot really, really busy with other things..
;n;

[Lirrie]

Name: Hitohana (Japanese - A Flower) | Pen: 7 | Gender: Female | Base Color: Tan



What will you use it for:
She shall be kept in a special spot on my charrie site and she'd be a friend for Nafisa. I will RP her and spoil her with art. I'll also write stories about her with my other charries and about her life. I shall love her forever and she shall be my baby. I shall also use her for art and story practice, as I love to practice once and a while when I come up with an idea.
Also, I'd love to win both of this amazing Crysts! They would make the perfect couple and I'd have so much fun writing stories and getting art of them together.

Why do you want it:
She would make the perfect friend for Nafisa! I love her colors and the flowers caught my eye immediately. I love how she is so unique and different and the speckled markings on her back are amazing! I'd literally do anything I could for this Crystinalian! I also want her so that I can write stories with her, get her art and spoil her rotten!

Personality:
- Sweet
- Kind
- Caring
- Innocent
- Loving
- Friendly
- Quiet
She loves making friends and prefers not to fight. She will fight when needed when there is no other way, besides running. She hates to run, but will if she has to and is over powered. She is a softy and has a thing for nature, she likes to nurture plants and plant beautiful flowers like the ones she wears. She is very close friends with Nafisa and treats her like her own child, as Nafisa's parents never cared for her. She would do anything she could to help her friends and protect them, even if it meant giving up her own life for theirs.

History:
I lived a happy life. I had a great family, home, friends, everything I could ever want and need. Until he came. He was jealous of our happy family for he had lost everything, and he wanted to make me to feel the same. He came and took everything from me, killing my family, chasing us away from our home, away from my friends, away from anything I ever had. I was soon left with nothing, nothing but the fur on my pelt. The sky cried with me that night as I mourned, washing away the blood that covered the ground. I mourned the night away until I had no more tears to cry. That's when I heard him, he came back for me, came back to kill me. I had to run, leaving my family unburied and helpless to the elements. I hated doing so, I would have loved to bury them properly, but I would never have been given the chance either way. I ran, still weak and tired from the fight and from the night's vigil. I continued on, stumbling, and tripping through the woods.

I traveled for days, him still tracking me, still following me. It felt hopeless, I would lose and he would triumph, catch me. I ran until I had no where else to go. I stood at the base of a large cliff, the ocean at my side. I cried as he came into view, an evil grin across his face, his intent was clear in his eyes. His only thought was his triumph, how he had finally had me where I couldn't get away. I growled at him, trying to warn him off, but he ignored it, knowing he could beat me, that he could win. As he came closer I closed my eyes, ready for his claws and teeth to pierce my flesh. It felt like forever until I heard him let out a pain filled screech. I opened my eyes in surprise to see a female with a brown and white pelt. Her crystals were a light blue, matching her eyes. She leaped on my pursuer with a roar, raking her claws through his pelt. She jumped back from him, growling at him and baring her fangs. I sat there, shocked, stunned. I thought I was to die at that moment, but instead I found a rescuer, a helper. He let out a growl, limping as she had bit into his leg pretty hard. He was in no condition to fight with that leg. He limped off, but not without swearing vengeance. I knew he would come back, and he would not give up till either of us were dead. He'd probably also go for my rescuer, hoping to get her out of the way. My body was still shaking, still tired and weak, and so I fell, my vision fading into a black void, making it feel like I was floating, everything was so peaceful.

I awoke to the sound of the ocean waves, and a nice breeze. I opened my eyes to look around at where I was. I lay on a nest of moss in a den of branches, outside of the entrance I could see the ocean. I got up curiously and stepped out, looking around. I was in what looked like to be a cove, cliffs all around and the only entrance seemed to be to swim out into the ocean. I looked behind me on the land, a small tropical forest, small enough that it would only take about ten minutes to walk to the base of the cliff in the very back. It was colorful with many flowers and fruits growing on the trees. "I see you have finally woken up." I spun around in surprise to face the voice. It was the female who had saved me. She was smiling and seemed friendly as she sat there looking at me. "I'm Nafisa, and you are?" she asked. "My name is Hitohana, but you can call me Hana." I replied, feeling like I could trust her, like she was my friend. "That is a very nice name. What brought you to my home?" she looked curiously at me, almost unbelieving that I was here. "I was chased here by the male you attacked. He was trying to kill me, like he did my parents." I told her sadly. A sadness filled her gaze as I looked at her. "I'm sorry to hear that." was all she replied. "You can stay here, with me." she suddenly offered, a hopeful spark filling her eyes. I looked at her, a little shocked. We had just met and knew nothing about each other, yet she asked me to stay, offered to make her home mine as well. "R-really?" I stuttered as I spoke, not sure her offer was genuine. "Of course I'm sure! Me and my mate would love to have you here!" She replied joyfully. So she wasn't alone, she had a mate. I smiled. "I wouldn't want to get in the way of your relationship." I told her. I would feel guilty if they split, if they parted because of me. I couldn't bare the thought, but where else did I have to go, it was here, or out there, with him. "You wouldn't get in the way! The bigger the family the better!" she laughed. She seemed so kind, so loving, a perfect sister. "F-family?" I was a bit shocked when I heard the word family. She wanted me in her family, but didn't she have family and siblings of her own? Or did she go through similar to what I experienced? "Of course family, what else?" she giggled in reply. "Come, let me show you around Kusabana Cove. My home, and maybe yours also." I looked at her and then got up. Kusabana, what a pretty name for a pretty place, but where did the name come from? I wondered. I followed her as we walked through the trees. She told me the name of each flower and plant we passed, she showed me the shore and the cliffs where there were small caves of gems and precious metals. I was in aww by all that was around me, this was like paradise. But how did we get here? The cliffs were impossible to climb up or down and I saw no other entrance other than the ocean. I turned to ask her as the tour finally ended. "How does one ever get in here? And what does Kusabana mean?" I asked, my curiosity taking the better of me. She just smiled and faced me as we came back to the shore. "Well, there is a secret tunnel near the back, I'll show you later. As for the name Kusabana, is that not obvious? It means flower." she told me, pointing towards the trees. I looked around. It seemed so clear now. The flowers were the key attraction of this place. I smiled and sat down, looking over the ocean, thinking about my new home.

I lived peacefully and calmly in the time that followed. I would take flowers from the trees and place them upon my back among my crystals. I always wear a pink flower by my ear that makes the hint of pink in my fur pop out a bit more. I had a new family now, Nafisa and Dentelle, I would do anything for them. Nafisa has opened up to me and told me about her past, making me realize how special Dentelle and I were to her. I became the sort of keeper of the cove, watching over the plants that grew there, keeping the den in shape and making sure all was well in Kusabana. I loved it here, but the memory of my attacker kept coming to mind. He swore vengeance and I was sure he would find me someday. I saw his face in my dream, watched what he had done, over and over again each night. It was torture. I had everything I could want, but his memory took away my peace. I refused to tell Nafisa about it, for she was sure that he was gone, that I was safe with her, but I could not believe her for some reason. Each night I thought he would come and kill me, awaking me from my slumber to look around for his unmistakable smile and death filled eyes. I became more tired as each day passed, tired from the worry and nightmares. Then it happened, his roars could be heard across the cliffs, far louder than when I last met him. He had matured and was now ready for battle, ready to kill me. I was sure Nafisa had no chance against a full grown male far larger than her, sure that if she fought him she would die, slayed by his claws like my family. I could not allow that, I had to stop him, but how? Then it came to me.

We both stood in front of him, our heads held high and our claws ready to fight. He thought he had the upper hand and it was clear in his eyes that he was underestimating us. I growled at him, an unknown anger filling my veins, anger that built up from the moment he entered my life and messed with it. All I wanted was to be free, all I wanted was to be at peace, peace knowing that my family was safe, peace knowing I had a home, peace in knowing that I was loved. Today I would fight for that, fight for my peace and freedom. I would show him that just because his family was gone doesn't mean he had to take it out on the innocent. Nafisa growled beside me, anger and determination in her eyes. She was a born fighter and would fight to the death to protect me, but I wouldn't let her, for my plan had a chance of my dying, yet there was a chance I would live, chance I could live my days peacefully with my family. The battle started with him lunging for my throat, I just right, towards Nafisa who had also leaped foreword to meet him in the air. Their bodies impacted with a sickly thud, the air knocked out of both of them. I jumped foreword while he was trying to catch his breathe, biting into his leg. He yowled in pain and swatted me away hard, making me land on my back. He stood above me, anger blazing in his eyes and teeth bared, but soon I was free and Nafisa tackled him again, wrestling him on the ground. He used his weight against her and pinned her, smiling wickedly. I knew this was my chance, this was the time for me to put my plan in motion, to save Nafisa. "Hey! It's me you want! Come get me!" I yelled, fear filled me as he looked in my direction. He leaped at me and I spun around to run. I ran through the trees towards the cliff, knowing he would follow. I ran right up to the wall and jumped to the small ledge just big enough for one. I then continued to claw my way up, he of course followed me. I climbed as high as I could, high enough so that if I fell it would certainly mean death. He climbed after, then he was close enough. I made my move, breaking the ledge I stood on with a little jump, it fell, making him lose his grip also. He plummeted below to the rocks, too far from the wall to slow himself. His eyes were filled with fear and he gave a loud screech before he hit the bottom far below. I slid down the wall, trying to catch something as I fell, but soon I was also too far from the wall. I fell, the rocks below coming up to meet me in a deadly wall. I was calm, at peace, I had saved Nafisa, my family, my home unlike the first time. I saw my new life flash before my vision, the time I first came to Kusabana, when I learned to climb to the caves, when I dived to see the reefs and Nafisa's smile. A tear slipped down my cheek just before I made impact, my vision flashed into blackness and soon I felt nothing but floating.

I was floating through a black, empty realm, yet I could hear a voice. It sounded so sad as it kept calling my name, but wait, what was my name again? It sounded like they were saying Hitohana and just Hana. Was that my name? What a different sounding name. The pain hit me like a wave suddenly, crowding around like water, airless water. I felt like I was drowning, drowning in pain. My body felt broken in more ways than one and some fluid soaked into my pelt, blood. The metallic smell hit my nose, making me want to gag, yet I knew, it was my blood. What had happened to me to make me this way? I wondered, when my mind went blank and my body numb again. Leaving me to float in an empty realm of blackness once more.

I could hear the ocean waves, but I could not open my eyes. I felt a weak trace of pain, but not as much as the last time I awoke. My fur was now dry and clean and I could hear breathing right next to me. My memories were starting to come back to me, I could remember my name, my friends, my family, the male whom killed my family and whom I have killed. I could remember times and places, it was all coming back to me. I knew it was Nafisa next to me and I was glad she stayed with me. I tried to open my eyes to see her, but my eyelids were too heavy to lift. I tried to move my leg, tried to feel her, let her know I was okay, but I could not move for my body was too weak. Then I soon floated back into the black, empty realm, no matter how hard I fought to stay conscious.

I could finally open my eyes to see the shore and the cove through the entrance of the den. Nafisa was laying not far from me, sleeping soundly, yet I could tell she was worried. I opened my mouth to speak. "Nafisa..." it came out as barely a whisper, but she heard it and was up immediately, coming over to me. "You're okay!" she nuzzled me, clearly relieved by seeing me awake and hearing my voice. "I'll go get you some water." she ran out of the den to run to a small spring near the edge of the cove. I watched as she ran out and sat quietly waiting for her to return. I closed my eyes for a bit until I could hear her paws entering the den. Nafisa held a bunch of dripping wet moss in her mouth and she brought it over to me. I weakly licked up the moisture I could, feeling much better after the much needed water, I still felt tired though. Nafisa walked back outside to do a bit of hunting and I fell asleep once again, floating back into a black realm of sleep.

I awoke to Nafisa entering the den again. I looked and saw a plump rabbit awaiting me and a bowl of water made of stone sitting next to it. I tried weakly to sit up, but I couldn't, not yet. I fell back onto my side in defeat and Nafisa came over to help me eat and drink. It felt better to have a full stomach after so long of being unconscious without food. I sighed in delight as I finished the last bit of the rabbit, it's juicy meat filling me. I drank up as much of the water as I could and then laid back. My voice was getting better as they day went along and so Nafisa caught me up to date. It had been three days since the fight and the male had died instantly with the impact of the fall. Nafisa hadn't left my side in those three days. She cleaned me up and made sure got water while I was unconscious. She continually cleaned my wounds and dressed them with some special herbs found in the cove. She had decorated my crystals with flowers that she had picked to pass the time, hoping they would cheer me up when I awoke, and they did. Just knowing she was there for me when I needed her made be happy and helped me to heal quicker.

It took about a week after I awoke to be able to sit up and another week before I could walk without help, but soon after I was up and running again. No more worry or nightmares, only happy memories and peace. We left his memory behind us, locked it away in the back of our minds. I was glad Nafisa was safe and that I still had her, she always tells me how she would have been devastated if she had lost me, if I had died in the fall. I'm glad we met and I'm glad we both have made a new family. My story is much longer than this, but this is only a small part of my life, but the rest shall be told at a later time.

Other:
Some art for the winner! Also featuring my Nafisa, by IdioticSage911 (DA)


More gift art by Andiliion


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Name: Godaiyou (Japanese - The Five Oceans) | Pen: 5 | Gender: Male | Base Color: Black



What will you use it for:
I shall write stories, collect art, RP him, decorate his page on my site all fancy like and use him for art practice. I'd love him till I can love him no longer, which won't be anytime soon.
Also, I'd love to win both of this amazing Crysts! They would make the perfect couple and I'd have so much fun writing stories and getting art of them together.

Why do you want it:
So I can write stories, give him love and get art of him! I love his simplicity and the colors are amazing! I love how he looks like he is based off an orca, making me want him more! I also love how well these two would look together!

Personality:
- Wise
- Brave
- Teacher
- Protective
- Strategic
- Friendly
- Caring
Godaiyou is a wise and caring teacher. He loves to teach the young cubs around him, showing them the ways of nature and how to survive. He has a thing for nature and the ocean. Some say it's because he has the spirit of an orca, and that spirit is still attached to the ocean, wanting to return to it's old home. He is very good when it comes to strategies, coming up with them quickly and efficiently. He is also brave and protective when it comes to his friends and family.

History:
Everyone looked down at me, shocked. My orange and yellow crystals shimmered in the sunrise for the first time and my eyes were open and curious, but what they were looking at was my black and white pelt, almost like an orca. I was cared for and loved by everyone as the elders thought I had the spirit of an ancient orca. I grew up near the coast and so I had a deep connection with the ocean. Some said my connection was because of the ancient spirit everyone thought I was, was yearning and longing to return to it's old home.

At times it was nice getting so much attention, but at other times, I just wanted them all to go away, but not how they did that day. The water had disappeared in the night and everyone saw it as a bad omen, they thought we would all starve or dry up, but no. I saw it before all the others did, I yelled for them to run, but it was too late, the wave crashed down upon them. I heard their cries for help, but I could not. I was in shock as I sat above on the hill and watched everything I knew get swept away.

How? How could I let something like this happen? Why didn't I try and save them? I was in despair, lost at what to do. I started to wander, clueless where to go and what I should do. I lived off whatever I could catch, I even ate the fruits and plants I knew were edible. I became a survivor, relying on myself and the nature around me. I didn't need anyone to care for me, I had no one to care for me. I cared for myself.

At times I wished the wave had taken me too, that I wasn't alone in the world without family or friends. I hope at times that I will turn a corner and there would be another cryst, someone I could travel and live with, someone I can call my friend and family. Then I found them, a small group of about two or three, wasn't sure exactly how many. I wanted to talk to them, but was too nervous. Wandering for so long made me used to living alone. I sat and watched them from afar, waiting for the right time to approach them, the right time to talk to them and meet them.

As I watched, I protected them. Fighting off dangerous creatures that came in their direction, sending them in another. I admired how they lived so happily together. I longed for a life like theirs, I longed to join them and I would soon, hopefully. I decided to move in closer, get a closer look at where they lived and what they looked like. The first one, a female, was brown and white with blue crystals and eyes. She had a mate, he was different shades of brown with intricate white markings, his crystals where a light purple and his eyes were an orange-yellow. The third among them was a beautiful tan female with purplish-pink crystals and golden eyes. Her crystals were decorated with tropical flowers and her crystals shimmered in the sunlight. I stood in awe as I saw her, watched her. I followed her as she walked into a small crevice in the side of the cliff. It was a secret tunnel, just large enough for me to walk through. I came out on the other side, no longer able to see the female, but I saw a small tropical forest filled with flowers and many other plants. I snuck through the trees and looked around, realizing it was a hidden cove. It was beautiful, a perfect home to have a family in. And it would be safe.

I came to the edge and looked out onto the water, then suddenly I had the wind knocked out of me as a heavy body rammed into my side. I laid on the ground, gasping for breathe as the other had me pinned, growling down at me. I looked up to see the brown and white female with her teeth bared. "What are you doing here?" she growled. "I-I..." I didn't know how to explain everything, how to explain that I had been watching them. "Let me up and I'll explain." I got the words out, past my shock. She gave me a cautious look before stepping to the side and allowing me up. I then saw the male and the other female whom I had been following. I looked back to the brown female and told her my story. They smiled at me by the end of it, and the brown female spoke warmly to me. "Welcome to Kusabana Cove."

They were such a kind group of crysts, welcoming and warm. I didn't sleep with the rest of the group in the den, but instead I stayed near the entrance of the cove, unwilling to leave it unguarded and too nervous to stay with the rest of the group at night. Each night I dreamed about the one female, Hitohana. They all told me how they had come to the cove, how they had lost their families. I'm glad I am not alone, I am glad I have others who understand what it's like to lose everything, I'm glad I have others to comfort me when I need it.

Other:
Thank you for this chance! <3

Congrats you won them both


Sorry eveyone else all other forms where either wip or didnt show a good bit of effort you can try again when the round reopens


artist since there are still lots of left over ones your off the hook for the next round. Which will mean you had 4 weeks to do desighns.

[SukarettoYanagi]

So I get another change to work on my form? ;3;

[Skritnaja]

Congrats Naranda, I loved both stories that you made for them, it was a real pleasure reading them^___^

Round closed?! ;n;
I couldn't finish my form for #1!
Noooo!! I ot really, really busy with other things..
;n;

You could always re-entry in the next round? Your form looked good and everything and since the design is still left I see no problem with you re-entering:>
edit: you ninja posted meXD

[Lirrie]

yes lol i never would ban someone from trying again if it was still there XD
ill like update later

[Emma-Chan]

Hey Lirrie, my SAI globed up. I got a few more done but not many! Hopping to get it taken care of in the next 2 weeks... Waiting for my paycheck XD

[NARANDA]

-My Form-

Congrats you won them both

Congrats Naranda, I loved both stories that you made for them, it was a real pleasure reading them^___^

Thank you so much! I love them both! XD
I'm glad you liked my stories! ^_^

[Briar Rose]

Man, how do I still have this unmarked?