~Goennec~ Round: Closed

Come adopt or share user-created adoptable species here.
Forum rules
These adoptables are not official CS pets and cannot be added to your CS account.
Art theft is not tolerated here. Do not copy/trace/edit/use anybody's pictures without their express permission.
If you are unsure, read the full art rules here.

Once-off adoptables belong in Character Sales and Design Shops: Forum/viewforum.php?f=69

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Lirrie » Tue May 11, 2010 7:56 am

Kyunobi wrote:
iBrevity wrote:
Kyunobi wrote:I'm torn between trying for sunrise or Bold ;_;

Do Sunrise. xDD -doesn't want competition for Bold-

Why thank you XD
Pft, I'll love to see what you come uyp with for bold, so I think I'm going for sunrise :3


Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr lol Sunrise is mine go for bold XD I need no competion. :lol:
ImageMy Da /Crystalines Sangie's SantuaryImage

Image
I am a holibomber!
I have gifted 5 people.
I have received 9 gifts.

Image
User avatar
Lirrie
 
Posts: 24879
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:58 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Toadfoal » Tue May 11, 2010 10:14 am

iBrevity wrote:
Kindles wrote:@iBrevity: I think Bold may just be the one everyone wants... so you is screweded. XD

I'll be fine. I've got a strong form, since I've been writing his story all of last week. ;3

This makes me excited. I can't help but love to read your forms! XD
User avatar
Toadfoal
 
Posts: 5625
Joined: Sun Jan 25, 2009 12:22 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby iBrevity » Tue May 11, 2010 10:16 am

Toadfoal wrote:This makes me excited. I can't help but love to read your forms! XD

Aww. <3 That means a lot, because I always like your writing too. xDD I've got up like five pages if you want to go read it now. ;3
Image


[art by Baylin]


brev [she/her]

tired librarian
feral bird lover
User avatar
iBrevity
 
Posts: 8575
Joined: Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:35 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Brisa » Tue May 11, 2010 10:26 am

Image

Goennec Pen #:4
Name:Daffodil
How would you use him/her: As a character, I would love to join the goennec roleplay and I will get art of her usually, and even draw her myself
Define your Goennec:
"Are you sure?" she asked as a tear rode down her cheek
"yes I am" the other replied" she was a bit bigger and had a beautiful brown coloration interrupted by some strange white spots
"don't leave me, merane" the yellow one whispered trying to contain her tears
"Daffodil, I will never leave you" she answered, calmed and soft
"but you are going far away and you know I will not be able to see you again before..." she whispered to herself, trying to focus her eyes in a rock near her paw
"silly goennec, I will always be here" she touched her chest with her hoove, just below where her heart beated, slowly, sadly...

Daffodil smiled. She was going to miss her friend a lot, but she knew she would come back for the typic celebrations in fall. She asked her
"will you bring me a gift?" she said finally
"I will bring you the biggest Daffodil I found" she said smiling

When the female saw that smile she felt the time freezed and the world was better to live in it. Maybe evrything was better than expected and they were going to join again in fall. All a month for them. Just the two of them

"Goodbye" Merane said before giving her a last smile. Merane's parents were getting ready to leave the town. It was a long journey and she had to help her mother. Daffodil felt plain. She had cried and taken out all her pain and sadness and now she only felt tired. She went to her house, slowly, the clouds were getting darker every time and she hoped a torment would come to carry and wash away all her feelings. She remembered how her mother sang happy sleeping songs with her melodious voice

She arrived home. Her parents were waiting for her "Daffodil! We were so worried about you! Where were you?" they asked her before her mother huged her. But Daffodil didn't cry at all. She just didn't feel like to do that.

Months passed as fast as they could and Daffodil made new friends, they were not as Merani, she was unique and she could never replace her. But she was hoping to fall for seeing her again. Her parents went to visit their family and maybe they would make that place their new home, even if Merani said that she hated that place Daffodil knew it wasn't true, she tried to cheer her up everytime she felt down. She was the best friend ever and that's why she loved her.

Anyways, fall was in the air, the gracious winds took off the leafs from the trees and Daffodil felt happy. Every morning she went to the forest border to search for her friend, and waited for her under a big tree.

One day, she saw too goennecs from afar, Daffodil was very excited and went to see better, but sh didn't like what she saw. Those were Merane's parents, but she wasn't with them. She asked nervously "where's Merani?" trying to force a smile and hide her legs shaking. The female goennec looked at her mate in sadness, Daffodil felt dizzy, that couldn't be happening, her friend, she wanted her friend to jump out of the bushes to tell her it was all a bad dream. She ran away. She heard the goennecs calling her, but she didn't want to obbey them, or anyone, she was too confused.

She sited down in a rock near a small river. Exactly in the rock she looked at when she was angry with Merane for leaving her. Daffodil knew she would never come back, but she didnt feel as painful as she thought someday, she was calmed, but she couldnt accept the reality. She knew her friend had a disease wich was very delicated and that was the reason she moved in the first place, but she wasnt able to come back to bid goodbye to her friend..

She heard someone was coming, it was her mother, she huged her in silence. After a while her mother ventured to say "Wherever she is, I know she loves you" before giving her a shy smile, she was as shocked as her daughter. "I know that" Daffodil answered smiling before moving slowly the rock. Her mother tried to guess what she was doing. The rock was lighter than expected, it wasnt so big, but at the side of it, almost smashed it was a Daffodil plant. The goennec picked up one and put it behind her ear "She never left me" she said smiling at her mother.

Image


Note: english isnt my main language, so, I had to translate some words, please excuse any incoherence
:3
Last edited by Brisa on Sat May 15, 2010 10:47 am, edited 6 times in total.
Somewhere else 8'D
User avatar
Brisa
 
Posts: 1855
Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:12 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Desmond » Tue May 11, 2010 10:31 am

Image
Characters /2/ PikakeClan /4/ F3 Pod
Part of the journey is the end.

ImageImageImage
Image
Good luck.
User avatar
Desmond
Oekaki Moderator
 
Posts: 17502
Joined: Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:59 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby MirrorMask » Tue May 11, 2010 10:34 am

Ah porr Londi I might go for her...
Image Image Image
Image
message for kalon commissionstoyhou.sekalons
User avatar
MirrorMask
 
Posts: 6036
Joined: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:43 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Tammanae » Tue May 11, 2010 10:40 am

Image
Goennec Pen #:
2
Name:
Floral/Blossom
How would you use him/her:
I would love to draw her, get art from her, and definitely use her to join the rp. ^^
Define your Goennec:

Image

Rays of sunlight lit the porch where a small white goety lay, her back sunning as she breathed comfortably in the serene wind. A brown collar encompassed her neck, showing her position as pet of the household.

"Floral?" a voice came from nearby, and she opened her eyes to see her mother standing over her, giving her a curious look.

The small goety blinked and stood up, her hooves clattering a little on the wooden porch. "What is it, mother?" she asked, her ears swiveling lightly.

The golden brown goety with back hooves and black mane looked at her daughter as she sat down next to her. "I have noticed you have been laying in rest most of the time lately. Is there a reason you do not wish to play with your brother and sister?"

Floral flattened her ears lightly and looked to the side, avoiding her mother's gaze. They keep calling me names and bullying me... that's what... she thought angrily, but remained quiet.

"Well?" her mother asked, prodding her with a paw in a gentle way.

"I guess I have just taken to liking the sunlight," she answered, beaming up at the older goety. "I'll try to not do it as much," she promised, noticing the look on her mother's face.

Her mother blinked warmly down at her and licked her between her still growing horns, tangling her mane.

"Mo-om. I just fixed it this morning!" she complained, making her mother give a small bleat of amusement.

"Cally!" came a voice from inside, accompanied by other words. The older goety got up and went inside as she heard her name being called by the human, leaving the small white female alone.

A shuffle in the bushes made her jump and look behind only to see a black goety and a golden brown one prancing around, jumping and play fighting with each other. Floral sighed and flattened her ears, trying to blend into the background before her brother and sister saw her.

Golden eyes flashes towards her as she moved, and the black goety bleated and rammed her with her growing horns, laughter in his throat as he saw her flail and fall, slamming against the porch bench. "Too slow! Like always!" she bleated happily, prancing and circling Floral.

"I am sorry..." Floral responded, looking at her hooves.

"Even her hooves are stupid. They grew in front instead of behind," the golden one added, joining in on his sister's fun.

The siblings were barely three months old, and they all lived at home with their mother and three humans. A male, a female and a child. The black and brown one prided themselves in looking like their mother, and believed that this was the look all goetis should have, making their third sibling strange and different, something they had come to hate due to the extra attention she sometimes got from the humans.

"Mom said that that was perfectly normal!" Floral retorted, immediately regretting having raised her voice at them. Their eyes gleamed as they could tell that she was starting to get annoyed. Why won't they just leave me alone...

* * * * *

Floral nipped at the leaves on a nearby bush, her tail swishing lightly at the tangy taste as she tried to get to the flowers.

"You are doing it wrong," she heard behind her, and she turned around and saw a flaming orange goety with a frizzy looking mane and long horns. A male goety was standing behind her, giving her a curious look. She bleated in shock and took a couple of steps back, her ears flattened in fear.

Being a house pet, she had never seen another goety in her life, and this one was particularly scary looking with a blind eye and a scar that ran across it. Her first instinct was to run away, but her front hoof had been hurt bad by her brother during their last bullying session, and she had a limp.

The wild goety sniffed at her and gave her a curious look. "You smell different from my herd... what herd do you come from that you wear those things around your necks? Or is that just a quirk of yours?" he asked, his ears perked up.

Floral's fear dissipated a little from her curiosity. "Herd?" she asked him. "You mean your humans?"

The goety snorted at this and stomped his front hoof, the right one, as she noticed that his left one was a paw. "If by humans you mean those noisy creatures that seem to be very abundant in this place, then no. I am just crossing by with my herd. A group of goeties. You must live with more goeties surely!" he said, surprise in his last statement as he realized that this white youngster did not know what he spoke of.

"I live with my momma and my brother and sister..." she answered, shifting her hooves slightly as she moved a little more back.

"Really? You are quite the small group then. My name is Grand, and my herd is currently trying to find a place to settle. We were thinking of moving on, but if there is a place we could find around here, then it would be highly appreciated if you could help," Grand said, his face brightening and making him look much less scary than he had a second earlier.

"I do not know. I live with my humans," Floral answered. Does this mean that he lives away from humans? How does he survive? And how come his hooves are one on his right front and the other on his left back? He's weird... And different...

* * * * *

"And he had huge horns! They were so cool!" Floral said enthusiastically, her tail wagging like a dog's.

Cally looked down at her daughter, her face a mix of amused and worry. "Well, he sounds like a wild one alright."

"And he sounds so weird. His hooves are even stupider than yours!" her brother retorted, his face screwed up in a sneer.

"Tod!" Cally reprimanded, whacking the small goennec with her paw. "I have told you before that making fun of your sister's hoof placement is not nice. Besides, it is perfectly normal for her hooves to be in the front. She just happens to be the only one in this house who has them."

"But they are green, and her fur color is weird. Even her markings are weird."

"That is enough out of you Mina," Cally snarled, starting to get angry at her little one's usual picking on Floral. The last picking on her had left Floral with a small limp which she could only hope would leave her soon or otherwise she wouldn't find a home as fast. Her humans would make sure of that.

"Yes momma..." Mina replied, looking down at her paws. "Let's go play Tod!" Mina said, jumping on her brother and tumbling outside with him.

Cally looked back as she saw her children go out the door and turned her gaze back to Floral, who was looking down at her paws. "Don't let them bother you..." she said, walking up to her and licking her head lightly.

"Yes momma..." Floral sighed, getting up and limping under the couch, not in the mood to be outside much today.

* * * * *

Almost a month had passed since Floral's hoof injury, but her limp had not left. She didn't mind, as ever since then her mother had made sure that her siblings didn't bother her as much, but she still tried to keep away from them, her days spent in daydreaming of running in pastures full of sweet flowers in full bloom.

As usual, she found herself limping around her house's backyard, her ears flattened as she tried to get to the bush she loved. Movement from behind made her jump and turn around, only to see the flaming orange pelt of the wild goennec she had met before.

"Grand!" she yelped, her ears flattening.

"Madam," he bleated in good humor, doing a mock bow. "I see you have a limp there. Same one as the last time or did you create a new injury for yourself?"

"Hey!" Floral answered, frowning at him stomping her good hoof in sign of attack, but she thought it over and sat down, her ears still flattened.

"What was that? I thought you were going to attack me," Grand said, prancing around her with his tail high in a taunting gait.

Floral shrugged and looked away, her concentration turning towards the bush. "Weren't you going to be leaving this place soon?" she asked him, her voice monotone.

Grand stopped prancing at this and turned his gaze at her, his ears perked up at the change in her personality. Despite her being scared of him the first time, she had seemed curious and more alert. This time it seemed almost as though she didn't care. "Well, some young ones were born, so we must wait a while while they can travel before moving on," he explained, sitting down next to her.

"Ah..."

Grand blinked both his eyes and he poked her with his paw. "What happened to you? You seemed a lot feistier last time. Scared out of your horns, but feistier."

"I have learned that if I do not care they leave me alone..." she answered simply, glaring at both his good eye and his bad.

"Who leaves you alone?" he asked her, his eyes widening in surprise.

"Why are you blind in one eye?" Floral asked, changing the subject.

"Ah, this? I was badly scarred in a fight against an enemy fox who thought it would be fun to mess with one of the elders of my herd. I taught him who the boss was however," he bleated with contempt, a grin crossing his face.

"A fox?"

"Nasty creature, and sneaky too. Unlike us they only eat meat, but they have nowhere near our agility," he answered, wagging his tail.

"And why is your pelt orange?"

Grand blinked at her question curiously. "The same reason yours is white. I was born this way. I do remember my first mate, her pelt was as silver as the moon at night, and she had markings of gold covering her back. We come in all colors little one, you should know that. Aren't your siblings any different than you?"

"My siblings are similar to my mother... I am the only one that is pale with stupid green markings and pink dots that look-"

"As beautiful as flowers that have yet to bloom," Grand finished for her, interrupting her line of thought. "And don't let anyone else tell you anything about it. Maybe they do not seem like much, but you know that turn the spring, they will have a surprise for you," he finished, giving her a warm smile.

Floral looked away, her ears still flattened. "You sound like my mother."

"Smart female then..." he laughed, getting up. "You seemed hungry, come on, I'll help you get the flowers you were after," he said, poking her gently with his large horns to make her stand. As she stood, he realized that her limp was in the same hoof as before. "Was that a scar from battle as well?" he asked her, walking besides her.

Floral looked down at her limping hoof and shrugged. Grand looked to the front and remained quiet, knowing the little one might open up with time, and his curiosity had spiked for the solitary goennec, having noticed that the ones with collars were never so far from humans or others with the same mark of enslavement.

* * * * *

A bleat below made Floral's ears perk up. She was inside laying on the human child's lap when Grand's call sounded. She wagged her tail happily and flopped off his lap, wandering outside and seeing Grand with a second goennec. Another male, this one much younger looking than Grand. He had navy blue pelt with lines of white crisscrossing across his back and legs.

A week and a half had passed since Grand had taken to visiting Floral every other day. They normally talked about his life outside of the human city, before they had had to migrate. According to him, normally a female having a little one did not stop them from keeping up the migration, but the last female had lost her litter to a bear, which according to Grand, was the worst creature a goennec would ever encounter. The description alone was enough to make the fur on Floral's mane stand on end. The white female however had been starting to like his visits more on more each time. She felt more at peace around him, and she could be more herself than she could at home with her ever criticizing siblings.

"Who is this?" Floral asked curiously, sniffing him over.

The blue one backed away a little and gave Grand an uncertain look. Grand rolled his eyes a little and looked at Floral. "This is Din. He was curious as to what it was I got myself into every other day. He is a good lad. However, he is painfully shy... Not something good for a wild goennec," he answered, quirking his eyebrow.

"I would rather call it cautious. How do you know she will not attack me?" he asked nervously, shifting his hooves.

"Why would you think she would attack you?" Grand retorted, a glint of amusement in his eyes.

At second glance, Floral saw his horns were much smaller than Grand's, and all of his legs ended in hooves. He had no paws in him. She tilted her head curiously at this but said nothing. "Are you one of Grand's friends?" she asked, him, sitting down in front of him.

Din looked up at her, still looking like he wanted to bolt. "Um.... we live in the same herd. He has been teaching me how to properly sniff out prey, as we tend to live in areas that are not as abundant in grass as this place, and a bit of meat is always desired."

"The desert!" Floral answered happily, remembering one of Grand's stories.

"That is correct. Din here is one of the younger males of the group. He is barely 6 months old. He is a fine student however. He has improvised more tactics for prey hunting than I ever did at his age."

Din shifted uncomfortably again, looking at his hooves. "It hasn't really been that big of a deal. He likes to exaggerate."

Floral blinked warmly at him, somehow understanding how uncomfortable he felt of being spoken of. "I am sure he isn't. Grand isn't the type to say things he doesn't mean," she told him, making Grand nod in approval.

Din lifted his eyes slightly and gave a small smile. "Thanks..."

"In any case, Din and I are headed towards the creek nearby. The little ones are growing and we may be moving out soon enough. The rats of this place have an unpleasant taste, and the humans make it worse to hunt. They scare off more of my friends than I care to count," Grand commented, his ears flattening slightly.

"How do you find your meat?" Din asked Floral curiously, twitching his ear.

"My meat? My humans feed me some pellets. I have never really tasted a rat," Floral answered, wrinkling her nose in disgust.

"Cannot blame you with the taste of the ones around here," Din answered, wrinkling his own nose in turn. "Are you coming with us?" he asked, getting up as Grand had started to pad away.

"Sure!" Floral answered, jumping after them.

Her limp had slowly been leaving her, and Grand had noticed that the limp seemed less evident when she was happiest. He had concluded it was probably a mental limp by now, caused by fear of her siblings.

"Will you be living nearby when you move?" Floral asked Grand, prancing next to him in her kiddish gait.

Grand shook his head as he kept on walking. "No, we won't. I am hoping to put as much space between us and this place as possible."

Floral opened her mouth to ask him why when a voice bleated out her name angrily, and they all turned to look back. Cally, Floral's mother, was rushing towards them, her face a mix of anger and fear.

"Uh oh..." Floral muttered.

"Who is that?" Grand asked, staring at the rushing goennec with apprehension.

"My mother..." she responded... her voice worried.

* * * * *

"And what happened after that?" the small goety asked, their voices united as curiosity picked up.

"Yah! You always leave us hanging at the good parts!" a red one with a white mane asked, his little horns barely starting to show.

"Yeah! Tell us Blossom!" another bleated, clambering over the red to get a better view of the white goennec telling the story.

"Come come, it is past your bedtime," a pretty silver said, pushing them away towards the burrow that the females with kits slept in.

"Awwww...." the goetys complained, but knowing that the silver had a bit of a temper, they followed after her, bleating their farewells to Blossom.

"You didn't get to my heroic rescue," a navy blue goennec with large horns joked, sitting besides her.

Blossom snorted at him, pressing her small green horns against his flank. "I am supposing that by heroic you mean clumsy and somewhat effective at best," she answered, her eyes shining back at him.

"I think I preferred you as quiet little domestic Floral," he spat back, poking her with his hoof.

"Oh shut up Din..." she bleated, settling down where she had been sitting to sleep for the night.

"Does where you planning on ending that story anyways? At the end of your life as a pet?" he asked her. "When Grand took you in and introduced you as Blossom? A fitting name for a jewel like yourself," he said kindly in a friendly voice.

"No... I think it would have ended at... 'And so... her adventure began...'"
Last edited by Tammanae on Sun May 16, 2010 3:50 am, edited 9 times in total.
Image
User avatar
Tammanae
 
Posts: 32264
Joined: Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:56 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Cirque » Tue May 11, 2010 11:04 am

Competition. D:

I'm almost halfway done with my story for Gem, and then I can start my drawing of her. :3
ImageImageImage
Image Image Image
ImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImage
ImageImageImage
User avatar
Cirque
 
Posts: 6306
Joined: Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:40 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Lirrie » Tue May 11, 2010 11:06 am

Kindles wrote:
Image
Goennec Pen #:
2
Name:
Floral
How would you use him/her:
I would love to draw her, get art from her, and definitely use her to join the rp. ^^
Define your Goennec:
Working on it. =3


Eeep Kindles is going to jion our rp. <3
ImageMy Da /Crystalines Sangie's SantuaryImage

Image
I am a holibomber!
I have gifted 5 people.
I have received 9 gifts.

Image
User avatar
Lirrie
 
Posts: 24879
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:58 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: ~Goennec~

Postby Tammanae » Tue May 11, 2010 11:17 am

Lirrie wrote:
Kindles wrote:
Image
Goennec Pen #:
2
Name:
Floral
How would you use him/her:
I would love to draw her, get art from her, and definitely use her to join the rp. ^^
Define your Goennec:
Working on it. =3


Eeep Kindles is going to jion our rp. <3

Maybe not... I see there is more competition for her than I thought... and it takes a lot for me to adopt a character. This one just connected with me. I am not the type to stalk for more if I do or do not get the character though. X3
Image
User avatar
Tammanae
 
Posts: 32264
Joined: Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:56 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: MireyaDC and 23 guests