~Goennec~ Round: Closed

[June Bug]

XD after reading through the 10 pages of "OMG! Mythicals!" I figured I'd try to make as many as I could XD I hate having only one or two get all the attention and then have to let down five or more of them ^^;

[Cirque]

I'm going to be officially changing the ending time to 5pm on Saturday =3 I just don't have time to do all the judging and switch-arounds plus all my warm weather chores on Sundays XD I see that 3B already warned you all about that though, so it shouldn't really be a surprise

how much bigger Cirque? =3

This Saturaday? Dang, I've got to start typing my form up, and fast! I wasn't aware of the change before. D8
Hmm... Approximentally, ten feet tall, which is the size of the Gods of Osirus in my goennec stories, if that doesn't work, would five feet be okay? :3

[June Bug]

yup, this saturday =3 but it's not that much earlier, not even a day
O.O that's huge
I'd prefer if none where bigger than 2'6" ^^; They're meant to be small creatures

[Cirque]

yup, this saturday =3 but it's not that much earlier, not even a day
O.O that's huge
I'd prefer if none where bigger than 2'6" ^^; They're meant to be small creatures

Yeah, I figured so, I alter some of the creatures in my story then. ^^

[Kit-Kat]

glares at her form for Kim- seems rather small compared to the othere lol oh well its whats in it is whats counted >.< i ran out of ideas sooo nehh i may or may not edit.

[c00kieguirl]

My formeth (NO STEALING OR YOUR HEART WILL BE RIPPED OUT BY SCAR MY CHARECTER!!)


Goennec Pen #:2
Name: Atomali (aToh- ma-le)
How would you use him/her:
~Rp
~Stories definatly i can see it the adventure of Mali
Define your Goennec:
Atomali is:
~Loud, rude, adventuris, She is smart,

She has Hanecson's diseas her symptoms (as stated) are:
~enlarged oral features
~Deafness (can hear certain things only)
~She definatly can hear the sound you make when the letter s,u,m or w are made
~blindness
~inability to run
~smaller, but still proportional

The strenghts:
~Inability of anger
~and increased intellegence

(Note as you read this appears at the bottom as well)
*the words in parenthesis are what the goeys actually sai the word before the astris is what Meli can understand.

Atomeli sighed. She had a hard time standing. when she stood her legs wobbled and she felt herself falling. When she hit the ground she felt as if she had fallen through the ground and kept falling. her ears ringging. The black world around her was closing in on her. All she rembred is the few seconds of sight she has had. She had seen colors. She sighed and moved her head around. As if seraching. The other Goeys gathered around her. Atomali smelled the air close in on her she squealed and tried to run but she tripped and did a sloppy summersault. Thick warm air was directed at her she twitched her ears not understanding. She opened her mouth to pant. Her mothers familiar smell flooded her. She felt the darkness close in tighter. Then sleep came. The next morning Meli woke. She found her strength. She stood her legs firm. She felt the things around her with her tail. She noticed things like when you push your hoof into the ground it ground it feels hard. She twitched her ears forward and found that the wind channels in your ears like an echo. Meli smiled. She liked that sensation. She smiled again pleased. Meli sniffed the ground beneath her. She opened her mouth and licked the ground. She noticed that it tasted dry and was practically tastless it had a taste of dirt mostly. Meli ripped the grass out and twitched her ears she heard a slight ripping sound. That made her jump. She went back cautiously and ripped some up. She listened each piece made a sound based on thickness. She could tell because in each spot in her mouth she could feel a bigger gap that usual. She let the grass slide into her mouth and let the smooth taste calm her. She heard a caw in the distance. She looked up blindly her head moving searching for the thing she couldtn find. She blindly walked around the field. Other goennecs watched her but of course she didnt know that. She went over ot the goeys having smelled them. She smiled. "hello." her words were oddly formed almost not even words. The goeys laughed. She could only hear the shrill tones in the laughs. That was not a pleasent thing to Meli. She twitched her ear and covered them with her paws. They laughed harder. she yelled a twisted shriek. Then 3 more goeys walked up. They must have done something because the others left. The three sat around Meli. She could tell because they had very distinguished smells. She could tell one was at the river the other at the hill and one had been eating berries recently. She smiled and clucked her tounge happily. One of them licked her ear and rubbed against her. Meli liked that. it gave her a sense of what that person was like. She sighed. She wondered and mumbled sounds. The three goennecs looked at her. Meli waved her paw around motioning to the world. Her eyes widened then closed then widened. The goeys thought about what i could mean. The goeys asked "What?" Meli heard "a?" she said it "A". The goeys watched her. She motioned to the world then said "A?" again. The goennecs rested there head on their paws pondering over what Meli was saying. At this point Meli was getting a little frustrated. She felt normal. But how could she tell. She sighed. The goeys started to talk Meli listened intently, "She eeps*(keeps) otionin*(motioning) round her." "A tha posed*(supposed) to mean." "It as if she is otionin(motioning) to the orld. (world)." Meli repeated the world world. "Orld?(world)" The goeys nodded "Ye(yes) orld(world) i(is) big." Meli nodded "Orld big." She sniffed in her nose grasping the many smells of the world. She smiled satified that there was a name for it. The goey continued, "It fll(full) of colr (color)." Another pipped in "Colr i in gra (grass). Gra is beneath yo(you)" Meli tileted her ears "Colr round me?" The goey nodded "Yes."Meli nodded "Yes." The goeys squeled in delight they just realized that she can say little words correctly the proper sounds were made. Meli listened. She liked that sound it was not like the shrill laughter that she had heard earlier. She smiled. The goeys turned to her satisfied. One of them said "Us talk ever(every) day. You ill(will) get betar at talking." Meli nodded "Yes. Meli like talk." She stretched the word talk since hse didnt know how ot say it. The sound came out pretty accurate.

*the words in parenthesis are what the goeys actually say the word before the astris is what Meli can understand.

A tale of a SIlver Spoon (May not finish X,X)

Meli sighed. Her snake who at this point has not been talked off since Meli alone is my love along with the snake she i am her dreamer. Meaning i persue her in mine and her dreams. This was not slight dream or coincidence. Well it was dreadfully hot day to make mattes worse. Only the northern half of the river was cool enough to swim in. Well one of the meaner goennecs had been brave and wandered far to close to the two-legs houses. He had found a mysterious thing that they called a spoon. How he knew what it was called concerned no others. Well Meli aske dher friend the snake, "Friend waht mst(must) i do? It (its) to hot to go on like thi(this). And if i go over the border they made i hall(shall) get hit on the head with the poon(spoon)." The snake chuckled. "Hum well you could go in the water and swim over the border." Meli shook her head The snake sighed "Oh dear. how about just walking over the border." Meli scrunched up her nose. "I ill(will) try it!" She walked over the border and went in the water. meli sighed her tounge falling out of her mouth in relief. The goeys stared at her. None of them moving. The snake watched from a tree quite satisfied. Meli swam around and had a grand time. When she got out. Bang. She got hit on the head by the spoon. The blow was not fattal but it had definatly taken meli by suprise. Her loyal friends came and yelled at the other goennecs. Meli didnt bother listen since her head was spinning. What seemed to be a century dragged by before her friends nudged her to leave. That night there was a the herd gathering. Meli saw the goey with the spoon. There was a rock behind him she crouched behind it. The goey was telling a story. "Want to hear how i got this old friend?" He waved the spoon around with his front paw. The other nodded excitedly. "Well i had gone past the houses for the race you two arranged. i wanted a head start to see who won. Then i heard harsh screams. And some sobbing. A childs gorping hands and then some one flung this out the window. Ive had it for 3 moons now." The others beamed "Wonderfull story." The goey bowed dramatically. Meli rolled her eyes. It was clear to her that SOME ONE wanted that spoon more than that goey. And needs it more. She pursed her lips and walked off to find her friends. That night. She saw correctiong she is blind she cant see anything she sniffed her way to the goey detirmined to get the dreaded spoon. She smelled the hard metal. kept moving her lips around trying to fin the spoon. She spent a while groping for it. Then she found it her lips slipping around the cold metal. She shivered. One of the goennecs sleeping nearby shifted and moaned.Meli sat hoping she would be still enough to not be noticed. They goey turned away. Satisfied Meli sighed. The snake shook its tail. She got up and slowly creapt away. A ball of dirt broke under her paws. She looked up allarmed she sniffed hoping the others wouldnt notice. She ran. She ran past all familarities. She froze as she was ten goennecs away from the village.She ran till she reached the veyr edge of teh town.She stopped so abruptly she did a flip and landed on her side. Tehe snake hissed. She twitched her ears got up and walked at a slow pace nervously. The snake watched attently. "There i(is) a mall(small) cottage on the outskirt(s) of the ton(town). i doubt the poon(spoon) could have come form any other house. Not even I is brave enough to go straight into the ton(town) alive!" That made Meli shiver she walked up to the cottage. Meli walked up to the wall. She couldnt see so she walked till she rna into it. The thud suprised her but not as much as the impact. The snake sighed. "Tand (stand) up straight." Meli obediantly did so.The snake slithered up the wall. He peaked in the window "Nothing in thi(s) room." Meli walked around the outside wall of the house. Meli noticed that the smell changed. from dirt to tile. She snorted. She heard some nervouse shuffling in a metal house thing. Meli noticed and twitched her ears. The snake mumbled "Top(Stop) wait here." The snake slithered down and investigated it. Soon it slithered back to the nervouse meli. "For one. There i(is) a ild(child) in thei(their. Calm down." Meli sighed btu shivered insted of calming.She tried to prop open the little shed. The boy inside shuffled to the back. meli could tell due to the bang bang bang. Of his feet on the metal. The boy looked up as Meli opened the door. Meli bleated at him. She droped the spoon and stepped back. Then she turned and ran all the way back to camp. She stopped and panted. It was morning. Meli sat on the hill and watched the sunrise.As all the other goeys woke they were taken by suprise that the spoon was gone. Meli smiled. and waked by "Next time be carfll ho(who) you hit ith(with) a poon(spoon)!!"

Poems i can imagine her saying: (that i wrote)

Stupidity is something no one is birthed with
Some are Ignorant
Soem are slow
Some are unable
But NEITHER are stupidity

Comfort has many forms
Soft and Cuddly
As you weep
Piled up in a head
Listening attently to the sounds

Lovely tear drops in the sky
Fall around me as i cry
Desperation Floods my head
As the clock ticks away
Draining color from the air
My Clocks broken what bout yours?

Difference
Is a matter of say
Saying it is a matter is all so true
Who or what has the right to define
Difference
Who has the difference to define it?

Meli
Kind, Sweet, Sensitive, and Adventurus
Meli
Unsure, Rude, Detirmined
Meli a flower like no other
A song with a spin
Its tune is so captivating
Meli is a dancer
Spinning all around
Leaving a web to follow
Meli
The confused Child
Sitting at theback of the room
Studying what rarely is
Learning from things others arent able to
Meli
a goey like you and i

Long sighs drag along the day
The day dragging on a slow
i open my eyes to the blankness of the world
For everything would be blank without a mind

WIP man i feel bad i still hope i get her though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Desmond]

I have all of the forms.

Lirrie, I'm critiquing yours now, I had somewhere to go.

Kam, I'll just send the normal six when I send the forms. ;)

[June Bug]

XD kay, that'll eliminate my possible brain-fart

[Desmond]

The only problems would be with the few that have both Affected and normal forms in the same post. >.< In that case, I'll have to poke you incessantly with a reminder if you post who got the Cyclops and Chimaera in the results.

[June Bug]

XD just put in huge colorful letters that I can't give them out yet in the PM