by Angel-of-music » Fri Dec 07, 2012 10:02 pm
I have been editing one of my songs, Lover's loss. I wanted to show everyone how it is now before I put it up, to see how others like it.
Lover's Loss
It all starts with just one word,
the final deadly blow.
Everything falls apart,
fleeting fast and falling slow.
It tears up many lives,
and claiming so much more.
Yes, just that one word,
and all could be done for.
Lover's loss, and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.
Bitter tears shall fall,
Fiery tempers flare.
The crushed and broken shards,
always handled without care.
Some may be mended,
but so many are not.
Almost all battles,
are lost being fought.
Lover's loss and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.
Lover's loss and hearts demise,
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
trying to remain until...
Lover's loss and hearts demise.
The end of all those clear blue skies.
Torn apart and begging still,
wanting back their life's will.