~Goennec~ Round: Closed

My gallery · by **Desmond** » Sat May 29, 2010 4:38 am

My gallery · by **Kit-Kat** » Sat May 29, 2010 6:26 am

aha Im now done with my form seeing that im all out of ideas XD I cant wait to see who winds saterday and stuff I like everyones forms.

My gallery · by **Quay** » Sat May 29, 2010 9:46 am

Goennec Pen #:5
Name: Fei
How would you use him/her: She would be put in my signature and I would draw pictures of her and add them to a website (I’m planning on making one). She would be used on the goennec website and she would always be loved. Fei would never collect dust or be forgotten.

Define your Goennec: Fei is a very intelligent goennec who uses her intelligence to get out of all her problems. She is brave, but sometimes does not use her brain. Fei is a very sly goennec that is sneaky . She is a very pleasant goennec to be around and is very kind towards others.

HISTORY
Fei was born under a beautiful overhang that was very large. With a tiny trickle of water coming from the top with a couple of rocks in the spring. She lived there with her older sister Kiara, her mother Leah, and her father Hawk. They had never left the overhang only to get food and they loved it there. They lived in a herd with four other family’s and they had allot of food stored for the winter. Every year the herd would go out all together and gather food. Enough for the whole year so they would not have to look for food in the winter when there would not be any. But, something strange happened to Fei one night, in her dream there was someone talking to her but it was very hazy so she did not hear or understand what happened in that dream so she kept it to herself.

THE STORY PART 1
Lightning flashed and harsh sheets of rain came pouring down. Fei was sleeping on a rock in the little spring and awoke from the storm. It was still very dark and the rest of the herd was asleep so Fei walked onto the sand under the overhang that was wet from the rain. She went over to the food pile and got some berries to eat and then went back over to where she was sleeping and curled up next to her sister. In Fei’s dream there was an elderly male goennec sitting on the ground. This was just like the dream she had when she was younger but very clear. The elderly goennec started to talk and said” There is a goennec in your herd that will kill the leader your father and make himself the leader and make all of you his slaves.”
“ What do I have do to stop this goennec and who is he or she.” said Fei
“ He is..”
Fei only heard He is and not the rest. She only had one clue it was a he. Fei could not believe that this goennec would kill her father and take over the herd she had to do something.

Fei opened her eyes but it was still a little dark and only her father was awake. Fei walked over to him she started thinking if she should tell him her dream or not. “ Good morning father I have something to tell you.” said Fei nervous
“What is it?” said her father Hawk
Fei looked into her fathers eyes. She saw purity and heart she could not tell him” Did I wake you up last night? I woke up from the storm and got something to eat.” said Fei with guilt.
“ No you did not. Today is when we all go out and gather food for the winter so go get something to drink and eat the rest of the herd will be waking up soon.” said her father

Fei went down to the spring to get a drink and saw that the sky was clearing up. She kept thinking about the dream and hoped she would have another that would give her more in formation. For now she had to find it out for herself. Fei started thinking of all the older male goennecs. There was her father Hawk, Hawks brother Eagle, Rick a father, and Ashton another father. No of them would kill her father or would they she thought to herself. Everyone was waking up and she went over to where everyone was in a group getting ready for the gathering. “Hey, Kiara can I go with you to gather?” Said Fei
“ Sure, come on we have to go to the front with mother and father.” Said her sister Kiara

Fei followed her sister through the herd to the front where her mother and father were. They left the overhang that morning to gather and did not come back till night. Fei was to tired to think about the killer goennec and she layed down to go to sleep.

In Fei’ s dream the elderly goennec appeared again and Fei immediately said “ Who’ s going to kill my father? And why is he?”
“ Calm down my young goennec his brother Eagle is going to.” He said calmly
“ But, yes is he?” she cried desperately
“ A long time ago when Hawks father as leader of the herd and he was getting old his father told him he is going to be leader after he dies and Eagle heard so got very mad and jealous of Hawk.”
“But why would he make us his slaves?” She cried again
“ You have to figure out yourself little one. It is my time to go.” He said with his voice fading away

Fei woke up the next morning she was paranoided with what she had found out all that day she was watching Eagle every second and never taking her eyes of him. The next day she could take it no longer and she went up to her mother” Were is father?” she said
“ He went out on walk with his brother and-” before her mother could finish her sentence Fei was running out to the woods where her father always took walks. There she saw Hawk and Eagle walking along by the river where he was getting ready to drown her father. “ No!” she screamed running forward and pushed Eagle with all her might away
“ Father” she panicked “Your brother is going to kill you, become leader of the herd, and make the rest of us his slaves!”
“ How do you know this?” her father said
“ An elder appeared to me in a dream and told me!” she said
Hawk looked at his brother and they went back to the camp and Eagle was banned from the herd forever.

THE STORY PART 2
After Eagle was sent out of the herd he traveled through the mountains to live with a different goennec herd that was cruel and mischievous like him and planned to get back at his brother and Fei.

Fei walked along the forest near the river that was silent like a mouse with the wet morning dew grass under her paws/hooves. It was so peaceful and them all of a sudden a dead goennec appeared to her but this time it was a young female goennec.” Hello Fei, my grand father sent me hear to talk to you.”
“ You mean that goennec from my dream?” Fei said
“Yes, Fei you have an amazing ability to see the dead, dream of the dead, and talk to the dead. I am your new guide, Kara that will only appear to you if you are near water.” She said and then disappeared.

Fei started blinking thinking of what just happened and went back to the camp with there beds of dry grass and food. Fei went to sleep later that day and was awoken by the birds and went to the river. She got a drink and then Kara appeared to Fei again and said “ You should go back to camp, your herd needs you.”
“ What?” Fei said
“ Go.” She said calmly

Fei started running back to camp and it was on fire! All the food was gone beds and everything gone. Fei ran back to her family and all of them started running out of camp. While Fei was running she saw that Eagle was running back to the mountains with a torch in his mouth. “ Father look its Eagle with a torch.” Fei said
Hawk looked and only saw him for one second but then he was gone. They had been traveling all night along the river without any rest and had lost two of the other family members in the fire. “ Where are we going father?” Kiara and Fei said together tired from waking
“ I don’ t know yet.” Hawk said
“ Don’ t worry we will rest soon.” Leah said

They all layed down to rest worrying that Eagle would come again. When they were all asleep Fei walked silently to the river to talk to Kara and she appeared.” Kara, will Eagle come back again?” Fei said
“ One more time by himself and then another time with the whole herd.” She said and then faded away.
Fei walked over to the herd and awoke her father and said” Father, Eagle is going to come again twice another time by himself and then with his whole herd.” Fei said
“ I believe you Fei, but just for now will you try to get some rest.” Hawk said
“ Yes.” Fei said
Fei layed down and went to sleep. The next morning Fei walked over to a tiny food pile with berries and she at two that tasted bad and made her stumic hurt bad. “ Father its Eagle!” she yelled he had poison berries in his mouth and all the herd saw. “ Ok, Who ate the berries?” The father said half of the herd stepted forward and the healer in the herd took them to the river. “ Those berries are deadly and the only way to cure it is to eat an herb growing along the river.” she left and came back with herbs that she told everyone to eat and three of the herds members died.

Fei walked over to her family and said” Have you noticed that Eagle keeps coming back every day so all that herd will come tomarrow.”
“ Not if they find us.” Hawk said

They started walking again through the forest to a new unknown land and did not stop once to rest or eat and drink. They got to a vally and stoped to rest, Fei walked over to a tiny puddle the only water there and Kara appered “ You are not safe here.” She said
“ Where is safe land then?” She said tired
“ Nowhere untill you defet Eagle.” Kara said
Fei told her father what they had to do and they got ready for the other herds arival. Later that day the dark herd came to the vally and Eagle stepped forward “ This is the last revenge.” He said
The goennecs from Hawks herd stepped back and a dark shadow started going over the dark herd. Up on the hilltop a couple of goennecs were pushing a huge rock with all there might and it fell on the dark herd never that was never seen again. ( Major WIP)

My gallery · by **Desmond** » Sun May 30, 2010 4:20 am

Woah. O.o;;

Please edit the form you previously posted, rather than post a new one with the edits; this just confuses me. Confusing the listmaker = x.x You can always bookmark the form on your browser to work on later, it's what I do.

My gallery · by **Lirrie** » Sun May 30, 2010 4:26 am

O.o we can bump others threads, well besides that my form is coming out wonky.

My gallery · by **Desmond** » Sun May 30, 2010 4:32 am

xD Yeah, we can. :3

I'm tweaking my form, still... gloriousness. <3

My gallery · by **Skylarr.** » Sun May 30, 2010 5:08 am

*jitters* judging is today!

My gallery · by **Lirrie** » Sun May 30, 2010 5:09 am

Im trying to summon the power the powr of making a good form without it being long.

My gallery · by **Skylarr.** » Sun May 30, 2010 7:38 am

Bump/Need any help judging??

My gallery · by **iBrevity** » Sun May 30, 2010 7:39 am

Minnie:) wrote:Bump/Need any help judging??

Kamaliah will let people know if we need any help judging. :3 Just be patient. xD

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