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Entery by Amymay99

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Entery

Postby Amymay99 » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:35 am

Entry for artist competition. Hope you like.
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Re: Entery

Postby Catastrophic » Tue Jan 15, 2013 6:22 am

I'm going to be doing little form things like this for all new entries it will help you improve hopefully.
Good points-
Nice colour
Followed the rules perfectly

You could improve by-
using a slightly off black colour so you can see the lines better.
using the colour layers and lock alpha.
use the airbrush for softer areas like the leg colour.
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Re: Entery

Postby Amymay99 » Tue Jan 15, 2013 8:02 am

.:kermit:. wrote:I'm going to be doing little form things like this for all new entries it will help you improve hopefully.
Good points-
Nice colour
Followed the rules perfectly

You could improve by-
using a slightly off black colour so you can see the lines better.
using the colour layers and lock alpha.
use the airbrush for softer areas like the leg colour.


Okay thank you, i will use these points in the future.
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Re: Entery

Postby Amymay99 » Tue Jan 15, 2013 8:07 am

is it okay if i edit slightly i have to erase some colour that's gone out of the lines aswell
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Re: Entery

Postby Catastrophic » Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:44 am

oh of course I give you these points to improve for a reason :) you can enter more than once aswell it states that in the rules
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Re: Entery

Postby Amymay99 » Wed Jan 16, 2013 8:14 am

okay thank you
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