[imnotadalek]

done! dont worry its the same wolf

[Equid Phantasm]

Nicely done. tips later, I'm kinda busy at the moment. : )

[Equid Phantasm]

Nicely done. I had crit your artwork awhile ago on the Friday... the data was lost. So, here we go again.

It's a nice piece of artwork, I really like the flower and the fact that you are one of the few who looked at the fact I like a little bit of steampunk. I would have liked it a little bit more if there'd been a necklace instead of on the rear end though.

Here's my tips as I'm giving everyone tips.

1. When you have an artwork that is only 2 colors, to have the background be one of the 2 colors is distracting, even deterring from the overall affect. Next time you might choose a complimenting color or even a different shade of the color. Overall this one just had too much yellow I think. (Unless you're a yellow fan, lol. )

2. There's a little bit of color outside the lines in both wolves on the rear feet. Granted, this may have been on my original wolf but is something that is easily corrected by unlocking alpha, erasing the overpaint and then re-lock alpha. When showing in a very light color like yellow, it draws your eye to that spot.

I'm off to judge except I just saw that c.s. i s going down in a few minutes for maintenance, so I'll be completing when they come back up.

Thank you for entering.

Equid

[imnotadalek]

I've only just read the crit and thanks! :D

DAM YOU EYE SIGHT!! I noramally see when I go out the lines, in fact I will often go round the whole thing with the rubber twice I guess I was busy or not borthed that day oh well

and yeah I probaly should've done a necklace, I thought about adding jewllery a couple of days later then I was busy

but thanks!

[Equid Phantasm]

You're welcome for the tip and thank you for entering. I will be holding another contest when the next set of store pets comes out I think in a few months and anyone who didn't place grand through 3rd is welcome to enter. I will invite by PM.

Equid

P.S. you are the ONLY person so far to respond to my contest, lol. I guess they are all busy with the event.