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[Papyrsatyr]

Love the pets. :3 I'll work on a spotlight pet post tonight since there's no code drop to do.

[Ray.]

Pet's ID Tag:
Number 3 the beautiful number
Image of pet

Name You'd Choose for It:
Luna

Luna \l(u)-na\ as a girl's name is pronounced LOO-nah. It is of Latin origin, and the meaning of Luna is "moon". Mythology: one of the names of Artemis, goddess of the moon.

Species/Breed:
Wolf Dog
Gender:
Female
Reason You Want It:
I love her to death. The first time I saw her I was like,"I'm trying for her!" I waited a minute for you to put her up then I put this forum together. Her tail is flowing and loving Oh how I love that! She fits in perfect with my character family. Also I've been wanting a charrie to do a diary for. I want her because she is lovely and I really just think she will be a great edition.
History/Background/Other:
Personality:
Most of the time, Luna is a rather sweet dog. She's gentle and loving, and she tends to be very protective of those that she has grown to love. She is loyal and is willing to stand up to fight for her dignity and for her family and friends. She is good in a relationship, and she's very truthful. Depending on the day, she can be feisty or sweet. Shes a wild girl.

While cute, small, and cuddly, Luna is full of attitude. She is known for being very hyper. She's quick to snap back. She's a bit of a wild child, and he will do anything to be sure that he has your complete and undivided attention. She gets mad if you don't listen and go off with someone else besides her. She will not talk to you unless you say you terribly sorry but she still may not forgive you for what you did. She likes to run and play frisbee to get out all of his feelings. She hates to be alone and hates the quiet. Sometimes she sings to herself if it is to quiet.

So Luna is a loving sweet little pup with some attitude. She hates being alone. She feels uncomfortable in the quiet. She will love and respect you if you do the same to her. She can be mean and feisty at sometimes. She is very protective of her love ones. Even if she hates you she would risk her life to save you.

History (well a story):
{Luna was born into the world in a small barn. Her mom didn't even care about her. She was just another pup. She didn't want to be just another pup. Luna was special and she knew it. The day she began to walk she learned to run. That night she ran away. She didn't even look back. The snow was a couple of feet deep and she sunk into the layer of white fluffy snow. She walked for days till she came to a place with houses. To keep warm she dug a hole in the snow and laid there.

Layla Miller always loved wolves and dogs. She wanted one forever but her parents hated them. She would go to her neighbors and play with their German Shepherd,Tank. He was a older dog and couldn't do much. She still loved him. It was a cold snowy day and Layla but her last shoe on and ran outside almost falling from the deep snow. She ran to there house and played with Tank for hours. She had to leave at five. She hugged Tank and put her warm clothes back on. She waved goodbye and left. She was walking back to her house when she saw a tail and heard noises in the snow. She walked towards the sounds.

Luna watched her as she came close."Oh no this is bad,"she said. Luna dug deeper in the snow. She reached the bottom and laid there. She could her the girl coming closer. Luna closed her eyes scared that she would be found and hurt.

Layla peered into the snow."Anybody there?"she whispered. She saw a tail. Layla's eyes got big and she dug deep in the snow. Layla's hand finally met Luna's body. She smiled and spoke softly,"Hey little girl you lost?"

Luna looked up and her. She didn't want her to think she was a crazy wild animal. She thought for a minute. Luna looked side to side. She swallowed and cleared her throat. Then she spoke,"Ppppplease don't hurt me."

Layla looked at the puppy. Her eyes bigger then ever now. She looked at her for a minute. Finally she closed her eyes and thought. She softly spoke again to the pup,"You can talk to humans?" Luna nodded,"It's a gift," Layla smiled at her then unzipped her jacket,"Get in my jacket you can come with me but be quiet ok,"she said. Luna swallowed then jumped inside the jacket. Layla zipped it up. She looked around then walked inside her house.

"Mom I'm home!"she yelled to her mother. Her mom greeted her"Hey take your coat off!" "I will in my room,"Layla yelled running up the stairs to her room. She unzipped her jacket and Luna jumped out. After she got into her pajamas she looked at Luna."Lets give you a bath,"she said. She picked Luna up and carried her to the tub. She sat her in and began to wash her. Luna shook and barked."Stop I hate this!"she growled then jumped out and ran out of the room. Luna raced downstairs and ran into Layla's mom. Luna looked up and swallowed."LAYLA WHAT IS THIS!!!!"her mom screamed. Layla ran downstairs and tried to explain it all to her mom. Her mom picked Luna up by the scruff and put her in a cage. She then got the phone and called the pound. The next day they came and got her.

Luna sat in the cage of the pound. She cried and whined."Why did I do that!"she howled. A old dog walked up to her. He pick her up by the scruff and showed her a way out. Luna ran and didn't even thank the dog. Luna looked at the snow and then moved on. She didn't know what to do. She dug another hole and went to sleep.

The next day she was awoke from her sleep with sounds of screaming. She peaked out of the hole and saw a zombie dog she screamed.}
{}=all a dream.

She awoke from her sleep after the awful nightmare. Luna's mom stared at her for a minute then sat up,"What was it this time Luna?"she asked. Luna slumped her head down,"Same one." Luna's mom sighed,"Go eat." Luna did as told and bounded out of the barn to the house. She could smell her breakfast in her bowl. Her favorite to muti-grain waffles. She sniffed the air then ran inside. Luna dashed to her bowl sliding across the cold hard floor. She slid right to her bowl and began to eat. Her family were famers who took Luna's mom in. Luna was born an only pup but she didn't care that ment she didn't have to share. The thing Luna hated was she wasn't brave like her mom. She had always wanted to be but just couldn't. She was interrupted of her eating seeing the barn cat slowly trudge to his bowl. He was a stupid creature,didn't know a piece of food from a piece of fur. The cat glanced at Luna,"Stupid mutt all you do is..." Luna growled,"Shutup you stupid cat!" With that Luna growled once more picked up her waffle and ran to the barn. Luna's mom smiled as Luna ran back. Luna jumped over to her mom and laid the waffle at her paws,"There you go mom." Luna smiled and snuggled beside her mother."Thank you Luna,"she said and ate the waffle. Luna nodded to her mom,"I'm going to play." Luna's mom shook her head,"No your not missy now go over there and work on something useful we don't play on a farm we work." Luna sighed and trotted over to the big hay piles. She climbed on then and drifted away. She dreamed about being brave having a pack and saving them from a terrible sickness.

Luna was woke by her mom shaking her."Luna get up!"she snapped. Luna look at her mom then sat herself up."What?"she said dazed."The house is on fire and half the barn if too!"her mom yelled. Luna dazed no more jumped off the hay and ran out of the burning barn over to the people. The humans were crying about a baby. Luna cocked her head and looked at the blazing home. She knew what she had to do,she had to be brave. She kissed her mom then ran into the house. Stuff fell from the roof and she heard cries from the baby's room. She raced there jumping over firey pieces of wood. She soon came to the baby who sat in the floor. She pulled it by its clothes.

Luna's mom and the people watched then the house collapsed. They all cried then saw something it was Luna. Not just Luna,the baby too! The people ran and picked up the child. Luna's mom ran to her and snuggled her."Luna you did it I knew you could all along,"her mom said to her. Luna nodded and looked at the child who's wrinkled shirt said Layla. She smiled and snuggled her mom.

From that day on Luna and her mom got to sleep in the house. Luna got three waffles or as many as she wanted. Layla and Luna became really good friends. Luna soon discovered her tail was the reason for what she did that day. Her tail makes wishes come true. Luna was now in a beloved family. Also she no longer had bad dreams. Luna and her mom have been granted a wish of a good home. Thanks to Luna it came true.

Will be continued on a topic called Luna's diary if I win her <3

Sample Of Diary:
Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:56 pm
Well I guess everyone moves on. I just didn't want to be but in a adoption center. Ugh who cares Tripp gonna miss this long tail! Well I almost caught the cat today. Nothing to talk about but it may snow. Oh ya! I gots something to say to Tripp. You where a very good friend till you but me in a kennel. Hopefully someone great will add me to there family. Tripp bye...
Ok don't cry I gonna go before I do oh! The cat bye!!
Art:(not needed but extra credit)
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

WIP

[Green Arrow]

When is the next code drop? I'm a little bit confused :3

[Tripp]

i think if im gonna do it i'm gonna wait till next week for the ones i donated cause it wouldn't be fair since normally is on fridays or the weekend

[Charchar2]

okay ^^
all the characters you donated are gorgeous <3
it's killing me I can only try for one xDD <33

[Papyrsatyr]

Just curious, what about my form wasn't enough? :3
( for the previous code-drop)

Can I ask what was wrong with my forum.

I am going to post this here so people in general can understand my personal thought process when it comes to judging. I can't speak for the other judges, this is just for me.

There's nothing exactly wrong with your form, I just think the other form's personality was easier to envision.

When I judge I try to imagine the character based on the form or at the very least get a sense of the world they're in. I personally prefer getting a sense of the character than the world itself. Since you're writing about a character not a world. If I can imagine your character doing their thing and acting and come to life the person gets the character. If I have a hard time or can't imagine it, they don't.

When there's two or more forms that are good and would normally win a character if there was no competition I look at them side by side and try to picture the characters they are trying to portray. The one I can imagine easiest and also has what I think is a better thought out character wins. Because not going to lie after reading forms and forms over the years of the same types of characters any standout or different forms take a higher stand than the norm.

May not be the best way of judging but it's how I do it, hope it helped.

I think Tripp is the one who did the previous code drop, but I think this is probably his answer to your question. If not, I'm sure he'll correct me and tell his answer. :3

[Green Arrow]

Okay, thanks ^^

Pet's ID Tag: #3

Name You'd Choose for It:
Species/Breed:
Gender: Female
Reason You Want It:
Wow. Just, wow. I love the blinding, beautiful simplicity of her markings, and it's exciting to wonder how those markings could influence her personality.
Despite her given name, I do not see her as something lunar, an eclipse. I'm reminded somewhat of the Phantom of the Opera. One side of her is a beautiful cream colour, reaching for the light, pure and beautiful. The other side is a much more feral, wolfish brown, instinctive and wild. Just like how the Phantom wears his half mask.

History/Background/Other:
Art:(not needed but extra credit)
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

Prepare to be wooed.

[Tripp]

pretty much what apple said, when i judge i normally go with who has the more developed character in terms of personality, and traits.

edit: also guys who ever gets luna i have the black bigger version so you can add whatever name you want also if you could save the images after you won so i can get them off my charahub that would be nice c:

[Charchar2]

okay, thanks ^^
also, are we allowed to add to the form? c:

[Tripp]

like add images or something?