[The Most Sincere]

Okay, first off, yours was great as it was! I only fixed a few slight anatomical errors and made it more... Chibi-Like.

Let's start with the head. When drawing Chibi, always remember this rule: "the fluffier, the better." It not only makes it more appealing to the viewer, but also adds about 25% of cuteness, when done correctly. Also, in many styles, the eyes are larger, giving it a more innocent feel. The mouth... Well, there is no guideline. Go nuts when finding your style. And as for your nose, I'd recommend the larger one, but I don't force it upon you.


Now for the body. Okay, for the head, remember the the slope from the forehead to the muzzle isn't too gradual, but it's smooth.Also, the hair doesn't normally go down to the muzzle- it stops a little past the front of the eye. That statement happens to bring us to the next topic, the eye. It shouldn't be too far back, which yours was a bit far. It's closer to the slope, but not too close. I usually measure it by the nose. Because it usually goes back about two nose lengths. Speaking of the nose, it's pretty much the same as the other one. I'd recommend bigger ones, but it isn't necessary. And as for the mouth, yours was fine, just not my style.Now for the chest. Okay, like I said before, the fluffier the better, just don't go psychotic. Make it look a bit unrealistic, but it isn't a sheep. Now for the leg. Well, a good idea is to base it on where the ear starts. See how mine is? It should be sort of like that. And your paws are perfect, so let's not even go into that. The space from the fore leg to hind leg should be just a tad-bit longer. It also slopes, as you can see well in this picture. The tail? Well, a bit fluffier, I suppose.

In general, I'd recommend to turn up the smoothing from 40-60.

Great job! These crits are very picky, but I find that sort of thing helpful. Great job!

[Queen_Conker]

thank you so much

[The Most Sincere]

No problem!