Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

[Unashamed]

That was so awesome!! It was so sentimental between Amy and Jenette, but it also had funny parts in it as well. I loved it!

[.Fish.]

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME JF LOVED IT
On another note YAY THE SPIDER IS GONE!!!

[daz]

WHOO! EPIC!
It reminds me of TJOC... with Light Shade being the one to save the world, then Christa... y'all should really read my book. (lol)

[Rebel Faery]

AWESOMESAUCEEPICNESSICANTBREATHEITWASSOOOOOGOODINAFLIPPIN'CAN!

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That was so awesome!! It was so sentimental between Amy and Jenette, but it also had funny parts in it as well. I loved it!

Thanks!

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME JF LOVED IT
On another note YAY THE SPIDER IS GONE!!!

lol, thank you!

WHOO! EPIC!
It reminds me of TJOC... with Light Shade being the one to save the world, then Christa... y'all should really read my book. (lol)

Where was that part (in your book [i forgot :p])?

AWESOMESAUCEEPICNESSICANTBREATHEITWASSOOOOOGOODINAFLIPPIN'CAN!

I actually understood that. XD Thanks, Rebel!

Will try and write an entry soon!

[.Fish.]

YAY write entry faster....

[bubiza]

Hi.
I've been reading through some of your stuff, and it's alright. However, there are a few grammatical issues here and there, such as full stops when there should be commas. In addition to this, I think that you could describe the characters/setting etc. in a bit more detail, as they are quite shallow and don't really offer much depth. The general plot is also cliche, so it would be nice to see something slightly more original in the future. I also find some of the text colours quite hard to read, so it would be better if they were in darker colours.
However, since the first installment, your writing skills have improved quite a bit, especially your grammar. You still have quite a lot of work to go, but eventually you'll get there. Just carry on writing and improving, and soon your work will be high quality.

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Hi.
I've been reading through some of your stuff, and it's alright. However, there are a few grammatical issues here and there, such as full stops when there should be commas. In addition to this, I think that you could describe the characters/setting etc. in a bit more detail, as they are quite shallow and don't really offer much depth. The general plot is also cliche, so it would be nice to see something slightly more original in the future. I also find some of the text colours quite hard to read, so it would be better if they were in darker colours.
However, since the first installment, your writing skills have improved quite a bit, especially your grammar. You still have quite a lot of work to go, but eventually you'll get there. Just carry on writing and improving, and soon your work will be high quality.

Hi,
Thanks so much for your input (and for putting it nicely)! Before I barely knew anything about commas, and now I'm starting to finally get the hang of it, I think. And things will be quite a bit different in the next few books, I think. And yeah, I run out of text colors often for the new characters, so it's hard to find new ones that aren't bright...
And thank you! I know I'm not excellent right now (far from it, I'm sure), but I was rather hoping that I was improving...
Thanks again for your advise! I will be sure to take it to heart!!

[.Fish.]

JF when shall we get more????

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JF when shall we get more????

Hopefully soon! I need to shower in a few minutes, and then I'm going to try and convince my dad to take me to an archery store...

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