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Re: My songs

Postby Angel-of-music » Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:03 am

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Re: My songs

Postby Angel-of-music » Fri Aug 24, 2012 10:54 am

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Re: My songs

Postby Angel-of-music » Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:40 am

Bump... sorry for being so busy, have been out of inspiration for good songs.... and extremely busy with everything off the computer for once. I will be trying to get at least one song up soon, I promise. But, in the meantime, I put some other videos up on youtube (still don't have a video camera, so there's nothing but darkness) but I recorded with a microphone so it's much better quality... click on the old link for my cover of my immortal, and the videos should be on the side of it (I think they're called You're not alone cover... and castle on a cloud... they're not my best, I could have chosen songs that fit my voice much better than them because I'm not a saprano, high notes aren't exactly my best))\
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Re: My songs

Postby live4music » Wed Oct 24, 2012 8:29 am

i have to write some stupid thank you letters for 4h but as soon as i'm done i plan to read them. i'm pretty sure i've read one and i remember i loved it! friendly bump :)
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Re: My songs

Postby Angel-of-music » Sat Oct 27, 2012 11:54 am

I believe I told you about a few of my songs, but hadn't kept you completely up to speed. Hope to get at least one more up in the next month or so. Have been currently out of creativity and time.
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Re: My songs

Postby The last whisper » Sun Oct 28, 2012 12:28 am

i hope it gets up soon, your songs are totally awesome :3
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Re: My songs

Postby Unashamed » Sun Nov 25, 2012 2:30 am

Hi, I just want you to know, I LOVE your songs! They're all so awesome! My favorite is the one that fits me the most: Behind the Mask.
Also, I've sent you a PM, and I'm hoping you'll accept my offer.
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Re: My songs

Postby Angel-of-music » Fri Dec 07, 2012 10:02 pm

I have been editing one of my songs, Lover's loss. I wanted to show everyone how it is now before I put it up, to see how others like it.

Lover's Loss

It all starts with just one word,
the final deadly blow.
Everything falls apart,
fleeting fast and falling slow.

It tears up many lives,
and claiming so much more.
Yes, just that one word,
and all could be done for.

Lover's loss, and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.

Bitter tears shall fall,
Fiery tempers flare.
The crushed and broken shards,
always handled without care.

Some may be mended,
but so many are not.
Almost all battles,
are lost being fought.

Lover's loss and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.

Lover's loss and hearts demise,
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
trying to remain until...

Lover's loss and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.
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Re: My songs

Postby Unashamed » Sat Dec 08, 2012 2:46 am

I like it!
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Re: My songs

Postby Angel-of-music » Mon Dec 10, 2012 10:07 pm

I didn't change it too much, just made the words more even syllable-wise. Not that it matters for songs though, really.
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