[Shiko Hayashi]

Congratulations Kirya!

Your english is very good, no worries there. I understood the story just fine and loved it! It makes perfect sense that a wild Rune Drake would be able to hunt an illusive creature like this. Your character is very human. Foraging for food is an excellent reason for being in that area. Both the character and Elkrin work together to escape. I also loved the name you've chosen. Well done!

The other stories were very well written. You all did a great job! But I will be placing a limit of 1000 words for future small forms like this one.

Yeeeeahhh.... Sorry 'bout that Jen. Figured it was a bit to much. Small word limits are tough on me, as I'm used to writing at least 10 pages a day per hour.

[Aurealis]

^^ My story was a little long as well... Congrats Kirya! I loved your story! :3 I will give you some gifty art in a little bit!

[Kirya]

Yay! Thanks Jendalie for this beautiful and noble friend, I'll take good care of him. He is the first adoptable I win and I'm sooo happy!
I'd like to be able to draw him too... I can SEE scenes in my mind, I'm just awful in computer drawing...