Travel Journal (a Cs pet Journal)

[. ME]

Nice, very good and detailed.

I don't think this should be classified as a Journal, though...Because you end at a lot of cliff-hangers, and remember, its supposed to be someone writing in a journal, not exactly a regular story...

[xxazul63xx]

(oh my gosh! I'm soooo sorry i haven't been writing, i've been real busy with school! also my muse has been failing me...)


Dear TJ,

Ana and I are walking through the desert, it's scorching hot. My throat feels dry and my backpack feels like i'm carrying rocks. My fur burned beneath the sun, I could feel myself getting sunburned under my fur. Ana was doing better than me, since she lived in the desert, also her fur is lighter than mine. But at least where she used to live there was actually some life, lizards, hare's, some trees. Here there was nothing but scraggly bushes and rattle snakes.
I wiped the sweat from my forehead, then flicked the droplets from my hand.
Suddenly Ana grabbed my arm, "A vulture...." she whispered, her voice trembling.
I looked up to see the large bald headed bird circling above our head. I pulled out my bow and fitted an arrow into it, I held it up to my shoulder. I let the arrow fly up above my head, it hit the vulture in the chest. It let out a small cry before tumbling down to earth. Ana ran forward and caught it in her arms, dust flying up behind her.
"Yes!" she cried, turning around with a grin on her face.
I smiled, then grabbed the vulture by it's leg. Ana pointed to a large stone, about a quarter of a mile away, with a ledge jutting out to one side. The sand that lay in it's shade looked cool and peaceful. We began jogging towards it, the thought of food and shade giving us renewed energy.
When we reached the rock, we were panting and sweat was running through my fur. I sat down in the shady sand with a sigh of relief, running my hands through the sand. Ana flopped over onto the sand and let out a small cry of glee. Suddenly we were interrupted by the by the sound of rattling, similar to that of a maraca. A flash of mottled brown and tan lunged toward Ana then drew back sharply. Ana gave a sharp cry of pain and scrambled away from the creature, holding onto her arm.
"Ana!" I cried, scrambling over to her.
She let out a whimper and released her arm, exposing two bite marks.
She looked up at me with wide frightened eyes, "I've been bitten by a rattle snake...."

[Luna~tic]

cliff hanger!

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Please write more when you have time!

[xxazul63xx]

I'm so sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ponies have over taken my muse O.o

I will write more as soon as possible!

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I'm so sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ponies have over taken my muse O.o

I will write more as soon as possible!

It's alright, I understand!

[xxazul63xx]

Gah sorry i didn't update, ponies and school are very distracting

Dear TJ

Ana was trembling violently, clutching her injured arm and letting out short panicked breaths. I turn and kicked the rattle snake, sending it flying into the sand. It hissed before slithering away, its tail rattling. I turned to her, to find her sucking on the wound and spitting out blood. I was confused and creeped out, but then I realized what she was doing, she was trying to get all the venom out of her blood. She stopped after a few minutes and rested her back against the rock.
"I think I got all the venom out" she whispered, before letting out a long breath.
I sighed in relief, though she was still trembling. I picked up the dead vulture and began to pluck the feathers and gut it before cutting it into large chunks of meat. I kept glancing over my shoulder at Ana, who was staring into the distance.
"Are you alright?" I asked, picking up the meat.
she nodded "Just got scared.... That's all"
I smiled at her, as if trying to comfort her, before stepping out of the shade and looking around. I didn't have any wood to make a fire, and the few dead bushes that dotted the horizon weren't enough for a proper fire. I frowned, then got an idea. I turned to the rock Ana was sitting under and began climbing it. It was burning hot but my gloves protected my paws, so I was able to get to the top. I lay the chunks of meat on the hot surface and waited as the began to cook.
"What are you doing up there?" Ana called from below.
I laughed and peered over the ledge, "Cooking."
She gave a weak smile, still clutching her arm, "continue"
I hoisted myself back up onto the rock, turning to the meat. After a few more minutes they were done and I brought them back down. I handed two chunks of it to Anna, and one for myself, the rest I put in my bag. Anna seemed a bit confused on why she was given to pieces, but didn't argue. I was glad, she needed to keep her strength up if she was going to make it through the desert.
~Dark rose

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Awesome entry! Please write more when you have time.

[leg]

Really, really, really good!! More when you can please!!