I'm pretty happy with it now
But I might change a few things things around
IDK.. maybe add a background too
Please also keep in mind that this is only my 4th time in the Oekaki before you give any really advanced critiques. Yes, I'd like some constructive critisism, but please don't give me a whole novel explaining every flaw my art protrays

Unique Manes/tails
~I tried to make it unique.. I've never seen anyone's ponysona with my design, although I could be wrongLine edits
~I traced over the body lines you made (If that counts...)Using your own lines
~I created my own head...Dark Colors
~I tried not to use anything too brightNeon/Black Combinations
Blue
√Purple
√Gothic Designs
(is it gothic-y?)Slightly creepyness (It's almost halloweenXD)
~I added bat wings... If that countsAdorable, cheerful designs
~I tried to make her look pretty friendlyRainbows
Epicness
~Ohyus, I think my design is pretty epicanime
simple body colors
~Tried not to make it too insaneInteresting markings
~Does the rose thing count as a marking...?A bunch of other random stuff! Just... whatever!

5 minut designs!
~For sure notPink, unless there is a lot of black involved
~No pink hereUnorrigional designs
~I think it's pretty original...Random splotches
~NooopeCan't think of anything else^^