Step in my Life - CS Pet Diary

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Step in my Life - CS Pet Diary

Postby mare. » Sat Mar 02, 2013 2:33 pm

Hey CS! I've decided that since my teachers and peers have encouraged me so much that I'd start a story on CS, my favorite website ever! Please feel free to comment and critique here.

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Dear Journal,

Well, umm, hello there. My name's Mare and I'm in eighth grade in middle school. Always a fun time, right? The girls are prissy, like Amber and Chelsea, and most of the guys are full of themselves. I don't know how many other wolves lives you've listened to Journal, but I'm probably the only girl in my grade who doesn't like anyone as anything more than a friend. I do have two really good guy friends though, Gordon and Lyke. Gordon is really really smart and plays guitar, drums, piano, and almost any instrument you can
think of. Lyke is probably every girl's dream wolf. Totally laid-back, easy going and pretty good looking. I'm really still not affected by it. He draws really well though. Once I remember he drew all of us together, Gordon put bunny ears on me, Lyke stood kneeling in the middle, and me and Kylie stood on
the edge, trying to act like this was a normal day. It was actually the first day of seventh grade and our first day in middle school. Oh, and Kylie is my best girl friend. She isn't as tomboyish as me, but we get along really well and listen and understand each other completely. All together we're really just a bunch of misfits who don't fit in anywhere else. The intelligent musician, the handsome artist, the pretty listener, and well, me. I guess I'm "Your Average Joe". I'll have to think about that one.

And as every wolves' life, there will always be the opposite force, opposition, enemy, whatever you want to call it, but really just downright mean. That's Amber and Chelsea, the average mean, popular girls who everyone likes for no apparent reason. They're pretty brutal, but not in the way you'd expect. I mean, yeah, the tease, and slam lockers in people's faces, trip, and have cat fights all the time, but it gets worse than that. Once your targeted, your locked on their list of targets for their own
entertainment. I've managed to steer clear of them so far, but I think that might change soon. I think they're starting to take an interest Lyke, so obviously that's a great reason to target me and Kylie, right? Well, at least I'll always have my sarcasm to defend myself, and that's the one thing I actually don't fail at creating comeback with. Not that I really have any use for comebacks. Or sarcasm for that matter...

Wow, I've been so busy talking about my friends and enemies I totally forgot to talk about my personal life. That's basically what a journal's for, right? So, I live in a nice
little house in the middle of a quiet little town. I mean you could set a nuclear bomb off and wipe us off the map and I don't think any one would notice. I like to draw and paint, not of other people, but of landscapes and inanimate objects. Lyke sometimes helps me, but I have my own style. I've been told by all my teachers that I am a really talented writer, and I kinda hoard stuffed animals. I play flute, the only instrument I'm able to successfully play, and read quite a lot. Sadly though, my father died when I was only just a pup; two years old, and when I was three my mom died of heart failure. I
live with my adopted parents
Laura and Gary. They had a son when I got there at five years old, a just born they wanted a companion for him. He's eight now, and I'm thirteen. His name is Jonah, and he's
alright, just wants to get into everything I'm doing.don't ask about the Viking stuff. All dogs Get into an impersonation stage around his age. His just happened to be a Viking. I mean mine was a butterfly. I think my family's dinner will be ready very soon, so I'll have to leave you here.

Sincerely and Never-Changing,
Mare
Last edited by mare. on Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:46 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Step in my Life - CS Pet Diary

Postby mare. » Sat Mar 02, 2013 3:57 pm

Uhh, I guess just keep writing
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Dear Journal,

I totally forgot to tell you that yesterday was Valentines Day. It's the little things that make you feel empty, don't they? Kylie, Gordon, Lyke and I get this "Secret Santa" thing going on for stuff like gifting holidays. I guess it would be the "Secret Heart" in this case, but, nonetheless, I got Lyke. I decided to get him( regift him) a really nice set of colored pencils from when Laura, I mean, mom, was in art school, but dropped out to pursue her love of... Breeding pigeons. Yup, that's why she is with a bunch of pigeons in her picture. And don't even get me started on my dad. So, he loved his gift, and my gifter was Gordon, who got me a purple pen. Yeah, this one I'm writing in. I didn't even know they made purple pens. I like it. It won't break like my pencils. My literacy teacher even yelled at me for using it to write my rough draft of my essay. Phhht. It's not like I was gonna use it for the final draft. (Okay, maybe I was, but still). Yeah... Purple is my favorite color. Also, I think I forgot to introduce you to my pet goldfish. His name is Comet. And he wants to kill us all.

Okay, don't be scared, he's only as big as a, well, goldfish. He like to swim around and when I feed him or clean his cage he bites me.. I don't feel him cause he doesn't have any teeth, but I kinda feel bad. His attempts are actually quite sad. I wanna get him a friend. Maybe a bigger one. Or a little baby turtle. 'I'll have to ask my mom on that one. Actually, I won't cause I know she'll say Comet is enough and why not take care of a pigeon. Ooh, something is knocking on my window. I feel like it's Lyke, cause he's know to go up to a few people's windows. I'll have to write in you later, gotta see what Lyke wants.

Sincerely,
Mare
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Re: Step in my Life - CS Pet Diary

Postby mare. » Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:50 am

Dear Journal,

You'll never guess what happened to me today! Well, considering I'm writing this in an alley with Chelsea, who is roasting a sausage over the fire. Mmmmm sausage.. Anyway, it was actually Chelsea who was at my window, cause I'm on the first floor of my house. So, she came in the window, and I'll write how our conversation went. I'll be in purple, and use pink marker for her:

Whoa, Chelsea! What are you doing in my window!?

Listen, it's about Amber. S-Sh-Sh-She...
Just spit it out!
She's dead!

This made my jaw drop. Amber, dead, window, sausage, fire, Comet. Every word I recognized jumped into my mind. My enemy, dead. It just didn't seem right. Sure, she was a bit brutal, but she didn't really deserve to die. I asked Chelsea to explain, and here's what she said (again in pink)

I was walking to her house this afternoon, and I was let in by her mother. So I walked up to her room, knowing she usually waits for me up there when I come over, and , when I opened the door, she was there all right, sitting on her bed, eyes open even. I hadn't noticed the pillow propping her up, and began to say hello
When she didn't answer I got a little weirded out, and then felt her forehead to see if she was feeling alright. And it was stone cold. I screamed then fainted, but the last thing I saw was a knife handle shoved beneath the mattress and a bloody paw print on the window sill.


The poor girl was hyperventilating now, so, I did the only logical thing I could to stop someone from crying:

Stop! You will not cry! If we're gonna find the killer, we have to keep our composure.

Bu-But
You heard me! I'l help you find who it was, but we have to call the police first
O-okay

Yes, I did just agree to help an enemy find out who killed my other enemy. Strange world, isn't it? So I told mom I'd be spending the weekend at Chelsea's, as were Kylie, Lyke, and Gordon. Oh, yeah, and they're sitting by the fire with Chelsea, by the way. So, we're camping out here for the night, cause we've already confirmed the attack with police, so this is our base camp for finding the killer. We've split up into groups; two of two,and Kylie said she was too scared, so headed home. So the pairs are Lyke and Chelsea, and me and Gordon. Because we girls obviously need guys to protect us. I have to sleep now journal, I have a morning of crime solving ahead of me.
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Re: Step in my Life - CS Pet Diary

Postby mare. » Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:43 am

Dear Journal,

Yeah, yesterday's crime solving got us literally no where but banned from the shrimp shack, which is cool cause I hate shrimp anyway. So Gordon was digging through the garbage around back and one of the managers chased us away with a steak knife! It was HUGE! We did manage to get the knife that was wedged under the mattress in Amber's room though, and took it to the police. They even did the whole paw print dust procedure right in front of us. You'd never guess who the culprit was journal, and I will leave you in suspense! Aha, just kidding, I wouldn't leave you at a cliffhanger. Or would I? Anyways, the killer was extremely surprising, as no one in the group would have thought they had the guts. Or the heart. The fingerprints showed as a teenage dog, with long fur and blue eyes; are you catching on yet journal? It was Chelsea, and he moment it was said, she bolted out of the room!

Okay, when she bolted, she didn't realize the really hefty security guard standing at the door. He caught her, literally threw her over his shoulder, and dropped her in a cell. She complained so much, but we were dismissed and didn't get to hear most of it. We walked back in silence to the camp, and collected all our stuff. It made me think about our little group. What if Kylie killed Lyke? Or if Lyke killed Gordon, or, me?!? No doubt I wouldn't be able to sleep tonight...

Sincerely and a little scared,
Mare
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