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[Erille]

Yeah I guess. I don't know how to add or remove something on a design. So I only adopt characters if I like their design.

[~Rachy~]

There's only 54 left right now I think XD

[Princess Luna]

50 pets? That seems like a lot of pets. That will take forever for donations to be adopted. N offense, but you accepted some ugly designs in my opinion that might never be adopted.

By ugly, I mean like ones with bright green and dark red all on one pet. Or maybe some random deisgn that's an ugly sparkledog or something like that. No offense to the donators.

I think the problem with the designs left is it looks like some of the donaters did them in no time flat just to donate (Not all though). A lot of them are designs that people probably think "I'd adopt it if I could change it a bit" or "I can make a design 10x better than that and more interesting"

That's what revamps are for, to make characters more attractive then they are.

Honestly, the only adoption center I've ever seen without a few thoughtless 'ugly' characters is TaN, and that's because of how strict they are with donations.

And in case you were wondering, Erille, there were 5 forms that needed bulking up/permission last code-drop. If all of them get permission and/or bulk up their forms, that means we only need one more acceptable form before reopening donations.

[Erille]

Okay. awesome! If they aren't adopted, I might donate my characters to TaN.

[Lirrie]

Guys Ill attempt a revamp on any of the ones who dont have forms yet.

[~Rachy~]

I'm working on a form now For #136

[versicolor]

Pet's ID Tag: 9
Name You'd Choose for It: Dáire
Gender: Male
Reason You Want It: I love the way the design looks with all the swirly and intricate markings. I think he would be a perfect character to play the role of Aysun and Sunset Sonata's little brother [blood related] Also, think he would definitely be fun to draw and write stories about.
History/Background/Other:
(Written in Dáire's point of view)
I was alone and confused. My parents had left me in this empty burrow in the dead of the starry night. My two older sisters are gone as well. Where did they all go? Why did the leave me alone? Didn't they want to take me along too? Of course not, I'm the unnoticeable and quiet pup who everyone forgets about. I whimpered as I heard the eerie sounds of the night creeping closer. I was clueless and terrified. I was a vulnerable pup with no one for protection. Suddenly, there were light footsteps coming in the direction of the cold and lifeless burrow. I froze as I saw a light pink nose poking in the entrance.
"Helloooo? Anybody in there?" A male's voice called.
"U-um, yes mister. Have you seen my parents?" I whispered in a just barely audible voice. The being the nose belonged to shoved his mouth into the small entrance and tried to pinpoint my location. I scurried to the back of the den as the wolf's large canines showed.
"Aww, don't be scared little one. I'm just trying to get you out." The canine called from outside.
"I don't entirely trust you when your canines are shoved in my face." I replied. The male pulled his mouth out of the burrow's entrance and I poked my little head outside of the den.

I stared up in awe as my eyes gazed upon a flaming wolf. He was a tall and rather well built male with all four paws ablaze. He had large saber teeth and a fluffy mane along his back. His face was covered with hair and I could see his nearly transparent blue eyes staring out from behind the strands.
"Well, what are you staring at? Come on, we've got to ditch this place." The male hastily said.
"Why do we have to leave mister? Can't we just stay here?" I asked with a hint of uncertainty in my voice. The wolf gave me a weird and creepy feeling. Maybe it was the blank and expressionless eyes.
"You don't want to stay in the freaky forest, do you? And my name isn't mister; it's Forgotten." He replied in a matter of fact tone.
"Well it's not my fault. You never told me what it was." I retaliated.
"But you never asked." Forgotten smirked and winked one light blue eye as he darted into the trees. Me being an idiot, followed him.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

[WIP, PMed the creator anyways. Permission pending]

[~Rachy~]

Pet's ID Tag: #14

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Name You'd Choose for It: Diamond Beauty (Dee for short)

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Gender: female

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Reason You Want It: She caught my eye, as soon as I saw her. I love horses, and she was the one I loved the most, out of the horses that were in the kennels at the time. She's got a simple but beautiful design, and I love that she is partly natural (colours), and partly unnatural (markings). I also noticed that she'd been here for a while, I thought she deserved a kind, loving home.

I can't give it back to BHB, because she's quit CS, but if I ever don't want her (not gonna happen XD), I'd give her back here

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History/Background/Other:

I gallop across a beautiful, massive field, with a small herd of horses, of all different shapes, sizes and colours. There are beautiful flowers, purple, pink, blue, yellow, red... There are mountains in the distance, a deep purple, topped with snow. I can just make out the barn in the distance, where any of Rachy's ill horses stay. Yes, I live in Rachy's herds, and I am the happiest I have ever been. Even happier than I was at my first home...

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I was born on a lonely farm in the middle of England, called Sunshine Springs. My mother was Checkers, a beautiful snow white horse with a black diamond pattern, who was a top dressage horse. She was kind and gentle, in contrast to my father. He was called Dexter, a beautiful bay, and he was a champion show jumper in his prime. He was a proud, selfish, and slightly cruel horse, and was spoilt rotten. My owner, a kind man named Michael Rodgers, had great hopes for me; he expected me to be either a fabulous dressage horse or a fabulous show jumper.


My first memory is from when I was 4 months old. I can remember running through the lush green fields, at first sticking by my mother, but slowly venturing away from her side. I walked over to the North side of the field, where there was a man standing beside the big red barn. He was tall, with dark hair, and bright blue eyes. I remember him well, even now. "Hello, my beauty," he said quietly, in a gentle voice. "How are you today?"
At first I was shy, and backed off, but after a while I grew confident, and came near. "My sweet little Diamond," he said. I grew to love my first master, as he came to visit me almost every day. I stayed gentle and kind, and never kicked or bit, as I had no reason to. No-one had ever been cruel to me.

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In the middle of a hot Summer, when I was two years old, my Master's business fell apart. He lost most of his money, and was forced to sell his horses. I was his favourite, and he was sad to see me go. My mother was sold before me, along with all the other horses, and her last moments with me were spent saying "Now, before I go, I have a few things to tell you. When you are at the auction, for that is surely where you are going, you musn't kick, bite, or be otherwise unpleasent, or you will not be bought. Be gentle, friendly, quiet, and look as beautiful as you can. When you are in the ring, run nicely, and do not stumble, and you will be bought. I hope you get bought by a kind owner like our Master, but you should know that not all Masters are as kind and gentle as him. Some are cruel, and will hurt you. Good luck, my little Diamond Beauty." Then, she was led off into the trailer.

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I remember the bustle and the chaos of the auction. There were voices shouting, horses neighing, and scents of fear, confusion and lonliness. Many horses had been seperated from their families, like I had been seperated from my mother, and my Master... I was taken in a trailer to the auction, a new experience for me. I was absolutely terrified, but my Master came with me on the journey, and frequently stopped and checked on me. When we arrived, he led me into a dark, musty stable block and led me into a tiny stable block, with no water, food, or bedding. My Master shook his head in despair, and said to me "I'm sorry my Beauty. I hope you get a good home. You're a good horse, I hope you do well." And after that, he walked off down the aisle. I knew I would never see him again...

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As I stood in that cramped little stall, many people came to look me over. I saw friendly looking people, with nice faces, and gentle movements. When they came to look at me, I followed the advice my mother had given me before I had left, and stood quietly, and tried my very best to be friendly. However, when someone who looked unkind came, and I could always tell, because of the way they spoke, and even the rough way they acted, I stayed at the back of the stall and even occasionally kicked the wall. They soon passed by.

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After three hours of standing in the stall, I was led out into the ring. As I was led round, I heard a voice saying "Two year old female, Diamond Beauty! Sired by the famous showjumper Dexter, and her Dam is the fabulous dressage champion, Checkers. She has fabulous potential! If treated right, she could be great! Diamond Beauty has not been broken in, has no vices, and is known to be gentle. Look at those paces!" I walked, trotted, cantered and galloped around the ring to the best of my ability, while the voice called out "Starting bid £2000! Anyone? Yes! £2100, lady on the left, gentleman on the right. Higher? How about £2200? Yes, same bidders! £2300! £2400! £2500! Do we have £2500? Sold! To the Lady on the left!" Then, I was led out, and led to a different stall.

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After only a few seconds in this stall, a lady came to my stall. I knew straight away that she would be a kind, gentle Master, and I nickered in relief. "Hello Diamond. I've come to take you home!" she said, talking to me in a gentle voice, as she clipped on my headcollar. She led me to the trailer, and gently persuaded me in. The journey was very long, but I wasn't scared, as the woman stopped often. When the journey eventually finished, and the trailer door was opened, I walked out into the Sunshine. "Welcome home little Diamond!" she said. "Welcome to my herds!" She led me to a wide field, that stretched out into the distance, where I could make out a barn. I barely noticed this though, as beside the fence, neighing at me, was my mother.

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That was a few years ago now. I still live here, happy, with my mother and many other horses. I love it, and don't ever want to leave.


I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it. Of course, yes.




For more information on the herds mentioned here, click on the cat/horse/rabbit (animated sig) in my signature, and there's a post on it there. Dee would live there, and this story would be there. Once I get a few more charries for my herd, I might do some roleplaying, get some art (single and group), stuff like that




Finished!

[Mari-Chan]

Creature's Name: Tidal
Image:
Code: *editing*
Preferences: you can change the name, but not the gender (female). Don't revamp, please, and if you are donating her or thinking about giving her just send her back to me. Its ok to use her as your fursona if you decide to.
Link Art Link: *editing*
Did you originally adopt this design here, and if yes what did you name it? No, i drew her as art practice, and thought it would be a waste to just get rid of her ^^

[Lirrie]

Creature's Name: Tidal
Image:
Code: *editing*
Preferences: you can change the name, but not the gender (female). Don't revamp, please, and if you are donating her or thinking about giving her just send her back to me. Its ok to use her as your fursona if you decide to.
Link Art Link: *editing*
Did you originally adopt this design here, and if yes what did you name it? No, i drew her as art practice, and thought it would be a waste to just get rid of her ^^

Hun donations arnt open yet.