[Flowerdust]

This is my first adoptible and I really love him, but I think you guys will love him more. I will be judging on the effort I think was put into the form. I will be also juding on the best name. This will end on the 26 at 12 CS time. Also add ons are allowed. If you have any more questions just post below and good luck!

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[Sketchy]

Name:

Gathii (GAH thee ee) - Traveller; wanderer

Gender:

Male

Short Shory:

He knows the story off by heart, as it had been told many times around the Oasis.
Such a tale was too much a part of him to ever let his attention drift.
"On the stormiest day of the year a mother, baring calf, emerged from the sands. It was the middle of the night. She had obviously been walking for a decent length of time, possibly all day, in that horrible weather. Only a few hours had gone by, and we did all we could. She passed that night, not a sound she made, nor hostile move she took. The spirit left us with one gift, one memory: Gathii born of the Burdened Traveler."
His origin was a mystery. Could his mother really have been a spirit?

That morning, the blistering sun awoke him. Foolish! He had fallen asleep without taking shelter.
He blindly moved around, trying to find the opening. The sun is too bright and hot, the herd perfered the night. Their fluffy coats protected them from the chills that befall a darkened desert. Finally his eyes began to adjust. Where was he? Surely this wasn't the Oasis, and the cave was no where to be found! The herd will be staying in this Oasis a few more nights before moving to the next, find shelter now and guide yourself by the stars when nightfall comes, he thought to himself.

It seemed hopeless. The sun was almost centered in the sky and he had not yet found shelter or water. His reserves were running low, and the cactus were sparse. He remembered the Elder taking the calves out for survival lessons.
"The trick to eating cactus, is to scrape off the prickles." The Elder used the hard part of his toes to gently remove, not only the prickles, but also the tough flesh. Liquid beaded on the exposed surface and the calves licked their lips.
The Elder ate half of the plant, the remainer created a pool which (to Gathii) resembeled the Oasis. "These will be your Oasis on days with no water. But only take what you need, too much at once can be detrimental."
Gathii looked down at his meal, and his eyes grew wide. How could he let himself finish? The entire cactus was gone, except for the base where the roots began. He couldn't control himself, his body was dehydrated and desperately needing sustenance. As he continued along his legs began to feel weak, his vision blurring, and he felt like the ground below him was moving like the rippels on water's surface. Next thing he knew he was on the ground, and could barely make out the figure moving toward him.

~WIP~

[albinny trancy]

Let's get to know you~
Name: Fay
Gender: male
Age: 14
Why do you want him?: Oh, he's simply marvelous! owo I'd take very good care of him.
What will you do for him?:
Short Story:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Other: WIP.

Further~
Personality:

Deeper~
Bio

[Evanna Lynch]

I won't even try - *wishes I was an artist like SKetchy* )

[Sketchy]

I didn't mean to scare everyone off... =(

[Flowerdust]

I just want to remind everyone I`m not mainly judging on art, but creativty. You vould write a poem, or any thing I just want to see that he`ll be loved guys!

[Flowerdust]

This ends tonight! Get your entries in people

[Flowerdust]

Name:

Gathii (GAH thee ee) - Traveller; wanderer

Gender:

Male

Short Shory:

He knows the story off by heart, as it had been told many times around the Oasis.
Such a tale was too much a part of him to ever let his attention drift.
"On the stormiest day of the year a mother, baring calf, emerged from the sands. It was the middle of the night. She had obviously been walking for a decent length of time, possibly all day, in that horrible weather. Only a few hours had gone by, and we did all we could. She passed that night, not a sound she made, nor hostile move she took. The spirit left us with one gift, one memory: Gathii born of the Burdened Traveler."
His origin was a mystery. Could his mother really have been a spirit?

That morning, the blistering sun awoke him. Foolish! He had fallen asleep without taking shelter.
He blindly moved around, trying to find the opening. The sun is too bright and hot, the herd perfered the night. Their fluffy coats protected them from the chills that befall a darkened desert. Finally his eyes began to adjust. Where was he? Surely this wasn't the Oasis, and the cave was no where to be found! The herd will be staying in this Oasis a few more nights before moving to the next, find shelter now and guide yourself by the stars when nightfall comes, he thought to himself.

It seemed hopeless. The sun was almost centered in the sky and he had not yet found shelter or water. His reserves were running low, and the cactus were sparse. He remembered the Elder taking the calves out for survival lessons.
"The trick to eating cactus, is to scrape off the prickles." The Elder used the hard part of his toes to gently remove, not only the prickles, but also the tough flesh. Liquid beaded on the exposed surface and the calves licked their lips.
The Elder ate half of the plant, the remainer created a pool which (to Gathii) resembeled the Oasis. "These will be your Oasis on days with no water. But only take what you need, too much at once can be detrimental."
Gathii looked down at his meal, and his eyes grew wide. How could he let himself finish? The entire cactus was gone, except for the base where the roots began. He couldn't control himself, his body was dehydrated and desperately needing sustenance. As he continued along his legs began to feel weak, his vision blurring, and he felt like the ground below him was moving like the rippels on water's surface. Next thing he knew he was on the ground, and could barely make out the figure moving toward him.

~WIP~

THe winner is Sketchy! I adored your stiry and your art was breathtaking

[Sketchy]

Thank you! <3

[Flowerdust]

np you deserved him!