{Uᴍʙʀᴀ} . {Rᴇᴀᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʀɪᴛɪǫᴜᴇ!}

[Akela~]

Whoa, I want more. The wya you describe things is amazing, and the story catches your interest immediately. I want to know where Rain is from, and what the heck Umbra means and why the gods are angry, and god I am stalking this forum.

[spiff]

Thank you so much! I have plenty of things in mind for this story, so I hope it keeps you guys interested all the way to the end. :3

[indebted]

{{Too beautiful! I love this story already. When I first read your description thing on Inklings, I was like, eh cliche-y, And then I'm like, most. epic. thing. ever.

[Akela~]

Lol. I know right. EPICNESSS.

[spiff]

Aw, I'm glad you gave it a try and liked it! <3

May I ask, what about it made you think it was cliche? Just so I can avoid it in the future.

[Nellas]

Oh. My goodness. I'm so glad to have discovered this, Rage! <33
The first paragraph was all it took to get me hooked ^^
And chapter one, well, I can't wait for more! You have beautiful sensory details as always and I suppose you want criticsm but I have none c:

[spiff]

Thank you so much, Nellas! You have no idea how much this praise means to me when it comes from a writer like you. I hope you enjoy Chapter Two, which I'm aiming to have up by next week. <333

[Nellas]

Aww, shush that Rage ^^ I'm not nearly as good as you, I could only hope to be! c: And I know Chapter Two will not disappoint me <333

[suzhay]

I agree with some of the other comments. That first paragraph was amazing. I agree with everything Nellas said. I am waiting for chapter two and that is saying something because I normally don't go for wolf books. Great job! On my imaginary(^_^) scale, you get a 19.5/20!

[spiff]

Talk about piling on the pressure, Nellas. I'll try my best!

And suzhay, I'm glad my story managed to pull you in even though it is about wolves. C: