[GoldenWings]

This is my first entry.

This is Sandbird. She is not even 8 moons old, but is already working like an adult. Remember the hardships of the old forest? Remember all the wasted souls, the broken dreams, the brilliant minds, all wasted? Sandbird remembers. And Sandbird will never forget, never forgive.
Sandbird had a talent. Sandbird was a healer, a quick mind, gentle paws and open soul. She was a comforting young creature with an open heart and clear head. Brokenstar did not care for all her talents. Instead, he saw it as an unnesessary distraction. He tried to bend her will, to break her in to a mindless slavery as so many others. But Sandbird was young, stubborn and foolish. She asked questions and recieved beatings. She helped a fellow cat and recieved harsh, painful words. At 8 moons old, she was driven to the brink of her will. Driven so far as to commit suicide. She wandered to the Thunderpath and was killed by a monster. She now hunts with StarClan.

[SinkingSun]

Very pretty! I love how you made the prey in front of her and her back speckles are beautiful!
Remember, the contest ends tomorrow at 3:30 PM.